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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

OSR Samyukta promo to Part 29

Gradually discerning that the wayward pair of clientele were causing their overwhelmed dealer needless misery with their negligible grievances; Veer becomes increasingly chafed by their unfair actions.

Watching the unfolding events; the old seller stoops forward in order to murmur his views to the observing young royal 'Rajkumar... I know those men... they are persistent troublemakers... ignore them...'

Eventually withdrawing from their gripping paltry pastime; the pair realize that their altercation was being eyed by the formidable retinue of the Aryanagar sentinel, led by the youngest prince himself.

Intimidated by Veer's admonishing glares; the unhappy man whispers to the youth standing beside him, before beginning to retrace his steps 'Seems like we are no longer permitted to even conduct normal trade in peace here any longer... let us continue on our way Tasha...'

As the pair swiftly swing around and begin leaving the scene by shuffling through the crowds in the opposite direction, Veer asks the now relieved seller 'Do they frequently visit this place? Shall I arrest them? That shall ensure that the father and son do not trouble anyone here, henceforth...'

Instantly returning to his assignments; the afflicted seller nods his head negatively and smiles respectfully at the prince's concern, as he replies in modest fashion 'Welcome to the Sawai scrap yard, Your Highness... if you regularly visit places like ours, people shall spontaneously start behaving in appropriate manner... and please do not waste your efforts and time with such meandering folk... even if they are a squandering lot, their daughter is an honest dealer...'

Listening to the import of the cordial answer; the group of soldiers break out into amused frowns, while the disapproving Veer casually smirks and censures the situation frankly 'Daughter? Pitiful are the times when the men of Aryanagar start solely depending on the toils of their womenfolk to run their households...'

Shall try to post if not tomorrow on Monday few pages left to type... been a little busy with Diwali preparations, partying and celebrations... but even if the forum is closed I shall try my best not to abandon Samyukta....(in query to a few friends who asked me this) I guess this shall be continued in the fan fiction section too. 😳 I am even planning to start a blog...dont know how far that would work out... but shall try... and if it does, post the link in my signature...

🤢🤢 nasty tasha n nasty old dad of Shera/.. hope he dies of cholestrol 🤢🤢
aww n the line "the formidable retinue of the Aryanagar sentinel, led by the youngest prince himself. "😳😳😳 is sooooooooooooooooooo beautiful.. youngest prince himself 😳
n FIRST time Veer is hearing praise of My Little Ananay 👏😳 hes admiring n sympathising with her without knowing who it is ... aww aww awwwwwwwwwww 😳 I love it how there is mention of Anu in every part.. her very mention is AS STRONG as her physical presnce ! Thats my Ananya ! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Lovely promo lashy👏👏, poor shera u make us feel more and more for her by bringing in her horrible father and tasha😡😡

And veer the youngest prince dia is so emmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm😍

And veer is praising shera, I hope in the next part he realizes this then he will think abt babas bhavishyavani again😍

Pura part kab milega😛

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

OSR Samyukta promo to Part 29

Gradually discerning that the wayward pair of clientele were causing their overwhelmed dealer needless misery with their negligible grievances; Veer becomes increasingly chafed by their unfair actions.

Watching the unfolding events; the old seller stoops forward in order to murmur his views to the observing young royal ?Rajkumar... I know those men... they are persistent troublemakers... ignore them...?

Eventually withdrawing from their gripping paltry pastime; the pair realize that their altercation was being eyed by the formidable retinue of the Aryanagar sentinel, led by the youngest prince himself.

Intimidated by Veer?s admonishing glares; the unhappy man whispers to the youth standing beside him, before beginning to retrace his steps ?Seems like we are no longer permitted to even conduct normal trade in peace here any longer... let us continue on our way Tasha...?

As the pair swiftly swing around and begin leaving the scene by shuffling through the crowds in the opposite direction, Veer asks the now relieved seller ?Do they frequently visit this place? Shall I arrest them? That shall ensure that the father and son do not trouble anyone here, henceforth...?

