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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

Hey

gr8 part...thanks but thr was no Angad😡😆... naw not in his part but in nxt he will b der 😉 hope thrz plenty of him in the nxt part...lol... yea der plenty of him nd i hope AK meet soon... can't wait 2 c how Kripa handles him...😳😳😆... Oh u will see how kripz handle him....she will handle him properly😆😉 ..OMG cucumber down his pants?? lmao.. tht dialogue surely cracked me up... 😆hehehe...i thought i was d one who thought dat dialoguw was funny....oh i c some company wid me lolz...wnder wht'll happen in the party...Ooo u wouldnt want to know that😛 do continue soon, sure even though u've just updated😆.. but wht 2 do?? ...lolz i'm so addicted 2 it nd itz only 2 part... wonder how i'll react later on😆😆😉 ....lolz for dat will see later 😆

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plz do pm me when u update, if not much trouble😳 ...sure sure will pm u😊

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Irsa

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

[wnder wht'll happen in the party...Ooo u wouldnt want to know that😛



OK so u've made me reli curious now😆😆...lol can't wait 4 nxt part... or shud i say AK romance😳 by the sounds of it u hve somin gr8 planned😛


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Irsa
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lmao!!!! i love your ff dude...you got me addicted; its just what i need after the twilight series...awesome work and please do continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

lmao!!!! i love your ff dude...you got me addicted; its just what i need after the twilight series...oye same here...i also got addicted n still addicted to Twilight Series n cant wait for Breaking Dawn n twilight movie😆😆 my sis call me Twiligholic😃 lolz... awesome work ,...thanks and please do continue soon sure 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heyy!!! Wow thanks sooo much for the link to this ff...I loooooooove the concept!!! You do have very very unique ideas....OMG a vampire??? Interesting...wonder what's gonna happen at the party...hmmm...OMG sweet tooth???? That's hilarious!!! Hehe...cucumber down his pants???? LMAO!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 Thoroughly enjoooyed it....Do continue super soooon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36


OK so u've made me reli curious now😆😆...lol can't wait 4 nxt part... or shud i say AK romance😳 by the sounds of it u hve somin gr8 planned😛.... ...lolz u will see in upcomin part 😉


Love,
Irsa



Originally posted by: sweet=me

Heyy!!! Wow thanks sooo much for the link to this ff... ... np I loooooooove the concept!!! thanks You do have very very unique ideas....OMG a vampire??? Interesting...wonder what's gonna happen at the party... ...lolz u will see in upcomin part 😉hmmm...OMG sweet tooth???? That's hilarious!!! Hehe...cucumber down his pants???? LMAO!!!!! ...lolz 😆 😆 😆 Thoroughly enjoooyed it....Do continue super soooon.....upadtin in few mins
Love,
Ananya

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Part 3

"So, where's the party, dude?" Neev asked brightly.

"It has not started yet," Ravin said. "You're the first to arrive."

"No dude, you were the first to arrive," Neev corrected him cheerfully, then confided, "You don't know how relieved that makes me. 'Cause if we'd been first, Mira said we would have been unfashionable geeks. But we weren't. You were."

Kripa coughed to cover the snort of laughter that managed to escape her as her brother recognized that he'd just been called an unfashionable geek. When she regained control of herself it was to find Ravin standing stiff and straight and appearing a tad annoyed. She took pity on him, and asked, "So, where's Mom? And are we allowed to enter, or are we to wait out here for another fifteen minutes?"

"Oh, no. Come in." Ravin stepped quickly to the side. "I just got here myself, and Mother went up to change for the party after letting me in. She should be down in a few minutes. Maybe you should wait in the games room until she comes down. She might not want you to see the decorations until everyone's here."

"Okay," Kripa said agreeably, stepping past him into the entry.

"Want to play a game of pool, dude?" Neev asked cheerfully as he followed Kripa into the house.

"Oh… er… No. Thank you, Neev, I have to watch for early arrivals until Mother is ready."

Ravin backed away along the hall as he spoke. "I'll tell her you're here."

"He loves me," Neev said with amusement, as Ravin disappeared from the hall, then he opened his arms to shepherd them toward the closed door on the right of the hall. "Come along. Let's go play. Anyone up for a game of pool?"

"I'll play," Mira said, then added, "Krip's, you have a run in your stockings."

"What?" Kripa paused and peered down at her legs.

"Back right," Mira said, and she twisted to look at the back of her right leg.

"I must have got it caught on something on the garbage bin," Kripa muttered with disgust as she spotted the long, wide ladder up the back of her right calf.

"Garbage bin?" Neev echoed with interest.

"Don't ask," she said dryly, then made an irritated and straightened. "I'll have to go change my stockings before the party starts. Fortunately, Mom insisted I leave spare clothes here in my old room when I moved out. I should have a couple pairs of stockings. You guys go ahead and play."

