OSR Samyukta 41-Life afresh at Sawai pg49 - Page 28

gorgeous promo to part 30 Lashy Di...the piks looks amazin!

lashy me back with comments 🤗

hi sharrdha,

Promo to part 30 is here................................hmmm........

sorry shrads for not being able to comments on last few parts....i m soo bad....

Originally posted by: lashy

lagta hai no one interested in reading anymore 😭

OSR Samyukta - Promo to Part 30

Shall try to post by Monday if possible..

Originally posted by: lashy

lagta hai no one interested in reading anymore 😭

OSR Samyukta - Promo to Part 30

Shall try to post by Monday if possible..

dnt say dat...i cum to the forum to read ur fanfic...u describe every character's feelings, reactions so beautifully dat i can visualize every chapter as if i am watchin a serial

Wow lashy! I can't believe I totally forgot about this fanfic for a while and then read all the chapters again last night and was like totally wow-ed by all of them!!!

I really loved the way you have taken the story forward especially how you have shown the two brothers integrating themselves into the administration and taking on political duties rather than just scampering around here and there looking for adventures. I also liked the way you have handled Shera's character...she is mystery personified and I loved each and every moment of her...all her sarcastic grins, her self deprecating and self recriminating mocks and taunting thoughts about herself and her battles with her conscience. Also loved Veer-Shera's story...it is so subtle and so mysterious even.

The Agni and JV plot is also nice....and what is also good is that D and V are not totally elpless and behind on all the secrets. They know a fair deal and are dealing with it with aplomb.

I also likedhow you have shown Dharam and Veer's individual characters shaping up and their different personalities provide a good contrast to each other and how they ar getting honed for the main responsibilities awaiting them as adults.

Dharam, handling the revenue, is an extension of how he is...soft and quiet, reserved and determined and yet every inch te Crown Prince (I loved him being the Crown Prince btw!)

Veer...the shrewd, flamboyant, mischievous, and fierce and loyal. He is the one who takes direct frontal assault and that shows in how he is the one handling the defense of the kingdom. He is the warrior at heart while Dharam is the more scholarly type and that was reflected in their respective positions that they took.

Dharam willbe the ruler...handling the administration...while Veer will be the Captain of the armies😛 I liked how you showed that.

I also loved the secondary characters like Pari and Sakshi and Dhruv and all their internal struggles as well as their common struggle to mak ends meet AND deal with the upliftment of the Shramiks (on Dhruv and Sakshi mainly)

I also liked the Agni-Shera scenario that you have cooked up. It quite goes in with Agni's character....and also gives a solid punch to the story as well as give Agni a bit more solid character rather than one who is always the punch bag of DV's tricks and pranks OR the puppet in the hands of his father. A negative character has to have some brains atleast (which I don't find in the Agni in the serial)

And finally, I loved Shera (which I have already mentioned above) with all her complexities and all her contrariness and sincere desire to make ends meet for her tribe and to protect the innocence of the children in the tribe.
Like I said before, I lved her dark moods and her mocking grins and how she laughs at all the absurd yet dark and terrifying aspects of her own life. Its her way of 'care a damn attitiude' that is amazing and all the flamboyance and mischief hides all her pain and her tragedy and her beautiful face hides a dauntless, fearless persona.


Please continue!!! Have not watched the serial in such a long time but I am sure it cannot compare to this fanfic that you have written!

Well, I think i made my comments on part 26... oh ya i made.. Heres my reply for you, i will check later if i have replied to everything.

Aw, Lashy! Its truly an honour for me to know that u liked my comments, infact according to u, i cheered up ur day wid them! *Blush* i didnt know i cud do that, they were just simple and rushed comments..

But Lashy, its just wat u deserve, long comments, and loads of applauses from readers, bcz u are the one who always make us happy and excited wid ur Samyukta, wich reflects immense beauty by reminding us of the princess of Kannauj, years ago, well, the title matches perfectly with the story, is wat i want to say..

By the way, though it may not seem it, but do u know that i came to encrease my vocabulary after coming to IF? Especially while reading this ff.

And aswell, as i said before, Samyukta is the story wich more influenced on me, and the one wich matches more wid the world, atleast wid my world, because, there are many similar or equal things in both places..**gigles** sumtimes, i really dont know wat to think.. its really ironic, but it makes me love it indeed.