Instantly returning to his assignments; the afflicted seller nods his head negatively and smiles respectfully at the prince?s concern, as he replies in modest fashion ?Welcome to the Sawai scrap yard, Your Highness... if you regularly visit places like ours, people shall spontaneously start behaving in appropriate manner... and please do not waste your efforts and time with such meandering folk... even if they are a squandering lot, their daughter is an honest dealer...?

Listening to the import of the cordial answer; the group of soldiers break out into amused frowns, while the disapproving Veer casually smirks and censures the situation frankly ?Daughter? Pitiful are the times when the men of Aryanagar start solely depending on the toils of their womenfolk to run their households...?

Shall try to post if not tomorrow on Monday few pages left to type... been a little busy with Diwali preparations, partying and celebrations... but even if the forum is closed I shall try my best not to abandon Samyukta....(in query to a few friends who asked me this) I guess this shall be continued in the fan fiction section too. 😳 I am even planning to start a blog...dont know how far that would work out... but shall try... and if it does, post the link in my signature...

wow 👏👏veer meets his sasurji 😊. I do hope he locks away both tasha and baba and throws away the key. at least they wont cause shera lots of grief 😡😭
Yey the seller says that shera is a honest person, veer does not realise who he is referring to 😊
yey veer understand how women have to work to keep the household running while the men are being so useless 😊
Sweetie dont worry about posting the part, you have a great diwali and post it when you are ready. 🤗🤗🤗
lots of love from me 🤗
Edited by divareena - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
me back with my comments for part 28 😆😆
What I loved :
    Dharam is in shock as to see how many records have errors and how sick some of the nobles and soldiers have been at collecting taxes. He really wants his father to see all the bad deeds done by jai, agni, soldiers etc 😭😭 I always pay my taxes on time, even if we have no food at home... I fear being taken to prison...I hope I am not in any trouble now..." "We follow all the laws Rajkumar...all my children join me for work...even the youngest one who has just turned four..." I tell you these people are sick,😡 how can they take so much tax from families that even a child has to go and work when he should be playing. They are being threatened and scared of going to prison and by doing that they have hardly enough food to eat. How cruel can agni and jai be😡😡😡 "So what is going on here Dharam? I see that you have been wasting the treasury's money with another silly plan of yours..." as the three royals strive to hide the alarm in their faces at detecting the unexpected unwelcome presence of Agni in their midst; the wry prince catches Bhalla staring at him in fear and rebukes the chubby royal "Forget aiding you both in your actions... this clown cannot even withstand the heat... why do you drag him along like a mascot everywhere..." how dare agni say this to dharam and be so rude to bhalla. I am so angry at him for calling bhalla a clown. I cant wait to see the day when veer beats him to a pulp😡😡😡 Good veer sticks up for bhalla👏👏 Villagers are so scared of agni that the minute they see him they stop telling dharam about the amount of taxes they are being charged. 😭😭 Agni looking at the women and trying to annoy veer. Veer pays no heed to the comments, while Agni persists with his provoking whispers "Your brother; Dharam, seems to have chosen someone else's bride for himself...what about you...you never seem to want to relish the short-lived pleasures of youth Veer..." he just wants to annoy veer and cause trouble😡 Yey shera?s entry, which is all planned by agni to cause problems for veer. 👏😳😳 Looool shera has to yell to be heard 😆😆 "I did say twenty five sire... we are not a family, but a tribe... there are twenty five members in my tribe... we have a small shop..."😆 Veer rapidly looks in the other direction, while the delightful Shera's answers to the accountant continue to resonate through the hubbub of activity "I am representing the head of my tribe...my father; the Sardar, could not come here today..." she pauses "We earn anything between 12 ? 15 coins a day for the entire clan... and pay about 3-5 coins back as tax..." veer trying to avoid looking at shera 😆and agni is trying to make sure that they do meet.😡 Brazing his fingers on his rough jaws with a lusty grin; the vicious Agni relentlessly goads Veer "My! My! She does look mesmerizing, doesn't she Veer..." Aware of how his immodest cousin was casting disreputable gazes at the lone girl; the repulsed Veer counters the lousy remarks "Agni...I don't care what takes your fancy, but don't involve me in your revolting pursuits..." Don?t look at shera like that you sick person, agni is making sure that these two meet so shera can find everything out. 😡 the nervous Shera fathoms the perils behind the awkwardness of her present plight and determines to instantly calm her pounding heart, before her expressions could give her away. Having vainly hoped to complete her duties and swiftly whisk away before the spiteful Agni could spot her; the girl apprehends the suspenseful situation of the three princes simultaneously staring at her. Briefly noting the flustered frowns on Veer's face, the mild surprise on Dharam's visage and the sleazy glimmer in Agni's eyes;. I just want to go and support shera,🤗🤗🤗 everyone is looking at her veer is trying to avoid her, dharam does not what to say and agni just makes me sick. She is being used by agni and is suffering all this to support her tribe.😡😡😡 Remaining alerted by the fact that the malicious prince could expose her cover for the paltry purpose of fulfilling his wayward amusements; Shera braces herself, deciding not to yield to her apprehensions. Agni is pestering shera so veer would angry and do something😡😡😡 He asks shera who she is and everthing when he is the one who has sent her. I don?t know who I hate the most agni, tasha, jai or baba.😡😡 Reacting with an expression of false shock; the amused Agni progresses to further entrap the girl, as he mentions "Tch! Shop...master...you look fine enough to work in the palace instead... by the way, tell me your master's name...I shall have a word with him..." Don?t goad shera too much or she will reveal your name😡😡 Shera is being cornered as agni is asking for details about her master and veer is trying to avoid her. Has anyone thought about what shera wants to do. Leave her alone 😭😭 "Enough of this! She has finished with her account...she may leave..." As the meek official tries to refute Veer's orders by gently displaying the incomplete entry; Veer raises his palm and escalates the authoritativeness in his tone to thwart any debate on the issue "I said she has finished... she may leave now..." Finally veer comes to her aid and says that she may leave. 😊 veer you could have said it more politely😡
  • Agni smirks to himself on gauging his success at having immensely vexed his two arch rivals. Slowly approaching Veer with an intention of offering mock comfort; the ludicrous royal amplifies the frustration that Veer was already undergoing, owing to the embarrassment and the grief that he had been subjected to. I knew it was all agni;s plan and he is very cunning from the way he pretended not to know shera. Veer will have to be very cautious and alert around him😡😡 😊

