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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sindukur

awesome part its hilarious. Continue soon

Thanks for the PM


Thanks so much! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

ahh LOVED the end esp! when they had their fingers crossed i literally screamed in excitement - (im in my school library - and ppl just gave me some strange looks....)


anyways thanks for the pm and continue super soon!


haha aww thanks so much! im glad u likeddd ittt!! LOL yes that was my favorite part as well! haha awww ur so cute! thanks so much for reading!! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG

This was ONE AWESOME PART!

I was laughing throughoutt...soo jokes!
great job both of you....the story is getting better and better ;)
and i love how all the characters are protrayed and the relations within them :)
all the songs were nicely put in...;) and loved how all of them found their respective ones while dancingg..hayeee soo meant to be ;) LOL
and FINALLY they all came face to face....after all!
LOL it was jokes how the girls kept running away..poor riddhima was all confused LOL...
anjali surely seems like a prankster and same goes for kripa...bumping into pillars LOL
and theen..there protective brothers..LOOL its so realistic :)
anddd the ending was awesomee....cant wait for the sibilings to play questionare with each other haha....and oh la la the guys keeping their fingers crossed..LOL
cant wait for the next partt :D
Pleaseee dooo update sooonnn...pweeetty pleaseeeeeeeeee :D
devu


awww haah thank u so muchh!! im glad u liked it =) yupp totally meant to be haha..anjali and kripa are definitely the pranksters lol and ur rite thats how brothers usually are...i know my cousins are like that too LOL...but thanks again for reading and commenting we really appreciate it that our hard work is being noticed...next part is up =) enjoy!

Originally posted by: Shafoo

thtr was soooooooooooooo dam awesome part love it


aww thank you =)

Originally posted by: arshluver_15

Hey guys
that was great part....loved it finally they all got to meet everyone and also fall in love...................
cont soon
thanks for the pm
nruti


thanks nruti! glad u liked it =) next part is up =)

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

HAHHA...that definitely was a great part! loved it! :)


thanks so much! glad u liked it =)

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome part its hilarious. Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Awww Apni Apni behan pe aaye toh wow aage aage dekhe kya hota hai please conti soon.


haha thank u so much! gald u liked it....yupp when it comes to their sisters u know how brothers become lol thanks again! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: love_KYPH

man dat was awesum....i jus loved it👏

its gonna b fun.....
cant wait 4 d nxt update
cont soon....


thanks so much! glad u liked it =) next part is up! enjoy =)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hahaha that was a krazzy part!! loved it! Thanks for the PM..please continue soon!!!=D


aww thank u so much =) glad u liked it! next part is up! hope u like that too! haha

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one ops AR, AN, AK r together and what a mess they created OMG what happen now girls r going to be dead plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Nidha


hey nidha..im good how are u? glad u liked the part! the next part is up =) enjoy! and omg i love the kitties they are soooo cuteee!! hahah

Originally posted by: arshbest

heyy

lovelyy and wow wel chasing full partt

i was funn and the 3 had their fingers crossed!!!!

thx for the pm

continueee soon

sakshi


aww gald u liked it! thanks so mcuh for readinggg!! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven

ahhh di it was a hell awesome part...👏⭐️
⭐️loved it...❤️
the party was mind blowing👍🏼👏..
that was sooo hilarious when they found each other....😆
hahahhahahahaha and poor bros couldn't catch their sisters....🤣
and those two poor guys whom they beat...🤣
it was hilarious di🤣.....and it was worth the delay😛....
don't hate it di cuz it was awesome....😊
and the songs selection was great...
continue asap 😊


thank u mah! im glad u liked it haha...yuppp it was a crazy part! gald u like the songs...the next part is uppppppp....read it...nowww!! hahaha enjoy!