The incident at school is the following:

Well in class, actually all of us were in silence, some were doing the recuperation tests and some were "studying" well, not actually, we were getting bored and thinking of a silent passtime. So i took out Samyukta from my carpet, thought i readed all the parts that i had there. As all the papers were messed up, I started separating them according to the parts, covering all my desk wid them. Distracted by the first meeting of Dharam and Siya at the Niphaudi gardens, i was about to read again the entire part.. lol i get distracted very easily, or maybe its not me, maybe its ur writting..

There i got interrupted by some fingers knoking my shoulder and a whispered question. "Wats that?.. wat are u doing?" for a fraction of second i got panicked, but then i realized it was the friend sitted behind me. "Uhm.. nothing.." i kept in the papers when i noticed the confused and bit dissapointed expression on his face. I smiled amd putted sum papers on his table explaining. "See, this is a story, wich im reading, in english and wid sum hindi influence as its settled in 13^th century in India.. when it was ruled by kings, and princes, and.. blah blah..".. he was not paying attention to me! But instead he was concentrated in reading the unorganized papers, written in a language wich neither he knew, neither he liked to learn. So i turned, till he asks. "And wat does it means.." well, then i was translating him sum lines, of different papers.. and he asked me the stupid question of if i translate the english words in spanish to understand the text.. ..

But most of his words, surprisingly were praises for the story, wow Lash, it was amazing seeing how ur story has got such power of attraction!

Finally, the alarming (and curious from my point of view) glares of the teacher made me turn to my desk and continue wid the work silently and admired.

The end.

I hope i didnt dissapointed you, it was not exactly an incident.. but by narrating this, i wanted to express that ur story and ur way of writting is really spectacular and fantastic, hats off to u.

Lash, about ur question of if i dream about samyuktas veer, aaaw! Well, is really a character of wich dream about; any mother wud love to have him as son, and any sister as a brother, and how not, obviously, any girl as a "friend." But i started frankly, and will keep frankly, i hope i cud dream about ur veer to glad u, but nop, i dont do..

The reason might be my irregular following of the script, or maybe the fact that veer is destined to be wid someone else, and lol, automatically, when someone is taken, i wont interfere there, lol.. but its true. Or maybe because he is too fictional and our worlds are different , and there isnt any chance...

Well, im getting to involved here, so better i stop.

But Lashy, if u have noticed, veer is in all stories, the most singular boy. He is complicated but easy to imagine and express in words while writting, and still a very lovable and loved character by viewers and readers; im referring especially to veers personality before knowing his birth truth.

By the way, Im noticing that while writting to u, i tend to open personal feelings and things very easily, do u mind on that? I mean, it can become annoying and i know it, and can understand. (anyways, i edited this text itself few times bcz of it..)

Actually, i just write wat comes in my mind at that moment, and well.. sumtimes i doubt whether if i shud have writted it.

Anyways, now the (possible) reasons of my excitement while coming to know about the birthplace of kiss: India!.

I got, really excited about this, but actually i was already cheered up at ur reply to my comments.

Well, i knew that India is the birthplace of numerous knowledges and arts. It had got bravery, strenght, culture, religion, noblity, morality, honour, and patriotism from the beggining.

Imagine how great and surprising wud have been for me to know that it was also developed in the section of love. Yah, its not such an important thing if we start to compare; but well, now this country was indeed complete many years ago.

Plus, no more, remorses (its that the word? I had to look for it on a dictionary..); about dreams, thoughts, memories;

But anyways, far more than wat i can, had, or would do, im admired.

But now if i think of it, its quite obvious, because, for such an advanced and civilized culture, it might be normal to develop like this. I mean, India has grew up om almost all things before than other places, so it wud be obviously, more advanced also here. Although, this logic didnt stop my happiness to come out.

Anyways, im noticing that these days, im expressing a lil bit more my emotions than usually i ever did. So that must have influenced also.

Now, finally my comment on part 27:

Wow!! I loved so much the 1^st paragraph! Swathi is so adorable!! And her dialogues match perfectly with her, they are very royal, just like her sons .

**Sighs* poor m. Gauri, she is like a mother whom i know well.. yup, emotional, and rude. Serious and caring....

lol! And m. Janardhan is like a king, i mean, he is so different from the shows one. Btw, the chemistry between him, and m. Aryavardhan is just so royal and realistic!

My my!! Swathi left me totally impressed! Wow! Such a beautiful character u have portrayed Lash! I love every dia of hers.