? Yey good veer shoves agni and he falls😆😆👏. "What did you think Veer...thatyou

and your brother shall be able to implicate me or my father with this silly

plan of yours... beware the repercussions of this insult...beware Veer...you shall suffer..." Agni is very devious and I hope veer and dharam are always on alert around him.😕

? As the unconventional pair of the enticing girl and her adorable companion,

continue with their pursuit; the course of the actions causes the turquoise veil shrouding her face to slip from her head and cascade on to her shoulders. Momentarily noticing the unveiling of the true magnitude of her beautiful features that enriched her attractive smile and her carefree stance, the unaware prince realizes how her remarkable elements only added up to constitute her mysterious nature. Wow veer notices her beautiful features😍if only you paid more attention to her instead of avoiding her. I wish they keep meeting again and again and spend time with each other. 😍

? "Be it her exhilarating beauty, similar dauntlessness, unmatched wit or

equally strong will...she might not bring money or assets..." suddenly alarmed

by the intent of his unforeseen conjectures, the disappointed prince drags himself out of his recollections, "Stop it Veer! If only that priest had not made such ridiculous statements ...and if only I was not foolishly...enough...just...walk away..." uh huh he is remembering what the priest says, veer just accept it that you are going to be with shera. 😆I guess he is not ready yet to accept it and thinks the statements are not true.

