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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Heyya Didnt Knew Dat U Olso Writing A FF...!

Wen Read It So Finally Commented...!😳

Greattt Work...👏👏👏

Please continue n update it sooon.......!🤗




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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: heaven princess

👏 👏 👏 woow realli liked it cnt w8 fro next update 😃

Thanks for *ahem* commenting😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: hiri

yes it's great yaar sandhya got lot of attitude yaar thanx it's fab. 👏

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Ya...the complete packaged tomboy...😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: aandhanika

LoVeD iT YaAr.... WiLl Be WaItInG fOr NeXt UpDaT 😉

Thanks...well...wait till Thursday.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutieA

really gd hun..cnt wait for da next part! 😃

Thanksh.

I think it'll be up by Thurday.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
loved it.. 👏 👏
but dharam...first tym he sees sneha, and already wants to kiss her here and there 😳
loved this dia: sandhya: agghar apako koi takleef ho, to sneha se kehe dena 😆 😆 😆 i like a lot this girl attitude, perfect for veer 👏
omg and this: pitaji, yeh do bandar, mera matlab hei ladka... 😆 😆 😆
plz continue 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Girl_2007

loved it.. 👏 👏
but dharam...first tym he sees sneha, and already wants to kiss her here and there 😳 ya...luv at first sight....
loved this dia: sandhya: agghar apako koi takleef ho, to sneha se kehe dena 😆 😆 😆 i like a lot this girl attitude, perfect for veer 👏 ya...you know...that's how I want Sandhya's charectar to shape...and yes, she annoys her cousin Sneha SO much...just lyk me...
omg and this: pitaji, yeh do bandar, mera matlab hei ladka... 😆 😆 😆 ya yaar...even I started laughing when I read what I had wrote...
plz continue 😃 thanksh so much for u'r support yaar🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajatnmughda4ev

Thanks for *ahem* commenting😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ya, I guess u get the point 😆
Anyway....I must ask u guys to excuse my horrible typing abilities (ie: my typos).
Oh, and if u guys have any brutal comments (ie: suggestions),please feel free to bombard me with them,I'll be really greatful.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hola amigos! Me back wid one more update…

Chapter 3
The sun had just come up. Rajkumari Sneha was already up and about in her room. So was Rajkumar Dharam. Both of them went out in their balconies, and to their surprise, saw each other (as the balconies were opposite to each other). Rajkumari Sneha smiled at Dharam, and Dharam immediately started blushing. Rajkumari Sneha shouted across to Dharam.

Sneha: Umeed hai aap ko raat me koi takleef nahi hui.
Dharam: Nahi, intezaam bohot accha tha. Waise bhi, agar koi takleef hoti, to hum aapko pareshan nahi karna chahte.
Sneha (laughing) Tab Sandhya humse bohot gussa hoti.

Dharam was speechless. To him, her laugh was the most beautiful music he had heard. Maybe Veer was right, and maybe Dharam had fallen in love with Rajkumari Sneha. He snapeed out of his train of thoughts, as she had spoken again.

Sneha: To aap taiyaar hai?
Dharam: Haan, bas ab Veer uth jaaye to….
Sneha: Sandhya bhi nahi uthi....

At that moment a voice shouted from somewhere.

Unknown voice: Sneha! Kahaan ho tum?
Sneha: Ayi!

She turns to Dharam.

Sneha: Hume chalna chahiye. Varna Sandhya humare haath chaba legi.

Sneha exited the balcony. Dharam saw no point in standing there anymore, so he went inside. Veer was waiting inside.

Veer: To, kaisa rahi?
Dharam: Kya?
Veer: Baat cheet, tumhari-
Dharam: (interrupting) Jaldi se tayaar ho jayo.

Dharam threw some clothes at Veer.

Veer: Jaanta hoon kyun tum is bare me baat nahi karna chahte.

But by the time Veer had finished the sentence, Dharam had already left the room.
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A few hours later, the four royals were told to gather in the palace gardens. The king was there to bid them farewell.

Maharaj Sumeshwar: Aap sab apna dhyaan rakhna. Aur Sandhya, Sneha ko zyaada tang mat karna.
Sandhya: Mein kab isko tang karti ho.
Maharaj Sumeshwar: (smiling) Aur Bahadur ke saath zyaada shetani nahi.
Sandhya: Lekin bahadur ko dodna pasand hai…..
Sneha: Aap fikra mat kariye mamaji, hum Sandhya ko sambhal lenge.
Maharaj Sumeshwar: (Turning to DharamVeer) Koi bhi musibat ho, to hume patra zaroor likhna. Hum umeed karte hain ki apko Sandhya ya Sneha pareshaan nahi karenge.

Sandhya snorts, and Sneha elbows her.

Dharam: Aap chinta mat kariye Maharaj, itni khubsoorat…mera matlab hai…ki…hum pareshaan nahi honge. Hume pareshaan karne ke liye Veer hai na.

It was time for the four to go. The king hugged all four of them, and they parted company.

Dharam, Veer and Sandhya on horses. And Sneha in a palaqee. They were going to camp somewhere for the night, and reach the fair tommorow.
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In the beggining, the ride was uneventful, but it all changed when a group of thieves attacked them.
Dharam Veer and Sandhya faught them, very bravely. But while the trio were occupied, someone was going to Rajkumari Sneha's palqee. Rajkumari Sneha screamed.

Sneha: Bachao! Bachao! Koi bachao!

