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Chapter 1
In the city of London you see a small white house, not too small but not too big. Let's just say it's perfect for a family of four. As you enter the house from the front door you see a kitchen on the left and a woman in a sari working in there. She has her hair in a bun and a strand of hair hanging out with her sari pallu secured to the side of her waist. She is putting the kettle on the stove to make coffee for her small family. You see her turn around and it is none other than Sheetal. She screams out for her daughter and niece.
Sheetal: SAMEERA, KRIPA jaldi utho hume airport jana hain.
As Sheetal says this we see a girl walk out of the first room on the right of the living room. As she walks out we see her high heels then her long legs where she's wearing a mini skirt with a white halter top. Her hair is up in a pony tail with white hoops. And we see the girls face and its Sameera. She walks into the kitchen and grabs an apple.
Sheetal: Sameera beta yeh lo nashta kha lo.
Sameera: nahin mom, I'm on a diet I have to maintain my figure. If I eat this oily stuff then I will get fat.
Sheetal: thik hain thik hain. Kripa uthi kya? Ushe toh pata hain na aaj woh India ja rahi hain.
Sameera: haan ma ushe pata hain. Shayad woh nah (shower) rahi hogi. Abhi mein ushe bula ti hoon.
Sameera opens up the room right next to hers and we see all the walls empty and all we see is a bed with a dresser and two side tables next to the bed. And the girls luggage that's in the room. Sameera hears the shower so she just yells and says:
Sameera: Di Jaldi karo hume airport jana hain tumhe drop off karne ke liye.
And she walks out saying that.
Then we see a girl in the bathroom and her stepping out of the shower with a towel around her. We don't see her face yet. She walks out into her room with her wet hair down with water dripping. She puts lotion on her legs and arms and perfume on her body. She grabs her clothes from her bed and walks into the bathroom. She comes out of the bathroom wearing jeans and a Hollister white tee (Don't know if they have that in London or not), then we see her hair up in a pony tail and with white hoops. We finally see her face and it's Kripa! She walks out of her room and she goes and kisses her masi on the cheek and hugs her from behind.
Kripa: Good morning masi.
Sheetal: Good morning beta, ab jaldi jaldi nashta karlo, tumhe airport chord ne jana hain.
Kripa: thik hain masi.
Kripa goes and sits on the dining table. She is doing her breakfast while reading the newspaper. While Sameera is sitting on the opposite side of Kripa eating her apple and texting someone on her phone. Sheetal comes and sits besides Kripa and starts her breakfast as well.
Sheetal: beta tumne apne papa se baat karli aur sari flight information de di.
Kripa: jee masi maine sab kuch kar diya.
Sheetal: aur tumhari packing?
Kripa: yes masi sub kuch ho gaya, aap chinta mat kijye.
Kripa finishes up her breakfast and so does Sheetal and Sameera. Then they load all the luggage and head to the airport. They reach the airport and take care of everything including the luggage and called Kripa's parents to tell them Kripa's about to board the plane. We see Sheetal and Kripa hugging and Sheetal crying.
Sheetal: (crying) beta apna khayal rakhna waha, aur phone karti rehna, hume bhool mut jana.
Kripa: (wiping her tears) masi agar aap aise roh (cry) dongi to mein kaise ja paoungi. Aur mein aap ko har roz phone karongi aur mein aap dono ko kaise bhool sakti
hoon. You took care of me so much these past 15 years.
She hugs Sheetal for the last time and then hugs Sameera.
Kripa: Sameera, masi ka khayal rakhna aur ushe tang mat karna, aur masi ki har baat suna.
Sameera: Di aap chinta mat kijye mein yaha par sab sambhalongi aur aap waha jake hume phone karte rehna.
The two sisters hug and Kripa boards the plane.
Kripa: (to herself) god I'm going back to India after so many years I wonder how everything is there and how everyone is. I can't wait to meet my family after so long. Especially Kavya bhai and Prachi. (She takes out a picture of someone, but we cannot see who it is) Mein yaha se ja rahi hoon tumse door. Tumne jo mere saat kiya mein nahin bhool sakti. Maine tumse pyar kiya lekin tumne to mera dil hi tord diya. But I will not look back at my past or go back to my past. I will find someone who will love more than anyone has ever loved me. I will live my life with or without you.
So here is Sheetal, Sameera, and Kripa's introduction and Kripa's point of view. So we know that Kripa has loved someone but has been heartbroken by him. But we don't know who the guy is yet. You guys will get to know in the next couple parts hopefully. The next part is going to be mainly angads introduction, but I will also introduce the rest of the Khannas and the Sharmas. The next party will be longer than this because I am introducing the Khannas and the Sharmas.
Please leave comments and let me know how I did. And please please criticize my work, tell me what I'm doing wrong, or what I should fix, change, etc.
Preview: Angad's Introduction along with everyone else's.
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