? "Didi, look... look... Rajkumar Veer?" Responding to his yells by daintily

placing her finger on her lips; Shera chides the boy on a mischievous note "Shhhh! Manu...what are you doing...he is trying to avoid us?" loool manu is so sweet, bechara veer is trying to avoid them and he just said it out loud. Shera is so right and says it out loud as well. 🤗

? Veer stops in his tracks and slowly spins around, in an effort to correct her

"No...it is not that..." abruptly aware that he was being very reticent with her, he

pauses to intensify the tone of his reply "Actually ...yes I am trying to avoid you?firstly, I still don't trust you?and secondly, whenever I see you, meet you or speak to you; I get tugged into various troubles, time and again!" veer why you lying you know what she has said is the truth. Awwwwww he is getting away from shera to avoid getting into trouble.😆

? Still attending to her chore; the girl lets out a short chuckle, as she

apologizes to the prince "I apologize Rajkumar Veer...it is indeed unfortunate that I am the cause of your troubles at every encounter...that is precisely why today I chose not to acknowledge your presence lest ...you...might...anyway, thank you for bringing an end to my hapless situation." discerning the deep sighs of the unsympathetic prince, she concludes her sentence on an jesting note "Actually, on the contrary; I must say that I quite enjoy your company, Rajkumar Veer... it is after all sad that you cannot say the same of me..." loooool shere is so mischievous 😆🤗🤗and I love her sense of humour. 🤗Awww see veer she enjoys your company so you can stop being so rude and talk to her nicely 😡

? Attributing her reckless conduct to another one of her charades in an

attempt to seek attention; the prince fumes angrily, as he seeks his vindication "No wonder... being a Sardar's daughter, you are protected and even possibly spoilt by your tribe... thus stubbornly using your craft at trying to get your way every time... everywhere..." veer you are so rude, how can you make such a misjudgement about shera without knowing the truth.😡😡
? "Please don't mark my guess as impudence; but, dare I even venture to say
that your judgement of people might not be particularly outstanding?" a big hug to you shera for saying that. 🤗Spoilt prince needs a few lessons about reality 😡

? I love it when shera is right and veer gets annoyed when he knows he is

in the wrong. 🤗🤗🤗She does like to annoy him and me like that😆 Veer "My! My! What temper?Rajkumar Veer this is not any sapling?it is a peepal sapling...it tends to bring one luck? we don't have a peepal tree near our basti...so I wanted to take it back and replant it?times are hard?I am hoping that this plant would fetch some fortune our way..." she knows how to deal with veer😳😳

? Shera; the unswayed prince grumbles to himself, as he swings around, in

order to pace away "Ha! A plant that fetches fortune... good omen...bad omen... good luck... bad luck... ridiculous beliefs...only silly people would talk more, act less and believe in such sayings!" he just does not like to lose and stop being such a moany prince and just agree to what shera says😆

? "Very true Rajkumar Veer... that's why I don't believe in such sayings either..."

she continues softly "I mean...I don't believe most of what I say... but I use them to help me get my way around with lesser effort and time, as others generally tend to believe such things..." kya jawab diya shera neh, she only believes it when it helps her 👏👏😳

? Shocked by her dauntless admissions, the oblivious Veer falters his step and

gradually swings back; unaware that his aghast frets had gently metamorphosed into a weak smile, mirroring his sense of amusement at the engaging nature of her dialogues. Finally veer gives a weak smile, he is impressed by shera😍😍😍

? Veer stammers to come up with a response, after a long pause "B...by the way,

I am curious... A... Ananya... w...what made you say that my judgement of people was poor?" yey he calls her as ananya for the first time,🤗 😍I have been looking forward to this 😍😍😍and me glad that he asks her why she thinks his judgement is wrong.😊

? And as for your doubt, sire... I am very capable of balancing baskets... the only

reason I was struggling was because I had burnt my hand while melting the metal yesterday..." oh no my shera is burnt, she must be in lot of pain😭😭😭. A big hug for her.🤗

