¦FF Saathi...THE LETTER PAGE 85¦ - Page 4

that was great yaar seema loved the palace and prince and princesses describing of your it was mind blowin.


esha

Great FF dear.....!!!!👏

bt i think u shud write long updates...😊😊😊

relli lykd da way u started it off n introduced d pRinces n pRincesses....!😃😃😃

else d FF wz owesummm.........!!!!


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Plz continue n post d nxt part soon......!!!🤗


living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

Originally posted by: rajatnmughda4ev

Oye! comment on mine!

u olso writing kya....???



living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

Hey Seema..like the intro part...palace, prince and princess... 😳
Good start 👏 👏 👏
Plz do continue..will wait for the next part 😊 😊

Wow! loved d whole scenario 😍 Uptil now description is so clear & beautiful 👏 M Curious 2 read d part ven n how dharam & veer gonna meet disha & sawari 😉

NOTICE NOTICE!!!!!
hi everyone thnk u for reading the 1st part of my fan fic and liking it well just to let u no that the next part is TODAII!!!! 😃 n then my 3rd part is tomoz n then it will be on saturaii reson being is because i had strted l8 😭
so my originl updates will be every other daii...
okii w8 a 1 or 2 hours nad my next part will be up 😃 hope u enjoy itNOTICE

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Great FF dear.....!!!!👏

bt i think u shud write long updates...😊😊😊

relli lykd da way u started it off n introduced d pRinces n pRincesses....!😃😃😃

else d FF wz owesummm.........!!!!


👏 👏 👏 👏

Plz continue n post d nxt part soon......!!!🤗


living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever😍😍😍

thnk u vinisha 😳yh iw ill my my next cuming parts longer then this thats a promise...hmm yh my next part is todaii😃

Originally posted by: heaven princess

NOTICE NOTICE!!!!!
hi everyone thnk u for reading the 1st part of my fan fic and liking it well just to let u no that the next part is TODAII!!!! 😃 n then my 3rd part is tomoz n then it will be on saturaii reson being is because i had strted l8 😭
so my originl updates will be every other daii...
okii w8 a 1 or 2 hours nad my next part will be up 😃 hope u enjoy itNOTICE

description was very transparent and beautiful Shimmu.Make them longer if u can .Luv Sneha's role.Disha and Sawari sleeping😆mera bhoot savaar ho gaya kya😉

recap: Dv are horse riding and having a challenge.veer won. sneha goes to wake up the two rajkumari's buh to her suprise is shocked to see waht shee finds

ABB dekhe agae😃

Saathi- ek Anek rishto ki door

Part 2- Rajkumari's get into trouble

Sneha: Hey ram!!!! Yh kya hogaya…..ram ram ram ga jab hogaya!!!

😆 - Sneha starts running back to Maharani devika's room.

Sneha MAHARANI JI…… MAHARANI JI…..MAHARANI JI….

- the other dasi's are carrying plates of flowers to take to the dalwar..when…. Sneha bumps into them and…

Sneha: tum log dekh kar nahi chal saakte kya ?

Dasi: kya!!

Sneha: kuch nahi….bata nahi mera tho dimake kam kar nah band ho chuka hai 🤪 ……maharani ji …..maharani ji 😆

M. Devika: kya huva tum itna chila kyun rahi ho?

Sneha: vo…vo…vo (she is out of breath) dono Rajkumaria

M. Devika: kya huva une dono ko??

Sneha: vo dono gayab.. 😆

M. devika: KYA!! 😲

Sneha: nahi nahi vo mera matlab hey ki vo dono utho gaye hai

M. devika: tum ne un dono ko uthaya isle yh it nah chila rahi ho.

Still trying to catch her breath..

Sneha: nahi nahi,,, vo dono … phele she he uth gaye thi….aur..

M.Devika: Aur kya?

Sneha: aur kuch nahi app kudh ja kar dekh kar aye..

M.Devika ofo…hato yha she..hum kudh dekh kar ayenge

Sneha was so exhausted after all that explanation and running that she fell onto the maharanis bed and only realised that after she was better and quickly got up.

Back at Aryanagar..in Dharams room:


Dharam: thum ne buwa neh bataya tho hoga he nah ki Awadhi ki dono rajkumaria aah rahi hai.

Veer: nahi tho, shayad bhul gaye hongi maa. Yh dono rajkumaria khub aaranhi hai?

Dharam: pata nahi (shrugging his shoulders)

In Awadhi…in the room of the two rajkumaari's…

M.devika: yh ..yh tum dono kya kar rahi ho?? (shocked)

Looking at the state of the room. Rajkumari diha and rajkumari sawari were having a pillow fight adnt eh room was all a big huge mess, the bed sheets were all over the place, the cushions were torn apart and the bed, had clothes all over it.. It was a tremendous big mess.

R. Disha: Jii maa, vo, vo hum khel rahe the (looking down)

M.devika: Khel rahe the, kya ise khel kete hai?

R.sawari: (in underrone, so only R.Disha could hear it) Hum are liye yh toh khel he hai.

- they both giggle

M.devika: chup ho javo, kya hall banaya he tum dono ne is kamre ka, yh kya ek kamra hai yh phir kach re ka daba? 🤣

R.Sawari: (again in underone, so only R.Disha could hear it) Jo app ise samaj nah jati hai wohi sahi. 😆

M.Devika: ab tum dono jaldhi tayar ho javo, tumhe pass ki mele she kuch saam man karid nah hai.

Inside the palace of Aryanagar, niviriti is talking to a dasi….
Nivriti: vaha pe (pointing towards the door) jo phool hai vo vaha se hata ke, yh naya phool laga dho aur, vaha kier ki ke upar jo pardha hai vo ek ache pardhe ke saat baadal dena.

Dasi: ji rani maa

Dharamveer come out of the bedroom to see what is going on!

Veer: ma , yh saab lis kushie mein ho raha hai?

Nivriti:
Tumhe nahi baata, ke Awadhi ke Maharaj, maharani auur unki dono kubsoorat rajkumaria ar rahi hai aur vo bhi dho dino meine.

Dharma: yh Awadhi ke log kon hai?

M. Aryavardhan: beta Awadhi ki log humare kaas dost hai kitne saal ho chuke hai une mile hu ve.

Nivriti: are main tho bhool he gaii, beta kya tum dono paas ke mele me jake, kuch ache thofe le kar a saakte ho, Awadhi ki parivaar dena hai isliye, sab ke liye lena!

Veer: Jee maa hum dono abhi jaate hai.

They go back to their rooms and collect there swords and they leave.

M.Aryavardhan: hum kitne kismaat vale hai ke humme ese ache do bete mile hai. 😛

Nivriti: jee bhaiya.

Precap- Dv and Rajkumari Disha and Rajkumari sawari are both heading towards each other in the opposite direction..and a knock jock begins


pls comment bk and tell me what u thought of it ...honest opions again pls😛

i hpe i diid mke iit long enough😕😛

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waw i loved the first and second part.. Do contineu dear... Ur really good 👏 👏