OSR Samyukta 41-Life afresh at Sawai pg49 - Page 27

Originally posted by: lashy

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OSR Samyukta - Promo to Part 30

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Lashy,🤗

I am running out of words to describe how wonderful and exquisite you write.👏 The story flows wonderfully and I love how you have described the way nanda and daksha tease siya,😳 the scenes between siya and her parents, 🤗veer and shera😳. I love all aspects of the story and am finding it impossible to say which are my favourite scenes. 👏

I found the scenes where jai and agni mention their plans very thrilling and am worried about what chaos they are going to cause dharma and veer. 😭

What I loved :

How agni is angry that the ministers have changed their sides and have turned honest and straightforward. 😆 Agni is going to take full revenge on veer for his insult and Jai is going to do the same for them losing the war, Gadhwar not being happy with them. These two are sick I tell you. 🤢😡😡 How dare harsh think of destroying siya and dharam?s wedding. 😡😡 I am going to be their personal bodyguard to see that this does not happen. 😡Harsh is not heartbroken, he just want to take revenge against siya😭 ?I replied letting him know that we would never allow Dharam to sit on the throne beside his new bride anyway...? someone throw agni, jai, harsh, baba and tasha all on one small island and leave them for eternity 😡😡😡 the discontent Dharam murmurs in resentment ?I am already late for my meeting with pitaji at the assembly hall and now I have to search for Veer too...I hope he has not already left for his duties at the arsenal repository... both ma and bua are going to chide me for having failed to remind him about the tailor?s visit today... why do I always land in a quandary because of this evasive prince...? loooooool dharma always gets told off for something that is not his fault because of veer. 😆😆😆 ?What if we actually start stealing the money from the treasury... and make it seem like someone else is doing it?? I knew these two are evil but stealing from your own family. 😡When I read this I knew that they are going to plan something very big 😭😡 How dare jai think of framing veer for the stealing.😡😡 I did like agni saying this though as veer is very honest😊 ?No?this would never work out...much as that prince is stubborn and independent, everyone knows about his integrity and honesty too... anyway, what would Veer be stealing all that money from the treasury for...? the diligent Dharam whines softly ?Why do tailors need so much time to take measurements ... and ma is being excessively finical about my garb for the upcoming betrothal...? awwwwww dharma, getting outfits ready for the engagement takes time and is very important, just be patient. Wait to see how long your wedding outfit will take. 😆 My god they are going to use veer?s honesty and emotions for their own means 😲 Veer was becoming increasingly popular amongst commoners and villagers, for lending them a helping hand on his rounds; whenever possible. It would not take much effort to make it appear like he was probably being bold enough to freely utilize the treasury?s money to aid the commoners, as and when he pleased! None shall know the reality of where the money was actually disappearing to...? oh no just these people are too much, 🤢just because he is helping the villagers they are going to frame him for the money jai and agni will steal😡 "Yes... yes why not... freely withdrawing treasury money to help others for food or clothes is as much of an offence as stealing the money itself! She had mentioned her doubts that it was likely that Veer was protecting a Shramik family who knew about the revolts. Hence; if we come to prove even one of these offences, Veer would actually be labelled a criminal, especially since he is part of the justice and defence system now..." how can they even think of framing veer as a theif 😭😭 when all he is doing is helping the shramiks and at the same time doing what's right for the kingdom and family😡😡😭 "This shall completely destroy Veer no doubt, and in turn shatter Dharam too... as these two ever-dependant brothers cannot function without the other!" I never want dharam and veer ever to break up or not trust each other 😭😭 good dharam heard agni hear about them destroying veer and himself as now he will be extra alert and cautious about everything jai and agni do 😊
• "How I wish I could slay these two with my bare hands...contriving devious plots against Veer! If only I had arrived slightly earlier..." dharam please slay them and everyone will live in peace 😊. I can't imagine how angry dharam must be after hearing about veer. It also shows his protectiveness towards veer.👏

• "I have to warn Veer...and stay alert myself...all the while too..." i just hope veer does not get angry and go and confront agni and jai 😊

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Originally posted by: lashy

awww sweetoo me knew me was missing someone... 😛.... main jaldi jaldi type karte karte... miss kar dee... mwah to you.. hun i started typing sammi itself after taht long 1 1/2 month break only due to your instigating pm... 😉 remember...

and minooo oh... AAA... but, he was tiffing with his sasur jee? i thoughted sasur jee only was being mean...😲

Originally posted by: lashy

lagta hai no one interested in reading anymore 😭

OSR Samyukta - Promo to Part 30

Shall try to post by Monday if possible..