Originally posted by: spvd

fantastic...................
i just loved the part....................
just the way i wanted it turn out..........................
all brothers getting protective but at the same time flirting with the other's sisters....................
the last line them having their fingers crossed was too nice.......................
cont pretty soon dear.............................


aww thank u...im glad u liked it and we lived up to ur expectations =) thanks again! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: lalala10

Hey.
Great part. I really wanted to read more, so do update soon lol.
This part was funny. Especially the part where the drunk people thought the whole chasing the girls' was a game. ROFL!!!
I also like how everyone was introduced to their BFFs' siblings, though I didn't expect it to be this soon.
I hope the love stories proceed and real soon.
You know what I am about to say but still -"I love Ak."
Lol.
Great part and please update soon.
Thank u.


aww thank u so much!! where have u been! i miss you! im glad u liked it! lol i love ak too!! hahah thanks again...next part is up =)

Originally posted by: 26javey26

love this one a lot
its so funny


aww thankss!!

Originally posted by: dazzling_armaan

M here again :D

The part was Hilarious specially the way the three guys act protective of their respective sisters lolz
& the way all 3 cross their fingers at their back so they dont have to mean their promise i wsa grinning like a stupid when i read that lolz

thanks for the PM
Love yuh both :D


thank u for reading! glad u liked it =) next part is up! =) love ya too!

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

thanks for pm dear

superb part
luved it
it was damn hilarious


thank u! glad u liked it =) next part is up!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xMamz2ellee

Ahhhhh! loved the part! .. esp when Kavya was having those slow reactions & LOVED the end when the boys crossed their fingers! Thanks a ton for the pm 🤗
Continueee sooon.


aww thank youuu <333 glad u liked it!! haah yeah kavya is a cutie! thanks again! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: tehzeebkhan

Awesome part dear plzzzz conti soon


thanks! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: Angel-Jot.

🤣That was such a hilarious update. I loved the club scenes. And how Kripa, Anjali and Riddhima ran after seeing their brothers. That was so cute especially the whole "brother-protective-ness" thing. CHooo cuuttee.


Haha.. i feel bad for the guy who got beat up. =O Violent much? Abhi....hmmm...sounds like a cute guy. ;) Honestly, he sounds like a cutie.
Angad like always...is my cutie..NOT yours.

I love the dialouges btw. You should be a script writer or something. You're amazing at doing funny parts....normal chaps in general actually. 🤣
Quite surprising because you aren't normal at all.

And seriously? You had to use DJ Got Us Falling in love again? I effin HATE that song for some reason. It's horrible but i'm obssessed to Gimme That by Chris Brown ft Lil Wayne. I love Drake but....ehhhh....

Awww it got deleted? The chaps? That sucks. It's happened a lot of times to me and it's pissed me off a lot.

Well...hope that was a good enough comment. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S0iRIFbiglE&feature=fvst

OMG! That songgg! =) I LOVE THE TUNE!

-Jot.


jottty jottty jottty!!! haha thanksss!! im glad u liked ittt!!! srslyyyyyyy???? i LOVEEE dj got us falling in love!!! ur just crazy! loll and yeah i knoww it was soooo irritatingg!!! i was about to give up but thanks to u i didnt lol! i loveee youu <333 and yes awesome song lol and puhleaseeeeee angad is MYYY CUTTIEEEE!!! lmao im glad u like abhi...hmm if u think he is cute...might make him an important character...hmm idk! lolll...well the next part is up so read awayyy!!

Originally posted by: ammyluvridzi

Hey dear awesum part luvd it cont sun


thanks so much <3 glad u liked it! next part is up =)
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New siggy! isnt it nice? would like to thank my love jot for getting it made and to the person who made it! thankss!!


PART 13

They'd taken off from the club obviously wanting to escape their super possessive brothers but they had no idea where to go from here. Khanna house or Sharma house?

Anjali: Sharma house please!!

Kripa: are you kidding me? Khanna house!

Anjali: no no no! Sharma house!!

Kripa: I thought you loved me Anjali...do you want me to get killed??

Anjali: oh stop being so dramatic and use your hollow brain. at Khanna house..it will end up being our brother, two sisters and one stranger...that's you by the way

Kripa: Oh jee...thank you.

