!temgirl ka @rmaan part2 pg 3

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hey guyz,

This is @nkit@ as many of u know me and many does not..............well lets leave my introduction and lemme introduce u to my mini ff .well this ff surrounded my mind for almost 9 months now so here is the character sketch and the introduction................well it is gonna be very mini and trust me mini means mini😆 plus its gonna be hilarious and will have very small parts with updates twice a week and yep this is important sorry guyz cannot pm anyone of u coz i get only half an hour.....so that's it and here goes the character sketch

KAMINI CHOPRA(URFFFFFFFF RIDDHIMA GUPTA)

Well yeh hai kamini chopra a budding item girl.Kehte hai she changed her name to be in this industry and is very hot.......well pehle aisi nahi thi lekin yeh kamaal hua kisi anjaan se the one and only atul......he helped her survive in the city of dreams mumbai and now here she is queen of hearts of all the guyz in india................

ARMAAN MALLIK

Well he is our hero but is ff mein zero😆..............bade businessman ki aulad hai apni behen ki yeh faulad hain..............actually sppeaking he is a geek and is very brotherly to any girl(just like rahul before yaar->only dikhne mein)wears a very big chashma par agar yeh sudhar jaye to he has a good charisma......................

Well that's it for now guyz intro kal and dont forget to read it, this is ur friend ankita signing off for today and last but not the least jaate jaate ek request karte jaa rahi hoon plz comment yaar

luv ya

@nkit@

*INDEX*

Part-1 , pg 2

Part-2 , pg 3

Part-1

Gal: hey anjie

an: hey hina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(anjie's frnd)

hina: so wassup huns???????????new house haan and no invitation

an: i know bohot jaldi mein shift hue u to know my dad right????????

hina: yeah u and ur the famous businessman dad Mr.Randhir Mallik

(yes guyz ammy and anjie are bro-sis)

Hina: waise nice house haan!!!!!!!!!!!!

an: thanks

hina: wo kiska room hai

hina said pointing towards a room

an: let it be hina wo room aise hi hai

hina: par mujhe dekhna hai

hina started going towards that room and anjie started running behind her so that she can stop her to go into the room

an: nahi hina maine kaha na wo room faltoo hai tum chalo na main tumhe humara swimming pool dikhati hoon

anjali was stoping hina but finally hina opened the room

*thud*

and we see a guy with big big spectacles and his front teeth were out like bugs-bunny's(lolz)

hina: oh so cute yeh kaun hai tumhara rabbit

an: hehehehehehe maine kaha tha na mat aao is room mein

hina: par yeh hai kaun w8 lemme gues is he ur stupid geek bro abt whom u hate 2 talk??????????????

an: yep honey he is my stupid geek bro

hina: duh tum bohot buri ho anjie tumne itne cute insaan ko kahan chupa ke rakha tha itne saal

hina: hey i m hina tumhari behen ki dost may i know ur name

anjali was shocked and she kept her hand on her face

ar: namastey mera naam armaan hai

hina: ooooooohhhhhh mr.sanskari haan

ar: tum mere saath flirt kar rahi ho??????????dekho tum ladki ho aur ladkiyon ko yeh shobha nahi deta hai samjhi tum

hina: hehehehehe u r so sweet

ar: pata hai tumhe aise kapde bhi nahi pehenne chahiye aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi bachi ki long skirt utha ke pehen li ho jo tumhe itni choti aur tight hai

hina: wow anjie he is so adorable she said with a bit of frustration

an: hmmmmmmmm i know

............................................................

Action>>>>>>>>>>>>

Who's that who's that girl' boom
Who's that who's that girl' (what my baby's got)
Who's that who's that girl'(check her out)
Who's that who's that girl'

Arre sun le nakhrewali.. (hey sexy)
Arre sun lo o matwali (haay)
Meri bechaini nahin ghat ti
Meri tujhse nazar nahin hat ti
Meri tujhse nazar nahin hat ti
Meri tujhse nazar nahin hat ti

[ Dekhta Hai Tu Kya
]


Tuk tuk dekhe'
Pal pal dekhe
Dekhe aankhen phaad ke
Door door se ghoor ghoor ke
Mare nazariya taad ke
Arre yeh to bata..dekhta
hai tu kya'

Cut>>>>>>>>>>>>>

............................................................ ..

That's it for today guyz and i wanna thank my inspiration and she is none other than my dearest hinu di thanks hinu di

i hope u guyz like the part

and i think u must have guessed the dance performer right???????

well that's it for today this is @nkit@ signing of for 2day see u 2morrow with a new update

luv ya

@nkit@


Part-2

Action>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Who's that who's that girl' boom
Who's that who's that girl' (what my baby's got)
Who's that who's that girl'(check her out)
Who's that who's that girl'

Arre sun le nakhrewali.. (hey sexy)
Arre sun lo o matwali (haay)
Meri bechaini nahin ghat ti
Meri tujhse nazar nahin hat ti
Meri tujhse nazar nahin hat ti
Meri tujhse nazar nahin hat ti

[ Dekhta Hai Tu Kya
]


Tuk tuk dekhe'
Pal pal dekhe
Dekhe aankhen phaad ke
Door door se ghoor ghoor ke
Mare nazariya taad ke
Arre yeh to bata..dekhta
hai tu kya'

Cut>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Director: kamini baby kya hua????????thumka lagao, thumka aisa hona chaiye jispe sara India fida ho jaye babes

Ka: listen u fool yeh kaise dancers laye ho tum haan????????ek bhi mujhe ache se choo nahi raha hai, agar aisa hi chalega to main shoot cancel kardoongi fir bhaad mein jaaye tumhari shoot aur tumhara item dance

