The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149 - Page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi guys ye raha next update:-

"Aisa hai mujhe yahi utaar do mai aa jaaongi", Kajal said to driver.

"Par madam aap is sehar me nayi hain; mai aap ko aise nahi chod sakta yahan. Aap kahin raasta bhool gayi to boss bahut naraj ho jaayenge." Driver replied.

"Tumhare boss bhi na……Are mai koi dhoodh peeti bacchi to hoon nahi ki gum ho jaaongi. Tum mujhe yahan utaar do bus." Kajal insisted.

"Madam aap baat samjhne ki koshish kariye pls." Driver Vikram Singh tried his best to convince her par Kajal to hai hi jiddi ek baar me baat kaise maan legi.

Bahut der tak samjhane par jab nahi maani kajal to driver ne kaha "Theek hai par agar koi problem ho to is no. par call kar dijiyega mai aa jaaoonga aap ko lene".

"Ok ", she replied n took his number n came out from the car.

Saamne hi Fun Mall tha vo seedhe us me hi ghuss gayi.Aur ghoom ghoom kar poora Mall dekhne lagi. She called Anchal n told her that she is visiting Mall this time. Kuch der baat karne k baad us ne phone rakh diya aur phir ghoomne lagi.

Tabhi us ki nazar saamne show case me rakhe ek diamond pendent par padi. It was simply soooooooo beautiful .She entered in the shop and asked about it's cost.

"Only 18,000/- Rs. Mam", the sales girl said.

"Ok ok", she said in disappointment. Kajal k liye to bahut mehnga tha vo. So she left from there.

Kuch sochte hue bahar nikli par tabhi.

"Oh my god", a guy said in a panicked voice.

Here Shalabh n Sunny:

"Ye bata agar vo tere par gussa nahi karti to aur kya karti. Na jaan na pehchaan aur seedhe bahbhi bana liye tune." They were both on bike n going towards Arjun's house.

"Saari ki saari gadbad is Arjun k baache ki wajah se hue hai kya jaroorat thi wrong no. dene ki." Shalabh was fuming.

"Koi baat nahi yaar ab gussa shaant kar. Ab gar chal hi rahe hain na wahi chal k ladte hain." Sunny commented.

"Tu bhi na kam nahi hai sale. Mera mazak banane ka koi bhi mauka nahi chodte ho tum dono." Shalabh said in frustration.

Dono Arjun k ghar pahuchte hain aur Arjun ki mom se baith kar baatein kar rahe hain ki tabhi Arjun aa jaata hai.They soon started doing little fights n after all that Shalabh asks

"Kis ka no. de diya tha yaar tune jab maine tujh se bhabhi ka no maanga tha tab."

Arjun asked, "Kyoun kya hua?" he was smiling.

"Vo kisi aur ladki ko mil gaya tha aur us ne………" Shalabh couldn't complete us k pehle Sunny bol pada

"Is ki band baja di." N Sunny broke into laughter.

Both were laughing non stop. Soon Shalabh started hitting them with pillow to both of them n this continued up to 15 minutes.

Now Arjun said , " Actually vo Anu ki jagah galti se maine jo no. de diya vo Mugdha ka tha her best friend."

"Aur us ne is ko dhobi k gadhe ki tarah dho diya." Sunny said n both started laughing again.

"Shut up both of u guys." He scolded both of them. Soon they were chatting about their problem (Mallika).

"Good Sunny u did a g8 job buddy. Mai hi galat tha jo tum ko nahi samajh paaya .U r a best friend yaar." Arjun said with pride in his voice.

"Any thing for u guys any where. So ab tu bata kya kare?" Sunny asked him.

"Ok I tell," He explained a plan to both of them n finally it's decided that this plan will be played on tomorrow night in same hotel.

"Ok hum ab chalenge yaar." Shalbah said n got up.

"Ruk yaar khana kha k jaana na". Arjun requested.

"Nahi yaar di aayi hue hai agar aaj mai un ko shopping par nahi le gaya to pata nahi kya hoga vaise bhi abhi sirf 6 hi baje hain." Shalabh said.

"Tu ruk na Sameer kahan jaa raha hai tu?" Arjun now turned to Sameer.