? Shera discloses the incomplete truth of her woeful state of affairs, as she

arrives at the end of her justifications "Rajkumar Veer... I express regret for having mocked your judgement of me... however; I am not a spoilt girl?in fact, very far from it?how could I even afford to be spoilt, when I am a sold slave, diligently working to barely make two ends meet..." I am glad that shera tells him the truth about how much she works to keep her tribe alive and that she is a sold slave. Veer I hope you remember this and be nice to her always even when you find out the truth about agni sending her 😊👏👏

? Yey veer is actually talking to her without shouting and asking her about the

quality of the weapons as he is impressed by them. I love shera?s confidence about how good her weapons are 😊👏👏

? "If your weapons are indeed as good as you claim, then why do you not have

any contracts?" veer how can she do that when she does not have much money 😕

? "I have a proposition for you...let me know what you think of it..." he pauses

"Currently; I am not satisfied with the quality of the new batch of weapons in the Aryanagar arsenal and on the lookout for better resources now...I shall personally send some soldiers to collect a few samples from your shop... if the officials are impressed with your samples, I could try and get your tribe a permanent contract ...I cannot promise, but shall definitely endeavour to do so..." he pauses "Anyway; you may leave now, if you have to..." good he is going to try and help shera to give her the order to make weapons. 👏Veer when will the day come,when you go to shera for a marriage proposition 😍

? Shera tenderly grasps the boy standing beside her and starts walking

backwards, as she rejoins teasingly "And the bribe for this shall be..." I love the way she teases veer and says this 👏

? Veer ponders for a short while and then retorts friskily "A promise not to get me

into any troubles or hassles... ever again..." Though unsure of how far his capabilities or efforts might progress to actually help the condition of her tribe; the girl becomes touched by his genuine intentions and flashes him a warm smile in response, as she continues to walk backwards lool awwww so sweet, he does not want any trouble and so nice of shera gives him a smile and gives the promise 😍 I hope we get to see them both again soon 😳

me eagerly waiting for the next part to see what will happen next. 😍 this was a beautiful part 🤗

🤗🤗 lots of hugs to you

Edited by divareena - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wooowiee...Lashy Di.... loved it! R.Veer...so noble! so i cant reply in long! lol...just managed to come online to reply to PMS n saw ur lil post! i cudnt help maself! tc Di xxx *kissess*
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

OSR Samyukta promo to Part 29

Gradually discerning that the wayward pair of clientele were causing their overwhelmed dealer needless misery with their negligible grievances; Veer becomes increasingly chafed by their unfair actions.

Watching the unfolding events; the old seller stoops forward in order to murmur his views to the observing young royal 'Rajkumar... I know those men... they are persistent troublemakers... ignore them...'

Eventually withdrawing from their gripping paltry pastime; the pair realize that their altercation was being eyed by the formidable retinue of the Aryanagar sentinel, led by the youngest prince himself.

Intimidated by Veer's admonishing glares; the unhappy man whispers to the youth standing beside him, before beginning to retrace his steps 'Seems like we are no longer permitted to even conduct normal trade in peace here any longer... let us continue on our way Tasha...'

As the pair swiftly swing around and begin leaving the scene by shuffling through the crowds in the opposite direction, Veer asks the now relieved seller 'Do they frequently visit this place? Shall I arrest them? That shall ensure that the father and son do not trouble anyone here, henceforth...'

Instantly returning to his assignments; the afflicted seller nods his head negatively and smiles respectfully at the prince's concern, as he replies in modest fashion 'Welcome to the Sawai scrap yard, Your Highness... if you regularly visit places like ours, people shall spontaneously start behaving in appropriate manner... and please do not waste your efforts and time with such meandering folk... even if they are a squandering lot, their daughter is an honest dealer...'

Listening to the import of the cordial answer; the group of soldiers break out into amused frowns, while the disapproving Veer casually smirks and censures the situation frankly 'Daughter? Pitiful are the times when the men of Aryanagar start solely depending on the toils of their womenfolk to run their households...'

