FF:You are my love....UPDATE ON PG:8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

first of all,m very angry coz it was a very small part... 😭 😭 😭


Bt,it was awsum yaar......u crackd me up..jst luvd it...tu tu main main 😆
Plz continue soon...n as a punishment 😆 it should b a longer part plzzzzzzzzzzz

thanx 4 d pm...
luv
*vini*

Hey vini...i apologize 4 that....

Nwz i m so happy u ppl r luving it...i ll definitely give my best for this FF!

N punishment taken ur highness!😃

Kiran😳

Nice Concept funny name but cool!👏

wow!!!!!!!!!!! this is reallly gud. liked the luk u gave to ridz 👏 nice concept. plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon and if u don't mind could u pm me the next time u update 😃

lool dat was great already bickering
cnt wait 2 read mre it was too short
hope u giv us lngr one nxt time 😃


updte sooon n thx 4 da pm
nizma x

🤣 🤣 its nice....very funny part
loved it..
cont soon

wow i read you're FF terrific yaar plz continue soon can't wait to see the next part 👏

hey plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon............ was an excellent update....... loved it....... hoping 4 wht will be nxt........... do cont soon
do pm me when u will cont & thnx 4 da pm

On popular demand...nxt update...
Armaan getz home...he lives there with his sister...please welcome our dear muskaan....
Armaan asks the servant:"Kaka..yeh muskaan kahan hai...?"
Servant:"Aur kahan hogi beta...koi naya hairstyle try kar rahi hogi.."
Armaan went to her room n gave an adoring smile 2 his young sister...armaan had been lyk a father 2 her since their parents passed away...nwz...back 2 the story..
Muskaan to herself:"Waah muskaan!Kya lag rahi hai..."Just then her cell rings..:"Hello!"
The voice on the other side says:"Mujhe aapki awaaz jani pehchani lag rahi hai...!"
Muskaan:"Ofcourse!Afterall duniya mein sirf teen awazein famous hain...ALKA YAGNIK,SHREYA GHOSHAL n MUSKAAN MALIK..."
The voice..:"Oh toh tu hai...teri bakwaas karne ki aadat gayi nahi..."
Muskaan:"Oye bhaisaab...mein aap se tameez se baat kar rahi hoon aur aap..?Bhalayi ka toh zamaana hi nahi.."
The voice:"Dekh insaan ko itna hi shareef behave karna chahye...jitna woh afford kar sake!"
Muskaan:"Yeh lo!A...tu hai kaun...aur bakwas band kar warna phone mein ghus k maroon gi...aur zyada kia naa toh jaan se maar doongi!"She keeps the phone n says..."batameez log pata nahi...kaha kaha se aa jate hain...!"
It was then wen she noticed her brother:"Hey bhaiya....aap kab aaye?"
Armaan:"Jab tum kisi ko jaan se maarne ki thamki de rahi thi...waise tha kaun..."
Muskaan:"Are woh toh...?!Mein ne toh poocha hi nahi..."
A voice cums...:"Toh ab pooch le!"
Muskaan recognised it...it was the voice she heard on phone...she went near the phone n said:"Tu phir shuru hogaya..."
Armaan:"Muskaan...yeh phone pe kyun gusa kar rahi ho...awaz wahan se nahi aa rahi..."
The voice:"Aur nahi toh kia?!"
Please welcum...Mr.Ra-ooo-ll(Rahul!)
Muskaan is surprised..."Oye tu!"
She goes n hugs her childhood friend.....
They sit 4 dinner....
Muskaan:"Are yaar yeh ramu kaka bhi naa...pata nahi kahan rehte hain..."
Rahul n Armaan smile...Rahul:"Ab ramu kaka ki yaad kahan se aa gayi..."
Muskaan:"Tera aachaar nikalna hai...."
Rahul gets up n makes a scared face...muskaan:"Abe...i mean tera favourite aachaar...le k aati hoon!"
Rahul sits down.."Yeh kabhi nahi badlegi!"
Armaan:"Tu bhi toh yehi chahta hai..."
Armaan n Rahul looked at each other n they smiled...rahul blushed...they both knew wat the stuff was lyk....rahul was in love with muskaan!

yay!! me first!!

super part

continue soon

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