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What I loved :

• the way you have described how the engagement preparations are taking place
• nanda, daksha and siya are all sitting together on the chaise 😍
• wow siya is having mehndi 😍done on her hands and she is finding it ticklish.😆 At the same time daksha and nanda are asking many questions on her meeting with dharam.😆
• "Well I leaned on his shoulder... and... and... he looked at me...he continued to gaze into my eyes and me into his...this was when all of you came in..." pausing to observe the teasing sceptical frowns of her friends' faces, the abashed princess questions with feeble authority "Why don't you girls trust me?" siya your friends are too clever, they are not going to leave you alone till you tell them everything. 🤣😆
• the picture of dharma and siya leaning her head on his shoulders looks amazing
• Giggling at Daksha's tired smiles; the chirpy Nanda expresses the basis behind their mistrust "The reason we don't trust you, is because the scene that we managed to stumble upon seemed to have slightly more romantic prospects to it... that's all..." see they want to know the whole truth 🤣
• So sweet the way siya is trying to tell them then blushes and stops. I think they have guessed already "Actually... Rajkumar Dharam... he... he... came close ... close to me... and he... held my face... he..." realizing how the three ladies serving her were struggling to hide their grins, the bashful Siya abruptly stops "No, I can't Nanda!"
• Slapping her forehead to display her dissatisfaction at the coy girl's incomplete version; Daksha grumbles aloud "He...he... he! You began recounting your tale when we returned from the temple, a fortnight ago! If you continue narrating your story at this pace, we would be forced to reside at Aryanagar to listen to the remainder of your recitals." Looooooooool 🤣🤣🤣daksha has no patience like veer and wants siya to tell everything quickly
• "Oh plump maiden, I plead you...stop trembling the unfortunate chaise incessantly... the delicate patterns on Siya's hands are all going awry!" she pauses "Besides; any chance that you get, you want to reside at Aryanagar..." I was in hysterics when I read this, nanda is too good. 🤣I am sure daksha would jump at the chance to go and stay at aryanagar. If veer finds out that she is coming, he is going to move kingdoms.🤣😳
• Aww daksha has still not given up on veer and would be happy to be a commoner for him. She still think that the girl priest described is her😊
• I like how the queen is concerned about the preparations even thought everything has been done so well, shows how she wants everything to be perfect for siya and the engagement👏
• Seating themselves on either side of the princess, the proud king and queen regard how Siya's amplified radiance owing to her newfound happiness, only seemed to heighten her matchless beauty. I love this scene,👏👏👏 it is touching how both of them want to spend time with siya and have noticed how happy she is🤗🤗🤗
• Admiring the beautiful henna adorning Siya's hands and feet; Gauri holds the girl's chin, as she discloses her remorse "How unfortunate that I have spent the past two weeks attending to numerous tasks... not once did I let you know how beautiful you have begun to look..." i so want to see this scene, such a beautiful mother and daughter relationship.👏
• How happy everyone is when they find out that dharam is now yuvraj. 😊
• the pleased father watches on with elevated spirits, before dreamily reliving the glorious memories of his daughter's carefree childhood "I find it difficult to imagine that my little child who used to run around as a small girl in the palace... play in my arms... will soon be getting married... living in Aryanagar... and one day possibly acceding the throne of Aryanagar, as queen..." so true and such a touching scene👏👏 that the king still sees her as little princess running around. He has realised that siya is going to go to Aryanagar one day. He is really going to miss her😭😭😭 as daughters are always very special to fathers.😊
• "Proceed to live in Aryanagar? But I do not want to miss Niphaud...the welcome scenes of sunrise and sunset from the windows of my chamber…the familiar faces in my home... watching the new flowers bloom in my palace garden every season... the beautiful sights of my kingdom...the most comforting presence of my parents... the amicable everyday gossip with my friends... why does a girl have to go through such grief at the most anticipated moments in her life..." siya is happy about the engagement but also sad that she will have to leave all her loved ones, friends everything behind once she gets married. I agree with siya its not fair. 😭😭😭
