Bol Na Halke Halke!Imp note pg29 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
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here comes the next part.... 😉 😊
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recap:raaooollll is riding the bike and musky is feeling sleepy so she falls asleep on raoool's back ...raooll smiles at this but suddenly.................................................... .............



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PART-6

suddenly.................................................... ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ................................
suddenly muskaan wakes up....... 😆 (wat dii u guys thought 😆

MU:oye piddhe abhi tak nahi pahuche hum..... 😡 abe jaldi chala na thoda 😈 😈
RA:chala to raha hai
MU:chala to rha hoon...[immitating rahul)haan dikh raha hai ki chala raha hai...lekin kya chala raha hai wo nahi dikh raha 😡
RA: 😕
MU:aisa lag raha hai bike nahi bailgari chala raha hai... 😡
RA:to ab tu kya chahti hai main ise hawaii jahaj ki tarah udau... oye bike hai ye koi plane na hai 😈
MU:oye tu na ekdum hi bekar hai 😡
RA:oye nakchari tameez se baat kar 😎
MU:nahi karungi to kya kar lega 😈
RA:[to himself]:main kaha kuch kar sakta hun...har bar ki tarah chup chap seh lunga
MU:kya kaha tune 😈
RA:aa ...aa aa..kuc...ku...kuch nahi..wo main keh raha tha ki main bike ki speed bara to deta lekin wo kya hai na teri neend khul jaati aur main ye nahi chahta tha 😳
MU: 😳 accha..[to herself]ye mere liye bike dheere chala raha tha aur maine ise hi daant diya 😕
MU:oye kaankhajoore sun
RA:haan bol 😃 [to himself]meri junglee billi 😉
MU:wo...wo mujhe kehna tha ki....[stammering]
RA:ki????[to himself]I LOVE YOU bolne ki to nahi soch rahi
MU:wo..sorry 😳 😳 😳
RA:[stops the bike]sorry 🤔 🤔 for wat????
MU:abbe abhi abhi jo itna jhara tujhe uske liye..sorry meri galkti thi 😳
RA:[starts the bike again] 🤔 🤔 [to himself]ye to mujhe roj hi jhadti rehti hai lekin aaj tak to kabhi bhi sorry nahi kaha phir aaj kya hua lagta hai kekta ke serial ki koi maaiii ghus gai hai iss ke andar 😕
😆
MU:oye kankhajoore 😡 😡 maine sorry bola kam se kam it's awrite bol de 😡
RA:sorry bol ke koi ehsaan kiya hai kya 😛 😛
MU:oye piddhi 😡

and they keep on fighting lyk this the whole way
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now lets go to atul and anjali 😃 😃 😃

ANJALI is dropping atul to his place
anjali is driving the car and atul is sitting beside her

AT:[singing]aaj phir jeene ki tamana hai..aaj phir marne ka irada hai....
AN:stop it atul!!!
AT:[stops]
AN:hey atul...................
AT:........................................
AN:wat happened????
AT:tumhi ne to kaha stop it
AN:[she realises tht she was a bit rude to atul so sed]atul actually main keh rahi thi ki ye gana mat gao koi aur gana gao 😊
AT: 😃 sach anjali tumhe mere gana gane se koi prob nahi hoti 😃 😃 😃 theek hai main koi aur gaana gata hun jo tumhe pasand ho..... 😃 tum batao kon sa gana gaun
AN:hmm atul abhi batati hun but chalo thodi der ke liye beach par chalte hai
AT: 😍 [to himself]beach??anjali???kahi main sapna to nahi dekh raha he pinches himself]...aaaaahhhhhhh
AN:kya hua???
AT:kuch nahi chalo anjali... [:D/]
AT:to anjali batao main tumhare liye kaun sa gana gaun 😳
AN:kya yehi pyaar hai
AT:haan yehi pyaar hai
AN:atull!!!!!!!maine tumhe gane ka naam bataya naki koi question poocha hai
AT:ohhh....abhi gata hun

he starts singing the song and anjali is loving it and looking at atul lovingly 😳
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let's go to armie-ridzii
they are now in their bedroom..they both are in each others arm 😳 😳 😳
riddhima's head is on armaan's chest and armaans hands are tied around her waist 😳 😳