Dharam heard her cry, and immedietly went to rescue her. He fought of the filthy thief and carried Rajkumair Sneha out of the palqee. He put her down gently under a tree. Rajkumari Sneha was completely red.

Sneha: Hume pata nahi, ki hum aapka shukriya ada kaise karenge.
Dharam: Uski koi zaroorat nahi hai.

Dharam looked in her eyes, as if searching for a sign, an expression that would tell what she felt about him....
Sneha stared at him. He suddenly looked a lot more handsome. Maybe it was him new outfit...no...it couldn't be...it was the same as yesterday. Her heart was turning into jelly, slowly.....
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Meanwhile Sandhya and Veer were fighting off the thieves.

Veer: Yeh ladkiyon ka kaam nahi hai. Tumhe chot bhi lag sakti hai.
Sandhya: Chup karo Veer. Ladna mujhe bhi aata.
Veer: Dekho, mein to sirf tumhare baare me soch raha hoon.

Sandhya turned to face Veer. She was furious! How could anyone even dare to call her a....a...a GIRL!
She was too busy fuming at Veer that she didn't see a person running towards, just about to attack her. But Veer saw him

Veer: SANDHYA! PEECHE DEKHO!

Rajkumari Sandhya turned around, and defended herself just in time.
After what seemed like an hour, all the surviving thieves had ran away. Dharam came back with Siya. He carried her to her palqee. The four started again, but this time Sandhya and Veer were fighting.

Veer: (Angrily)Tum paagal ho kya?
Sandhya: (Calmly)Nahi, lekin mujhe lagta hai tum paagal ho
Veer: Aaj tumhari jaan bhi jaa sakti thi!

Sandhya: Meri jaan jae, usse tumhe kya farq padega.
Veer: (screaming) THEEKH KAHA TUMNE! MUJHE KOI FARQ NAHI PADTA!

Veer turned his back away from Sandhya.
Dharam coughed.

Dharam: Waise aap bohot acchi ladayi karti hain.

They arrived at the camping place. Sandhya didn't say a word. She climbed off her horse and angrily tied the rope to a tree trunk. She stormed to her tent, ferociously opened the flap, and stormed inside, again.

Dharam: Veer, tumhe uspar chilana nahi chahiye tha.
Veer: Galti meri nahi, uski hai.
Dharam: Galti jiski bhi ho, tumhe maafi maang leni chahiye.

Sneha came out of her palqee.

Sneha: Sandhya ke aur se hum maafi maangte hai. Vo kya hai na…
Dharam: Nahi Rajkumari Sneha, galti aapki behen ki nahi, humare bhai ki he.

At this Veer got angry. He climbed off his horse and stormed into his tent.
Sneha smiled at Dharam. Dharam turned the shade of a tomato. Seeing Dharam's reaction, Sneha started blushing and lowered her eyes.
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Two hours later, DharamVeer were in their tent. (They were sharing a tent).

Dharam: Tumhe kya lagta hai?
Veer: (Absentmindedly) Mujhe lagta hai ki Rajkumari Sandhya ek ghamandi aur nakchadi-
Dharam: (Interrupting) Arrey voh nahi.
Veer: To?
Dharam: Voh..rajkumari Sneha....
Veer: Tum khud hi jaake puch lo.
Dharam: Hmm...kal sube-
Veer: (Interrupting) Mujhe yeh nahi pata tha ki mera bhai ek ladki se darta hai!
Dharam: Hum nahi darte hai ba-
Veer: (Interrupting) To saabit karo. Abhi jaakar usse puch lo.
Dharam: Theekh hai. Lekin tum saath chalo.

Veer smiled.

The two were outside the girls' tent, discussing something.
Dharam: Nahi Veer, abhi vo so rahi hongi.
Veer: Accha theekh hai, pehle mein jaata hoon, phir tum jaana.
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Meanwhile, inside the tent, Rajkumari Sandhya was practicing her aiming skills, using a knife. Rajkumari Sneha was lying down on her bed, resting her eyes.
Rajkumari Sandhya threw her knife. Suddenly Veer came in the way. He caught the knife just in time.

Sandhya: Kya, tum bhi naa. Galat waqt par aajate ho.
Sneha: Kaun he Sandhya?

Veer gesture's wildly, telling Sandhya to not reveal his real identitiy.

Sandhya: Erm...Shanta ayi hai.
Sneha: Accha. Shanta, humare liye phal kaat lo, hum baad mei khaa lenge.

Sandhya smirks, and hands Veer the frut bowl and knife smugly.

Sandhya: Kaato kaato Shanta. Aur theekh se kaatna, tumhe to pata hai Rajkumari Sandhya ko kaise phal pasand hai.

Veer glared at Sandhya.

Sandhya: Lo Kaanta bhi agayi.

Dharam looked shocked at being called Kanta.

Sandhya: Waise Kanta....Rajkumari Sneha ke per bohot dukh rahe the. Tum daba do.
Dharam: Lekin.....
Sandhya: (pushing Dharam) Jao, varna hum pitaji se shikayat kar denge.

Veer started snickering.
Sandhya: Tum kyon has rahi ho? Apna kaam karo.
Veer: (In girly voice) Ji.

Sandhya burst out laughing. Sneha woke up, and to her horror, saw the handsome Dharam, at his knees, attending to her.
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So guys...how did u like this? Please post u'r comments.

I'll update on Sunday.
Edited by rajatnmughda4ev - 17 years ago

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