Shall try to post if not tomorrow on Monday few pages left to type... been a little busy with Diwali preparations, partying and celebrations... but even if the forum is closed I shall try my best not to abandon Samyukta....(in query to a few friends who asked me this) I guess this shall be continued in the fan fiction section too. 😳 I am even planning to start a blog...dont know how far that would work out... but shall try... and if it does, post the link in my signature...

Oh yey! oh yey!............. Promo here which means the update is just round the corner.........
And wow............... Veer too met his sasurji.............. and should I say 'Saaleji-Tasha' too *giggle giggle*
And my oh my.............. there is a song running in the background too *TayebAli pyaar ka dushman Hai hai......... reminds me of Rishi-Neetu and Rishi's Sasur😉* What a perfect setting to meet your inlaws😍
But wots this...............Veer wants to get Ananya's Dad arrested😲........ oh oh oh😆
Poor Veer...............looks like 'his day out' today............. He doesn't know so many shramik women work..😭........ even today some shramik women work on taxes................. Veer you have not ventured out much and it shows.......... things are so easy for palace dwelling ladies.............outside of it, it's sweat and toil😕
And wots this ................ people in London started partying already😭 Waaaaaaaaaaah mujhe kissi ne bulaya bhi nai............... they can atleast courier me the sweets😭
Edited by minnie2308 - 16 years ago
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FIRST of all HAPPY DIWALI 2 ALL OF U!

wow i cnt hardly wait 4 the update,the promo is surely interestg n veer is all in praise 4 ananya without knowg whoms hes referrg 2!!!wonder wat will his xpression b lke??pls lashy dear update soon!
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Sowwie girls me didn't reply to everyone's personally as me running short of time... so me quickly only replying to a few doubts i came across…

A BIG HUG TO ALL THE GIRLS WHO CONTINUE TO SUPPORT THE STORY EVEN IF THE SERIAL HAS COME TO AN END…

Bhuvi, Reens, Kiran, Minno, Neeri, Laks, Meher, Ams, Archu, Sumi, Nemo and sorry for any others I might have left out… but a mighty bear hug to all of you… and Wish all of you a Very happy Diwali….

@ Kiran

But what is this, what has the old man seen in agnis capabilities to draw such horrible conclusion - With his adeptness at finance and accounts, we would consider it a pleasure if Rajkumar Agnivardhan were to join the Ministry of Revenue and the Ministry of Commerce, to train as chief advisory."

Agni does not even deserve this much but seems jai mama is not happy, god knows now what more he is going to do to trouble the sweet family and dv.

No re baba, he is also a prince and not offering him any post at all would involve too much of bureaucracy… just like how even ghatiya parties do get many votes and probably even win elections today… Besides, it is not to say that Agni is not adept at accounts… he is amazing at it and hence has been able to doctor the books all these days and cover up all the corruption that the father and son have been doing… so bribe, fear of the prince's power, avoiding needless bureaucracy etc… everything warrants that Agni would be nominated too and deserve this post… he is vile and corrupt but intelligent (unlike the Agni in the serial)

Another thing, the old man was only an announcer kiran jee… announcing on behalf of the nobles, their proposed nominations… the nobles had got together for many meetings before coming up with these announcements… and we do know that more than a few nobles are on Agni's side willingly/out of force… so they would definitely nominate him…

Charismatically draped in a refreshing cotton turquoise tie-dyed attire with complementing ornaments of common metal; with her alluring attitude and her fascinating smile. Oh my someone has come all decked up to meet her prince charming, and has brought even manu with her

Manu is the only useful male member in her family that's why…lol…. Jaan she did not come decked to meet the princes… its just that such occasions are indeed special in the lives of some who have nothing to attend to apart from work, day in day out…. have you seen how simple villagers in India even today wear their best clothes for just a simple visit to the temple or to the beach?

"My! My! She does look mesmerizing, doesn't she Veer..........................he is really despicable

Aware of how his immodest cousin was casting disreputable gazes at the lone girl; the repulsed Veer counters the lousy remarks "Agni...I don't care what takes your fancy, but don't involve me in your revolting pursuits..." ......I didnt expect this out of u veer, agni insulting ur girl and u didn't even give him one well deserved punch.