Anjali: shush...and at Sharma house..its 1 sister, 2 brothers and 2 strangers. what are the chances that 2 brothers will yell at 1 sister in the presence of 2 strangers?

Riddhima: I say you've had too much to drink.

Kripa: I say I agree with Riddhima. What kind of twisted logic is that???

Anjali: just trust me! go to Sharma house!
Because you know what I said 2 sister 1 brother 1 stranger is more dangerous compared to 1 sister 2 brothers and 2 strangers because 1 brother can yell at 2 sisters in front of 1 stranger but 2 broth-

Kripa: okay okay!! I'll drive to sharma house if you shut up...and if you don't...I'm going straight to Khanna house.

After a few minutes, the car came to a screeching halt in sharma house's driveway. All the girls scrambled out of the car and ran into the mansion as if someone had set dogs loose after them. Gayatri who was sitting there reading in the living room got up as the girls started panting heavily and Kripa locked all three locks of the door from the inside.

Gayatri: arre...kya hua tum teeno ko? why are you running like that?

Anjali: Bhai....after us....we...had to...run.

Gayatri: Haaye raam! Main abhi police ko phone karti hoon!

Kripa gave her mother a confused look and looked at riddhima.

Riddhima: police ko kyun?

Gayatri: arre...tumhare peeche koi gundaa pada hai na?

Kripa: No mom....just our overly protective brothers!

Gayatri: kya keh rahi ho? im so confused!

Kripa: Mom!! So...Armaan and Kavya bhai ended up at the same party as us along with Riddhima and Anjali's brother, Angad.

Gayatri hit her forehead in exasperation. when will Armaan and Kavya learn that kripa is not a 10 year old who needs her brothers to go and get her toys from the bully who stole them. hell, kripa wasn't even like that as a child. instead, her and armaan used to go and get toys from the bully who would snatch them from kavya! If she didn't need their aid at 10, she sure as hell doesn't need it at 21.

Gayatri: okay...I think i can almost see the entire scene that must have happened after that. Don't worry. If they come here, I'll take care of them. Once i send them to their room, you three go to Khanna house. I'll call Naina and tell her. I will make sure those three monkeys don't leave from here.

All three girls ran up to gayatri and gave her a big hug!

Anjali: aw thank you soo much aunty!

Riddhima: you just saved us the wrath of Angad! thank you soooo muchh!

Kripa: I love you so muchhh mom!

Just then, a car came to a screeching stop outside. The three girls exchanged a look and simultaneously said, "uh-oh".

Gayatri: don't worry...all three of you...in Kripa's room...now. Listen for a knock. When I knock on your door, leave as soon as you can. I'll call Naina right after.

The girls quickly ran up the stairs and into Kripa's bedroom. As soon as they closed the door, all three leaned heavily against it as if they expected the guys to come and try to break it open. Actually, they were leaning on it as if they thought they could stop the guys from breaking in if they wanted to. They all had their ears pressed to the door, trying to listen to the commotion down in the living room.

One the other hand, all three guys barged in before gayatri even opened the door completely. All three of them spoke simultaneously, Armaan and Kavya calling for kripa while Angad called for riddhima and Anjali.

Gayatri: Hey! quiet! no noise in my house!

Angad: hey girlfriend...

Gayatri: don't hey girlfriend me. Look, the girls are at home, they're sleeping. Let them sleep. Say whatever you want to in the morning. Go and get to bed.

Armaan: but mamma I--

"Now." gayatri glared.

Kavya: but mom we-

"In. your. bed. now. or. outside. choose." She frowned at them.

Armaan leaned towards Angad. "I say we go to our room before she takes out her Belan."

Kavya leaned towards armaan. "we'll go into Kripa's room once mom sleeps."

gayatri: Don't even think about it. I'm going to be in her room tonight.

Suryaban came out of his study. "arre phir mera kya hoga?"

Gayatri: you can join your buddies for the night.

Suryaban: what happened to your mood?

Gayatri: armaan, angad, kavya....would you like to explain?

