'Just Friends?'{DMG}Part 5 updt-Pg 48- 09/08 - Page 25

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: falak298

I am soooo sorry kanu i haven''t been on my com[pputer or the laptop sorry sorry sorry but i luvd the intro it was soooooo gud nearly made me cry i could imagine it soooo gud

The way you described the childhood moments were amazing and writing in flashbacks is one of the most excititing descriptive pieces of writing and i loved the junior AR relationship it was toooo cute and RM were very vute the way she called him kan khajura oh my god she gave him a name in a very youn g wat a gal lmao 😆

I have to say mazinf amazing amazing 😳

Thanks a tonn di!😳...luved ur comment😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: forevercharmed

awww very cute part! 👏 please continue soon! 😳

Avanti

Thanks😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: princess4120

its GREAT!! love the concept.. you write really well.. i fell in love with the intro.. please please update again soon!!

take care

Thanks dear😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

awsum prts! i love d concept and d start! i m sorry 4 commentin late kanu, actually i was on holiday! anyways, i loved it! thank u so much 4 d pm! cntd sn! and plz pm me the nxt prt 2! asap!

Thanks Kanan😳..hope u had fun!😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: freezinme

woooooooow kanu
marvellous update 👏
first of all sooo sorrry for the late reply
but to tell u da truth........ i jst luv small kids
they r chooooooooooo cuuuuuuteeeee
n ur update ws also chooooooooooo cuuuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..I know they are!..Thanks di!😳
haayeee...i wish even i cud pinch armaan's cheek...wooow
hehe..I also wish the same😆😳..Padma is very Lucky hun!😆
ridhi chooo chweettttt... "tum mere papa ke friend ho" awwwwwww... chooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
n muski.hehhe... she is nice hun!!
usne toh bachpan se hi rahul ko kaan khajura kehna start kar diya 😆..Girls Rock naa!..So two girls r poles apart!😆😆
wooow
hehhehehehe..........
seriously cant wait for the next update
come on jaldi se update karoooooo.........plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
jst luvd it chooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchh!!

Especially for u i am contiuing today instead of tomorrow😉😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey!...Without any delay here's the part!😉😳

Part 2: Tamasha!!..😆

#~* Present *~#

She smiled remembering their first meeting.. She had started liking him since then.. Her phone ringing disturbed her thoughts..

Ridz "Hello!"

Armaan "mere baare mein soch rahi ho?"😳

Ridz blushes "nahi to..Main to........Rahul ke baare mein soch rahi thi!"...giggling..😆

Armaan "Aisi galti mat karna!..Uski biwi MUSKAAN hai Muskaan!..Tumhari chatni bana degi vo!..Aur tumhare bina mera kya hoga!"

Ridz giggles as well as blushes.

Armaan "Hmm so...1 hafte baad hamari engagement hai!"

Ridz "Hmm..."

Armaan "Mujhse to itna intezaar bhi nahi hota!"

Ridz "Accha?..to phir apne dil ki baat bolne mein itna time kyun laga diya!"..tearing up.😕.

Armaan "Tum to jaanti ho naa!...Jaise maine USSE kho diya vaise tumhe nahi khona chahta tha main!"

Ridz "i Know!..Pata hai mujhe!...."...from behind "Riddhimaaaaa!..Neeche Aao!!"

Ridz "Accha bye...Anjali BHABHI bula rahi hai!"

Armaan "Uh Basket!..Unse bolo Atul bhaiya se baat kare..."

Ridz "Armaan!"

Armaan "Accha Unko bolo tum Busy ho!"

Ridz "Accha!..Main kya kar rahi hun jo itni busy hun!"

Armaan "Ohho Basket!..Unhe kuch bhi keh do naa!..Unhone bhi to Love Marriage ki hai...Vo tumhari baat samajh jayengi!"

Ridz "Armaan...Main rakh rahi hun!...Baat mein baat karenge!..Bye"

Armaan "Accha suno!"

Ridz "Jaldi bolo!"

Armaan "I Love U😳"

Ridz blushes "..I Love u 2😳"...cuts the phone & rushes..

Armaan smiled & luks at the photo by his side...That was the day when almost 1 week had passed after their meeting & their schools had been reopened.. It was taken by Riddhima's mum when they were not at all ready for it...What a funny photo it was:-

Armaan pulling Rahul towards him while Riddhima pulling Muskaan towards her...Rahul & Muskaan struggling to fight with each other..Muskaan's school dress was covered with mud stains & so was Rahul's...Armaan & Riddhima had a hard time stopping them..

#~* FlashBack *~#

Riddhima & Muskaan were studying in their classes.. Muskaan had never noticed that Rahul was also in his class bcoz it was just the starting of their new session...

"PLz May i Come in Teacher!"....all luked at the door..A small boy with his bag & waterbottle stood at the door with the peon who left him as soon as he entered the class after the teacher gave him permission..Riddhima was surprised to see him here!

"What is ur name?"..."Armaaaaan...Malik"..."U can sit beside him"...she said pointing towards Rahul who had a vacant seat beside him..

THATS when everybody turned to see with whom was the New Boy sitting & saw Rahul...As soon as Muski saw him she started boiling..😆

Armaan grinned & sat with Rahul who also grinned at him!

THE actual story- Armaan's family & Rahul's family lived side by side in Delhi..Rahul's family had to shift in Mumbai...Armaan & Rahul were very close friends...They were upset to be separated..But Soon after 1 year Armaan's family also had to shift here and co-incidently they lived in the same colony as Rahul/Riddhima/Muskaan... Riddhima's family knew them even before Avinash & Savita's marriage... Before going to Riddhima's house Armaan had visited Rahul as he was aware of him living as his neighbour..