Director: kamini babes don't worry ab sab tumko ache se touch karenge

Director: sab log suno yeh kamini hai kamini inke saath dates badi mushkil se milti hai, to plz inko ache se chuo samjhe sab

Ka: yeah that's better

Director: waise kamini u r looking very hot in this dress

Ka: I know, waise bhi kamini job hi pehne har dress mein wo hot lagti hai samjhe tum

Director: ok so shoot karein

Kamini: maine kab mana kiya lekin agar in logon ne mujhe ache se touch nahi kiya to bhaad mein jaaye tumhara item dance

Director: nahi nahi ab sab ache se hoga, ab dekho tum dance khatam karogi aur irfan aayega aur tumhare kamar ke tattoo ko gandagi samajhke use saaf karega

Kamini: ok so kahan hai irfan ji

Irfan (khan guyz I hope u know krazzy 4): main yahaan hoon kamini ji

Kamini: hi handsome

Irfan: hi beautiful

Kamini: so aap aaj humare kamar pe haath lagayenge haan

Irfan: haan aap nahi chahti to its ok

Kamini: nahi its good

Irfan: waise aap kafi acha dance karti hain

Kamini: hehehehehe yeh to aap logon ki wajah se hai

Irfan: matlab

Kamini: kuch nahi chaliye shoot pe chalte hain

Irfan: ji chaliye

''''''''''''''''.

Hina: chalo anjie I need 2 go buh I ll surely come 2morrow

An: my pleasure

Hina: aur haan kal main bunny se milne bhi aaungi usko bolna I ll miss him

An: yeah sure, ok then bye honey see u 2morrow

Hina: yeah sure

An: daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddddddd

Anjali shouted it so loud that people in the house felt an earthquake, and every1 came out

Dad: kya hua anjali???????????????

An: dad aapko pata hai aapke is champu ke kaaran aaj meri kitni insult hui hai

Dad: comeon anjali acha batao kya kiya isne

Ar: papa maine kuch nahi kiya wo to didi ki bachon ke kapron wali saheli mere kamre mein aayi thi to main unhe samjha raha tha ki unhe aise bachon jaise chote kapre nahi pehen ne chahiye, ab aap hi batayiye maine kuch galat kiya

Dad: anjali he is right isne to bas tumhari frnd ko bola ki aise kapre mat pehena karo

Ar: haina, upar se didi mujhpe ilzaam laga rahi hain yeh to wohi hua jaise ulta chor kotwal ko daatein

An: shut up

Ar: didi aapko sharm nahi aati aap mujhe keh rahi hai sabke saamne meri kameez utarne ke liye

An: arggggggggggghhhhhhh stop it sabse pehle don't call me didi and call me anjie and secondly dad isko bol dijiye yeh mujhse aur mere frnds se door rahe

Dad: par beta

And anjie leaves from there

''''''''''''

Hey guyz sorry ajj thoda late update tha

But do tell me how was it

Will update 2morrow a longer part

Coz 2morrow is my holiday yipeeeeeeeeeee

I hope I did not disappoint u guyz

Luv ya

@nkit@

Edited by magicgirlankita - 16 years ago

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hinz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#2
Item!!!!!!!!!!!!
lololololol!
meri Anku ka ff ,mai to nahi chodungi
and wow daily updates
me can't wait
ab mujhe bazi palatne ka chance mila hai
ha ah ha
watch out Anku
mai tujhe update ke liye bohot sataoongi
great one
love
Hina
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ankita 😊
what a concept yaar
item girl 😆
itemamon ka concept hain well jokes apart really looking forward to this one 😉
do pm me
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4
heyyyy Ankita!!!
nyc concept
cant wait 2 read it
Arman az a geek
WOW!!! cant wait 2 see how this turns out! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Item!!!!!!!!!!!! sochlo di mere dimaag mein kya-kya chalta hai
lololololol!
meri Anku ka ff ,mai to nahi chodungi main chodne bhi nahi doongi
and wow daily updates yep of very short parts
me can't wait wo to karna padega
ab mujhe bazi palatne ka chance mila hai dekho main kitni achi hoon aapko chance maarne ka chance de rahi hoon
ha ah ha
watch out Anku me w8ing eagerly
mai tujhe update ke liye bohot sataoongi main bhi kuch kam nahi hoon di
great one
love luv u 2❤️
Hina @nkit@

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey ankita 😊 hey prerna
what a concept yaar ahem ahem itna acha laga??????
item girl 😆
itemamon ka concept hain well jokes apart really looking forward to this one 😉 i m glad
do pm me sorry huns i dont get enough time but it is daily updates so u can read it

Originally posted by: ***Krinz_dmg***

heyyyy Ankita!!! hey honey
nyc concept thank u
cant wait 2 read it but u ll have to hehehehehe
Arman az a geek yep
WOW!!! cant wait 2 see how this turns out! 😆me cant w8 to read ur further comments huns well see u 2morrow

luv ya @nkit@

Edited by magicgirlankita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ankita.....
lolzzzzzz...
d concept is tooo difeerent n
armaan is a geek.. 😆 😆 ..lolzz
ll wait 4 ur daily updates..
luv
*vini*
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oooo ff sounds great
cnt wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolvini4u

hey ankita..... hey vini huns
lolzzzzzz...
d concept is tooo difeerent n i know mere dimaag mein kuch bhi chalta hai
armaan is a geek.. 😆 😆 ..lolzz yep
ll wait 4 ur daily updates.. oh sure
luv luv u 2
*vini*

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys part 1 posted

Edited by magicgirlankita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwww....superb idea....n a wonderful start 👏

bt u made our hero a geek 😆 dat 2 wit spectacles n bunny like teeth 😆 u namd anji's frnd hina😛 me also fan of hina di's ff....

n wohooooo ridzi an item queen... kuul....

pls cont. soon...

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