"erm" "no" "what are you talking about?" "we have nothing to explain" "yea" "nothing", they all spoke over each other defensively making Suryaban raise his eyebrows at them.

gayatri: they ended up at the same party as the girls. the girls obviously ran seeing these three monsters there. now they're upstairs and I'm sending these boys to their room and telling them not to bug my girls and you, my dear, are going to keep them in their room. if they do anything around the girls' room, inke saath saath tumhe bhi saza milegi.

Suryabhan: BOYS! In your room NOW!

Armaan: But dad'

Suryabhan: MOVE IT! LETS GO!

The boys started going up to their room sulking that they weren't allowed to say anything. Suryabhan looked back at Gayatri but as soon as he saw her glare he followed the guys straight upstairs. Gayatri made sure the boys were in their room. She waited for five minutes to make sure the guys wouldn't come out and then went to Kripa's room and told the girls to go to Khanna house. After giving a quick hug and saying thanks to her the girls left to go to Khanna house.

The girls laughed at the boys as they drove out of sharma house all the way till they got to Khanna house. Still giggling about it, they got out of the car and walked to the door which opened before they knocked and a glaring Naina frowned down at them.

Anjali: Hey mom!

Naina: Don't 'hey mom' me. Explain yourselves ladies.

Riddhima: Explain what mom?

Naina: Explain if it was necessary to drink.

Kripa: Uh-oh'

Naina: That's right

Anjali: But how do you'.Angad!

Anjali's accusing tone made Naina raise her eyebrows

Naina: Nope'he didn't tell me anything. Gayatri called. You really didn't think that you three would get away with it did you?

Riddhima: Mom..can we at least come in??

Naina: No. Gayatri didn't say anything to you because at that time it was more important to save you three from the other three monkeys.

Riddhima: We were just celebrating mom'and we didn't mean to drink so much'we just kinda over-did it back at the party.

Naina: It shouldn't happen next time.

Anjali: It won't! promise.

Obviously, Anjali spoke way too fast giving away her lie.

Naina: You three will be punished for this.

Kripa: anything'promise!

Naina: Great. Be ready to face the guys tomorrow morning'.that is your punishment.

"WHAT??!! THAT IS SO UNFAIR!" all three girls spoke up at once.

Naina: Should have thought of that before drinking so much.

Anjali: but'..but'.

Naina: but THEY drank too!

Naina seemed to be in deep thoughts for a couple minutes. The girls stood there with their fingers crossed behind their back, hoping that the boys would get in more trouble than them.

Naina: Okay. They will be punished as well. But your punishment stays. Be ready!

Riddhima: No mom!! That's really unfair'they were SPYIG on us. They chased us all over the club! They should be punished more for drinking AND spying on us!

Naina raised her eyebrow. "They were spying on you?"

"YES!!" all three girls stressed simultaneously.

Naina: Very well then. Tomorrow, you can yell at them for doing that and they can yell at you for drinking. That's an equal punishment.

When Anjali opened her mouth to argue Naina spoke again.

Naina: Don't start with me. This could be a lot worse and you know it.

Riddhima grabbed both of Anjali's hands and Kripa covered Anjali's moth and the two nodded like good girls while Anjali struggled to free herself.

When Naina stepped out of the way, the three girls retired to their respective rooms, mentally preparing them for what they knew would happen in the morning. When naina went back to her bedroom, Dilip giggled looking at her expression.

Naina: don't laugh Dilip. its not funny. the boys were SPYING on the girls. when will they learn that their sisters have grown up too?

Dilip: are bhai..kal unko bhi daant dena.

Naina: I know....you don't have to tell me. aane do kal teeno ko...unki khair nahi.

Dilip: by the way......what punishment did you give the girls?

Naina: I'm letting the boys loose on them tomorrow....and I'm letting the girls loose on the boys.
dilip; do you realize what you've done?

Naina: what?

Dilip: naina.....those 6....fighting.....all at once.....that's worse than a tsunami.

Naina: pata nahi.....we'll see what happens tomorrow. and you're going to stay in the house.

