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Hina

@hinz

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+ 9

Posted: 17 years ago

#41

Zuzu

I not as crazy as Muskaan's here
My beti is sure a Muskaan tho
lol,actaully no one can be as crazy as her
U've given her character a fresh new craziest touch

Me no,comedy queen hun,thats Deepu
I've even quit my comedy ff,I'm happy reading the comedy already here

Great stuff hun
P.s: I've added your ff to the comedy ff's list Madz asked for,this one had to be mentioned lol!

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maliha_princess

@maliha_princess

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Hello Jello 😃

Awesome part 😆

"Yeah, my grandpops used to own an underwear factory in India," . 😆 😆 😆

"I cracked my neck open three times, fractured five ribs in one bash, got my spinal cord bashed, lost only two eyes, broke a nose, and twisted three ankles."

{😆 😆 OMG 😆 }

donkey, 🤣 🤣

"OYE, CHUP KAR! KAMINEE!! {😆 😆 😆 }

"Kaisa raha tuhmara pehla din? Zaroor kuch garbar ki hogi tumne,"

{woh tu roz hi karti hai 😆 😆 }

OWW how cute 😳 atul lovs anji so much 😃

Here's part two... hope you guys like it... 50 words less than last time

{nxt time u have to write 100 words more 😆 😆 just kidding 😆 }

really awesome part 👏
👏

-Maliha

Edited by maliha_princess - 17 years ago

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

@Maliha: U naughty girl 😆 😆 😆 Muskaan ke kaadmon pe chaal rahi ho? 😆 What's the time??

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Kiran

@kimmu

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#44

I read the whole thing.. I love it so far...! Aww... poor Minnie... rejected my her own mom... You made Armaan and Ridz such a business couple... I hope they still have the romance.. ☺️

I love Muskaan's charectar here, she reminds me of myself so much.. like the shower scene... 😆 😆 But I'm still not as hyper as her... If only we saw Minnie and Muskaan in DMg.. would've been so fun!! Can't wait to see RM falling in love!! Continue soon!! 😃

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rihanaa

@rihanaa

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#45

hey dat waz an amzin part ...but yy is ridhima so mean 2 mini n even armaan n dont luv each other or mini m gettin tensed 😕 but i luved muski rahul convo n thanks 4 da pm cont soon

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lakshmi

@meow23

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#46

omg.. wot was dat... i can't stop laughng.......... rat, donkey......... d accident was d best.....dis is soo bad.... y ridz is soo rude 2 minnie..... thnxx 4 d pm.. update soonn 😊 😊

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redrose1000

@redrose1000

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

that was superb 👏
update soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
the interaction between rm was helarious
keep the good work
bye
update sooooooooon 😳

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#48

Z
ur a legend u write so well i am jealous can i come over n have some lessons in writing??
hehe
i loved this part omg ridzi and armi so stuck up jeez... muski n rahul lmao...
aww minnies room sooooo chweeett.. i can just imagine it... the end bit was said why did she do that?
plz comnt sooon
thanks for the pm
Sonia

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Hiba Sharafuddin

@usharafuddin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

awwwwwwwwwsom!!!!!!!!!!! 😛 d story gng suppa!!!!! 😛 😛 i'm luv'n it! lol! w8ing 4 next pat!! 😛 😛

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#50

Oh! Woow..Zainab..I luved d story-line..its jus soo nicee...nd Muskaan calling Rahul chuwa..is jus totally hilarious!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 Rahul mamu..hayee..sooo sweeet..Luved d Chadda one-liners also.. 😆 😆 But I didnt like d ending..it was sooo sadd..Mrs.Mallik was very rude 2 the sweet lil child. Im so glad u updated uppa-fast! 😃 Cant wait fr nx part! 😉