Loooooooool cos first of all he CANNOT even begin to imagine her as his girl lol… and then he doesn't like to interfere in other's affairs needlessly much less Anu's cos he knows he will always end up getting into trouble…and Agni had not yet started troubling her overtly only making comments…. All this till obviously… Veer's emotions do finally overtake his calm senses…

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmy poor veer, the priest cldnt predict some nice sweet innocent girl for him

Hee hee kyun kiran you don't enjoy/want all the ensuing mischief in their lives…

This was so unwarranted , this veer always gets such conflicting emotions when with shera and cant understand them and takes out all his frustrations on her

Wowwwwwww I like this statement you have made.. exactly sums up his behaviour time and again…

@ Minoo

Ohooo ...the much awaited annual assembly congregation is here!

And look, Dharam is the unanimous choice........Minnie very proud of her diligent boy.

Aren't we all?

And Aryavardhan was crowned as a result of his Dad's departure..right Lash?.... May his soul rest in peace..... He would have been so proud of his grandchildren............ even the crooked Agni is so very crooked......... and intelligent too *giggle giggle*

Looooooooool you crooked lil minoo yes dear… that's what I had in mind too… sort of explains the hap hazard crowning etc…and also that nobles feared Jaivardhan's fierce nature… so chose useless Arya instead…

What a lovely scene............. ! You did such a wonderful job with this one Lash.......... Me so pleased with the glorious description of the congregation ceremony. The tension, the jubiliation................ the apprehension all coming alive with your vivid description................. Beware now Agni and gang, my boys will now scare the living daylights out of you.

Awwwwwwww thankooo so long since me saw praise from you pumpkin… *sniff sniff* me emotional now…

And Yaaaayyyy ! Dharam is the crowned prince!......... Wait, wait wait ! I kinda knew it........... beforehand! How come......?

Loooooool imagine the other two being chosen for this …qayamat aa jaayegi..

Rajkumar VeerVardhan.......!umm............me thought Veer ka surname different hoga since his Dad's surname must have been different...... but ok!

No dear… I deliberately stuck to Vardhan… Nivritti fleed the politics and murderous rampage in her husband's home na…if she names her son after her sasural dynasty it means that when her son (who is now Veer) can still claim the throne… which would only expose him to more politics and danger of his life being harmed even as a kid… so to escape all the bloodshed and to live with the more accepting family of her brother and just in the safe thought of someone she could call her own, she gave up her sasural completely… and named Veer after the Vardhans… though obviously he doesn't have prime access to the Aryanagar throne.. which is understood… it is not uncommon minoo for royal families in exile to change their surnames…

Important point is Veer got the ministry of defence and Justice.......... OMG, Agni must have indulged in some sort of foul play..........else Veer would get ministry of Revenue.

Veer and ministry of revenue… this bachaa sitting in one place and calculating and accounts and supervising tax, incomes etc … poor thing no the prince was deliberately chosen to implement law and judiciary system and take care of defence as he showed most flare in it…and Agni has always been amazing at (manipulating) accounts, so he was chosen for the revenue and commerce…

What a proud moment for the king and the the queen mothers................. I am sure they were watching the ravishing spectacle from some discreet window. Awww yes….though I did try and research momentarily before writing 28 and did not find the queen's window (jharokha concept) of women looking at assembly proceedings in 13-14th century north eastern palace so me didn't write those lines lest I left it to reader's imaginations looool [that was apparently more common in mughal/rajput palaces]

The moms are spending so much effort to get jewellery and fineries for their lovely daughter-in-law! How proud and joyous Swathi must be......... Son a crown prince and daughter-in-law a perfect pretty princess. The duo of bright boys pick up all their know-how in no time............I knew it.

What an ingenous plan, the bright ones devised to uncover Agni's misdeeds.....*hee hee*........ And Veer comes in late.....tch tch.........even if held up by stubborn commanders or bad arsenal........ you will need lessons in punctuality Veer.

