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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanksh for all your support guys. I'll def. update the next chap ASAP. If possible, by tomorrow.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowww... i really like it... will be waiting for the next partsss...
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wowo really nice, pls hurry up with the next chap 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay Kiran guruma. Teacher ne kaha to I'll try 2 type up the next part today... 😉
Edited by rajatnmughda4ev - 17 years ago
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Okay guyz,
Time for another update.
Chapter 2
Another Sevak comes rushing to the girl.

Sevak: Rajkumari Sandhya, aapke dosto ke ghode ka kya kare?
Rajkumari Sandhya: Unko Bahadur ke saath rakh do.

Rajkumari Sandhya turns and faces DharamVeer.

Rajkumari Sandhya: To chale, maharaj se milne?
Dharam:(Apollegetically) Hume maaf kar dijiye, hume pata nahi tha ki vo..aap…hum…
Sandhya: Koi baat nahi, kaafi logo se ye galti hui hai.

Dharam glares at Veer.

Veer: Ladki hoke tumhe ghoda chalane aata hai, yeh to ajeeb baat hai.
Rajkumari Sandhya: Aur ladke ho kar tum ekdam meri behen ke tarah baat karte ho. Yeh bhi to ajeeb baat hai.
Veer: Dekho, mujhe to sirf-
Dharam (Interrupting) Theekh hai Veer, koi baat nahi. Ab hume chalna chahiye. Maharaj Rajkumari Sandhya ka intezaar kar rahe honge.

The three proceed towards the palace courtroom, in stiff silence. They walk inside the courtroom, and again everyone bows respectfully.

In front of her father, Sandhya bows carelessly.

Sandhya: Pitaji yeh do bandar......mera matlab hai yeh do log aap se milna chahte the.
Dharam: Vo Maharaj, humare pitaji, Maharaj Aryavardhan ne aap ke liye ye khat bheja hai.

Dharam gives the king (Maharaj Sumeshwar) the letter. DharamVeer stand, waiting, while Sandhya goes up to sit in her chair.

Maharaj Sumeshwar: Arrey vah! DharamVeer itne bade hogaye! To aap bhi mela dekhne ja rahe hai.
Dharam: Ji.
Maharaj Sumeshwar: Aap ke pitaji ne likha hai ki aap yaha ek din rahe, aur rajkumari Sandhya or Sneha ke saath kal mela jae.
Sandhya: Lekin pitaji...



Maharaj Sumeshwar gives Sandhya a please-do-it-for-me-princess look, and Sandhya nods.

Mahara Sumeshwar: Sandhya, inko inka kamra dikha do.
Sandhya: Jaisa aap kahe.

Sandhya gets up from her chair and gestures DharamVeer to follow her.

Inside DharamVeer's room:

Sandhya: Ye raha tumhaara kamra. Kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to meri behen, Rajkumari Sneha se maang lena.

At that moment, a beautiful young princess walks into the room. And falls, straight into Dharam's arms.

She gets up.
Dharam is stunned. Rajkumari Sneha is the most beautiful girl he has ever seen. He feels like he has been struck by a cupid's arrow, and he really doesn't mind. He thinks the princess is eyery bit lovely. From her shining black hair to her soft fair skin, and those lovely red lips……..
He has an irresistable urge to kiss her there and then, and would have, if she hadn't spoken.

Sneha: Itni der kyu lagiyi? Hum itna ghabra gae the.
Sandhya: Maaf karo meri maa, mujhe kese pata tha ki tum meri chinta bhi karti ho.
Sneha: Sandhya.....accha, ab chalo, tumhare kapde badalte hain.
Sandhya: Kyon?
Sneha: Kya matlab kyon?

Veer coughed.

Veer: Hum dono ko tum bhool to nahi rahi ho?
Sneha: Aur aap kaun hain?
Dharam: Ji, voh hum hai…voh hum…humara matlab hai ki…..

Dharam looked at Veer helplessley.

Veer: Mai hoo Rajkumar Veer, aur yeh hai Rajkumar Dharam.
Sneha: Bohot acchi baat hai. Ab chalo Sandhya, kal ke liye tayaari bhi karni hai.
Sandhya: Chalo.

They start walking, but Sandhya stops.

Sandhya: Arrey haan. Inko koi bhi takleef hogi, to woh tumhari zimmadari hai.
Sneha: Aur aap kya karengi, Rajkumari Sandhya?
Sandhya: Arrey, mahal tak to maine inhe pohochaya haina. To, ab tum inki dekhbhal karo.
The two princesses exit the room. Veer starts smirking. Dharam sees Veer's expression.

Dharam: Kya hua?
Veer: Kuch nahi, bas…...ji, voh hum hai….voh hum…humara matlab hai.

Dharam: Veer, dekho, jo tum soch rahe ho, vaisa kuch nahi hai.
Veer: Aisa hi hai mera bhai. Lekin mujhe nahi pata tha ki itni jaldi tumhe pyaar ho jaega.
Dharam: Veer……
Veer: Bolo Dharam.

Dharam is silent.

Veer: Mujhe pata tha. Dharam ko pyaar ho gaya hai, Dharam ko pyaar ho gaya hai.


Veer starts taunting Dharam. Dharam blushes, but get's to his senses soon enough, and starts chasing Veer all around the room.



Next update will be latest by Thursday. Before I go, I'd like u all to see my question on the first page…and also all my efforts to prettyfy the introduction for my FF. And have a look at the first chapter…I've added a couple of pics.

Edited by rajatnmughda4ev - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yes it's great yaar sandhya got lot of attitude yaar thanx it's fab. 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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LoVeD iT YaAr.... WiLl Be WaItInG fOr NeXt UpDaT 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really gd hun..cnt wait for da next part! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 woow realli liked it cnt w8 fro next update 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
Heyya Didnt Knew Dat U Olso Writing A FF...!

Wen Read It So Finally Commented...!😳

Greattt Work...👏👏👏

Please continue n update it sooon.......!🤗




living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
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