FF:Back to Newton's Laws-2...part 32 - Page 4

first of all congrats for the second part
please do clear the misunderstanding soon
witing for ur next part

new twist!! whoa!! i did NOT see that coming!! but we'll get to that later... first the update..

it was looooong!!!! but i'm not complaining.. i luv ur long parts!!! the strawberry pie scene was just toooo adorable!! i luvd the ridzi aryan convo... and then the ridzi armaan convo..! i cud so totally imagine the whole thing happening!! the whole riddhima being upset and armaan trying to make it up to her was awesome!! and the little nose peck was so awww.. how cute!!
and the part where armaan is sitting on the car and ridz asks about reg and muski.. and she goes WHAAAT??? cracked me up soo bad!! and to add to it.. where u said how armaan is trying to balance on his car after getting the shock of his life.. omg it was so funny!!
i really liked the way u did the ridz n chris convo.. it was so real.. and warm!! i luvd their convo!
the CD idea was truly romantic!! i luvd it!! and the broach!! ur seriously some kind of a genius to come up with this kind of stuff!!
and now we get to the twist!! i seriously had no idea that we wud be getting such a turn in the story!!! when i first read it.. coz i usually read ur updates twice.. i didn't get it.. but then when u read it again.. i thought maybe when shanks tells paddy then she wud clear the misunderstanding by talking to the kids.. or she wud find some way of talking to riddhima about it... but NOOOO that's not what we get... instead.. paddy n shanks think that riddhima and aryan want to get married.. and here riddhima and aryan are thinking that "their" parents approve of their respective relationships... seriously NJ.. where do u get these ideas??? and even though it's a twist in the story.. i'm looking forward to reading it.. coz i know.. or at least i hope.. that we get a happy ending..
brilliant part!!! i cud have said so much more.. but i think i've said more than enough to put u to sleep already!! lol i think the comment got kinda long.. sorry if i bored u!! but please continue soon!! and i don't mind the long parts...! ;)

oh my gosh i swear this is the longest comment i've ever given for anything!!

waiting for ur update!
shruti

OMG part 17 gave me such a shock !!!! it was all going fine ... i totaly luved riddhima's n chris's conversation n den without ne warning u dropped da bomb .... ARYAN and RIDDHIMA OMG !!! god lord armaan poor thing is jus gonna die if he cums 2 knw abt it ... jus hoping dis confusion doesnt get dragged 2 much ( knwing u am sure it wont) neways now update realll sooon i wanna read da next few part(s)

PS: luved armaan's gift ..... u me n taj !!!! awesum

heyy
last 2 parts were amazing... part 16 was soo romantic armaan is a total sweetie.
Wat a twist...NOOOO.....plz fix it sooon...
congrats on ur 2nd thread...
Sonia

awww u me n taj....how sweet....now it's high time REAL men start thinking that way! 😆

oh no Aryan and Ridz...did not see that coming. Now I wonder how they will handle the situation??? 😳

Shweta

what a twist 👏

What a dilema for Riddhima.... 😉

Love Kat

wow!!!part 16 was amazing...especially the last part...it was my favourite...strawberry cake...i wanna eat it too!!!the last part was a shocker...pls clear the misunderstanding asap...what will they do now???
And thanx so much for the pm...

strwaberry cake. my mouth is watering dear.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..... a new twist hope it clears sooon........................... amzng update........................... luvd d prt..................... update sooon 😊 😊 😊

what have u done????????????????????
is it gng to be a comedy of errors..naseem...............?

im sure u have a gameplan up ur sleeve...but just like to see us fall off our seats............uve got all the traits of a prankster........do keep it up.......

loved the entire update......strawberry pie........love cd and the broach.........

just imagine what a turn any half heard conversation cud take..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!aryan n ridzi....no no shash pady u r thinking wrong....pls sum1 tell dem.....pls clear d misunderstandin......

d whole strawbeery pie part ws so lovely 😳 😳...ridzi preparin it for armaan....best ws hw did she presented it....herself fully drown in flour n d pie already quaterly eaten.....😆 😆

n i absolutely luvd d ridz-chris convo......chris is an amazin guy......he put her at such ease.....

i cud actually visualise all d scenes....awesome... 👏

hw thoughtful of armaan(or i must say u) to cherish der spl night.....aww....."U, Me and Taj...and so it all began..."....jus luvd it....

u kno frm many days i ws thinikin dat the story is goin 2 perfect(nt dat i mind it...i absolutely luvd it) n nw u gave dis superb twist....hope everythin gets sorted out soon enuf....

congratulations for the new thread....u deserve it...👏 😃

thnx a ton for d pm....pls pls cont soon....