Hina’s F.R.I.E.N.D.S Part Two pg7(26/6) - Page 15

wow hina di! superb part
esp.shilpa's last line...better than bandar 😆 😆 😆
thanks for the pm
cont.soon
meethi

hehehehhahhahahhehh...... omg i'm rolling in d carpet... after effects of readng r nt ovea..... i guess u shld consider urself in d ritng proffesion... omg dat chamu... was a champu... all tym geek.....i was able 2 visualize each n every scene of dat champu in front of me...... hatz of 2 u... 4 an amzng prt lik dis...... thnxx 4 d pm.. update supersoon 😊

ok now i fear my housie's will throw me outa the house hina di....wait... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣...oki better now...yeh so where was i ...yeh u gona get me thrown outa my own house...we have wooden houses here in michigan n me on the top floor n i fell off the bed so many times that they think if it happens too often i might fall right through the ceiling n crash down all the way to the basement....



seriously...oil ki factory....n belt n chasme k shares... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣dint i tell u i had no doubt abt who dumped who between nainu n champu....

n delhi accent????dear lady in love with taj....delhi ppl dont have an accent plzzzz dont say that u breaking my heart i alwaz boast abt how we northies dont talk that accented english like usual indians do...lolzzzzz just kidding no offense to any south ppl please....

btw a secret *i fell on a treadmill too...3 times in my life so far....despite the fact that um a regular gym goer....* i read the line n i was like hehe so did i...n then i realized u were making fun of how clumsy the girl was n i was like BAM BAM...joke fires back...

n the poor gay may....get dee to fall for him soon so they hook up n he can prove his point!!!

karan haha....is getting all brotherly possessive...not cause his sis going out with a notorious rep hunk....but coz she going out with 'a thing' he cant call human!!!!


omg....wat can i say....i would be quoting every bit of it....but i guess u already got the message...loved the update...waiting for the next part to hit, even though um under serious threat of being homeless soon.... 😆

Hey Hina!!!

This is such a hilarious FF! 😃 I love it so far!
Man, Dee is so adorable in her own special way! The treadmill incident had me laughing like crazy! 😆
Shilpz is so cunning, na? 😛 LOL!
Awwww, poor May! I love the guy already, he's so cool! And Pankit is so awesome! He was grilling Champu on the hot seat already! 😆 😆
LMAO at Karan's overprotectiveness! The "alien" is quite entertaining though! Haha, I feel soooo bad for Naina! Can't wait to see how everything turns out!

👏 👏 Update soon, Hina dear! 😃

omg di u hav cracked me up again
😆
it wa s such a lot of fun reading this part
i am in love wid the characters already
update soon
sayli

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

hey hina sorry for da deply ( in commenting ) was caught up in stuff !!!!thats ok hun cuming 2 part 2 i am really liking shilpa's character .... a bit ( actually a lot )spoilt, a bit selfish n also a rebel ( without a cause ) .... she's a lot like me !!!! lolololol karan's hes a dude ... cant wait for sparks 2 fly between dem ( eeh i think i already saw sum ) !!!!did u see that? may ( which happens 2 rhyme wit gay ) poor guy ya everyone keep's on mistaking him for one !!! poor soul drishtis' da cutest ya ..... starts crying 2 give shilpa company !!!! cant wait 2 read da next part ya ... hope u updating sooooon i just did

PS: am really excited after reading da promo ... finally champak choudary makes his entry !!!! ooooh am hoping da whoel gann wud be present wen naina dumps him .... dat wud be soooo koool !!!! why wud u think Naina wud dump him????? lol

Kanika

Thanks Kanika hun for your comment,I like the interaction already

Originally posted by: rabo0

wOOoow...di... 👏 👏 👏
awesum...awesum...awesum...!!!!!.... 😃
da first part was jus mind blowing..... 😳 😳 Thanks Rabia hun
am already in luv wid it...
great dialogues n everyonez jus fab. according to their own characters...mayank being da gay...oOOoops "may" 😆...n karan asusual being da flirt... 😳 😳 .. Karan had be that,he's the best that way
n da part where shilpa tels dat she adored da ghora rather than da gadha on it...got me in splits.... 🤣 🤣 .....

fantabulous job done di...👏 👏
u rock..!!!!!.... 😊

n pls do continue soOOoooon..... 😳
luv u loadzZzz...
-rabia

Thanks so much Rabia,hope you like the next part,waiting for your comments

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

omg i luved i was laughin al da way through it was great man really dnt know ot to say bt wooow amazin luvin it as usual its sooo funny its great

updte sooon

luv niz

thanks Nizma honey

I'm glad it made you happy

i'll try and update the next part soon

hey Hina jus read part 2 n am having da hardest time controlling my laughter .... my bro thinks i have finlaly lost it n refuses 2 acknowledge me nemore !!!! OMG dat hot dude's my customer ..... actually had ne one spoken dat line in front of me i wud have da same reaction as shilpa's n 2 top it all he insists on comparing himself wit K Jo ... r u sure may is not gay or for dat matter is may sure he is not gay !!!! n OMG Champu made his entry but u totally spoilt it for me ya ( i told u i have a weakness for delhi de munde n u gave champu a delhi accent 😡 ) dat made me really really made but not for long coz u got da gang 2 meet him ... am pretty sure da poor guys getting dumped n da next 5 to 10 mins !!!! n ur promo OMG it was sooooo damn funny ... barkha ne mere liye kuch nahi chuda n da other one goes tujhe chud diya kafi hai LMAO !!!! infact am hoping for sum flashback scene in da next part where v c barkha making life hell for karan !!!!!

Kanika

heyyyy
tht was hilarious!!!!!! bechara mayank!! hahaah!!!
but srsly agar koi bhi yea line kahega toh laagega ke yeh seedha nahi hai 😉 loool!!
keeep it uup!! 😉
thnks for the pmm...keep em cumin 😉
luvvvss aashna