hey NJ, i just finished reading part 30. it was mindblowing!!
i love the way u explain the character of Ridz. her expressions, her body language, her state of mind, her response to a given situation, i can imagine each and everything u write!!
i guess any girl would think about how lucky she is to have someone who she loves, being the most wanted guy, and also to have that love reciprocated.i love the way you have shown how she is in this dilemma and feeling insecure and thinking whether she is worth Armaan or not.
i guess its situations like this that make your relationship more stronger when you can understand the other. trust is a big thing for Ridz and i can say that you have written that part beautifully
this Sandra, girls like her are always going to be around guys like Armaan - since he is the captain and most handsome guy around. i bet Armaan never even looked at her!!
i hope in the next part Ridz talks to Armaan about this, and he being Armaan can help her overcome her insecurity, i hope Armaan can confront this Sandra and say something that she will not forget!!
im so glad Armaan understands Ridz. Thank god he rememebered what Shashank told him.
im so glad he decided to go talk to her about it and he reached just in time.
looking forward to your next update, thanks for the PM, and again a brilliant part
Sania 😳
p.s i think my comments are getting longer with each part lol - but what to do i just love your ff