AR FF: Fervour- part 12 - 11/5

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#331

theyre soooo meant to be!!! awwwww.. i loved this part! please continue soon!

Avanti

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#332

hey i luved it thnx 4 tha PM/update! do cont soon!

❤️twinkle!

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Fahima..

@SillyAngel

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#333

omgomg omg omg omg

LONG PART inded and i loved itttt

still wondering why they sepearteee

hehe

lovee

afifa

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#334

heyyy natty!!!!!! finally u updated hehe!!!!!!! well still i am not able to figure out wat cud have made armaan leave riddhima n go away?????????

n now i suppose sumthing is wrong wid her parents too!!!!! i mean she was mumbling in her sleepp!!!!!! aww.. both of dem r toooooo much , dont leave a single chance to get into each others arma hehe!!!!!! GOSH both of dem stuck at sooo wrong places!! as 4 now i suppose armaan noes dat ridzy in single n reday to mingle hainaaa????????? cant wait 4 d next part noww....

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aarvi

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Mini

@cool_pisces

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#335

Hey Natasha

Sorry for not commenting on the last part but I have my exams going on and am hell busy studying

Both the parts were amazing, glad Armaan is back, loved the way both thought tht the other was involved with somebody else, atleast now tht Armaan knows he will woo his Riddhima back

Thanks for the PM

Mini

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#336

YAY! I finally got time to read!

WOW girl! Amazing job with the part..Everything flowed together!

I loved the way you described Armaan being drunk--and then him remembering the first time he saw her in the cruise before the wedding proposal-- It was meant to BE! Poor guy is suffering a lot--but he's the one who left her---NATS, tell us why he left her..LOL..

Aww cute AR Moments! In the plane and then by the pool on the swing!

Hmm..Ridz thinks that Armi is married..Hmmm...

Hmmm..something happened in Ridz family..Why would she be screaming her parents name in her sleep...

Continue soon Nats

Loved the update

BTW---I love the song scenes...Don't quit...LOL..I watch too many bollywood movies too i guess..LMAO!

-Anita

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123abc123

@123abc123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#337

very nice i lke the bollywood songs lool

greast updte as usual

luv nizx

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astha

@Asthuox

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#338

Im Cho Cholly Fo The Very Late Komment. 🤗🤗

So Soooo Sorriee 😳

LOVED the Whole Update.😳

Awww Armu bby DRUNK! Poor Guy!😲😲😲

The way u penned down the whole scene was so touching.
OMG Why WHY? Nats U making him suffer. 😭😭

AND Asthu Starts bitin in tension. 😳

OMGGGGG Why He LEFTT her.

*SuperMan Armaan Cant help Asthu. Asthu is drowing in the ocean of confusion. Nattuu HELPPP! *😆😳

HAHAHA Armaan Jealous. How Adorable. 😍😍

she's the one and only mine....nothing yours....salle....as a Armaan tightened his fist.

AR romance. ☺️☺️

*pausedd*

Asthu FAINTS 😳

*play*

Beautifully written down. BreathTakin Romantic. ☺️☺️

AHHHHHHHH Another Confusion; Ridhima Thinks Armaan is MARRIEDD! Hawww NAHiiiiii!. *Faints* BACHOOOOO 😳

Nattu Mann ur Simply Outstanding Yaar. 😳

Continue Soon

Love Asthu ___________ <3

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#339

Awwwwww Nats firstly that was some great update yet again girl!!!

Seriously the way your taking this....the pace, the flawlessness with which you write....its brilliant girl. How many times do i say i am totally hooked with this??/

ok ok I feel really bad for my jaan....hehe poor guy heck you making him suffer so much!!! *CRY*. I mean him being drunk and recalling how he first saw and all...that scene was totally superbly penned girl......hats off,......why the hell did he leave?? uffooooo...

And OMG one more suspense....she is screaming her parents name.....wats happening?? Babes you better update very fast....am sitting here damn impatient and hweing my nails....lol.

Great update Nats.....u r fab girl

luv ya loads