***Bheege Pal*** COMPLETED! - Page 4

Originally posted by: sheenu

cum on tiya..itz not like dis yaar... u r soo talented..😃 but thnx nywayz.😳.never knew i 'll play an imp.part in ur lyf..😊. luv u.. n piya darling.. she is not my student ...😆 u know..itz just...v are different..but still same..😉.right tiya😳

eggjactly!! chandni u n me are same na 😉 and sweethert u r realy important for me, n u noe dat!! so dont be surprised 😳😳

luv ya

Originally posted by: sheenu

Originally posted by: sheena_12

hey!!!!
it was superb tiya....it doesnt look like it was yo frst try anyhow i knew tht u r a wouderful writer as i read many of yo parts @ FF-operation marraige n thtz wat made me feel 2 read this FF of yoz
gr8 job!
plzz continue sooon n if possible plzzzzzz PM me......!i'll be waiting...

heyyy sheena... thnx yaarrr...

u read it..wow. u hv encouraged me alooot for writing it even more..remember in operation marriage 😳

yesss, it is my first ff... n i hope u dnt get disappointed by my work. thnx once again..n keep commentin

luv ya

tiya 🤗

Originally posted by: robal

please continue writing. I loved it so much. Anything for a story on Armaan and old ridz. Everytime I read something, Karan and shilpa come to my mind.

Hey robal..thnx for ur lovely comment. I too just luv KaSh..😳 hope u cud imagine more of them in the next parts.. 😃

Originally posted by: anitamalik

That was really really good...please continue soon and please pm me if you can! 😊

heyy anita.. thnx alot. will surely pm u for the next part.

luv ya

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

hey tiya,
amazing first part
loved the way u introduced each character
especially the way AR meet or rather armaan sees ridz
and the twist in the tale is really unique
👏
can u plz pm me the nxt time u update?

Hey Arati..thankss alooooot for reading it and for liking it 😃 glad u liked the intro n AR romentic meetin is yet to come..yeh to bas ek trailer tha 😉 will surely pm u for the next update

luv ya

tiya 😳

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Hi Tiya!

I must sy u did an awesome job wid the 1st part! 👏

Was realllly interesting n cute... 😳

Do continue soon! 😃....Pls PM me tooo if u can! 😳


*~*Marisha*~*

Thanks aloooot Marisha.. glad u find d part cute 😆😆 i think shubhankar ws da cutest 😳 thnx for liking it. wud surely u pm wen i update the next part..

luv ya

tiya.

Originally posted by: kvn1983

nice one please continue it soon and please send me pm when u update it

True fren dsnt gt closer by meetin,bt it s sweetend by thoughts, i care 4 u in my strange ways,perhaps u ll never know,perhaps i ll never show!

awwww... nidha this shayri is sooooooo cute

thank youuuu soooo much for liking it..

m seriously over-whelmed seeing u all appreciating my work this much..😃

will surely pm u wen i update da next part

luv ya

tiya.

That was really reallly gooddd....!!!

continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooon pleaseeeeeee!!

plzz continue i would love to read more 😛

Originally posted by: freezinme

awwww... nidha this shayri is sooooooo cute

thank youuuu soooo much for liking it..

m seriously over-whelmed seeing u all appreciating my work this much..😃

will surely pm u wen i update da next part

luv ya

tiya.

and i will wait tiya till that this for u

"Barsaat ki har boond me samaye ho tum..
Mere dil me khaas jagah banaye ho tum..
Yun to humdard ki kami nahi..
Par na jane aaj bohot yaad aa rahe ho tum"

woww amazing ff.. and a very nice concept!! 😳 loved their meeting 😆
cant wait to read more! 😃