AR FF: Fervour- part 12 - 11/5 - Page 35

Originally posted by: spln

helloooooooo????????????....i thought u were updating on a tomorrow like 2 days ago??????😕

waiting natty.....😍

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey
awesome part what a fantastic dream dear
loved he whole epi
ab in mein jaldi patch up kara do naa plzzzz

Thanks for the comments

Originally posted by: princess4120

FINALLY you update!! and what a part.. im still confused as to why he left her..I will reveal that soon! and what went on there.. but the part was extremely well written.. atul taking care of him.. anji being worried.. armaan loves ridz this much.. but still left.. wow.. cant wait to understand why... so glad he knows she is single.. but then what about mrs. riddhima.. ?! I hope the next part helps a bit

i am glad that she is not just being extremely cold nemore.. she still talking to him and finds comfort in his arms.. the swing scene and sleep scene was soo cute..

i hope you update sooner this time.. eagerly waiting..

thanks so much for the pm!

Thanks for the comments!

Originally posted by: samijan

tht was really gd. continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thnks!

-NAts

Originally posted by: swetha10

Gr8 update.. Enjoyed it.. PLzz continue soon..

Thanks !

Originally posted by: zhasan2

omg wow..its all a bunch of misunderstandings :( she thinks he's married and he thinks she's with someone :( why dont they just tell each other they're not married or committed to anyone else? :(

Armaan couldn't just tell, cuz he was confused why wasn't everything the 'same' back home for Riddima, Hope that helps!

Originally posted by: visalover

omg! thnx for pming me it wa ssuch an awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee part! loved ar scene

plz pm me the next part and do continue SOON!!!

Thanks darling!

-NAts

Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

Nats...seriously i loved how you ended this part..it was like the perfect line haha "I guess it was meant to be"shuxs, it was seriously last min thought.....
hehe wow...armaan and ridz are still in lvoe with each other..and aww poor ridz is under the confusion that armaan is married...hahajust wait whts on store for them ;P
nice hopefully armaan will make her realize that she's the only one he loves...i knew it..he was totally the guy on that cruise...but i still don't get....if he loved ridzy..then why did he leave her and now meet her like wat 4 years later?Hope the next part, helps a bit
anyways.....AMAZING PART thks
thanks soooooooo much for the pm =)
luv mira

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh its really a nice one so sweet so they both think that they r married and dont know the truth i wish they soon come to know truth plz continue it soon and thanks for the pm

"If love is sweet why does it hurt,
If love is deep why does it burn,
If love is warm why do we shiver,
If love is tender why do we cry,
If love is forever why do we die."

Wow, love the flowers, and that too in my fav colour combo!

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Hiii

Ok, I am lost now, your story is so fast, I don't know, what to expect & what not to....but am loving every bit of it......only I wish I was less confused.....I'm really sri Jo, it's my 1^st attempt at a FF, but hope the next part is up to ur standard!

I hope AR talk to each other properly, rather then on assumptions....

do update soon

Thnks for the comments!

-Nats

Originally posted by: Robin_M

ohh wow nats, that was soooo good! ok so somethings are cleared up, armaan met ridz on the cruise! so he was her dream guy and he has known her all along! he sure got lucky when he got her marriage proposal! and he left for a reason, its not that he was using her or something, he really did and does love her! YAY but i still wanna know why! and now theirs so much confusion with ridz! shes a mrs. now, married, but at the end of the update her secretary said she cant live alone, so that means she doesnt have a husband? and now this chakar with her family not being the same! what was that dream all about, no mama papa please no?! lol u really like to build the suspence huh?!?! but thats ok, it keeps us guessing, that keeps it fun!

it was good to see that they still are crazy about each other, and also good to see them getting along after everything! ridz is being professional and not holding a grudge! theres hope for them!

really great part, hope you continue soon!

Whoa...i'm gettin charkar after reading ur comment, i have a feelin u wrote this all in one breath! Lol But luv that u are interested!! Yes, it offical, she's doesn't have a husband.....to find out why, read the next part ;) Thanks for the comments!

Originally posted by: rajeev_crazy

very nice update,

but too many confusions,

like is armaan married or no, whats worrying riddhima,

i hope the confusion is cleared soon,

good work, keep it up ,

continue soon n thanks for the pm

Sorry for the confusion, hope the next part, clear out ur confusions

Originally posted by: aarora

hey amazin part as always..luvd it..bt still dint get y armaan left her 4 yrs back..hope it ll be answrd in cumin parts..update soon..

thanx fr PM hun..

luv ya..

Thanks for the comments!

Originally posted by: afreen_syed

LOVELY UPDATE

Thanks for the comment!

-Nats

Originally posted by: mar-

grt part pls continue sooooon

tnx for the pm

Thanks for the comment!

Originally posted by: meow23

so datz how ridz n armi meet.. luvd d new suspense..
d prt was a thriller..
thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon

Thanks Laki!I though it wasn't good!