"Sorry boss meri tuition class ka time ho gaya hai. Ne other day yaar." Sameer said.

"Ok guys ab aap dono nahi rukenge to koi baat nahi.Par yaad hai na 18th ko meri engagement hai." Arjun remind them.

"Haan yaad hai aaj 6th hi to hai na. To kyoun itna pareshaan hai?" Sameer asked.

"Are yaar ab is se bhabhi se door nahi raha jaa raha hai na." Shalabh teased him.

"Accha bus kar bahut ho gaya.Chalo jaana nahi hai tum dono ko kya?" Arjun tried to avoid the topic.

"Dekho kaise sharma raha hai bilkul ladkiyon ki tarah. Ladkiyon se yaad aaya ki bhabhi ki vo frnd bhi aayegi na engagement me." Sameer asked.

"Haan kyoun?" Arjun asked.

"Are humare Shalabh jee un ka besabri se wait kar rahe hain na." Sameer teased Shalabh.

Isi tarah se thodi teasing aur thodi shararat k baad they left from there.

Here in mall:-

"What the hell is this? Aap dekh k nahi chal sakti kya? Aap jaise logon se hi mulakat ho rahi hai aaj meri jo aankhen hote hue bhi andhe hote hain." The guy was fuming.

"Sorry ", she said blankly.

"What sorry? Sorry kehne se sab theek ho jaata hai kya?" He again said collecting all his fallen things.

Kajal bent n helped the guy in collecting his things. They both got up n Kajal again said sorry to him.

"Dekh k chala kijiye madam ye Mumbai hai yahan nazar hutte hi karnaame ho jaate hain." Finally he looked at her n saw a beautiful face infornt of him.

She was absolutely gorgeous n beautiful. So cute n her big black eyes were the most beautiful creature on her face.Vardaan felt kuch kuch for her in his heart. So simple n beautiful n toooooooooooooo cute from every where.

"Sorry mai yahan nayi hoon na to mai……………" Kajal couldn't complete.

"Kis k saath aap aayi hain yahan? Kahi kisi ko dhoondh to nahi rahi thi na tabhi takra gayi ho mujh se." He was none other than our darling Vardaan.

"Mai actually akele aayi hoon yahan." Kajal told.

"Tab to aap ki himmat ki dad deni hogi mujhe. Nayi ladki sehar me aise ghoom rahi hai. Madam ye aap ka sehar nahi hai, ek anjaani jagah hai agli baar se kisi ko saath le kar aayega." Vardaan said smiling.

"Thanks for suggestion par mai aaj ki ladki hoon. Mai akele bahut kuch handel kar sakti hoon." Kajal said confidently.

"Good .Ok now excuse me." Vardaan said n soon he left.

"Ajeeb aadmi hai jaan na pehchaan chala bashan dene.huh." Kajal said n started walking in to the Mall again.

After sometime see saw her watch. It was 8:45 p.m.. 'Now I should move kaafi der ho chukhi hai' she thought in her mind.

She came out from the Mall n went into a restaurant n ordered some food for her n instructed them to pack it. Some boys who were watching her came near her n started commenting her.

She came out taking food immediately n started walking fastly. They were chasing her. She was almost started running now. Suddenly some one pulled her hand in a corner n started rubbing her lips on her shoulders. She was shocked now. By the time the boys reached there n saw the scene so they left.

As the moved the guy left her n in response he got a tight slap across his face.

"What the hell u was trying to do with me?" Kajal was fuming n asked it to the guy.

"I was just trying to protect u mam. Par shayad aap logon ko reply me thanx kehne ki bajaye Slap karna like karti hain." The person came into light n he was Vardaan.

"Tum? Oh to yahi tareeka tha kya mujhe bachane ka?" she asked still fuming.

"Haan mai aur aap ko kya lagta hai ki mai Karz film ka Sunny Deol hoon ki mai kahoonga ki ladki ko chod varna theek nahi hoga aur jab vo nahi maanege to mai un ko peetunga aur kahoonga, 'Ye dhai kilo ka haath dekha hai jab ye padta hai to aadmi uthta nahi uth jaata hai'.Phir vo mujhe maarenge aur mai koi Sunny Deol to hoon nahi ki poori fauj se Gadar film ki tarah akele hi lad jaaon." Vardaan said stupidly but this statement downed her temper.