Dilip: aw man. surya and I were planning on leaving for office.

Naina: well you wont be going anywhere...Gayatri is bringing bhai saab here tomorrow. its about time you fathers helped us mothers with these 6.

NEXT MORNING

Armaan, Kavya and Angad walked into the living room of Khanna house followed by Gayatri and Suryabhan. As soon as Armaan saw Naina, he walked up to her to give her a hug until he registered the frown on her face. He stopped dead in his tracks, waved at her sheepishly and'

"KRIPAA!!" he yelled. Following him Angad screamed "RIDDHIMA! ANJALI! COME DOWN RIGHT NOW!!"

And the next second Angad got whacked on the back of his head by Gayatri who was behind him and Armaan got hit smack on his face with a pillow by naina who was sitting on the sofa. Not realizing who hit them the first thing they yelled was "KAVYA!!"

Kavya who went to get an apple from the table looked back at the two shocked and confused while the girls upstairs who had woken up hearing their name also got confused as to why Armaan and Angad were yelling Kavya's name. Realization dawned on Kripa and she ran down to save Kavya from Armaan and Angad for whatever it was that he did. Seeing her run out Riddhima and Anjali followed her.

Seeing the three girls run down and the guys going towards Kavya, Suryabhan took something out of his pocket.

Suryabhan: here we go'psst'dilip'here'we'll need these.

Suryabhan nudged Dilip and passed him a pair of ear plugs.

Kavya: What? Stop! What did I do!!

Kripa: STOPPP!!! LEAVE MY BROTHER ALONEEEE!!!

And BAM! She ran right into Angad'.well his back! But of course practice makes perfection'she knew who it was.

Kripa: UGHHHH NOT AGAIN!! Whatever I don't have time for this!

With that she moved and went and stood between Kavya and the other two! When she reached Kavya, he glared at her which stopped her where she was.

"Uh oh" she muttered and moved around Angad at the same time Kavya and Armaan leaped to get her. Instead of her, they both landed on Angad. Seeing this, Anjali ran towards them yelling at Kavya and Armaan to get off of her brother. Riddhima ran after her too but not to get the two boys off of her brother, but to pull Anjali back.

Kripa also went to help Riddhima. As soon as they managed to pull Anjali off of Kavya, the three ran and stood behind Gayatri and Naina.

The guys quickly untangled themselves and looked around for their sisters. When they found them, charged towards them until they realized that their mothers were standing in between, glaring and frowning.

Gayatri managed to get the girls to sit on a couch while Naina made the boys sit on the couch opposite of the one the girls were sitting on. There was a coffee table between the two couches and the girls didn't feel safe with this seating arrangement at all.

If the girls' couch was north and the boys' couch was south, the fathers sat west and the mothers sat east. Suryabhan and Dilip looked between the boys and the girls, waiting for an outbreak any second while Naina and Gayatri sat glaring back and forth between the boys and the girls warning them to behave.

Naina: Okay'so the girls are in trouble because they drank last night. And their punishment is that they will have to deal with whatever you three have to say.

Armaan: YES! Okay so Kripa I want to'

Gayatri: AND the boys are in trouble because they were spying on the girls AND they were drinking.

The girls giggled when the guys' jaws dropped and they looked at their mothers. But they shut up quickly when Naina's glare turned on them.

"What?" "We weren't spying on them" "we didn't drink that much" "They shouldn't they're girls"

They all burst out at the same time. But the last statement made Gayatri and Naina gasp out loud and they looked at the girls knowing very well that they will not keep quiet after a sexist statement like that.

Girls: What do you mean girls cant drink? What makes you men so special huh? You all look like monkeys anyways! Male chauvinist pigs!

Guys: Who are you calling pigs? Pigs? Us? You're the one who needs to go on a diet!

Girls: HOW DARE YOU! At least we're good looking. Agar shakal acchi na ho to baatein acchi kiya karte hain!

