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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
hey...........its a lovels FF loved it.......i liked AR relation its really sweet. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na

Part 7

(Recap: Ridz wears the gown presented by Armaan…Riddhima meets Armaan parents….)

(Ridz n Armaan both sat down…)

A – Riddhima..main ek minute me aaya.

Ridz – ab kahan ja rahe ho?😕

A – No questions plz.

Ridz – per suno to…

(Armaan chalaa jata hai…..)

(Suddenly)

Man – excuse me mam!! Yeh bachey aap se kuch kehna chatey hain.

(Ridz sees 3 small cute children,, havin red flowers in their hands 😳)

Gal – riddhima didi,, kya aap Armaan bhaiya ko pyar karti hain?😳

(on hearing this,,Ridz gets shocked)

Ridz – haan (blushing) magar..

Gal – to phir yeh flower aapka.bye!!😆

(tat gal runs away handing d beautiful red rose to Ridz,,, ridz blushes..n suddenly…)

Another Gal –Rid..Riddhi…ridhima didi..(She dosen't know how to pronounce ridhima😆)kya aap Armaan bhaiya ka saath hamesha dogi?😳

Ridz – hmm..Aakhri saas tak😛

Another Gal – yeh aapke liye.

(Ridz gets confused…)

Ridz (to herself) – yeh kya ho raha hai? Armaan kahan hai aur yeh bachey?

Suddenly..boy interrupts..

Boy – didi…jab aapki shaadi ho jayegi Armaan bhaiya se… to kya aap apne bete ko mera friend baney dogi ?😆😆

(Hearing this ridz smiles on his innocence)

Ridz – So cute!!😳 Beta pehley shaadi to ho jaye.😆(she blushes)

(tat boy hands tat flower to ridz n he also ran away)

(After tat boy, A comes in d line)

Ridz – A tum kahan they? Itni der (time) se tumahra wait kar rahi thi...aur yeh sab tumahri hi shararat hai na? Tumne hi un pyare se baccho ko yeh sab sikhaya tha… jo who abhi bol kar gaye?😆

A – who…who to unhone apne man se bola…maine to bus last wale bacchey ko I lov u bolne ke liye kahan tha😳 magar us bacchey ko last moment per toilet aa gayi aur isliye who nahi aaya .😆

(Ridz starts to laugh)

A – Tum hastey hue aur bhi jyada khoobsurat lagti ho.😉

(Ridz blushes)

A -- Riddhima main tumse aaj kuch kehna chahta hoon..Abhi us ladke ne jo tumhe fool diya hai use khol kar dekho.

(Ridz gets confused)

Ridz – fool ko kholon? Kya bol rahey ho kuch samaj nahi Aa raha?😕

(A takes tat red rose from her n slowly opens d mouth of that rose)

(form tat he takes out d beautiful ring)😛

He bends down n...

A – Riddhima …Will u Marry Me? Kya tum mujhe mauka dogi ki main tumhe hamesh Kush rakh sakoo😊? Tumahre saath apni saari zindgi bitaa sakoon.😛

(Hearing this...Tears starts to pour from her eyes😭…she gets so emotional tat he hugs A)

Ridz – yes… (Still cryling)I will marry u...

(Suddenly his cell rings)

A – Hello. This is armaan.whoz there?

Shashank – A...Biwi abhi aayi nahi hai aur mujhe bhool bhi gaya 😆

A – Dad aap?

Shashank – jaldi se kush kahbri suna…😛

A – Riddhima mujhse shaadi karne ke liye tayaar (ready) hai... (Smiles)😊

Shashank – mein janta tha...Yeh Kush kahbri mein teri mom ko batata hoon…tum log enjoy karo.

(Scene changes)

(At is still in swimming pool…don't know wat to do)

Suddenly Rahul comes there)

R – At… tu yahan itni raat mein kya kar raha hai?😕

At – dikhai nahi deta Pani Mein apni izzat chupa raha hoon.😆

R – Kya? Chal yeh sab chod...bahar aaja...Dekh tu kitna kap (shivers) raha hai.

At – Abey tujhe dikhai nahi de raha hai kya...Bahar kaise aayon? Mere kapde koi chura ke legaya.

