Sanjeevani-a medical boon part 1

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😊hey friends,i am ridzzy and i am gonna star a new ff on our very own interns.i am no writer its just an attempt and pleasee read the whole part and then comment on it.so heres the 1st part its a small one as it is the introduction hope u like it.

SANJEEVANI:A MEDICAL BOON

INTRODUCTION

Dr.shashank gupta:he is now the dean of sanjeevani.he is a strict disciplined gentlemen but good hearted.he is a well-known surgeon and a good father of two.this year is going to be very special for him as his children are the new interns here.

Dr.padma gupta:wife of dr shashank and a a wellheart surgeon like her husband.a good,caring woman with a charmful personality,as well as as a proffessional senior and mother of three.

DR.armaan mallik:he has a personality of a greek god with those grey eyes,dimpled smile and morehe has the personality to make any woman fall for him.is a excessive but an ambitious an d passionate doc.

Dr.aryan gupta:son of dr.shshnk and pdma gupta he is an ambitious dr.he has the charms and everything but is very reserved and thinks that this proffession is male dominated and has a very diff. perspective of life.

Dr.anjali gupta:elder daughter of dr.sh &pd.shes a passionate girl passionate and has opinion about everythng shows,clothes,and her younger sister.shes a short tempered but good hearted girl.respects her bro and he in turn uses her so that he can be the head.

Dr.riddhimma gupta:younger daughter of sh&pd.shes their total combination sweet caring humble and caring like her mother as well as passionate ambitious dr. like her father.but shes todays woman and is self respective too.she has a weak spot for her family.

Dr.atul joshi:hes a very good guy handsome sweet down to earth and loves nature and afunny.talks and act weird at time but i well spoken hes armaans cousin.hes as well ambitious and passionate about his work.

Dr.aaliyah hassan:shes good and cannot take any wrong about her used to be a topper in her university and is funny too.

Dr.swini:shes a very cool and normal girl and is armys and atuls childhood friend very passionated about life and lives life to her end is funny and weird.

Dr.keerti mukherjee:a ver strict and honourable lady.she hates latecomers back answerable ppl and is wife of dr.shubs and kind hearted.

Dr.shubhankar banerjee:hes a great surgeon an a happy-go-lucky fellow not like his better half and amore kind.

so these are our senior residents and interns.every one has a different opinion on life different people with same purpose af making their hospital and proffession proud check them out if you like them. i atlest want three comments to move on.

Sanjeevani-a medical boon 1

Its the first day of internship let see whether our will make it a boon for others or a curse for their senior co interns an obviosly patients.check thm out.

7.30 joggers park

we see breathing heavily while the other to trying to make her rest ."rids i told unot to come now bear the consequences"said anjali"girls,u both go at home i will come in half an hoyr""why should i go bro i am gonna stay here with u ok"actually the matter was rids had slipt from a puddle with her clothes muddy and angie wont have obviously went with her asit would have made a scene on road and she didnt want any one to point at her and pass comments attitude huh."its ok bhai i will manage it""as u wish"the said simultaneously.

"pure kapde kharab ho gaye subah subah problems "as she was murmuring some thing under her braet a cycle just went past her with all the muddy water spilling on her clothes"u idiot".he was surely not interested in making a scene an spoil his whle day and that too with this girl covered with mud and fighting with him"i am sorry madam""sorry who the hell u think are""heyplease its the last thing iwould do to fight with a bhikari on such a day an spoil it""bhikari kaun me ya tum bhad mein jao"completing her sentence as she sawanjies call leaving armaan in total confusion"kya zamana aa gaya hai bhikariyo ke pass bhi mobile and my my aur english fast than rajdhani prhaps she was not a beggar but why am i thinking of her mujhe khud late ho raha hain"

sanjeevani

dr.keerti checking her file when shubhankar enters"arre keerti aaj toh naya interns aanewale hain na?arre wah aaj toh bauhat khubsurat deekh rahi ho interns par impression jamane ki puri tayari ki hain bhulo mat tumhari shaadi ho gayye hain ""shubhankar mujhe achi tarah se yaad hai ki meri shaadi tumse hui hai aur rahi bat impression jamane ki woh unhe jamana padega toh abhi interns aa hi rahe honge mujhe rounds pe jana chahiyebye"

