Safar- FINALLY UPDTD-pt 17-pg 51- - Page 11

😆 Veer playign with the dolls haha omg jkes

Originally posted by: heaven princess

😆 Veer playign with the dolls haha omg jkes

I'm glad u liked that part😆me enjoyed riting that too.😃

i think that its tasha who took sandhya away 😕
btw, a funny one, veer playing with a doll, haila!! i am trying to picturise veer, with a girl's voice and playing with a doll 😆

Originally posted by: Silver Screen

i think that its tasha who took sandhya away 😕
btw, a funny one, veer playing with a doll, haila!! i am trying to picturise veer, with a girl's voice and playing with a doll 😆

Well...u'll see on Monday😃
Thanksh for replying Aditi🤗

Originally posted by: rajatnmughda4ev

Well...u'll see on Monday😃
Thanksh for replying Aditi🤗

you are most welcome ana🤗

👏 👏 loveeed ur fanfic...loool its veri diff frm otha fanfic too...well done 🤗 btw...loved veers n sandz nok joks...reali...veer playin wid dolls whilst cursin sandz haha...awsome 😆 😆

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loved it!
dharam and sneha defending their respective siblings..was really good 😆 😛
finally snadhya wins..but says sorry..aw! 😳
omg..this part: 🤣 🤣


Sneha: Roti.
Dharam (Almost drooling) Haan....
Sneha: Roti jal rahi hai.
Dharam: Acchi baat hai.


👏 👏 👏 brillently wrote! 😆
and when veer said the doll was for him 😆 lolz..and when he had to play wid it 😆 bechara 😆
but sandhya kidnapped?? 😕
waiting for next part 👏

Originally posted by: CutieA

👏 👏 loveeed ur fanfic...loool its veri diff frm otha fanfic too...well done 🤗 btw...loved veers n sandz nok joks...reali...veer playin wid dolls whilst cursin sandz haha...awsome 😆 😆

Aaaw....thanks, I try to make it as original as possible😃.

Haha, poor Veer can't do anything else, can he???😛

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

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loved it! Thanksh🤗
dharam and sneha defending their respective siblings..was really good 😆 😛 ya...jab siblings ki baat hoti hai to defensive ho jaate hai...
finally snadhya wins..but says sorry..aw! 😳
omg..this part: 🤣 🤣


Sneha: Roti.
Dharam (Almost drooling) Haan....
Sneha: Roti jal rahi hai.
Dharam: Acchi baat hai.
Lolz, ya...that's a classic line

👏 👏 👏 brillently wrote! 😆
and when veer said the doll was for him yup...very shocking for people around... 😆 lolz..and when he had to play wid it 😆 bechara 😆Dil bechara....pyaar ka maara😆
but sandhya kidnapped?? 😕 Yup....u'll find out soon...but hwy confused?
waiting for next part 👏

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