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Posted: 17 years ago
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(Hey guyz Sorry for d late update)

Kabhi Haan Kabhi Na

Part - 5

(In the Morning,, at the table,,till now boys hav not arrived)

M – ( To An) Yar abhi tak boys nahi aaye. Kyun na hum apne plan ko successful banatey hain.

An – then don't waste anymore time. Aur tumhe pata hai na tumhe kya karna hai.

M – Hmmm

Ridz – Main tum logo ki koi madat nahi karoongi. jo tum kar rahey ho na,, who theek nahi hai aur iske liye baad me tum dono ko bahut pachtana padega.

An – ok. but remember tum unki madat bhi nahi karogi aur hamare plan ke bare mein kisi ko nahi batana even A ko bhi nahi.(pause) M chalo mission shuru karety hain.jaldi se mirchi powder lao.

(M brings som mirchi powder n sprinkles som of it in R's sandwich n in juice she puts som salt then she return to her chair)

(Suddenly, R,A n At comes)

R – (to A) yar mera breakfast pehley se hi ready hai.

A – iska matlab yahan koi to hai jot tum se…(M interrupts)😃

M – tum se… aage. Vaise yeh breakfast maine lagaya hai… sirf R ke liya.khao na R.😳

A (whispers to R) lagta hai M ne teri feelings samaj li hai.ab chal khana jaldi se start kar varna pata laga….chal chod.

(R smiles to M n then started to eat… he continues to eat havin waters in eye.)

A – kya hua? Tu ro kyun raha hai?

R – yeh khusi ke aason(tears) hai. Tu nahi samjega.😆

M – R breakfast kaisa laga? Maje to aaye na?😆

R – hmmm… bahut accha tha.tum ne kitne man se banya tha mere liye..thx.

(R suddenly rushes to washroom)

M – (whispers to angie) yar lagta hai kuch gadbad hai. R to aise kha rahaa tha jaise kuch hua hi na ho.

An – tune usme mirchi powder to dalaa tha na?

M – haan.

At – (to himself) – Are ise kya hua? Isney to apna juice he nahi piya.koi baat nahi mein pi leta hoon.?(pause) are wah sandwich bhi hain.

M – At tum uska breakfast kyun kha rahey ho? Who bhi uska jhootha..😆 Plz mat khao usse.

At – Kyun? are dosto ke beech sab chalta hai.😆😆😆

(While eating he starts to shout).

At – chi!! Yeh kya hai? Isme to puri mirchi ki factory dali hui hai.😆😆

A – Champ… Champ!! Sun to …

At -- baad mein.. (pause)mirchi..pani …pani..

M (whispers to An) – ise mirchi to lagi per R ko kyun nahi lagi?

An – who knows?

A – aaj mein aur ridhima dinner ke liye ja rahey hain😳…(pause) kisi ko chalna hai to chal sakta hai..

An – itna sochne ki jaroorat nahi hai. mujhe pata hai tum kisi ko lejana nahi chatey.to phir pooch kyun rahey ho.😆.

M – ham kabab mein haddi nahi banna chahtey.(n she giggles).

Ridz – tum dono kaisi batey kar rahi ho.

An – ab tum jyada natak mat karo.. go n njoy.😛

(Ridz blushes)😳

A – thx angie.

(at night )

(at gals room,,,ridz is getting ready,,shes wearing white salwaar n kameez)

An – ridz ,aaj tumhe kuch special pehna chaiye kyunki pehli bar A ke saath dinner per ja rahi ho.

M – An is rite..i think u shud wear a saari.😃

An – nahi tumhe kuch western dresses pehni chaiye lik mini skirts n something…u can tak from me.i hav a huge collections of this..😳

Ridz – A ko yeh sab pasand nahi hai usne kaha hai ki tum jaisi ho vaisi hi acchi lagti ho..👏

M – oooooooo!! Kya baat hai. Pyar to sar chad ke bol raha hain.😆

An – M stop teasing Ridz. Look at her.. sharm ke mare bichari pani pani ho raahi hai(An n M both laughs)

(at boys room)

(A is spraying a lot of Deo on himself suddenly At sneezes).😆

At – Abey manaa tu ridz ke saath diner per ja raha hai per iska matlab yeh to nahi na ki pani ki jageh Deo se nahega.😆

A – champ!!

At – kya champ!! Chal aisa kartey hain mein aur R tere saath chaltey hain. Tujhe hamari company bhi mil jayegi.😆😆

A – mujhe kisi ko pitney ka man kar raha hai.😡

At -- yaad aaya .. mujhe apne baccho ko jaldi sulaney ki aadat hai kyunki wahan se to aaney per hum late ho jayengey..isliye mein nahi ja raha.😆

A – bacche?

At – haan pinki,,sonu,,rohan…mere pyare se podwey(plants).

(A is really frustrated) 😡😡

R – mera to man hai hi nahi.

R – in bato ko chod aur…

At, R – jo tu Ridz ko aaj surprise dene wala hai uske liye BEST OF LUCK!!👍🏼

(A n Ridz leaves)

(A takes Ridz for a candle light dinner.he gives her a packet n asks her to wear this for him, she opens d packet n finds out tat there is a red color strapless ball gown in it☺️)

Ridz – A.. yeh dress..😕

A -- Ridhima aaj mein chahta hoon ki tum is dress ko mere liye pehno.

Ridz – per Arman ..maine aise kapdey aaj tak nahi pehney.main kaise pehn sakti hoon..

A – (in a upset mood)😔 koi baat nahi.main tumhara us table per intezar kar raha hoon.Is dress ko wapis meri car mein rakhkar aajao.🥺

(He goes to d table whereas ridz go to keep this packet)💔

(what will happen in next part? kya ridz us dress ko pehnegi?woh surprise kya hai jo A ridz ko dega?)

(Hey guyz now i wil update my 6 part after 22 coz im goin out of station.)

DO COMMENT N THX FOR READING.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
really an awwsome updte please continue it soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey pooja very nice part
bechaara rahul mirchi ko bhi ktne pyaar se kha letha hai par muskaan abhi tak uski feelings samajh hi nahi aayi
armaan/riddhima date par wow thats great armaan riddhima ko surprise de raha hai kahin propose toh nahi kar raha hai na.............
yaar tum out of station jaa rahi........enjoy u r self,have fun
thanx for pm
love u
yogitha 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
nce loool da whole mirchi thing very nce poor atul n raul ooooo cnt wait 4 da date wudr wot happens updte sooon n thx 4 da pkm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
very nice update.i liked it vry much.plz cont.sooon 😳 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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GR88 PRT.... MUSKI ADDNG CHILLI POWDER... ATUL DRINKING, ATUL GNG 2 PUT HIS BACCHA'S 2 SLEEP...... N NOW DIS SUSPENSE................ GRRRRRRRRRR888888888888 N AWESUM PRT... THNXX 4 D PM.. UPDATE SUPERSOON 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Very nice work
Your update was superbbb 👏 👏
Keep it up.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
it was such a hilarious n cute part...plzzzzz continue soon...pm me
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Awesome upd8!

Thanx 4 da PM n do continue soon!


*~*Marisha*~*
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnxxxxxxxxxxx for pm n i think she will wear it. gud luck for ur jouney . hope 2 see u soon wid great 1 more part

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