locker room

a guy huddling a tulsi a neem plant a money plant in his locker."oy atul tu kya kar raha hain ye locker hain nursery nahi.""armaan tune mujhe kya pagal smjha hai mujhe pata haipar mere plants mujhe bauhat miss karte hai pat hain na hum jab picnic ke liye..................................""haan buskar men puchne aaya tha tune hamare kisi co intern ko dekha hai""nai yaar abhi tak toh nahi""pata hai na usme se teen interns dean ke bache hai family parade""nai yaar par mane suna hai ki dr.shshnk bauhat ache hainpata hain unhone isbar do interns jada liye hai jabki sirf char panch interns hote hain""matlab us budddhe ne man liya na ki uske kuch jada hi bache hain""han armaan agar ache ho toh acha hai agar apne bap ka hospital samjhenge toh....."there enters riddhimma and armaan once again recognizes her"bap ka hospital bhi thaeek kuch logoko toh road hi apne bap ka lagta hain aur bhokne lag jate hain "rids turns she desnt recognize amy as she was not interestedin looking at hisface the mon.earler arman understand this that she has not recognized him.atul"kya road,bap connection?""chod na woh dekh nayi intern""oh,helloji mein atl joshi aur ye armaan mallik""hye mein riddhimma""riddhima kya"there comes anjali and rids moves as toavoid the quest."hello nay interns han"she was specially interestedin amyand moves her hand towards him but atul puts his hand"hye me atul jshi,ye armn mllik ""hye mein anjali anjali gupta"amys eyes gleamed as he heard the surname he had found one gupta siblingatul went on intr"ye armn mllik aur yee ri""ridhimma mein janti hu""oh pehle mile ho""nahi bachpan se janti hun meri hi behen hai"rids was quite upset she had revealed all out on thir first meeting, armaan was shocked to hear that rids was shsnks daughter,anjali also fel guilty as she had revealed a too much whilst atul understood why rids had avoided the surname part she wanted to be normal.all of suden came swini and hugged atul and amytogether with all her force,amy was suddenly pulled to the present shouted "oy svincy chod "angie who was quite till now shouted at the top of lungs"rids shayad ,patient chodo unhe shayad pagalpan ka daura pada hai rids""pagal?patient oy patien tu"leaving amy and atul she rushed towards angi with a blow whilst amy and atul stopped her "svince dear cool down aur ye patient nahi hamari dost hai swini aur nayi intern""oy amy mujhe chod me dikati hu isse ki patient kun hain""swi swini please gussa mat karo galti ha gayi sorry now friends"said rids holding her ears on behalf of angali"theek hin "and then entered aaaliyah she once again checked if she was on the right place or she must have entered some ward as amy an atul held swini in agrip so as she would not jump on anjie,swini in her angry and guilty expression which was total weird,rids the holding her ears,anjie in a total mixed expression.when they saw aaliyah they all stood prpoerly and swii.angie dragged by rids turned to their lockers whilst armaan and atul went to greet her.aryan had seen all this and was confident that they would no be is competitors but as al ittle curious about aaiyah as she had not reacted at all she seemed confused but then he thought that she was a girl and would not be such a competitor after all he sighed as he saw all things were going his way he also now entered the room."hi iam atul jshi and he is armn mllik""hi i am aaliyah hassan"and the 3 girls too went to greet aaliya"hi"introducing themselves aryan entered as wellreserved and not interested in any intro."hi "said armaan and introduced everyone who greeted him with a hi."i am aryan gupta""nice to meet u""well i wa informed that ther were 8 interns and i see thera are only 7 here""this gupta kiddos are well-informed huh"said amy to atul"well we should leave dr.keerti hates late comers and well we dont want that impression onour first day so lets go i thint that last intern is gonna greeted with dr.keertis the btiful red face with some sweet doses"said rids with a others giggling except aryu.

reception desk

dr.keert "i am glad that ur on time " "i am sorry to interrupt u madam but one intern is not her"aryan didnt want to avoid the chance of getting the last intern to be punished never know he or she may be a tough compe."dr.aryan mujhe pata hai ki is hosp.me kya ho raha hain aapko mujhe kuch batane ki jarurat nahi hai rahi us last intern ki toh woh jaldi hospital meie dakhila de denge filhal to woh snjevni punjab min hain kyunki unhe punj. mein personal prob tha isliye woh sanjeevni punj.mein hai do u understnd."she walked of giving duties.

i know its a little boring as its a starting but i will try my level best for some comedy.weel the last intern is kept in little suspense check him out for the next post.till then adieu.please comment whether its good or evenbad so that we can make it better.so please comment.

