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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey !!
just finished readin ur FF from start to finish -- LOVE it -- twas awsumm-- all the romantic scenes and the dialogues were so realistic-- i cd imagine the real cast actually sayin them !
also liked the fact that there were no villians !
newez-- gr8 stuff !!--
and if u've written /writing any other FFs, pls send me links--
thanx !!
~Sweetoo
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy guys

thank you soo much for all ur luv and appreciation
i am so over-whelmed.

now i am officially closing this ff..

luv uu
tiya
🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago


thank you soo much
glad u liked it
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG ... this was beautiful for the past day i have been continuosly reading this .. amazing work ! .. N plz pm me we yhu decide to do a sequel .. :D
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

OMG ... this was beautiful for the past day i have been continuosly reading this .. amazing work ! .. N plz pm me we yhu decide to do a sequel .. :D



awww..thank you soo much.
soo many compliments..woh bhi ek sath..hehe..
thank you so much 😃
yup hopefuly i wil start its sequel in 6-7 weeks...
n wil surely nt forget u..
luv yaa
tiya

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome ff dear
simply mindblowing
if u get a new idea plzz start a new ff
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: saridena

awesome ff dear

simply mindblowing
if u get a new idea plzz start a new ff
luv soumya



heyy..thanks for liking it dear
i do hv some ideas..
but m waitin for my exams to get over, n then i can start a new one 😳😳
luv ya
tiya

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey tiya, i just read your whole ff, it was very sweet yaar! very well done 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Tiya..
I know I'm terribly late in reading nd replying to this FF of urs but I really couldn't help myself from telling you how I loved this FF of urs..
I really Loved each nd every part of this one..⭐️
From the start where you showed how the gupta Family nd the Malliks bond with eachother perfectly..
When Armaan went to see Ridhhima for marriage nd Anjie planned a prank i thought ki kahin ab AR mein misunderstanding ya koi problem na ho.. But then I realised ki you told me once that ur FFs don't really have any negative characters..
nd finally Ridhhima's shocking reaction when she saw Kirti at Sanjeevni nd Armaan as a co-intern really cracked me up..
I loved the way Armaan fell in love at First sight..
Kirti at the hospital nd then AR consoling scene was too good..😭
nd finally the Confession was Rocking.. It was just PERFECT..👏
I loved that lil AR moment in Armaan's car too..Both romantic 😳 nd that Radio wali..

I was like laughing when Anjie caught them humming the same song.. [That's my fav. Song..]

You know I was at the edge of my bed when you ended the part where Kirti catches that Love Bite on ridhhima's neck.. I was like OMG..! nd literally rushed for the next part to see what happens next..

Gosh Tiya.. I was really laughing like anything.. bechara Shubhankar.. sister Pinky ka to pata nai par Kirti is not at all good at that moment..LMAO..😆..

RM ki shaadi..????😲..
Their first night was something yar.. AR ka romance Muskaan ka thoda sa pyar when Rahul welcomed her nd finally Anjie heard Atul nd Armaan's convo.. nd Finally somethings are not meant to be changed RM at war yet again..lolzzz..😆😃

Yar firstly I hated Anjie for how she reacted when she saw AR at RM's place but then after Rajeev's entry I thought ab shayad mazaa ayega.. Armaan would be jealous nd RIdhhima would be affected.. nd Rajeev would help them.. Rajeev's game was fabulous.. nd bull's eye he hitted each couple's heart perfectly..

Awww... The End.. I wanted to read more..
I loved the way you've shown how couples changed for their love nd CHAMP.. he is choooo chweettt..
Kirti threw sister Pinky out..lolzzz.. Shubhankar must be missing her na..

All the while i was reading this FF My smile was just getting
wider
n wider nd wider nd wider ndwider..
okk now i stop here.. this was the most detaoled nd longest comment I've written..😃😊
Luv ya for this FF.. 🤗...

