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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Hmmm...still nott ceard dat y did MS called nivi...!

lolz...VEER iz truly VEER....😆 ...i mean d naughtiest one...!😳
went cose 2 dharam n shouted in hiz ears...🤣....! awwww RKi nivi smiling....fallen 4 dharam...huh...greattt...!

hmmm..raksha iz more intelligent denn nivi😉,....gulabi rang ka lehnga pehanna😆😆😆....celever gal...huh...!

lolz...VEER teases dharam a lott....n dharam even gets more irriated wen he calls him ''bhaiya''....😆

didnt got dat...?😕 why did raksha said 2 nivi 2 wear blue coloured dress...? she heard dV kya...??? n if yes den hw cum as dV were in der room...?😕😕😕

awww....nivi n dharam...both wwaering blue...n staring at each other...😳....!

lolz...dharam gave nivi a morpankh...so dat she cn write letter to him....correction to anyone...😆😆😆

VEER's dialogues...awesum....!👏👏👏....lolz...chandan ka lep...😆😆😆

why dey wanna search 4 sarkar...😕...ol is solved........!

''dharam aapse kuch kehna chahta hai''😆😆😆...n dharam himself duznt noe wat 2 say...😆😆😆...VEER's truly funnyyy.....!😳

lolz...greatt reason to close n open d eyes again n again...😆😆😆

hmmm....Raksha gave VEER's example...😉...no1 asked her 4 dat...hmmm...Raksha olso fallen...😃

awww nivi shudnt feel sad dat y she has fallen 4 dharam......she loves her so need 2 b sad bout dat...!

ol fout at da mandir....kool.......!😃😃😃

great update...pretty_mugdha.....!👏

do continue.....!🤗



living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT ❤️forever
😍😍😍

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
hey i wanted to type nivedita but mistakenly typed nivritti..
raksha was kidnapped from the palace of aryanagar so dv feel that its their responsibilty to find out the culprit,secondly they kindaa wanna prove that they can b good rulers of aryanagar in the future
raksha heard dv talking(she eaves drooped on them)and as she knew wat nivi feels for dharam she asked her to wear blue dress.
hope ur doubts r clear 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
herez the next part
it was morning and the sun had risen spreading its wings of freshness and a new day as begun.In the palace of aryanagar both the princes were quiet excited about their trip to the mandir andthe forest.Afte taking the blessings from their parents they set off for their journey.They had requsted their father not to send any soldiers to escort them as the temple was not very far off and they could take care of themselves...aryavardhan had agreed,only after charusena also requesed him for the same
Both the princes were on their horses..
Dharam:Veer hume nahi lagta ki us gufa mein ab koi gandh hogi bhi..
Veer:Par dharam vo ek tehkhaana tha waan ko khidki nahin hogi ..hosakta hai ki vo gandh ab bhi ahin ho..gandh nahi to kam se kam koi suraag hi mil jaaye..
Dharam:Agar aisa haia to humme bhi bahut khushi hogi...aakhir pata to chale ki kiski itn himat ke humaare mahal mein akar itna sab kar jaaye...
Both the princes reach the jungle and enter the gufa..
Veer:Yahan to koi bhi nahi hai..achcha hi hai.
Dharam:Veer..un dakuon ke adde kisi chupi agah par hote hain..ab is jagah mein rehna unke liye khatre se khaali nahi.
Both the princes enter the gufa and then enter the tehkhaana.
Dharam(tries to smell):Veer ye gandh to abhi bh yahin
hai..
Veer(sneeze):Haan ..ye ye gandh to ...(he remembers something)...Dharam y gandh to raunaknagar ke khaas gulaabjal ki hai..jo diwali ki raat awadhi ke mahamantri se aa rahi thi.
Dharam:Han veer ye to wahi gandh hai..par ye raunaknagar nahi roopnagar ke khaas gulaabjal ki khushboo hai..
Veer(sneeze):Yahan dekho dharam ye to wahi kapde(refering to a shawl kindda thing) hain jo us raat us mahamantri ne pehne the.
Dharam:Isliye ye gandh ab bhi yahin hai.
Veer;Iska matlab wo sarkar mahamntri hi tha.
Dharam:Par hum in sabooton se kuch sabit nahi kar sakte.
Veer:Dharam..ek baar uske gale par khanjar rakh doon to wo sab kuch ugal dega
Dharam:Nahin veer,ye mat bhoolo ki wo doosre rajya ke mahamantri hain..isliye jab tak hum unhe thos sabooton ke saath nahi pakad lete tab tak humme apna mooh band rakhna hoga.
Veer:Dharam tum kisi doosre raya ke liye itna kuch kyun kar rahe ho?
Dharam:yunki..kyunki..ye humaara farz..humaara kartavya hai..
Veer:Haan main to bhool hi gaya tumhara apne sasural ke prati bhi to koi farz hai..kyun?
Dharam:Chup karo veer..ab chalo mandir ke liye nikalnaa hai.
On the other hand Rajkumaari nivedita with some soldiers and some maids and raksha ofcourse,leaves for the temple..
After traveeling for a long time silently
Nivi:Raksha humne suna hai ki yahan paas mein hi ek chota sa shi mandir hai..jahan ki vibhooti bahut pawan maani jaati hai..kya tu humaare liye..
Raksha:Haan haan mein tumhare liye vo vibhooti le aaongi..
After covering some more distance..they arrive at the mandir.
Raksha:Tum yahn ruko main vibhooti le ka abhi aati hoon.
When she enters th temple she was shocked to find the princes taking rest there in the shade..
Rakha:Akdoo..tum yahan..mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum bhagwaan ki pooja bhi karte ho.
Veer(astonished to see raksha):Arey gussail...achcha tum batao ki kya tumne handan lep lagaya..
Raksha:Dekho tum apni baat karo..
Dharam:Ab bas bhi karo tum dono..
Suddenly a scream is heard
"Raksha..bachaooo!!!"
Raksha turns back to find around 10 men at the temple steps and two men holding the princess..the soldiers were fighting with some more men there.
Raksha:Nivi!
Both the princes start fighting with the ten men..Veer was fightig furiusly when suudenly one of the men attacke him from behind but raksha saw this and threw a dagger at him..
Dharam made his way through the men by killin them and then reached to the men who were trying to take nivi away,he was bleeding badly bu still had the courageous voice that can make others shiver from fear..
Dharam:Chod do nivedita ko.
Men:Raaste se hat jaao.
Dharam:Humne kha ki nivedita ko jaane do..