So Now-

As soon as the class finished Armaan & Rahul started talking..Riddhima wanted to go & meet Armaan..But Muskaan even didn't wanted to see that 'Kan khajura'..

Ridz "Plz Muskaan!..tu bas mere saath chal naa...plzz..us ladke ko dekhna mat par mujhe to Armaan se milna hai..plzz plzz meri pyari pyari friend..Main tujhe apni nayi doll bhi de dungi!!"

Muski "Theek hai..theek hai.Par main aankh band kari rahungi!"

Ridz "ok ok..jaisa tu kahe.."

They walk towards them..Muskaan had her hands over her eyes..Armaan saw Riddhima & smiled at her...Rahul saw Muskaan & understood why she had kept her hands over her eyes..

Rahul "Aey! tujhe kya hua??...Accha hai teri chudail jaisi aankhein nahi dekhni padengi!"

Muskaan [removes her hands] "Oyee!..Chup!.Us din to chod diya tha!..Aaj to main aur Riddhu tujhe apni jutiyon se marenge!!"

Armaan & Riddhima luked at them amusingly surprised that their best friends knew each other & also that they were fighting!!

Rahul "Haan haan!..Tu bada maregi!..Jaa jaa apne doll house ke saath khel!"

Muskaan "Mainu nahi khelna!..Mujhe bas tujhe maarna hai!!"...moves & keeps her hands around his neck as if to kill him..

Rahul "mujhe haath mat laga tu!..door reh!"...moves away..

Muskaan "Haan haan!..Mujhe tujhe haath lagane mein koi khaas dilchaspi nahi hai! Par tujhe maarne mein jaruur hai."..she moves foward with a murderous luk..

Rahul "A...a...tu...door reh mujhse..!"...starts running with Muski following..

Armaan & Riddhima ran behind them to stop them.. They reached outside the class where many parents were taking their children home & there was quite commotion.

Rahul suddenle stopped causing Muskaan to bang into him!Muski was running at such a fast speed that she cudn't stop herself & banged Rahul with full force into a pool of mud, wet from the rain.!..Their dresses were totally covered with mud as well as their faces.. Riddhima & Armaan stopped at the right moment & saw them..They started laughing crazily..
RM came out & noticed their dresses & faces..

Muskaan "Aeyy!! Ewwww!! ewww ewww ewww!!..Teri vajah se meri school ki dress bhi kharaab ho gayi!..Ab kya mere saare kapde kharab karne ka iraada hai?"

Rahul "Chup!..Har baar teri galti hi hoti hai...Tu mujhse lad rahi thi!"

Muskaan "To?..tu ruka kyun?"

Rahul "Aiwey! Mann kar raha tha!!"

Muskaan "Arggggghhhh!..TUM...."...pulls his hair in return he does the same.. AR saw them and started pulling them to the opposite side..

Padma arrived to take Riddhu with her.. She had gone to shopping.. She saw the children in that state..She didn't knew why but she found it very funny.. She had a camera in her shopping bag..

SHE CLICKED....😉

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Precap:- FINALLY, FINALLY Rahul-Muskaan become friends!.. Who made this impossible thing possible? 😉

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Umm so how was it?..I guess the dialogues weren't exactly Childish as i had planned to do.... I guess Muski will be seeing the flashback in the next part like Armaan saw this one..I decided to show RM in the flashback & AR in the present😳..bcoz i love both equally😆😳

Bye!..
Tc!
Do comment!😳

-Kanika😳

Edited by *K@nik@* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Rahul "Aey! tujhe kya hua??...Accha hai teri chudail jaisi aankhein nahi dekhni padengi!" 🤣 🤣 🤣 OMG..Kanika..U knw ur an AWSOME writer firstly.. 👏 👏 I luved the part..Aww..RM are married?! 😛 😛 Tats music to my ears.. 😛 😛 Luved the RM skool scene..I was rolling on the floor laughing.😆😆😆 .The pre-cap is super..they became frnds..HWWW??? 😳
😳😳 Cant wait for the nxt updatee..Pls include more of RM naa in ur nxt chap.😳


By d way..Im first 2 comment!!! 😉 Like u r always in my FF! 😉

Edited by *mansibhatia* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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luvd d prt... d flasbak was amzng specially d fite.. it was soo sweet.. specially muski.. i guess der is no need 2 speak abt her. she is alwayz d same. luvd d armi ridz convo. it was simply mindblowing.luvd d way u handled d flashbak n d present scenario
thnxx, 4 d pm. update soon😊
Edited by meow23 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

**EDITTED**

OMG kanika....such a sweet update..!!!...

loved the dialougies...totally funny...muskaan will be muskaan..!!!..just loved the way both of them fought in teh class..!!!...cho cute..!!!..

& the Precap is making me totally impatient...RM sttoped fighting.,.!!!..."Breaking news"....😆😆😆...lol...😉

Thanx for the PM & plz updtae it soon..& ya also add ur FF update in the CC....so wen u updating Luv_BE....I want to see Armaan's b'day party....😳

Edited by ksdbstjodi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Rahul "Aey! tujhe kya hua??...Accha hai teri chudail jaisi aankhein nahi dekhni padengi!" 🤣 🤣 🤣 OMG..Kanika..U knw ur an AWSOME writer firstly.. 👏 👏 I luved the part..Aww..RM are married?! 😛 😛 Tats music to my ears.. 😛 😛 Luved the RM skool scene..I was rolling on the floor laughing..The pre-cap is super..they became frnds..HWWW???

By d way..Im first 2 comment!!! 😉 Like u r always in my FF! 😉

😆😆..Thanks a tonn!😳😳..Yup they are!😉..Aage aage dekho hota hai kyaa!!😆...Really u were?😆..Lets see!😉

😆lolz..U r!..Congo for that hun!😆

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