¦FF Saathi...THE LETTER PAGE 85¦ - Page 3

Originally posted by: rock 2 d2v

dear frnd I may not know u personally but I feel ur storytelling capacities r gud.So many new characters,new names and new characters and new intros...ur FF is very fresh.Waiting 4 ur 1st FF.My best wishes r always with u

hey well firstly my name is Seema, rock 2 DV thank u for ure support liek everyoen else n for ure best wishes😳

Originally posted by: anupode

aacha batoa aap kab likhana shuru kar rahe ho???
we r waiting for it...... 😍

hi Anupode i will strt riting it on Mondaii, as now i hve enough responses😳

hey guyss here is my first part😃

Saathi- ek anek rishto ki door
Chapter 1

In India, there was a kingdom called Aryanagar, and in Aryanagar there was a beautiful palace, where lived the two most handsome princes of Aryanagar, named Dharam-Veer. Whenever somebody had to call one of the princes the other had to be called reason for this was- Dharam ke bina Veer nahi aur Veer ke bina Dharam nahi!

Opposite Aryanagar was another kingdom called Awadhi, Awadhi also had a palace with the two most beautiful princess's living there named Rajkumari Disha and Rajumari Sawari, the palace garden was the most beautiful garden you would see in Awadhi, a nice and big water fountain right in the centre of the garden. There were all sorts of flowers on all four sides of the garden palace.

These two kingdoms were best friends, they helped each other whenever there was a problem. It has been 7 years since they have not met and so one day….

M. Devika: Sneha….Sneha …Snehaaa

Sneha: Ji Maharani ji

M. Devika: Kitni baar hum ne apko bulaya, kya kar rahi thi app?

Sneha: Ji….vo…mein.

M.Devika: kehar choro..jao aur ja ke dono rajkumario ko
utawo….batha nahi kitni der thak so yeh gi.

Sneha: Ji maharani ji.

On the other hand, in the garden valleys in Aryanagar, there was horse riding challenge going on between DharamVeer.

Dharam: Dekh na Veer, hum he jeetenge.

Veer: Acha, aaj tak Veer ne Khabhi haar na nahi sikha!

Dharam: Tho phir aaj dekh lena upne apko haar te huve.

Veer: Tho jalo dekh lenge.

Dharam: Agar hum jeete Veer tho tum kya donge hume.

Veer: Jo tum mango vo! Aur tum?

Dharam: Jo tum mango vo!

Veer: Theek hai

And with that both of the boys were reaching the end of the race. Veers hair was flying like a birds feather would fly after it had left the birds body. Dharam was reaching near the end of the finishing line and was in front of veer and was thinking to himself that now Veer cannot beat him, when suddenly Veer raced passed him and won!!

With a big smile on his face:

Veer: Maine tho kha tha ki mein hi jetton ga. Kaha tha ki nahi?

Dharam: Tik hai tik hai. Itna kush hone ki koi zaroorot nahi hai (looking sad). Is bar tho humne tumhe jane diya pur agle baar hum he jeeten ge (with a bif smile on his face).

Back at the palace of Awadhi, Sneha is walking down to the Rajkumari's room.

Sneha, talking to the herself…

Sneha: Rajkumari, Disha aur Rajkumari Sawari itni badi ho gai hai, pur phir bhi apne app nahi uth thi hai, pur jo bhi hai yh dono bohot achi hai

Sneha has reached the room when to her surprise she saw, the state of the room……

precap: Dharamveer going to the mela...

so how wa it guyss
Hey guys do comment pls give ure honest opions about it i will not feel bad 😳 and tell me wah was good about it

Wow! gud job 👏 👏
I think u'rs is WAY better than mine...and that's 100% honest...

Originally posted by: rajatnmughda4ev

Wow! gud job 👏 👏
I think u'rs is WAY better than mine...and that's 100% honest...

thnku for ure honest opinion😳.......ures in good as well adn yes i will comment on it😆😆

i really like it, seema 😳 eagerly waiting 4 the next chapter 😃

Originally posted by: MiNd_BlOwInG

i really like it, seema 😳 eagerly waiting 4 the next chapter 😃

thnk u next updat is tomoz as i was l8 in uploding...so w8 till tomoz 😳

Originally posted by: CutieA

dts reali gd! keep it up! 😃

thnk u😳

Originally posted by: rajatnmughda4ev

Oye! comment on mine!

i will in a minute i jus came bk form going out so i just got the chance to read it sorri😭

Originally posted by: lovely_nancy

continue!!!

😆okii...next pdate is tomoz😳