Thanks for the comment!

Originally posted by: forevercharmed

theyre soooo meant to be!!! awwwww.. i loved this part! please continue soon!

Avanti

Thanks Avanti, just editing the part!

-Nats

Originally posted by: twinkle94

hey i luved it thnx 4 tha PM/update! do cont soon!

twinkle!

Thanks for the comment|!

Originally posted by: afifa2

omgomg omg omg omg

LONG PART inded and i loved itttt

still wondering why they sepearteee

hehe

lovee

afifa

Thnks for the comment, will find out soon!

Originally posted by: aravi

heyyy natty!!!!!! finally u updated hehe!!!!!!!Ugh! i noe I noe, I'm pretty unpredictable, can't seem to keep up with the pace! well still i am not able to figure out wat cud have made armaan leave riddhima n go away????????? Hope the next part helps!

n now i suppose sumthing is wrong wid her parents too!!!!! i mean she was mumbling in her sleepp!!!!!! aww.. both of dem r toooooo much , dont leave a single chance to get into each others arma hehe!!!!!! GOSH both of dem stuck at sooo wrong places!! as 4 now i suppose armaan noes dat ridzy in single n reday to mingle hainaaa????????? Pretty much yes ;) cant wait 4 d next part noww....

luv

aarvi

Thanks for the comments'Aaravi!

-Nats

Originally posted by: cool_pisces

Hey Natasha

Sorry for not commenting on the last part but I have my exams going on and am hell busy studying

Both the parts were amazing, glad Armaan is back, loved the way both thought tht the other was involved with somebody else, atleast now tht Armaan knows he will woo his Riddhima back

Thanks for the PM

Mini

Yes it gunna be a fun ride wooing her back in no time, and plus i noe it's late, but BEST of luck on ur exams!

Originally posted by: anitamalik

YAY! I finally got time to read!

WOW girl! Amazing job with the part..Everything flowed together!

I loved the way you described Armaan being drunk--and then him remembering the first time he saw her in the cruise before the wedding proposal-- It was meant to BE! Poor guy is suffering a lot--but he's the one who left her---NATS, tell us why he left her..LOL..Thanks Anita, Ye I had serious doubt of writing Armaan's flash back, but reading ur comments, just washed the doubt out of my mind *hugs*

Aww cute AR Moments! In the plane and then by the pool on the swing!

Hmm..Ridz thinks that Armi is married..Hmmm...

Hmmm..something happened in Ridz family..Why would she be screaming her parents name in her sleep...

Continue soon Nats

Loved the update

BTW---I love the song scenes...Don't quit...LOL..I watch too many bollywood movies too i guess..LMAO! LOL I noe I can't help it myself!

-Anita

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

very nice i lke the bollywood songs lool

greast updte as usual

luv nizx

LoL you too!, Thanks for the comments!

-Nats

Originally posted by: pink_09

Im Cho Cholly Fo The Very Late Komment. Np babes!

So Soooo Sorriee


LOVED the Whole Update.

Awww Armu bby DRUNK! Poor Guy!

The way u penned down the whole scene was so touching.
OMG Why WHY? Nats U making him suffer. Ya...I was really hesitant about this part, sri for makin u so gloomy!

AND Asthu Starts bitin in tension.

OMGGGGG Why He LEFTT her.

*SuperMan Armaan Cant help Asthu. Asthu is drowing in the ocean of confusion. Nattuu HELPPP! * LOL

HAHAHA Armaan Jealous. How Adorable.

she's the one and only mine....nothing yours....salle....as a Armaan tightened his fist.

AR romance.

*pausedd*

Asthu FAINTS

*play* Ur soo cute!

Beautifully written down. BreathTakin Romantic. Thanks babes

AHHHHHHHH Another Confusion; Ridhima Thinks Armaan is MARRIEDD! Hawww NAHiiiiii!. *Faints* BACHOOOOO

Nattu Mann ur Simply Outstanding Yaar.

Continue Soon


Love Asthu ___________ <3

Thanks for the comments Asthu! Really motivating!

Originally posted by: jia..

Awwwwww Nats firstly that was some great update yet again girl!!! Thanks jia

Seriously the way your taking this....the pace, the flawlessness with which you write....its brilliant girl. How many times do i say i am totally hooked with this??/ Really, ye I was double minded for this part!

ok ok I feel really bad for my jaan....hehe poor guy heck you making him suffer so much!!! *CRY*. Sorri! I'll stop doin it now lolI mean him being drunk and recalling how he first saw and all...that scene was totally superbly penned girl......hats off,......why the hell did he leave?? uffooooo...

And OMG one more suspense....she is screaming her parents name.....wats happening?? Babes you better update very fast....am sitting here damn impatient and hweing my nails....lol.

Great update Nats.....u r fab girl

luv ya loads

Thanks Jia!!! Now update Baby!! =D=D

-Nats