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Tiya

@freezinme

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: kvn1983
awwsome⭐️ tiya really superb😊😊 and ur champ is choooo chweeeeeet👍🏼 awww..u liked him... 😃.. he is chooooooooo cuuuuteeee.. and ridhima is hitler😆 hehe.. u r da first one so far commentin abt it.. hehe.. keerti has her hitlerness to ridzi now..hehe .. poor ammi 😆😆😆 very funny and atula is senoir doctor😊 so nice and rahul muskaan😆 cute fight is awwsome😊😉 thanks for the pm😉 and i wish we can get a new ff from u😊 very soon😊 so best of luck to u👍🏼 heyy thanks yaarrr.. wil surely make a new one soon..

"Shores never meet, but share the same ocean. The moon & stars could not be one, yet are in the same sky. We may not meet often, but yet you are my good friend"

"Dil Ki Aawaj Ko Izhar Kahate Hai,
Jhuki Nigaho Ko Ekrar Kahte Hai,
Sirf 'Jatane' Ka Nam Ishq Nahi,
Kisi Ki Yaado Me Jeene Ko Bhi Pyar
Kahate Hai"

"Ae dost teri dosti per naaz karte hai,
Har waqt milne ki fariyaad karte hai,
Hame nahi pata gharwale batate hai,
Hum neend mein bhi aapse baat karte hai."

awww...chooo chweeett.. thanks soo much for ur shayaris and flowers.. m really goin to miss them... but will surely visit ur shayari section tumhe tang karne ke liye..hehe😉
luv u sooo much
muwahh
🤗

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Tiya

@freezinme

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: AngelicSoniya
finally u updated hhehe...yup finally 😆😆...nyways it was like always superb ,mindblowing..awww..thankk youuuuu
ur ff was really very nice...really luvd it...dats chooo chweet of uuu

hope u start with a new one soon...

thankss soniya
m soo glad u like my ff soo much
me too really gonna mis u
luv u soo much
🤗

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sheena

@sheena_12

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#973

phew!

after searchin fr whole 1/2 n hour i got the update of yo FF...lol

back 2 the MINDBLOWIN!!!

SUPERB endin yaar i just luved it n champ is really very much cute

loved the AR scene n AA N enjoyed RM scene...will rememba yo FF fr ever n do not fuhget yo readers...ok?...lol

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#974

FINALLLYYYY !!!!!!!!!! d lonnggg awaited part is up!!!!!!!!! hayyyy!t was so cute yaarrrrr........ beautiful n complete n champ was d chweetest naaaa!!!!!!!!! i luv armaaan totally tiya he's a total swetheart yaar n u made ridzy HITLER hailaaaa!!!!!!!!! n RM were also fab along wid AA everything was so cute n wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was a beautiful journey hunny!!!!!!!!! hope i get to read more of ur gr8 work in future .... loads of luv aravi

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Ankita.S.Mansharamani

@moda.vintage

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#975

hey tiya di

osm part

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm i m sad u r ending this

and yippppppppppeeeeeeee sat ko ma last preboard

then i ll be a bit regular on IF

luved the ending

but will luv to read the sequel

luv ya

@nkit@

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Dhruvi

@dhruviarmaanfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#976

hey nice sweet cute awesome part

feeling sad that this is the last part

waitng for the sequel

plz pm me abt the sequel

love the ending as thestory was said by armidz to thier son champ

awesome sweet sweet

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Rabia

@-raboO-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#977

awww tiya am soo sowie for da late comment sweeets...

mee so dint want ur ff to end..u noe dat..

issi liye on purpose dint read da last part dat earlyy..coz i knew it wud b difficult for me too see da HAPPY ENDING of such an everlasting love story....

u rokddd itt as alwaezz..!!!!...jaate jaaate u actually welled up ma eyez wid all da scenes..as i knew it wud b ur last attempt on AR scene...hayyee me gonna mis all of it...

tiya do cum bak wid its sequel yarr...

me shoo gonna mish each bit of ur ff..n also gonna mish u laodzz...

loved da way u ended up all da cuples happily..married in da end..

buh AR still being da naughty onez...y did u had to end da scene in da room..mez 18 n was sooo readyyy for da romantic scene....

newayzzz it stil rokdd....

thanx for all ur lovely updates tiya..

i still b at ma words...ur FF truelly rokd biggg timee..n is da best on IF..

thax for da sweet gift at da end of da update..

definately gonna use it for sure...

u take care sis...

gonna mish u n ur updates alooooot..

lub u loadzzz...muaaahhh!!!!

edit:
forgot to mention da cutest aspect of dis partt...CHAMP...hayeee main mar jaawan...
hez toooo adowablee...😳...wud luv u evn more if u cum bak wid dis storyz sequel having CHAMP in da main lead...😛....am wondering abhi dis boy is sho cute...howz he goin to b in his college dayss...😍😍...u soo made me fall in luv wid dis lil boyy..😛😆

Edited by rabo0 - 17 years ago

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#978

hey tiya
thanks for the pm sweety
aww this was such a cute part
loved it n will miss this ff
actually my net was not working for a fornite so now im filled with pms so have to read all of them n have to reply to each ff to the replies will be short for now but a big reply from next part onwards pucca
sorry for now

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chandni

@sheenu

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#979

awwwwwww......... dat was so sweet jaanu......

champ is sooo cute !!!

omg i m v sad u ended dis beutiful ff.... but v xcited4 d next one.....

O I was madly in luv wid dis ff....

acha tiya.... new ff mein romance to hoga na....

i m sry cnt ryt more.... feeling v. weak ryt nw.... but it was d best part !!!!!!!

u rocked dear !!!!!!!!!!

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ayesha

@ayesha sehgal

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#980

sorry tiya 4 late comment but kya karti studies k chakkar mai to mai pagal ho gai hu..wowwwwwwwww yaar last part was tunning yaar excellent ,no words tiya ,u r too good ,but u know i am feeling so bad,i miss u and ur ff very much ,i am waiting 4 ur next ff plz update it soon

love u

take care

@yesha