RI:armaan!!!!
AR:hmmmmm
RI:kya soch rahe ho???
AR:humari pehli mulakat aur phir kaise hum ek doosre ko pareshaan kiya karte the
RI:[smiles and kisses his chest]i know......armaan jab hum pehli baar mile to kitna jhagde the ek doosre se
AR:hmmm...specially tab jab maine tumhe haraya tha bb mein
RI:ohh puhlzzz....haraya tumne nahi maine tha samjhe
AR:nahi basket...maine tumhe haraya tha
RI:nahi armaan maine
AR:riddhima maine kaha na maine
RI:armaan maine!!!
AR:maine
RI:maine
AR:maine
RI:maine
AR:maine
RI:maine
AR:tumne
RI:tumne
AR:yeppi yehi to main keh raha hoon ki maine tumhe haraya tha 🤪
RI:[hits him playfully on the chest]I HATE YOU
AR:I HATE YOU TOO
RI:[tries to get up]
AR:kya hua??main to mazak kar raha tha jaan 😕 😕 accha baba tum hi jeeti thi bb match aur I LOVE YOU
RI:i know ki main hi jeeti thi but u know something armaan..main tumse naraz hokar kahi jaa nahi rahi thi...wo to mujhe pyaas lagi thi isiliye main pani peene ke liye uth rahi thi
AR:oye hoye......to pelo paani
RI:[drinks water puts the glass on the side table]
AR:[takes up the glass and puts his lips on the place frm where riddhima dranked the water....he was constantly looking at her]
RI:☺️
AR:oye hoye[comes closer to her]
RI:[melting]armaan!!!![mumbles his name]




armaan is very close to riddhima now. they both kiss each other and it goes on fr about 20 mins then they both break apart to breathe in.
he pins riddhima under him. his whole weight is on riddhima..he first kisses her right cheek..then her left cheek..then her forehead,eyes,nose,chin..and then finally her lips. then he moves down and kisses her neck and then finally pulls the blanket over them and they spnet the whole night making love... 😳

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now again move to musky and rahul

RA:le aa gaya tera ghar 😕
MU:haan haan dikh raha hai mujhe...andhi nahi hun main 😈
RA:pata hai

rahul starts to leave but suddenly it starts to rain heavily
MU:oye kaankhajoore bahut tez barish horahi hai tu chal andar..itni barish mein jayega to phir pnemonia ho jayega 😳
RA:[to himself]ye meri itni chinta kabse karne lagi..kahi ye andar le jake mujhe maregi peetegi tih nahi.... iska toh koi bharosa bhi nai
RA:nahi main theek hoon....chala jaunga
MU:oye to main kaun sa hamesha ke liye rok rahi hoon tujhe..barish ho jaye phir chale jaana 😳
RA:....................... [to himself]iss ke saath waqt bitane ka isse accha mauka nahi milega phir
MU:oye khajoor kya soch raha hai..chal na ander marungi nahi pakka 😳 😊 😊
RA:parks his bike and goes with her inside her house
MU:oye piddhi main coffee banati hoon tere liye tu baith yahin
RA:hmmm

muskaan is making coffee..and rahul comes and stands besides her. suddenly there is a power cut so the whole room is dark...muskaan lights a candle. rahul is mesmerised by her beauty and is gazing at her onstantly😍
MU:oye piddhe kya dekh raha hai??
RA:kuch nahi main to bas aise hi...[embarrased]
MU:[looks at him a l'll confused]
rahul comes and stand beside her.muskaan is making the coffee.she is pouring milk in the mug while rahul sneezes" : AAACCCCCCCKKKKKHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