Nivi(in tears):Dharam..tum pehle apni jaan bachao..
Dharam ignores nivi's words and like a lightning strikes the two men with hs sword ,the men die immediately and then the brave prince finally falls on the ground uncocious..he was hurt badly on his forehead
Nivi(ruhed to dharam):Dharam.dharam..aankhein kholo..dharam..
On th other side veer had fought braely killing all the men but he had an injured leg..
Raksha:Veer tumhari paanv mein bahut chot aaye hai..
Veer:Main apni naam ki tarah hi veer hoon..ab tum mujhe shukriya nahi kahogi maine tumhari jaan jo bachai
Raksha:Maine bhi apni naam ki tarah tumhari raksha ki hai..behtar ye hoga ki humek doosre ko shukriya keh de
Veer:pehle tum mujhe shukriya aho..
Raksha:Kyun pehle to maine tumhaari jaan bacha tum mujhe shukriya karo..Veer:Dekho ab zyaada behas mat karo
Raksha:Behas main anhi tum kar rahe ho..toote-phoote akdoo.
Nivi suddenly comes :Aap dono kaise hain
Veer:Main theek hoon dharam..dharam..kaisa hai?
Nivi:Ji unki haalat bahut kharaab hai..humme jald hi vaidji ke paas jana hoga.
Raksha:Vaidji to mandir ke pass hi milenge,chalo ab wahin chalte hain..wase bhi mandir ab zyaada door nahi.
Veer:Mujhe dharam se milna hai..
Nivi:Vo humaare bailgaadi mein hain..
Veer climbs down the stairs b taking raksha's supprt.
On climbing down he rushes to dharam and decides to sit besides him.
Nivi(to some of her soldiers)(pointing towards the dead soldiers):Aap in sainikon ko pooi izzat se awadhi le jaaiye aur pitaji ko keh dijiyega ki hum bilkul theek hain.(to her maids and rest of the soldiers):Ye dono raajkumar bhi humaare saath hi mandir jaayenge..wahan jaakar inke rehne ka intzam kar dijiyega..
Veer:Shukriya rajkumari ji.
Then they leave towards the temple.
guyz sorry this part was not very intereting but i assure u that the next one will be much better. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
i know that this part is not very interesting 😭 but please reply 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
can ne1 help me with posting pics 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
hiya...great goin! loved veer n raksha's nok joks 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
it was gud.Veer and Raksha injured but nok-jhoking 😆 Dharam in bailgaadi?? 😕 Why
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
he was injured so had to be carried on a bailgadi.u know somewhere he could lie down easily 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
👏 👏 willl be w8ting for ure next update lovely 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Hey pretty_mugdha..
You have a really intresting story written out here 👏 👏 ..

I loved the story line... please do continue 😉
Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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