Omg! Gauri hugs Swathi, that was such an amotional scene, and it was immensely good writted. Loads of applauses for u**

Im so really happy that Siyas family finally accepted the proposal, yay!!, now its time for marriage to come! Im eagerly waiting for ur descriptions there. Blush**. But take ur time.

Hehe! Veer resumes his overt-teasing. He must have been missing it.

Aw!! Dharam-Siya relationship is really romantic! Every line about them it is.

Lol di! I always wondered how Kirans comment were full of laughing emoticones in every chapter, now i just realized. We can find treasures if we pay attention.

The line where dharam is interrupted by mother and son is very hilarious.!!

Aaaw!! Its not strange anyone melt at veers sulking state!

Lol lol.. "You seem foreve occupied in exchanging gazes and smiles with Rajkumari Siya...." lol! Haha!! Loved that one.

Btw, seems like dharam has got used to veers dialogues, bcz he just changes the matter by talking about food. **giggles.. so veer doesnt want to be bad mannered chwo cutee!!

Oops.. problems with daksha.. poor boy.. no, poor them both.

"She only teases u because u get teased..." omg! How many times i got to hear this.. but lol! Its impossible avoid geting teased every time.. someone explain him yaar.

Haila! Veer doesnt hide from anyone! And let alone girls! Well, but then, wat about shera? Not even from her??

Dharam teases veer by sealing his alliance wid her!!!

Heeey! Poor veer! How indignant to take this matter is such a light way!!

Well, so veer gets indignated, obviously! And reminds dharam wat he did for him hehe..

Omg! Veer is incredible! Lol! Now all the fault is of dharam! So funny

Wow! I got so releived at the brahmins words in the 1^st line of the prediction, after that, i got really really happy and excited.

Oh! I didnt think about dharam.. gulps... there are many things to handle now, well and must be shoking to realize that this evening has ended like this!

Hahaha!! Veer just gives another of his polemical speechs!! And lol! Swathi scolds them (well, scolds him..) again! "aristocratic families"! "plenty of times"! my god!! Anyways, now i didnt get so scared like the last time, i think bcz this week i got to get used to them..

Oh my! And as it wasnt enough wid the marriage and engagement preparations, swathi reminds him of the future children!, no actually requests it!! Hahaha hilarious, ahem, i mean poor dharam..

I think, now the mothers should be satisfied enough wid this singular revenge na??

But loool! Dharams condition doesnt make change veers joy!

But dharam has learn to coexist properly wid veer.. uhm.. im happy for him, but im feeling a bit sorry for veer; wat i didnt thought wud happen.. lol.. because its a bit embarrasing for sure, in front of all..

"Im not interested in marriage..." !!!! my god wats that! Being so old still veer talks like this! Haha.. so cute!!

Woh! Go swathi! I just love her, seriously; and nivriti! She is really decided about it! Omg..

Lol.. but dharam teasings exceed veer when he starts to, they are too much! How does he dare to point at daksha!!

Aw!! I loved very much the comunication between dharam, siya, veer and daksha too. And well, looks like siya is already behaving like a bhabhi; at my point of view atleast.

Well, and the description of veer and ananya! I absolutely loved it! Bhuvi di was right while telling that ananyas single mention is really magnetic.

Veer is so adorable! Brahmachari, aw! Its curious, becoz i always imagined him as a passionated lover, but i think, before meeting or realizing his love, he must have been like this only. Anyways, i like far more this veer of samyukta than any other.

And , i loved very much the whole scenes of veer feeling dissapointed and embarrased, and then remembering the girl wich matched wid the description, the one whom he always tried to avoid. Amazing. It was my favourite part; till where the astrologer sees other things of veers future and past, and nivriti gets concerned.. oops..

Veer was really adorable though arrogant while justifying why it wasnt possible a girl like him.

Sighs** dharam and siya are such a cute, and romantic couple!! And well, the departure lines of dharam to her... aw!! Well, speechless and blushing, thats how i am, and thats how siya must possibly have been..

Finally, in home!

Well, no doubt, Vikrant and Rajat would have look really handsome in ur beautiful choices of attires for them; but i wonder wat would be the environment of the forum... ahm.. better i stop wondering...

Lashy, i loved this part, as i always do wid all others, it was really spectacular.

Well.. so long comment.. anyways, hope u didnt fell asleep while trying to read it.. lol..