Rucha



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: frnd.of.frndz

Hey Tiya..
I know I'm terribly late in reading nd replying to this FF of urs but I really couldn't help myself from telling you how I loved this FF of urs..
I really Loved each nd every part of this one..⭐️OMGG.. that is really no less then a shock for me.. u actually read it all 😲😲
From the start where you showed how the gupta Family nd the Malliks bond with eachother perfectly..hmm.. dat i alwayss luv to show 😛
When Armaan went to see Ridhhima for marriage nd Anjie planned a prank i thought ki kahin ab AR mein misunderstanding ya koi problem na ho.. But then I realised ki you told me once that ur FFs don't really have any negative characters.. 😆😆 i think dat ws the best part i ever wrote 🤣 even i dnt noe hw this prank came to my mind.. but it ws funny
🤣🤣🤣
nd finally Ridhhima's shocking reaction when she saw Kirti at Sanjeevni nd Armaan as a co-intern really cracked me up..haha.. m planning another this type of shock this time too 😉😆
I loved the way Armaan fell in love at First sight..hmm.. she toooo..
Kirti at the hospital nd then AR consoling scene was too good..😭after all that brought them closer to confess rite 😉😃
nd finally the Confession was Rocking.. It was just PERFECT..👏hehe.. i think this confession ws far better then wat i wrote this time for woh lamhe 😉
I loved that lil AR moment in Armaan's car too..Both romantic 😳 nd that Radio wali..haha.. i got over excited reading everybody's comments regarding that confession scene.. toh maine socha ek aur naughty scene ho jaaye 😉😆😆

I was like laughing when Anjie caught them humming the same song.. [That's my fav. Song..]haha.. even mine too.. baahon ke darmiyan rite 😉

You know I was at the edge of my bed when you ended the part where Kirti catches that Love Bite on ridhhima's neck.. I was like OMG..! nd literally rushed for the next part to see what happens next..hahah.. it came out too funny too 🤣🤣

Gosh Tiya.. I was really laughing like anything.. bechara Shubhankar.. sister Pinky ka to pata nai par Kirti is not at all good at that moment..LMAO..😆..yeaa.. even i luvdd that whole sequence 🤣🤣🤣 my fav character was definitely sister Pinky 😆😆 m thinking for introducing her in woh lamhe too 🤣🤣

RM ki shaadi..????😲..haha.. that was shocking rite 😆
Their first night was something yar.. AR ka romance Muskaan ka thoda sa pyar when Rahul welcomed her nd finally Anjie heard Atul nd Armaan's convo.. nd Finally somethings are not meant to be changed RM at war yet again..lolzzz..😆😃yeaa.. that scene also came out very beautifully.. her greh pravesh.. and everyone teasing them.. and then muhammad ali sequence
🤣🤣

Yar firstly I hated Anjie for how she reacted when she saw AR at RM's place but then after Rajeev's entry I thought ab shayad mazaa ayega..haha.. rajeev's entry was mast na
🤣🤣🤣 i got the best comments for that one 🤣🤣 Armaan would be jealous nd RIdhhima would be affected.. nd Rajeev would help them.. Rajeev's game was fabulous.. nd bull's eye he hitted each couple's heart perfectly..haha.. at the end everything just gets perfect na 😉

Awww... The End.. I wanted to read more..
I loved the way you've shown how couples changed for their love nd CHAMP.. he is choooo chweettt..haha.. but i find ur baby characters even cuterrrrr 😉😛
Kirti threw sister Pinky out..lolzzz.. Shubhankar must be missing her na..haha.. after all kab tak keerti usko jhelti 😆

All the while i was reading this FF My smile was just getting
wider
n wider nd wider nd wider ndwider..
haha.. that a nice wider smile 😆 m sooo glad yaarrrrr... okk now i stop here.. this was the most detaoled nd longest comment I've written..😃😊lolzz.. but m nt over it yaar.. 😆😆 u reminded me my fic again yaar
😆😆 n i jstttt luvvddd ur reading ur comment
Luv ya for this FF.. 🤗...thnx soo much yaarrrr.. it really really meanssss aloooot to me.. wow.. i still cant believe u read it all. 😆 thnx sooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 🤗
luv yaaaaaaa

Rucha



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