"Hurry back," Neev called, as she jogged lightly up the stairs.

Kripa merely waved over her shoulder as she reached the landing and started along the hall toward her bedroom, but she was thinking it was good advice. Gayatri Sharma wasn't going to be pleased that they'd arrived early, but Neev would quickly cajole her out of any irritation she might initially be feeling. For that reason alone, it would be better to be with Neev and the others when she met up with her mother.

"Coward," Kripa berated herself. She was over two hundred years old and well past the age where she should worry about upsetting her mother.

"Yeah right," Kripa muttered, acknowledging that she would probably still worry about it when she was six hundred. All she had to do was look at her brothers to know that. They were independent, self-sufficient and… well… just plain old and still worried about pleasing or displeasing Gayatri's Sharma.

"It must be a family thing," she decided as she opened the door to the room that had been hers until recently, and where she still occasionally slept when she stayed too late to make it home before sunrise. Kripa started into the room, but her steps halted, her eyes widening in surprise at the sight of the man on the bed.

"Oh, sorry, wrong room," she muttered, and drew the door closed again.

Kripa then simply stood in the hall staring blankly around as she realized she hadn't accidentally entered the wrong room. This was her old bedroom. She'd spent several decades sleeping there and knew her own room when she saw it. She just didn't know why there was a man in it. Or, more importantly, why he was tied spread-eagled on the bed.

Kripa considered the matter for a moment. Her mother would not have taken in a boarder, and if she had, she certainly wouldn't have done so without mentioning it to her children. Nor would she have put him in Kripa's old room, a room she still used on those rare occasions she stayed. Besides, the fact that he was tied down on the bed rather belied the possibility of his being awilling guest.

As did the bow around his neck, Kripa thought as she recalled the cheery red splotch of color that had been half-crushed by his chin as he'd struggled to look at her. It was the bow that finally had her relaxing as she realized he must be the special surprise her mother had driven into the city for. The Sweet Tooth Jeenahad suggested. Though, Kripa thought, the man in her bed had looked healthy enough, but then, you couldn't always tell until you got close enough to smell the sweetness an untreated diabetic exuded.

In effect, the fellow was a walking birthday cake. And a yummy-looking one at that, she decided, recalling his dark good looks. His eyes had been piercing and intelligent, his nose straight, his chin strong… and his body had been rather nice, too. He'd appeared long and lean and muscular, stretched out on the bed.

Of course, after her experience with Prithvi, Kripa was aware there might be some paddingunder the jacket he wore. She hadn't looked for cucumbers, but the man hadn't been sporting a tan, bottled or otherwise, yet hadn't looked anemic, but then her mother wasn't likely to make the mistake Kripa had earlier. Gayatri would have made sure he was exactly what she wanted to give her daughter, and Kripa was thinking that Jeena was probably right, and he was an untreated diabetic. Nothing else made much sense. Her mother would hardly drive all the way into town for just a standard healthy individual when she could have ordered a pizza and handed Kripa the delivery boy, which is what she usually did.

So, he was a sweet to eat, she reasoned, and felt hunger gnaw at her stomach. Kripa wouldn't have minded a nibble right then. Just a little taste to tide her over until her mother actually gave him to her. She quickly killed that thought. Even Neev wouldn't be able to cajole her mother out of her bad mood if Kripa pulled a stunt like that. So, walking back in there and biting him was out, but she still needed to fetch fresh stockings.

While Kripa knew she should probably just return to the games room without them, it seemed to her that— as the surprise was already spoiled—it was silly to run around in ruined stockings all night. She was here, and it would only take a moment to grab a fresh pair from those she'd left behind for just such an emergency.

*****

Angad stared at the closed door. He couldn't believe that someone had just opened it, paused— obviously startled at the sight of him—then apologized and closed the door while he'd just lain there like an idiot, too startled to say or do anything. Not that he'd had much of a chance to react, but still…

The muscles in his neck began to ache with the strain of keeping his head raised to peer at the door. Heaving a sigh of defeat, Angad let it drop back onto the pillow and began to mutter under his breath about his own stupidity.

It had come to his attention tonight that he was a complete idiot. Angad had never thought of himself as an idiot. In fact, he'd always considered himself somewhat intelligent, but that was before he'd climbed into the trunk of a strange car and locked himself inside for no good purpose that he could think of.

"Definitely an idiotic move," Angad announced, but then perhaps insane was a better description.

Stupid would have been accidentally locking himself in a trunk. Climbing in and calmly pulling it closed was more along the lines of inexplicable insanity. And he was starting to talk to himself, he pointed out. Yes, it would appear he'd lost his grip on sanity. He couldn't help wondering exactly when he'd lost his mind, and how.