At this point, both groups were standing and leaning towards each other over the coffee table. Gayatri and Naina sighed and leaned back in their seats fed up of their children's quarrels. Suryabhan and Dilip walked around the fighting group in the middle and headed over to their wives, handing them both a pair of ear plugs. They quickly put the ear plugs back in their coat pockets when Naina and Gayatri glared at their respective husbands. Then they started hearing screaming and cusses. When they turned to look at the group, they weren't there anymore. They were all in the open space behind the couches'..fighting'Literally!

Kripa had a handful of Armaan's hair in her fist ready to kill him while Armaan had a handful of her hair in his hands.

Riddhima was sitting on top of Kavya beating him up while he was throwing his hands all over the place, sometimes hitting Riddhima's shoulders and head and missing the other times.

Angad was trying to hold onto Anjali's hands while she attempted over and over to scratch his face. He managed to save his face but his poor hands would have Anjali's nail marks for days!!

Armaan went to help Angad out while taking Kripa with him since he was holding onto her hair and soon the four were fighting as a group. Seeing this, Riddhima got off of Kavya and ran in, grabbing and pulling Armaan off Kripa. Kavya got up and ran after her trying to pull her off of Armaan.

Suryabhan and Dilip watched their kids with their jaws dropped. Naina watched them while pressing her hands to her temples. Gayatri covered her mouth with one hand while she watched with her widened eyes.

"ENOUGHHHHH!!!" Naina and Gayatri yelled at the same time making even Surya and Dilip jump. All six of them stood in a straight, with messy hair and disheveled clothes. The guys with scratch marks on their arms and neck while the girls' wrist and hands were red because the guys had gripped them too hard.

Anjali looked towards her side and saw Kavya standing there/ She elbowed him and pushed him away slightly, making him bump into Riddhima who pulled her hand back ready to smack him but it hit Angad instead. Angad fell backwards on Kripa, taking her with him and fell on Armaan. Armaan pushed them both off and tried to get up again and fell because Kripa grabbed his ankle for pushing her onto the floor. Angad who was already standing was trying to get back to his place tripped on Armaan's legs and fell on Riddhima. As Riddhima fell, her leg locked with Kavya's making him fall backwards. Anjali tried to catch him but couldn't and fell on Angad's back. Soon the entire fight started again.

Seeing all this again Naina's temper flew out the window and before Dilip could stop her she went into the kitchen and came back with lightning speed. Next thing they all knew'all the kids were getting beat up by Naina and her famous belan! She was just swinging at anything and everything! Didn't matter if it was Kavya's back or Riddhima's hand. Armaan's leg or Kripa's arm. Angad's behind or Anjali's front! The woman was on a roll!

"MOM stop!" "Ouchhh'.aunty" "MOMMYY pleasee stoppppp"

Seeing Naina and the kids Gayatri made Suryabhan go in to stop them all. But no way he was going alone into that so he dragged Dilip in as well! But of course the group was too busy getting away from Naina and She was too busy venting out her anger and none noticed the two dad's enter the quarrel. Going unnoticed the two were pushed and shoved around like no tomorrow. And if that wasn't enough they also became victims of Naina and her belan. Finally, had enough Dilip yells on the top of his voice!

Dilip: STOPPP!! ALL OF YOU!! NOWW!!

Hearing him scream'everyone stopped where they were. They were in trouble'big trouble. Dilip never got mad but when he did oh boy. And this time it wasn't only dilip but Suryabhan as well. Boy were they gonna be in so much trouble! Each one gulped'not ready for whatever it was that was going to come next.

Dilip walked towards Naina to calm her down but seeing her glare he decided not to bother and just looked at Gayatri. On cue she came forward and took naina to the side to calm her down as the two dads talked to their kids.

Suryabhan: I have had enough of all of you and your fights! Now if you want to solve this quietly then sit down and behave. If not you are all grounded for the next 40 years of your life!

Dilip: 40? Make it 50! This is crazy! What is wrong with you guys! Now if you want to behave like mature adults then sit down!

Giving each other dirty looks they sat down on the sofa.