MU: 😈 oye piddhe ye kya tujhe abhi cheekna tha...poori coffee gandi kar di 😡 😡 😡
RA:sneezes again
MU:oye ruk tu bheeg gaya hai main tere liye toweel lati hoon
RA:hmmm
MU:[brings in a towel fr him]ye le poonch le isse
RA:[wipes himself with towel] muskaan mujhe ab chalna chahiye
MU:oye abhi nahi jaa sakta tu..dekh kitni tez barish ho rahi hai
RA:haan pata hai mujhe par mujhe jana hoga..iss tarah/....
MU:oye khajoor iss tarah kya??/
RA:iss tarah akele ...i mean tujhe mujhse darr nahi lagta kya
MU:darr aur tujhse 🤣
RA:issme asie chudailon ki tarah hasne ki kya baat hai
MU:hasun nahi to aur kya karu🤣tu baat hi aisi kart hai
RA:maine kuch galat to nahi kaha
MU:🤣i know..ise to JOKE OF THE YEAR hona chahiye...ki muskaan chadha......DR.MUSKAAN CHADDHA KO EK PIDDHI SE DARR LAGE🤣
RA:tu hans rahi hai...par muskaan sach to ye hai ki ab hum bacche nahi rahe... 😳

saying this he goes out of her house.....leaving muskaan bewildered
MU: iske kehne ka matlab kya tha????? lekin isne galat bhi to nahi kaha na...ab hum sach mein bacche nahi rahe... 😳
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ATUL-ANJALI

AT:anjali tum bore to nahi ho rahi na???
AN:nahi bilkul nahi 😃
AT:[very happy] to anjali main tumhe ek aur gaana sunau 😳

suddenly there's a thunderstorm 😳 anjali hugs atul very tightly
AT:[hugs her back and is very happy] 😃 anjali ghabrao mat main hun na yahan
AN:atul mujhe bijli karakne se bahut darr lagta hai 😭
AT:anjali daro mat main hun na tumhrae saath
AN:[hugs him more tightly]tum mujhe chor ke mat jaana atul
AT:kabhi nahi anjali main tumhe chor ke kaise jaa sakta hoon


it's starts raining heavily

both run fr shelter but get wet......both of them are now standing near a tree...suddenly there's a lightning
anjali hugs atul again.....atul hugs her back[the scene is just like the raja hindustani scene]
the hug turns out to be a passionate one. anjali loooks up at atul who is all lost in anjali and then they come closer and closer and then finally they kiss........and it's a very passionate and a long kisss
😳 ☺️

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hey gusy this part6 hope u'lll lyk it guys......and i hope it wont bore u guys......plz do leave a comment.. 😊

Edited by coolgal04 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

Hey dear..a really awesome update..thanx 4ur pm..& giving me d link as well..u r a tremendious wrtor..keep up d good work

love

piya😊

Edited by piya2025 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
Hey Dolly...awesome update.....plzz continue soon and thanx a million for ur pm...exams ho gaye kya? 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dolly wow yaar mindblowng update yaar.............vry gud i lv d chemistry b/w RM,AA nd ar ki to hai hi wow yaar rahul to gaya kaam se nd atul nd angie omg their fst kiss it ws superb yaar nd ar wow howwwwwwwwwww romantic ladna to kabhi nahi chodenge...........bt lvd tht..........
cont soooooooon
thnks fr d pm nd lnk also ur cho chweeet
luv yachna
Edited by yachna - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: firdous

Hey Dolly...awesome update.....plzz continue soon and thanx a million for ur pm...exams ho gaye kya? 👏 👏 👏

thnks dear

nahi yar exams to nahi abhi tak nahi hue hai..monday se hai....padne ka man nahi hua so i thought cming to IF and the rest u can see....😆😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
hey guys i know the romantic part was horrendous but main kya karu......agar jyada detail main likhne baithti to wo romantic se comedy ban jata 😆 😆 😆 ...hope u guys lyd it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77

wonderful part, i just luved it, especially the rahul-muskaan scenes and atul-angie kiss😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
awwwwww dat was soooooc ute
from al da couple n atul singing lol
seriosuly great ff reallynce
updte sooon

n thx 4 da pm
niz x
Edited by sweet-niz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
very cute part 👏 👏 👏 .......soo romantic 😳 😳 .......plzz do continue and thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice
how romantic and sweet

gud work really very hot

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