FF:You are my love....UPDATE ON PG:8

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Hi everyone...here z my FF 4 all DMG ppl....please comment....

"Oh no!Bahut late hogaya!"said the beautiful,innocent faced Riddhima...in the beautiful city of shimla she lived with her sis...anjali n dad n mum n granny...after completing her graduation it was now tym for her to get a job....she was a modern girl....she looked adorable in her jeans n a simple KEEP KOOL shirt....now she was out n was 2 catch a bus so that she cud reach 4 the interview on tym....she was on street when a mercedes came at high speed....so high that it threw all the dirty water on the street on ridz' dress....

Totally annoyed...:"Abay oye!Dekh k nahi chala sakte..."she took a stone n threw it on the car z back....the car stopped...and she watched irritated...out came a handsome hunk....suit boot n tie....he was a vry cute guy....he z our vry own armaan...he went near ridz n said..."kia kaha tumne!"

Riddhima:"Had hogayi!Battameezi ki bhi koi had hoti hai....ek toh kapre kharaab karte ho upar se footage khate ho....andhe ho...aankhen chandi chowk mein bhech k aaye ho kia...?!"

Armaan smiles....calmly...he knew his cool smile was annoying the girl:"Just chill!Waise tumhare kapre aaise bahut ache lag rahe hain....n still if u dont lyk it...toh....just wait...."he went back to his car n brought a bottle a water n handing it to ridz said:"Dholo!"

Enough was enough....ridz was not any gal to bear anything...she knew it was always TIT FOR TAT....:"Oh!Itna shawk hai dhone aur dhulaane ka....toh...."she got some muddy water from the street n rubbed it all over his face n said:"Ab agar tumhe nahi pasand toh tum DHOLO...."she said handing back the bottle of water....and left!

Armaan was insulted...he was not used to girls treating him this way....the owner of MALIK ENTERPRISES....this guy was a wise businessmen....

Nwz...now cuming 2 ridz....struggling ridz managed to reach the office where she had to go for a job....MALIK ENTERPRISES...she read....she went in n wen her chance came she said....:"May I cum in sir?"

A voice came..."COME IN!"

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sara-khan thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow its good 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice cont.soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey im the first one to comment yaar 😉
liked the intro its an aamzing concept too cool
milte hi jhadra shuru 😆
loved it plz post the next part soon
n ya do pm me
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dats great loool da endin was great very interstin lool cnt wait 2 read mre updte sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good Start. 😃
I like your first part
Great work 👏
Keep witting
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Awesome start 👏
Keep up the good work 😉
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Gud job! Do continue soon! 👏
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Great Start!..Continue soon!😳

-Kanu❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago
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jus caught wid ur ff... an amazng n mindblowing prt... n a toatlyy diffeent concept... waitng 2 read more... plzz update supersoon.... pm me nxt tym u update 😊 😊

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