R – ab kya kare?accha rukh tere roommein se doosre kapde laata hoon.

(After sometime)

At comes out of d swimming pool n after wearing d clothes; he fells down on d floor)

R – At..Kya hua? (Shakes At) oh god!!🤢 Ise to bahut tez fever hai..

(He takes him to d room)

(Scene changes)

(A n Ridz r dancing (salsa) on d song----"pyaar ki yeh kahaani suno…ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi…hoti kya hai jawaani suno….ek ladka tha, ek ladki thi"😛

(Suddenly his cell again rings...This time its from R...)

R – Hello… Armaan (panickly)

A – Kya Hua? Aur tujhe abhi ka hi time mila tha kya phone karne ke liye?

R – Yar bahut badi emergency hai?

A – Kyun kya hua?

R – Yar sorry mein tujhe disturb kar raha hoon… magar yeh baat abhi tujhe nahi batayi to tu hi mujh per chillayega (shouts).

R – At hospital mein hai...

A – Kya? Kyun? Kaise?😕

R – Tujhe yeh sab baad mein bataonga.pehley tu aur ridz Sanjeevani Hospital aa jao.wahi per milengey.

A – Theekey main aur riddhima wahi aa rahey hain.tu wait kar.

Ridz – kya hua A?

A – Ridz… At hospital mein hain.

Ridz – kyun?

A – Abhi hamare pass jyada time nahi hai…hame abhi hospital jaana hoga.

Ridz – to phir jaldi chalo.

(Wat wil happen in next part? At hospital mein kyun hain?kya hua use?😕)

DO COMMENT N THX FOR READING.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
really a sweet one specially 3 kids how cute yaar its so preety 😭 😭 i hv tears of happiness 👏😳but i feel bad for atul i wish he will get soon
nice one thanks for pm and please continue it soon

"Dosti toh sirf ek ittefaaq hai,
Yeh toh dilon ki mulaakaat hai,
Dosti nahi dekhti yeh din hai ki raat hai,
Isme toh sirf wafaadaari aur jasbaat hai."



"Dost ek saahil hai tufaano ke liye,
Dost ek aaina hai armaano ke liye,
Dost ek mehfil hai anjaano ke liye,
Dosti ek khawaahish hai aap jaise dost ko paane ke liye."
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
ohhh sooo chweet... luvd d way d cute kidz came a gav... d last kid was d best........ n atul omg he is stil in d pool...hehe.. omg poor atul is in hospital..... d dance ohh soo sad it had 2 end... thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
hey pooja i am first 😳 tumhara pm milte he mai update padne lagi u know mai soch he rahi thi ki tum kab update karogi yaar it was awesomeeeeeee ,jabardast part tha 👏 👏 ,,bache wala scene how cute and romantic 😳 ,armann is chooooooo chweet 😳 but how sad atul hospital mai i know yeh sab anjali ki shararat ki wajah se hua hai but i know not to worry at all bcoz isse unke beech or pyaar bad jayega ,,plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon can't wait anymore and thanx 4 pm ..bye..love u****@yesha***
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
hey pooja thnks fr d pm...........
wow yaar it ws choooooooooooo chooooooooooo chweeeeeeeeeeet prt yaar d bache wow how sweeeeeeeeeeet nd cute thy rwe askng hayeeeeeeeeeeee nd ridz ws blushng at her baby cmmnt nd ar proposd her wow choooooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeee yaar relayyyy realyyyyyyyyyyyy lvd it...........😊...........nd wht happn 2 atul poor hm he spended so mch tme in pool thts why he hivrd.............omg wht gonna happn...........cnt wait plzzzzzz cont soooooooooooooooooooon..............
luv yachu😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
It was really nice.........update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
gr8 part...armaan is tooo romantic... 😛
D kids part was hilarious.. 😆 😆

thanx 4 d pm...continue soon...

luv
*vini*
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thnx for the pm.and very nice part.updote soon and pm whn u will update 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
awwwww dat was sooooo romantic n cute
luved da way he propsed hw sweet
it was great
cnt wait 2 read da nxt part updte sooon
n thx 4 da pm

luv niz

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