Dilip: Alright. All six of you have made a mistake and all six of you are going to be punished.
Suryaban: That is, No drinking at all for the next month.

Boys: what????

Dilip: And you three will let your sisters live in peace. Stop being so over 'protective. They're adults now too.

Girls: YEAH!

Suryaban: And you girls will at least tell your brother where you're going so that they don't worry too much...

Girls: WHAT??! That is so unfair!

Boys: it is not!!

They were about to start arguing again when Gayatri spoke up.

Gayatri: AND you six will clean this house.

The six: what?? But'

Naina: Sharma house too!

All six shut up knowing very well that their punishment will be just added onto if they said anything. They glared at each other, nodded tightly and got up to get to work. It was going to be a really long day!


Okie guys...that was the part! hope u liked it...next part will be full of masti and fun! Cleaning the houses and bonding! Remember to add us as your buddy if you want a PM whenever we update. Again Please press the "LIKE" button and comment so we know our work is being appreciated!

Also we will try to update before the end of the year but in case we can't we would also like to Wish you all A Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year! Hope your new year starts off with a bang! Enjoy the Holidays! Go out. Have fun! And remember to Be Safe!

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OMG IM FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)


chalo, update tho kiya :) hehehe :)
ohmygod i loved this part!! i was literally laughing out loud while reading naina's antics!! i love her belan!! :)

Love,
Kriya<33
update soon! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
res res res...
Soo happyy you guys update...just gunna read it and comment :D
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That was just AWESOME!
ohhh man it was like a laughing mania...i couldnt stop laughing throughout and especially towards the middle and end...and when the 6 were all fighting and entangled with each other...i could totally imagine the awkward and weird positions you were describing...and then comes the mighty BELAN....WOW NAINA WAS ON A ROLL! Poor 6 though......loll
and i lovedd the attitudes of the DADS...they were soo chilled and lmaoo headphones? haha..
SOOO cleaning up now eyy?
letss see how the 6 handle it ;)...btw these 3 are my fav coupless so cant wait :D
Updatee sooon pleaseee....im sure youve got holidays ;) so update if you cann :D thnxx
love ya guysss!
Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
All six of them are really hillarious and the poor parents couldnt even cope with them.By i liked the punishment they got.cant wait 2 read da next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for the PM. Super fun part. Wonderful update continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
absolutely LOVED IT!

wah wah wah!

i was like practically rolling on the floor laughing while reading this! u are just toooo good!
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all, you're welcome. 😃I still haven't gotten any more PM's from the others soo...yeah.

I loved how Gayatri helped them. Man...these guys have such chilled parents. My parents would kill me. 🤣

Haha..aww Angad. "Hey girlfriend..."😍 Such a cutie isn't he? LUBB him. ❤️
How sweet. Kripa went to help Kavya, 😆 He's the helpless one isn't he? Or more like..Kripa's partner in crime. 😆Er...annoying Armaan to be exact.

🤣Dude..i was trying so hard not to laugh. Honestly. I'm in the other living room so i had to stop breathing because my dad was in the other room and he could've been able to hear me if i had laughed. He would've thought i was crazy or something but damn, this was such a hilarious chap.

I absoultely loved the fight. Way too cute. It seems like Armaan and Kripa are always fighting which reminds me...i can't believe you made them siblings!-Not that i mind but i've always thought they'd make a cute couple. 😍 Choo cute. Or Kripa and Kavya. Which really pisses me off because you made both of em her brothers but whatever. They're so cute.

😲NO ABHI? NO WAY. I thought you were going to make him a bigger character. *pouts* He's such a cutie...not saying that i prefer him over Angu..that aint happening. Angu's allll miiineee! ☺️

The fathers are hilarious as well btw. Them and their ear plugs. 🤣 And of course, how could we forget....Naina and her belan. 🤣Poor them. That reminds me of Armaan's dialogue about Gayatri's belan. 😆

Thanks for the PM. LUBBed the update.

-Jot.
Edited by Angel-Jot. - 14 years ago

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