~ FF- Pyaar Ki Jeet~ new update pg. 25 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Feats

plzz update yaar it is so kooll.....i love itt.... 😊

Thans fatu yaar i wil tommrow😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx shalu😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank u but i wil cont tommrow
i hope u guys dont mind
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nope we dont mind as long as u write smthing!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I just read through all the chapters i missed.Great job.Loved it.So Vishal is the baddie here!Hope Dimple-Akash love wins over his cheap tactics.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I just read through all the chapters i missed.Great job.Loved it.So Vishal is the baddie here!Hope Dimple-Akash love wins over his cheap tactics.

awwwwww thank you so much. Yeah he is bad lolz

@ saba: I will cont today at night after 3 hours😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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^I will be sleeping Sania while u work hard on ur ff. 😆 lol!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haila ..it's okk when u get u can read my FF 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Next Part:

Dimple went to see vishal at his home.

Dimple: Where are you?

Vishal: I m here sweetheart

Dimple: hey are you okay>

vishal: ya i'm okay nothing happened to me

dimple: what

When he said that dimple really shocked.

Dimple: what you mean.

vishal : stupid i was joking. see look nothing happen to me.

Dimple: so you lied to me .

vishal: I am so sorry but.....

Dimple: what you mean sorry. You think i m fool. Vishal you are my best frind and you did for me. what i thought about you.

vishal: Listen

Dimple: (In loud voice) excuse me!

Vishal: I need to tell you something that's why i did that.

Dimple: That's enough now.

vishal: what happened to you dimple

Dimple: no you tell me what happened to you. My akash gave me such a wonderfull suprise for me and you ..please

Vishal got shocked to heard the name . He turned around , start walking and open the window.

Vishal: who is this akash.

Dimple: MY BF i love him so much .

Vishal got more shocked. He broke the window.

Dimple ran to him.

Dimple: what you did.?

vishal: you didnt told you have bf.

Dimple: How come i tell's you You weren't here. After you he is the only one who supported me and he loves me a lot. But why you asking these questions.

vishal: no actually . I am sorry dimple. Please forgive me.

Dimple: No i am sorry. You know what's my sorrow is.

vishal: what

Dimple: That you are my frind. This is my biggest mistake. From now please do not talk to me.

vishal: Dimpleeeeee listen

She left from there . She is really in bad mood.

Dimple: How can he do that with me. Vishal why did you lied to me.

She call akash. Dimple told akash. She will meet him tommrow.

Dimple went home. She saw nobody is there.

Dimple: Ramu kaku where are you? Where is dad?

Ramu: Dimple beti sir went out of town . He has important meeting.

Dimple: uff ya dad told. When they coming back.

Ramu: After 2 weeks

Dimple : what really?

Dimple started dancing , she messed up the living room and she put tape on and dancing with servents. Suddenly, her dad phone came. Ramu picked up the phone. Yadav told ramu that tells dimple do not forgot to pick up their uncle and aunty on sunday. Ramu hanged the phone and start dancing with dimple.

Dimple: ok this is enough now.

Ramu: you looks so happy.

Dimple: of course itni khushi ki baat hai

Both laughing.

Vishal call on her cell phone but she din't pick up the phone . Vishal called her on cell phone like 15 times. Then she switched off her cell phone and throw on the sofa.

Ramu asked her what happened but she told him . Somebody broke her heart.

Ramu: May i know who is the person.

Dimpel: kaku he is my best frind vishal. How can he do that with me. He broke my heart today. He is really rude person . I thought he will understand me but i was wrong. I love him so much

Ramu: kyaaaaa

Dimple: as a frind.

Ramu: I thought.

Dimple: uff you are too much. I love akash not vishal and always i love akash. He is made for me. You know what he gave me suprise to me .

Ramu : which suprise.

Dimple: Today is my birthday naa.

Ramu: kyaaa. I am sorry beti i forgotted.

Dimple: It's okay . Let's have a party here.

Ramu: for what

Dimple: because of my dad leaving. Aren't you happy.

Ramu: yes i am .

Dimple: soooooo

Ramu: beti it's 1:00 clock

Dimple: so do i care.

Ramu: I am going to sleep bye bye

Dimple: Kaku pleaseeeee

Dimple is alone at home. It's 2:00 clock now.

Somebody knocking the door.

She open the door and get shocked.

I wil cont tommrow😉

Edited by Himanivineet - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg i read whole ff 😃 and u know i was reading it while having pop corns 🤣

i must say its awesomeeeee 🤗 🤗 🤗
jaaanu maaanu do continue sooon 😆

😆 😆 😆 i think its vishal at the door 🤣

**thousand slaps to vishal** 😆 😆

continye soon 😳

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