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jia.. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
OMG cant believe i missed a part out here. Really apologise for the delay in my comment. Gosh i feel so bad at not being able to comment.

Nyways to make now.....all i can say is u r simply a true genius. Told a 100 times already but cant help telling u again. u r a genius. Part 16 was so very very delightful to read NJ. Rite from the scene wen she takes to the dhabba to them walking together. Awwwwww loved their convo so much.It was a real treat to read the convo.Brilliant as usual.๐Ÿ‘

Next part 17......well well as u can see everyone's mouth watering for strawberry so is mine. call it the side effects of ur parts๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.......as earlier we were dying to know which cologne he uses๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
.......loved the entire aryan-ridz-minne scene there. Awwe aryan nd minnee!! Cho cute. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Coming to my fav scene......ridz-chris convo!! OMG felt like hugging u reading it. It was so very very adorable and gave the part a such a special feel. And next his gift Superb!!! Simply brilliant. ๐Ÿ‘

Finally coming to the twist!! Sigh*** Y do there have to be twists in perfect stories???๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜•
Am sure the misunderstanding well be cleared soon.๐Ÿ˜Š But then again the entire plot was set so very convincingly and naturally. Hats off to you yet again. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Will be as usual more eager than ever to read up the next๐Ÿ˜ณ. And before i forget a very big congrats on second thread. Feel really happy as its all very much deserved.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Jia
Edited by jia.. - 17 years ago
saridena thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
hey ๐Ÿ˜Š
where is my pm sweety
coming to the part it is sooooooooooo beautiful but what the new problem u have introdued plzz donot make it big
๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Hi NJ... Part 16

Well as usual... Very cute... i like dat Dinner a lot... it was delicious... specially coz of this one -
while ridhima fluttering her lashes looked at him and said in a sugarly sweet tone "of course not darling, um just saving u from dying," then giving him an angry look again "NO FOOD FOR YOU......" she said louder than usual......
d AR conversation thereafter was equally gud...


BUT again as i proceeded further, i realized dat d Father-Son conversation took d show away... it was FANTASTIC... specially dis one -

finally catching back his breath he said " well she asked u how the trip was, u dint respond, then she asked u again to no avail...... when she asked u what happened armaan u kept smiling at ur plate, which was empty of course, and then u got up all of a sudden saying u had eaten too much n needed some sleep, before anybody could ask what invisible food had filled u up, u walked out......"
now armaan shot him a panicked look, "oh no dad...... i did that" slamming his head in his hands he muttered "oh dam......" then shooting up again "dad please say minnie was not on the table that time......"
chris shook his head and said "she was...... and she answered on your behalf saying your trip had been an unforgettable expereince...... and grinning like iv never seen her before, n to complete the incident, i told ur grandmum u were like that at times...... i told her in a serious tone, trying to cover up, but i think it backfired, she thinks u might have a mental disorder cause she started muttering prayers like your mum used to when something seemed insanely out of control!!!"

I loved it... ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† quite fun it was... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

& i m sure in d next part Minnie have stuff to add... & even is not, she will get her piece of cake ASAP... Teasing Armaan wud b fun for her... My god, Chris uncle said she was there while he had HIS INVISIBLE FOOD... i donno how is Armaan gonna handle her & den shut her up now... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† She have got a lot of Blackmailing Contents available... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Ok i m gonna read Part 17 now... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love
- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
oh no...talk of the twist n the twist is here already!!!
well, luks like my intuitions have become quite strong then!!
all this time i was just wondering wat the twist wud be..n was eager to know..but now that i know it, i want to get rid of it badly!!
all in all, a gr8 part again..hey, spare that last quarter of the pie for me.. ๐Ÿ˜†
er.Sheetal thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
PART 17

Hey Aryan is way too smart (actually only initially )... he got Ridzy... I loved d Conspiracy played by Smart 5 stars - Muskaan, Reg, Minnie, Aryan & Armaan on Ridz... well too gud...

But again D BEST was d FATHER-DAUGTER conversation i will call it... I admire Chris Uncle a lot now... He is such a Sweetheart... too-too-too sweet... i wish everyone has a father/father-in-law like him...

But i know considering d SMARTNESS of Ridzy's PARENT, next part is gonna b a MESS... How come dey just consider it... i mean i know d things were looking like obvious, but if dey know dat kind-of similar stuff happened in case of Atul & Anjie, den y dey didnt bothered to ask dem DIRECTLY, instead of asking about IT using REFERENCES...

& of course, our stupid-idiot friendly pair - Madam Ridzy & Mr. Aryan... even dey didnt bother to ask wat EXACTLY their respectable n SMART parents r talking about... STUPID-N-IDIOT-N-FOOLISH-N-DUMB-N-CRAP-N i donno wat all adjectives i shud use for dem DEY R JUST... ๐Ÿ˜ก ...
SUPER-HIGHLY-DUMBHEADED-FOOLISH FROGS, with 3 of d legs broken, one stoned eye, broken ear drums, pottish tummy, leaking gall bladder(of course if it exists) wid lacking br& A TOTAL LACK OF BRAING CELLS... MENTALLY RETARDED FELLOWS, no actually BRAINLESS fellows... Humphssssssss it feels better now...

Eeeehhhhhhhh, its so Daily Soupish... sorry to say dat... ๐Ÿ˜• u can hit me if u want... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Actually i m a lil flustered... sorry, i didnt mean to offend anything u wrote... i didnt really mean it... but i m aaahhhhhhhh i donno, wats stuck, i better put a stop on it, before i crash into further crap off my mouth... No actually my fingers guided by idiot brains of mine...

Bur i really mean it when i said dat I loved Uncle Chris & Ridzy's conversation... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Love u dear
- Sheetal
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
heyy NJ..1st of all congratz on d new thread..!!

ur last part ws fabulous..d walk tht AR had..ws sooooo cute..!!!!
omg..i love ur ff soo much..!!

plzzzzzzzz continue soon..!

luv,
sameera
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
heyy NJ..1st of all congratz on d new thread..!!

ur last part ws fabulous..d walk tht AR had..ws sooooo cute..!!!!
omg..i love ur ff soo much..!!

plzzzzzzzz continue soon..!

luv,
sameera
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
NJ....dat was the last thing i could expect after sucha lovly talk with her father in law....that shashank gettin her n aryan married...omg no ways....cmonnn.......dont do this...hehehehe plz plz plz make shashank understand...hes sucha porblem god..humesha sab kuch galat samajhta hai...heheheheheh but in a way...itz fine coz itlll extend ure story lil...n i wanna see more n more n more parts of the fic....but yea i dont wanna see AR seprate too...pleeeeeeeesssssssseee.....dont seprate them....n cont real soon...this slifhanger wil surely kil us this time ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† the walk part was fantabulous...loved every acyion n every dialogue there...the way they descired everyhtn too cool... ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
amazing part 17 ๐Ÿ‘ !
mm..strawberry pie ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ณ
update soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
ur 17th part was great..... ๐Ÿ‘
plz clear this confussion soon.if armaan comes to know abt this he will kill aryan ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
continue soon

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