SANJEEVANI-A MEDICAL BOON 2
dr.keerti had signed duties an went off.aryu stood tere in complete shock how could a woman scold him that too son of a dean and in front of others and there enters dr. shashank."so hello interns,i am dr.shank so welcome to this hospital i hope u all are enjoying here....."atul"yes sir enjoying very muchhospital ekdum saaf hain cantine aur wha ka khana bhi bi lajawab hain aur toilet bhi ek dum chaka chak hai ek dum mast."ah dr. atul mein shayad aapke kam ke baara mein aur kahi aapne hosp.dekhliyah yeh puchne aaya tha par lagta hain aapne har sanj. ka har chupa chupa dekhliya hain toh shayad aap sab logon ko meri help ki jarurat nahi nai ha aur agar apse ho toh enjoyement ke sath thoda kam bhi kar lena"atul stoods theresuprised"yeh shshk sir ajeeb hain"while every one gives him a disgusted look.
every one is on dutyamy with rids
they are discussing rids"pata nahi par tumhari awaz kahi suni hui lagti hain yad nahi aara umm rehne do hum cases half divide kar dete hain kam j bhi jaldi ho jayega aur sab ka check up bhi" she gives him half of the files while armaan sees that by mistakenly she had forgeot her pager which she had told him to hold while she was dividing the file he shout "ri ri ...oh bhikari""bhikari second time am i looking like a bhikari,wat a minute bfamiliar voice,bhikari , bap road connection"shes thnkg to herself an d shouts u"u idiot"and throws the pen on him which rathe hits dr.keerti who is on rounds,armaan who had earlierly noticed dr.keerti pretends checking file while rids was thinking of the connection.present:dr.keerti is giving rids some killer looks while rids is totally shocked and both emdarrased at the same time"i i am sorry dr. keerti wo""dr.ridhma mujhe koi explanation nahi chahiye ye batamizi aage nahi chlegi mujhe gussa nahi aap ke papa par daya aa rahi hain unhone apne ke liyan kya khwab sajaye the aur unke bache kya nikle"and dr.keerti moves out.while riddhimma is gratly hurt she goes to armaan an blurts out"pehle subeh mere din ki shurwat kharab ki aur ab pura din kharab karne wale ho kya?""sorry my dear subeh tumne mujpar bhokna shuru kiya tha maine nahi""main bhokti nahi""i know i know"while he goes to check another patient leaving rids angry.
atul anjali
"beta ye aapke per ko kya hua hain"anjie
"mujhe nahi pata main dr.nahi hoon na aunty"
atul starts giggling"aunty?mein tumhe itni badi dikhti hun dikhti hu?
"nahi in ye laughing buddha se kam hi umar ki dikhti hon"now it was anjies turn whilst atul was dumbfounded"ha ha chalo ab tongu dikhau"
"kaise"
"aise"atul opens his mouth while anjie shout"atul apna ye mu band karo ye drs ko shoba nahi deta tumhe patients kya bolenge"
"unhe jo kuch kehna hai unki marzi mei jaise karunga wo meri marzi"she is really embarrassed as some of the patients and senior dr.sare at them"
"atul sab log hame dekh rahe hai why are u creatin a scenne close ur mouth u idot"
"dr.anjali apne co interns ke sath bat karne ka bhala ye kaisa tarika hua"
anje turns only to see dr.keerti standing"wo wo dr......""shut upjaiye aur apna kam kijiye aur apne co interns ke sath tamiz se pesh aaiye waha aapke bhai seniors ko ulta javab dete hain,apki behen seniors ko pen fek ke marti hain aur aap yahan apne co interns se batamizi se pesh aati hai ye sab kya chalake rakha hai agar ap aur apke behen bhai sudar nahi gaye to dr.shshnk apko khud sspnd kar denge samji ye meri warning dusro ko bhi bataiye""par dr.....................i am sorrry"
dr.swini,aryan aaliyah
"aaliya tu toh bahut mazakiya hain yaar ab pura internship ek dumm haste haste beet jayega"
"swinipata hai aaj ind pak match hai hum kam jaldi khatam karenge aur break mei msabke sath match dekhenge theek hain"
"kam tab khatam karoge jab shuru karoge par nahi ladkiyon ki to aadat hoti hai baate karne ki kam to kiya nahi jata to pta nahi is stream aur itne ache hospital me aate kyun hai"
"oy tu kya bola ki hum yaha aane ke layak nahi tu to bada layak hai apne bapke waja se is hospital mein samjana"
"u""swini rehne dona kuch mardo ki aadat hoti hain unse dusro ki khushiya sahi nai jati chalo hum kam karte hai match bhi toh dekhna hain aur ye internship itni bhi haseen nahi honewali hai specally jab aise log as pas ho chalo"
cafeteria
"oy mere harbhajan lal catch pakad pakad ye wah mere punjab di puttar dikhade inko ko humse bhid jaoge to chur chur ho jaoge""swini thoda ahistaplease""amy ahist kyu hamar hindustan ke samne ye hospital kya cheez hai"'ha jab security guards tumhe utha kar fek denge na tab pata chalega kya cheez hai""ha swini armaan ko bauhat experience hai man lo"riddhimma saidwhile others giggled"oy bandar ruk agar tune or ek six mara toh mein ye glass phek ke marungi"she took the glass in hand"oy swins wu tv hain brett lee nahi"atul isse kuch bol noise pollution badh raha hai""pollution polution kaha oy swini chod de aur chupkar"atul said"ya swini chod do he is my favourite player "anjali said a little stern"angrez chale gaye inko bhul gaye""hain aryu tum kuch khoge while rids passed the plate""while atul and swini were talking she yelled"are u insane""what the hell tune mujhe insane kyu kaha ""woh wala aryu nahi woh r u""whatever rehne do aaryu yum ye khao"anjali.swini"ab mere kya galti agar iska itna pet name aryu hain toh.
well this is the par t its a littl slow i wil make the other part a little fast.enjoy and please comment.