Perhaps insanity was contagious, he pondered. Perhaps he'd caught it from one of his clients. Not that Angad had any clients he'd have diagnosed as insane. He dealt mostly with phobias in his practice, though he treated a few patients with other, more long-term, difficulties. He supposed he could have had the seed all along, and tonight it had simply sprouted into full-blown madness.

That was a thought. Perhaps insanity ran in the family. He should check with his mother on that, find out whether they had a madman or two in the family history.

It wasn't just the climbing into the trunk that bothered Angad, that had only been the first of his mad actions tonight, and one he'd regretted as soon as the trunk lock had clicked into place. He'd lain in the dark, cramped space, calling himself all kinds of a fool for at least half an hour as the car had driven to this house. Then the car had stopped, the trunk had opened and what had he done? Had he leapt out, apologized for his unnatural behavior, and gone home? No. He'd stood and waited as the pretty brunette from the elevator had gotten out of the car to join him, then had followed her—docile as you please—into this huge house and up to this room.

Angad had been as cheerful and trusting as a five-year-old as he'd—without even being asked— climbed onto the bed and splayed himself for her to tie down. Angad had even returned her smile when she'd patted his cheek and announced, "My daughter is going to love you. You are my best birthday gift ever."

After she'd left the room, he'd lain there, his mind blank for several moments before the situation he'd got himself into had begun to sink in. Angad had spent the time since then in bewildered contemplation of what had happened. His own behavior—never mind the woman's— didn't make any sense. It was as if he'd temporarily lost his mind. Or control of it. Unable to solve the quandary, he'd turned his thoughts to more immediate concerns, such as what was going to happen now that he was here?

"My daughter is going to love you. You are my best birthday gift ever ." These words—along with the fact that Angad was presently spread-eagled on a bed—had first made him fear he was some sort of sexual gift. A sex slave, perhaps. That possibility had immediately had him imagining being ravished by some huge, homely creature with a bad complexion and facial hair.

For surely only someone terribly unattractive would need a man kidnapped and tied to her bed to get sex in today's sexually free climate?

Just as Angad had started to hyperventilate at the imagined horror, he'd given himself a mental slap. The woman—the mother—couldn't be more than twenty-five or thirty years old at most.

Surely no daughter of hers would be old enough to want a sex slave? Or even to know what to do with one, Besides, why would anyone want him for a sex slave anyway, he'd asked himself.

Angad had a healthy self-esteem, and knew he was attractive, but he wasn't a rock star or GQ model gorgeous. He was a psychologist who dressed in conservative suits, had a conservative haircut, and lived a conservative life based around work, his family, and little else. Well, his work, his family, and attempting to escape all the blind dates his sisters, aunts, and mother would
have set him up on, he corrected himself wryly.

😊 Ppl plzz do comment😊


Edited by |->SexySiren<-| - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG i'm first 2 comment!!!...YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!...👏👏...lol... gr888 part as usual 👏👏👏... ur a RELI fast updater😉... u shud give me sme tips whr u find tym 2 update this fast??😆😆😆lol...

ok so finally thr was Angad😳😆😆...YAY!!!... actually i found this part somewhat funny, love both AK's inner thoughts... they'll make a gr8 couple, nd he'll surely make the perfect b'day gift 4 Krips😳😃... but let me warn him, she's a tad bit older then him.. hmmm just abt 200 yr so it sudn't b much probz😉😆😆...lmao

so now FINALLY i knw hu the woman in the elevator was... lol... but i hadn' thought she'd b krip's mom, ...lol... awww love how u described angad 'accidently' endin up at her house nd following her everywhr, he surely had gone insane😆😆... but wht 2 do when u hve sme kind of power/spell cast over u...???lmao...the part whr he thought her daughtr was a sex slave cracked me up... lmao... but now he's got a feeling she's reli young😕...hope they meet soon, can't wait 2 c how K 'handles' him😳😳😆..lol

anywyaz suppeeerrrrrbbb update... continue ASAP😃 thanks 4 the pm, nd do pm me nxt tym...lol... u knw wht???.. when i started reading this part.. i got distracted😡.... by YOUR avatar😆😆...lol so i sat thr reading the little icon msgz until they repeated, then *sigh* finally went back 2 reading the fic😆..lmao

hmmm, tht was surely a super- duper...a reli long comment, hope u liked it😆😆...lol...jkn'...

Love,
Irsa
Edited by Ravishing_gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow awesome; I guess it was gayatri who was the brunette; if she;s kripas mother; lol I'd like to see what it would be like when kripa attacks him 😆 and there he's thinking that her daughter is a sex slave
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lmao!!! dude your driving me nuts man...hehe i cant believe kripa and gayatri...trying to imagine him being eaten...yikes!! lol...and so the vampire fell in love with the pyschologist just seconds before his death 😆 lol awesome ff dude...please continue soon 👏

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