• "True Maharaj... she shall then have so many tasks to supervise... so many people to converse with... but, I shall be left all alone here..." after a brief pause, the fond mother declares her adoring complaints to the heavyhearted girl resentfully "Once you are gone, who shall listen to my ceaseless frustrations Siya? Come every festival and occasion, who shall I tailor new dresses for? Will I get the chance to look at your face, first thing in the morning, ever again?" This made me 😭😭😭, who will the queen talk to or go shopping with or buy new clothes for once siya has gone. You can feel Gauri's pain as she will feel lonely without siya. Here you see the queen as a mother that even though she is is very happy about the engagement, it is still a difficult stage for her as once siya goes who will she see everyday. That emptiness is irreplaceable. 😭
• How the king tries to calm both siya and Gauri and says that dharam will not be happy if we realises that siya's parents were making her cry. He will come running on his horse to make siya smile😆😆😆
• Wow me too agree with the king and looking forward to seeing mini siya and dharma staying in Niphaud and having fun. 😍
• Veer gets disturbed by the noise his sasurji and tasha is causing😆
• Intimidated by Veer's admonishing glares; the unhappy man whispers to the youth standing beside him, before beginning to retrace his steps "Seems like we are no longer permitted to even conduct normal trade in peace here any longer... let us continue on our way Tasha..." good they are scared of veer and decide to go😡. So now veer has seen his father-in-law and that sick tasha. Yey he wants to arrest them. Please do😊
• I like the seller that he has told veer that shera is a honest dealer and yey veer compliment her about daughters working and men not doing much without knowing who she is 👏👏👏
• Shock 😲😲he sees them together and remembers that baba is her father. Good he has found out about baba being shera's father, he will understand and realise how much shera has to suffer😊
• Why cant baba listen to shera, he does not know anything. They are just causing more problems for shera. 😡😡
• Shera escalates the dominance in the grimness of her tone, as she voices her suggestion "Here ... this money would suffice a return tanga trip to Aryanagar and even fetch something extra, in case you need so... I shall collect the materials, and return by the noon tanga..." she continues firmly "By myself..." good for you shera, sending them away is the best thing. They are more nuisance then help😡😡
• my darling shera is waiting in the strong heat for a tanga. Where is veer just when you need him😭
• shera dilema about what to do as on one side veer has agreed to help her and the other side agni is pestering her to find out more information on veer.😭😭
• Veer accidentally notices Shera waiting at the desolate area and elusively diverted from his chore, finds himself trying to interpret, if the mystifying girl was scrutinizing his deeds or gazing into oblivion yey me happy that you noticed her and is not sure if she is staring at him or in thought😍
• Love it when shera gives veer a charming smile, I bet it makes veer nervous😆😆
• Resolutely surveying the luring girl's smile for less than a moment; the unfaltering Veer leads his horse by its reigns towards her, conscious to appear neither hesitant, nor moved. Kya baat hai, veer has noticed her luring smile. 😍😍😍 😳😳
• "Your Highness... I apologise... but, I am no blind beggar…I was only waiting for my brother to arrive from the scrap yard..." Only veer would do this, 🤣giving someone money thinking he is a beggar when all the man was doing was waiting for his brother.🤣he must be so embarrassed
• Shera takes a while to recover from her sporadic bursts of adorable chuckles, while the irked Veer glares at the girl's amused disposition and chides her, on ultimately reaching her location "Now do you know what I mean when I say that I always get into strange situations with you…" veer stop glaring at shera,🤣 its not her fault. How can you blame her for you getting into strange situations. She did not tell you to give the money to the old man🤣
• the awkward pair quickly flash each other formal grins during the few succeeding silent moments wow they both smiled at each other 😍😍😍
• how veer does not want shera to think that he stopped because of her and starts to explain as to why he is there. 🤣He is thinking making excuses is tiresome while shera grins. 😆She knows you too well😳
• How he stutters to explain that he met her father and shera just says it straight away that yes that man is my father.🤣🤣

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