With every breath I take:NOTE PG38 - Page 10

Wohoooooo!!! Love being first not first atleast 2nd this time.!!!😆
simply an outstanding part as usual???? u still hav a doubt why people call u queen???


Ok cuming to the part well well.....few things opening up already??? Heart went out to my Armaan as usual. 😆 Loving his chain of thoughts as usual. Any doubt???

"Sure babes!" Wow this is first class the large leather seats and the one to one service ….man I thought the VIP lounge was cool… and I have my own personal slave…this is so cool…."

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U bet its surely cool.😎 As usual these simply dialogs are so very apt and excellently put.....no match.👏


"Sorry yaar both Mr Grewal and Dad so seriously want this rista to happen so they have booked the entire penthouse you will share the room but have separate bedrooms…"

waah waah!!! Same house.....very very interesting....... 😆 This is surely going to be a lot of fun, wonder how u even think up such things?? sheer brilliance i guess!!😳

Ahhh so we have plotting fathers too??? wondering wat will be the outcum wen the impostors are caught. 😕😆

Look Mister I know karate and don't want to hurt you!" LIAR!! Ridz? OK stop acting like Jackie Chan and calm down! OK why he chuckling….🤣🤣🤣🤣

OMG Jakie chan ??? honestly how on earth do u even think up such stuff??? As i told u 100 times till now. U surely hav sum brilliant talent!!

Loved the crashy crashy meeting!!!😆😆 Am sure sum more loggerheads are on the way!!😆😆 waiting for them to shift inthe samee penthouse!!!😆😆

Lovely update Kat as usual!!! Ur jus toooo good.
Will be waiting formoreee as usual
Love
Jia

reserved

me at work too Kat
and after that warning ,me worried i might get fired
so lets keep it safe 😆
will comment soon 😉

who said 1st impressions count? they shouldnt right.. after this 1st meeting his seriously going to consider her as a headcase and she's just going to think KICK everytime she see's him 😆

but whats with this lost sister and mum thing... OMG plz dont make Ridz his sister... that would just be way tooo freaky not to mention gross 🤢

hmm muskaan is a rich spoilt brat so unless her mum remarried a millionaire she's not his sister, which leaves our only other female character Anjie (who may or may not be in this story 😕 )

hey cat di..wonderful start..already wondering how they will react to know they are not Rahul and muskhaan respectvely..continue soon,, 😆

Hey Kat

wow gr8 part... cudn't stop smiling the whole way through

haha... jackie chan... karate kid??? lmao 😆 😆 😆 ... seriously loved it... o boy what a first meeting, i'm sure it was very 'rememborable' 😳


hmmmm... living in the same room???... how sweet.,..lol... i'm sure armi is gonna think of a good way 2 pay her back after she has kicked him 3 times... or was it 4??? 😆 😆 ... well, whtever it was, she kicked him in his legz nd shin 😆 ...lol

armi's planning not 2 fall in love with her/... but i doubt he'll keep up with his plan, as it is he alredy thinks shes beautiful... 😳

but tht was somewht a reli short part😭 ...lol... hope nxt is longer as u've completely got me hooked😆
continue soon


Irsa

grt part love it
pls continue sooon

hey kat di 😊
this part was awesome mind blowing n too cool 😉
loved the way they faught with each other n omg she says i know karate 😆 seriously u reminded me of geet from jab we met 😆
it was superb di loved it
waiting for the next part
update soon
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I CLDN'T HELP SMILNG WHILE READNG D ENTIRE PRT... OMG KARATE KID N JACKIE CHAN 😆
N WOT A MEET... CRASHING INTO EACH OTHER N ASKING HER 2 TEND HIS BRUISES...... DID IS GNG 2 DIFFICULT 2 HANDLE.....
POOR LASS SHE AS 2 PAY 4 IT......
DIS WAS SUCH A SHRT PRT... BT STIL LUVD IT 😊

hey..tht was awsumee...
so they tell each otha tht they r ridzz n armi...lol
do update soon n if u can pm me...
xx revna xx

u knw while reading dis part da title song from da movie " kismat konnection " kept on playing in my head .... sumhow i think it fits perfectly well in dis situation !!! ohk so armaan n riddhima will be staying together in da same penthouse for one week n try dere best 2 piss da other one off .... wow am totally luving it !!!! wiating for ur nex part .... do update wenever u get da time !!!

PS:jackie chan n karate ... OMG dats da funniest .... i dont knw y but dat scene reminided we of kareena from Jab We Met ... where shes telling shahid not 2 cum near her .... as she knws karate !!!! 😆