Looooooooool he is such a brat…we shall send him to Minoo's boot camp.. and he shall train with nannu…

And what's this Agni comes in with more troubles for the hardworking boys..... get lost ............let the boys work!

He adds the much needed spice........ the catalyst which makes them feel their dorment emotions............Veer's inadvertent infatuation to Shera...........Veer's respect for his hone-waali-habhi, Veer's affection towards his friend Bhalla. Awwwwwwwwww so beautifully penned minoo… I shall relish your words to provide me comfort….bad bhuvi did not like this scene it seems *sob sob*

And he harasses Shera too.......... but that gives Veer a chance to step in.......So dare I say whatever happens happens for the best.

Yessssssssss

And o o o........... witty Ananya now makes someone falter his steps........... Her replies are so engaging,............... she is such a sunshine! Btw now we can hope some business talks between Veer and Ananya............. some more pleasant encounters.

I wonder how the revelation of Ananya's link with Agni's devious plans will be taken by Veer.

Me shudder to think… too..

Oh yey! oh yey!............. Promo here which means the update is just round the corner.........

And wow............... Veer too met his sasurji.............. and should I say 'Saaleji-Tasha' too *giggle giggle*

Looooooool yes he did….

And my oh my.............. there is a song running in the background too *TayebAli pyaar ka dushman Hai hai......... reminds me of Rishi-Neetu and Rishi's Sasur* What a perfect setting to meet your inlaws

This perfect setting…. Lol minoo all unromantic unusual settings perfect settings for you…. But, me no know which incident/movie you referring to … *sob sob*

But wots this...............Veer wants to get Ananya's Dad arrested........ oh oh oh

He was behaving notty notty… that's why….

Poor Veer...............looks like 'his day out' today............. He doesn't know so many shramik women work.......... even today some shramik women work on taxes................. Veer you have not ventured out much and it shows.......... things are so easy for palace dwelling ladies.............outside of it, it's sweat and toil

Oy kyaa baat kar rahi ho… Veer is very much an outside-person… if he is not doing one thing, always up to another.. ever since they came back from the Gurukul, he has been outside… hence he stumbles upon the Sonu incident, Dhruv, Niphaud and so on…

and he does obviously know that Shramik women work.. he even knows that Shramik children work…apart from venturing out and seeing for himself, he also has very personal examples of Sonu, Dhruv & its orphanage, Sakshi's family, the words of the commoners in their scheme a couple of days ago… he is only surprised that when everyone is having such a tough time trying to make ends meet… this well built young man and middle aged man (as the shopkeeper himself said are regular squanderers there) are wasting their time and others and additionally just depending on their daughter… as in the lines of the shopkeeper itself if you regularly visit places like ours, people shall spontaneously start behaving in appropriate manner... and please do not waste your efforts and time with such meandering folk... even if they are a squandering lot, their daughter is an honest dealer…

hence, Veer replies that Pitiful are the times when the men of Aryanagar start solely depending on the toils of their womenfolk to run their households

And wots this ................ people in London started partying already Waaaaaaaaaaah mujhe kissi ne bulaya bhi nai............... they can atleast courier me the sweets

Now now minoo ache bache nahin rote.. me shall glide on veer's horse and have the sweets personally delivered to you..

😳 thankoo soo much dears...

Edited by lashy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Minoo

And my oh my.............. there is a song running in the background too *TayebAli pyaar ka dushman Hai hai......... reminds me of Rishi-Neetu and Rishi's Sasur* What a perfect setting to meet your inlaws

This perfect setting'. Lol minoo all unromantic unusual settings perfect settings for you'. But, me no know which incident/movie you referring to ' *sob sob*

Tumney 'Amar Akbar Anthony' movie nai dekhi--------- 3 hit hot young men (now a lil old )there 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
mera naam bhi nahi liya 😔
chalo koi baat nahi others mein mein ho na 😃😆
BTW where is next part...i m exited abt Veer anu's meeeting... 😍

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