Kajal laughed at his statement "Thanks for my help." Kajal said n smiled.

Hey guys I think aap sab ko ye ud kaafi accha laga hoga.So I am waiting for more replies this time.

Bye take care n enjoy
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hiii Mahak,
am so sorry dear, actually i wrote the comment on last update n also posted it but i dunno why it is not posted n also my all comment is deleted so i tried twice to post comment but it's giving me continous error😡 i really dunno y!!! n for that am really very sorry dear😕
well let's talk about ur update n it's too cool. i like the way Vardan saved Kajal queit interesting hmmm...😆😆😆 bechara acha khasa intro hua hai dono ka , ab aage aur maza ayega jab wo office mein apne boss se milegi😉
waise i know that Vaardan's dil goes joommmm when he goinng to see Kajal.
aur ye shalabh aur Mallika kya chakkar hai yaar,waise unhone use acchha maza chakhaya,aur hamare Bhabhi se kab milva rahi ho,aur sweet Mugdha jinhone hamare Shalabh ki band baja di......😆
i like update it's very nice plzzzzzzzz update next part soon ok!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏nice ud.cont soon.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
really nice and the last bit was really funny wo sunny deol vala dialogue
plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi Mahak,
update was too gud n the meeting between Vardaan n kajal was different specially last scene was really funny"

"Haan mai aur aap ko kya lagta hai ki mai Karz film ka Sunny Deol hoon ki mai kahoonga ki ladki ko chod varna theek nahi hoga aur jab vo nahi maanege to mai un ko peetunga aur kahoonga, 'Ye dhai kilo ka haath dekha hai jab ye padta hai to aadmi uthta nahi uth jaata hai'.Phir vo mujhe maarenge aur mai koi Sunny Deol to hoon nahi ki poori fauj se Gadar film ki tarah akele hi lad jaaon." Vardaan said stupidly but this statement downed her temper."

Do update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
totally rocking updt.....just loved kaajal n vardaan........
also salabh part was good too
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey fantastic and simply awesome ud and i loved vardan and kajal pat.
ud soon and keep it up
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hii vartika dear kaisi ho?

the ud was as usual awesome dear,
i simply loved it sweety,
and especially the kajal and vardan part,
and the last part was really funny and cool sweety,
even salabh part was also very good dear,
i will be waiting eagerly for the next part dear.

WITH LOTS OF LOVE,

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

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Posted: 17 years ago
The update was very sweet and cute.I really liked the conversation between Kajal and Vardaan.
Very beautiful update.👏👏
Thank u.
continue soon.


love
Riya
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Posted: 17 years ago
mujhse naraj ho to ho jao😉
khud se lekin khapa khapa na raho😆😆
hehehehhe.....are der se comment kar rahi hoo na...😕😕😕

hiiii Darling Vartika😳....my sweety.😛.lovely..😊.my cutie...😃
achha ab comment..kya update tha Darling..👏👏..are marvoulus..amzing.
khas karke Vardan aur Kajal ki meeting..👏👏👏.ummmaaahhh..loved it...
aur Vardan ye kya kar raha tha hehehehe..ganda ladka..hehehehhehe.
Aur Vardan hahahah Kya acting kiya usne😆 😆 😆 hahahahah..itna serious
admi kaam k liye...😳aur ye sab aur to aur dilouges bhi yad hain hehehe
thoda khiska hua lag raha hai..😆😆.aur wo to kajal ko dekh kar fida hogaya mall
😛😛me nahin...hota kaise nahin uski ankhen hin aisi hai.ki koi bhi fida ho
jaye phir Wo To ....Rajeev (urf)Vardan hai To Priyanka? (urf)Kajal par
fida kaise na hota..just mindblowing Darling...aur han phir keh rahi hoo
naraj mat hona ok...😳😳me kya karti mera If open hi nahin hua hehehhe.
aj hua to tujhe comment de rahi hoo ok..love u lotssssssssss....❤️❤️❤️
darling.....aur han....I love you ,,,aur kuch nahin hehehhe.....🤗🤗
bye🤗🤗🤗
Riti.....😛😛😛

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