Pehla pehla pyaar AR & RM pg22 uptd - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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THANK YOU GUYS FOR THE COMMMENTS ONCE AGAIN

RECAP: Armaan bumps into a girl and they fall

Part 2

She didn't look at him but armaan stared at her. His mothers words echoes in his head'Jab tujhe pyaar hoga tou tujhe sirf aur sirf woh ladki dikhai de gi' And it was true armaan could only see that girl. Everything around him was black and all that stood out was this girl rambling on about her groceries. She wore a red shalwaar Kameez and dupatta was flying everywhere as people came into the shop and the wind blew on to her face. Armaan didn't care that people looked down to see to see two people on the floor. Her lushes dark brown hair blowing in the wind. On his iPod Ajab si played

Aankhon mein teri He looked in her eyes

Ajab si ajab si adayein hai He looked at her closely
hoo Aankhon mein teri
He saw her, the most beautiful girl he had ever seen
Ajab si ajab si adayein hai
He looked at her just lost in her black eyes her beautiful eyes just gazing into them made him forget what was around him.

Dil ko banade jo patang saans se He took a deep breath to smell her intoxicating perfume.
Yeh teri woh haawaien hai

Wow He thought she's sooo beautiful.

The girl however payed no attention to the man she had bumped into suddenly she felt a gaze set upon her. She turned around to see him. 'who is he?' she thought she looked into his eyes and felt butterflies in her stomach. 'why was he making her nervous?' . She examined his face. His lips growing into a small smile his cheeks showing his dimples slightly. Then She set her gaze upon his eyes His crystal blue eyes. She was lost in them as he was in hers.

Armaan could clearly see her innocence. Suddenly their phones rand at the same time. The stare broke if and armaan and the girl picked their phones up:

A: hi mom

P: beta kahaan hai tu?

A: I'm coming mom

P: well then hurry up

A: sorry bye

P: byee

Both still sat on the floor in a middle of a shop. They put the phone down and looked at each other.

A: oh I'm sorry

The girl looked at him : no I'm sorry

A: no seriously it's my fault I didn't notice you

She blushed and armaan smiled at his little accomplishment.

Armaan put together her groceries and picked his bottle of milk up and stood up. He lent a hand forward

A: hi I'm Armaan. Armaan Malik

The girl hesitated to take his. She let it set there for a moment but as soon as armaan took his hand back she held it not giving it a second thought. Then she spoke her voice so calm yet a feeling of insecurity : Hi I'm ridhima gupta

A: Well maine aap ko pehle idhar kabhi nahi dekha?

R: I know neither have I. mein idhar paas mein rehti hoon lekin aaj bearish hori thi tou car le kar aayi. But may I ask why were you in the rain?

A: oh yeah morning jog

R: is weather mein

A: of course bearish oh ya tufaan mein jogging lazim karta hoon. It's a must

R: I'm quite impressed

A: well anyways what do you do job college university?

R: university

Armaan looked glum

R: what do you go college

A: ab mein itna chota nahi hoon. University

R: again impressed you look like your hmmm just come on 19 I think

A: really? Seriously?

R: no I'm kidding let me guess again 22?

A: close 23

R: wow I'm 23

A: really. What university do you go to?

R:queen mary

A: no way I go to queen mary I'm in my fifth year of medicine

R: shut up no way me tooo how come I never see you around?

A: well actually it's a massive university so no doubt you wouldn't be able to see me

R: haan meri height bhi come hai so I won't stand out

A: you don't need your height to stand out

Ridhima blushed : well I have to go see you next time

A: yeah hopefully we can meet in college

R; yeah I'll try

She payed for his groceries and he payed for his and both walked their own way

Armaan's house 7.00

Armaan walked in with his groceries. Pehli nazar played on his iPod

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara

Ridhima's image went in his mind like a slideshow. Her smile her laugh her eyes her gaze everything about her made him feel something.

Priya and Ejaz Malik are having breakfast on the dining table.

P: manu dood laya?

Armaan puts the milk on the table and keeps walking. Priya looks at her husband both confused about why their wasn't responding to them.

E: armaan beta what's up?

No reply. Armaan just walked up the stairs and opened the door of what he thought was his room.

He sat on the bed ridhima still in his head. Her touch so sweet and so calm.

A guy near enough armaan's age got up behind him and stared at him. 'what the hell is he doing in my room?' he thought? He looked at armaan with his small grey eyes. He scratched his head still thinking 'what the hell is going on?'

The guy called out: armaan! Armaan !

No reply

Armaan ! armaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Still no reply 'that's it enough is enough' He kicked armaan on his back and armaan went flying to the other end of the room

A: Ow! Yaar rahul kya karra hai

Rahul looked at his brother

R: mein kya karra hoon. Bhai aap mere kamre mein hain

A: haan tou……kya? Armaan looked around….he was in rahul's room …….tou kya aaise kissi ko maarte hain

R: kissi ko nahi aap ko aaise maarna chahiye hai.

A: abhe tu ruk

Armaan jumped on the bed and both brothers got into a fight. Rahul Malik is not armaan's blood brother. He is his cousin however Rahul's parent's died in a car accident when he was a new born baby. Ejaz, Rahul's dad's brother took Rahul in and priya had no objection. She treated armaan and rahul equally and loved them both equally. Armaan never let anything happen to his little brother. In primary school he would be by his side when trouble aroused.

Priya Malik came in to see her sons fighting. Shocked to see the everyday drama once again had started she went to stop it.

P: armaan! Rahul! Kya bachoon ki tarha ladai karre ho huh? Itne bade ho gaye ho aur phir bhi bachoon ki tarhaan paish aate ho! Armaan let go of your brother. Rahul stop it!!

Both brothers ended up laughing and smiling they stopped and looked at their mum and went up and hugged her

A&R: sorry mom

P: it's ok and it's not going to work you're getting late to go university both of you get up now

A: chal yaar

R: mein chal. Armaan bhai you're in my bed room

A: oh haan sorry

R: you better be

A: kya>?

R: kuch nahi kuch nahi

A: good good

Hope you like it guys

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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
😛 i love to read ur story!


hhhmmm armaan in first sight love!!!!!! 😳

love the way u have portraits each character... 😛
deepali.patel thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
it was amazing p really love it plzzzzzz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
awwww dat was great
very cute meeting lool
by da way wot part of lonodon
do u live in coz queenmary is lke
da neaest uni wer i liv lol soz if
u dnt mind me asking

nwyz great updte as usul n dnt worry
bout da pm i can catch up im sure
i wnt miss it
updte soooon
niz x

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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

awwww dat was great
very cute meeting lool
by da way wot part of lonodon
do u live in coz queenmary is lke
da neaest uni wer i liv lol soz if
u dnt mind me asking

nwyz great updte as usul n dnt worry
bout da pm i can catch up im sure
i wnt miss it
updte soooon
niz x

i'll tell you in the PM

it's ok you don't have to read both but thanks for te reply guys

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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
awesomeee!! awesome use of songs!!

i loved it... please do continue soon!!

👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
really good.continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
great songs with the scenes and ya they match great. superbbbb parts and please PM me when you continue please please please PM me 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
very nice falak sweety!!! continue soon!


komz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50

hey amezing update..........they both have feelings for eachother........i hope to see ur update soon.........so continue sooon..........thankc 4 the pm.......do pm next time............

❤️MONA

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