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nice not bad at all please update it soon
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it was an amzng update... bt y did u mke a different post 4 it... contd in d same thread as ur intro.... i luvd d intoduction.... waitng 4 d nxt prt.. upddate supersoonnnnn 😊 😊
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iknow it was a mistake i wil continue the thread sorry for the inconvenience. forgive at once.
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nce great already ur doin a fab job already do updter sooon
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thank for all ur comments

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i am sorry for all this stupidity actually i had repeated the 2nd part two times and had to edit and adjust it.it will surely not be repeated n sorry again.enjoy😆😆😆


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well please comment i need ur comments to move on



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really a nice one please update it soon

tujhe chahne wale kum na honge,
waqt ke sath shayad hum na honge,
chahe kisi ko kitna bhi pyaar dena,
lekin teri yaadoN ke haqdar sirf hum hi hoNge.
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HYE FRIEND AFTER A LONG TIME HUH THIS IS THE 3 PART.SORRY FOR INCONVINIENCE.SMALL ONE .Enjoy
part 3

swi:waise bi ki farak pendta hai dono bhi ek hi species ke hai.(laughing like dmg muskaan)

anj:tune Aryan ko kya kaha

atul:tum log awaz dhimi nahi rakh sakt??..

(amy watching them all he thought that was more interesting than test match)

anj:sure atul par ye jo tumhari retrded friend hai na isse mu band rakhne ko bolo.

Swi:kisse retarded kaha retarded hogi tu tera bhai tera pura khandaan.

(ridz and aaliya returns after some minutes hearing the shouts{gone for emergency cases])

ridz:di bhaiyyan ye sab kya ho raha hai

swi:kuch nahi ridzy kuch logo ko bat bauhat bada ne ki aadat hoti..........

anj:kisine tumse pucha bhi tha aur dikh raha hai kise bat bada ne ki aadat hai

aryu:jane dona anjie aise logo ke mu kyu lagti ho chalo.(aryu n anjie leave)

Swi:bhad mein jao koi tum logoe mu bhi nahi lagna nahi chahta

Ridz:ye sab kya chal raha hai mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha

Amy:koi nayi bat batao

Ridz:ali isse shant rehne ko bol agar maine mu khola na to ye bahut pachtayega.ab mein shant hu to ye zyada awaz na kare.

Amy:hui na ladkiyon wali bat bak bak karne ke bad mein kuch bol nani rahi hu(ridz style)

(she intantly starts tu run behind him)

ridz:u stupid,idiot dog

amy:catch hold of her aaliyah.shayad pagalpan ka daura hai

ali:stop it u both.now.

ridz:chalo ali(noticing dr.keerti )

ali:armaan?

Ridz:shh

Amy:bag gayi bheegi biliyan.ladkiya.kabhi humse jeet nahi sakti(turning)

Dr.kir:aapne kuch kaha dr.armaan.

Amy:aah aah nahi nahi kuch nahi

Dr.kir:that?s better. well aap apne co-interns se keh de ki aaj aur ek intern aanewala hain.toh duties den eke waqt aapse mil waungi sharp at 5?o clock. leaving)

Ridz:ch ch ch bichare dr.armaan bheegi biliya hu dikh raha hai kaun kitna pani mein hai.BYE DR.AMY
Edited by ridzzy - 16 years ago

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