The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149

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ashwini

@ashu20

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#141

great update yaar..........just loved it

really sorry vo last time mai comment nahi kar payi mere exams chal rahe hai the...

take care

love

ashu

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 17 years ago

#142

HII VARTIKA DEAR HOW R U SWEETY?

THE UD WAS ROCKING DEAR.

AND I LOVED THE SONG DEAR,

IT'S ONE OF MY FAV. SONGS.

AWESOME WORK DEAR,

KEEP IT UP.

WILL BE WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT PART SWEETY.

WITH LOTS OF LOVE

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#143

Update was really very romantic...That song is one of my favourites.Vardaan is flirting so much with Kajal.Well end wala scene was like Dil to Pagal hai but ending was little different..Next day office meeting mein dono ko shock lagne wal hai ek dusre ko dekh kar

waiting for the next update

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Riti

@-Reeti-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#144

HIIIIIIII DARLING..KAISI HAI....THIK THAK NA..😃 😃 😃
wese ab comment ki baat...chal ruk na.thodi der..comment to mil jayega..par tu thik hai na.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

ab ud ki baat.fabulussssssssss..amzing....tooooo goood...what
an ud dear..wese ek baat puchoo..ye Vardaan itna romantik
kabse hogaya..hai...ohhh god...he was sooo flierty with kajal
yar....n....that to....very .....differently....he was just awesome.
kya line mar raaha tha yar.aur to aur ye bhi kehta hai ki pass
aao....aur pass aao....aur usko apni god me bhi utha liye..ohh
god..kya badmash hogaya hai..hehehehehhe...😳 😳 😳 😳wese
ye Vardan aisa kaise hogaya....just bealutifull aur is bar to
sirf aur sirf wohi the...very good darling..mujhe bahat achha laga...thoda bada nahin likh sakti thi .kya..not fair..yar..
aisa achha nahin kiya tune..me padhne me khogayi thi ki khatm hogay..ok ok..ab agli baar thoda jaldi aur bada sa karna aur plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Vardan aur Kajal ka scene jyda rakhna ok...tc sweety bye.. 😳😳 👏 👏 Ud soon
n .....be happy..
Riti...😊

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#145

wow what an update its really romantic and the song suited the scene perfectly plz update soon

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Riya

@Riya_16

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#146

The update was great.Very romantic.Sooooooooooooo cute.
I loved it.
Continue soon.
You are tooooo good.

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#147

Hii Mahak,
Update is really very sweet. Vardaan is too cute, pehli baar flirt kiya wo bhi itne style mein cool.
love the car scene. Kajal is so inocent n sweet. ab maza to tab aayega jab office mein unka ek dusre se samna hoga,
plzzzzzzzzzz update soon dear.

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Yasmin

@Yazzi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#148

woooooooow!! first i will like to say that i can't believe that i missed such a brill fic *gobsmacked* loved all four characters especially Vardaan though 😳... hmm so he is a buinessman now that is something i will like to read ... and his dad is trying fix his marriage and he liked the girl ... now this is when i was like 😲 😲 😲 lol but when i read that she's not the girl of his dreams i sighed in relief, anyways glad that kajal (btw nice name) and Vardaan met, and he is such a flirt though this is his first time.... he is master 😳 😳 😳 i just can't believe that Kajal slapped him though i was laughing at what he said after that... what do you think i'm sunny deol 😆 maybe not sunny deol but he is defo my sharukh 😆 and loved the part where he forced her in the car lol 😆 😆 😳 he's a weird guy but i love him this way.. now i just wonder how the two will react when they meet in the office ... Kajal will surely faint 😆 😆 😆 giving Vardaan another chance to carry her in his arms 😳 😳

well loving your fic 👏

take care 😃

yasmin

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: ashu20
great update yaar..........just loved it
really sorry vo last time mai comment nahi kar payi mere exams chal rahe hai the...

take care

love

ashu

no probs dear.😊😊

Exams kaise the?😊😊

Thanks for liking the update.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: pritib0
HII VARTIKA DEAR HOW R U SWEETY?
me fine aur ab aap kaise hain? 😊😊

THE UD WAS ROCKING DEAR.

thank u so much.😃😃

AND I LOVED THE SONG DEAR,

me too.😊😊

IT'S ONE OF MY FAV. SONGS.

mera bhi.😉😉

AWESOME WORK DEAR,

KEEP IT UP.

WILL BE WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT PART SWEETY.

WITH LOTS OF LOVE

AND GOOD WISHES,

PRITI.