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Posted: 17 years ago

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thnks tam n zuzu! 😃 again from lala n me! 😃

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DHRUTI

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

concept sounds good...
hey where did u get this pic of iqbal...
man HE LOOKS SOOOOOOOOO HWAT 😳 😳 😳 n gwad THE Attitude he carries.....haeey marjava
he goin to kill me someday 🤢
😆 😆
hey plzz continue soooon
waitin 4 ur update 😃 😊

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

thanks... oo my typical I went to google images and typed I qbal Khan!! lol!! Thanks everyone!!

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DHRUTI

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: lalala10
thanks... oo my typical I went to google images and typed I qbal Khan!! lol!! Thanks everyone!!

thanks....buh hey when r u goin to update 😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

that is cooll..very interesting...nice start... 👏 do continue soon... 😊

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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thank u each and everyone😳!! It is a sweeet pleasure to receive all ur comments😊!!! You guys are really encouraging👏 and we hope u like the first part😊!! We tried our best and yeah... do comment ...comment what u really think!!!!!!! Thanks again!!!

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Mona Khan

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part 1:

(Note: The names of the commentator , player and teams are made up ..so sorry if they exist in real!!)

Good morning America !!!! This is Micheal Brown bringing to you the very live telecast of the second half the biggest match of 2008 : the Falcons vs. South rebels. It's 4:13 on the dot and the teams are ready for the whistle! The weather is cloudy but no signs of drizzling or rain. In exactly two minutes ladies and gentle men the match will start. The Falcons as you can see , are in black , and the South Rebels in dark blue!! Dont forget this transmission is brought to by America's favorite sports channel "S for sports". 1, 2,3 and the match has started with ball in control of Gorge from the Falcons who is moving smoothly towards the goal and is on a very speed but Jerry from the South Rebels used his famous trick is now moving with wind. Still with ball , saving it from Brain from the Falcons, He now passes the ball to Ricky who was not such a smart choice as he is surrounded by the Falcons but the lad uses his brains and passes the ball to his teammate Shawn , who kicks in and makes a clean goal!! The score now happens to be 3 for the Falcons and 4 for the South Rebels!! And the match starts again with Falcons taking the ball and moving towards the goal..but Denny steals the ball and moves past by Erwin from the Falcons but Erwin catches up and takes the ball and passes is to Richard who makes a goal!!

Now the scores are even and only 2 minutes left. Dont forget this transmission is brought to you by "S for sports" , your favorite channel !! Now ladies and gentlemen in two minutes two of the worlds team will face their last battle in 2008 and the winner will be declared. The ball is all set and the whistle is blown again. The South Rebels take the ball and making for the goal , when James from the Falcon takes the ball is moving opposite towards his target.

He is almost there and kicks the ball but the goal keeper , Wade saves it and passes it Angad Khanna who gallops like the wind and moves past all the other players and passes the ball to Jerry who passes it to the ball to Shawn . He takes the ball towards his target and then passes it to Angad who brilliantly saves it from two players of the Falcon and shoots the ball right past the goal keeper and into the goal on very 59th secnod of the last minute!! Yes people this is it!!The South Rebels have proven themselves.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
The Sharma mansion is filled with shouts , hoots and screams. Bowl of popcorn with half popcorns inside it and the other half on the sofa. A guy dancing and a ummm... girl?? Yes girl!! A girl jumping on the sofa!! An elderly man is watching them while laughing!! The guy screams.

Girl: God Prithvi ..you scream, like a girl!

P: And you would know how??? You arent a girl!!

G: Shut up you sissy!!

Elderly man: Prithvi , Kripa stop it!! What will the neighbors say???

K: Papa.. dont care about what they say and scream all you want even they should know how Angad Khanna made us proud!!

P: Haan Chachu!! Today it's an all-you-can-eat-treat from me to you , Kripa and Roshan ( his little brother) !!!

K: All right !!!

P: Ahan ! So where do you wanna go??

K: Perky Pizza (made that up!!)

R: No!! Sweet and Sour ! (made that up too!)

K: you always take us to Sweet and Sour!!

R: But it's the best and South Rebels won so we deserve the best!!

K: exactly so that's why we go to Perky Pizza's since it's the best.

R: The only reason you go their is because they give stuff signed by Angad Khanna!!

K: Dude ...like it or not we are going there..ok Prithvi?

P: Yeah thats cool!

R: What ever.. just make sure you dont get a bracelet signed by him because it wont be of any use to you dudette...opps I meant dude!!

Roshan runs away with Kripa running after him. Then you hear Roshan screaming.... "no not ice on my face again!!!!!Arghhhhhhhhhh"

Prem (Kripa's Dad): Should we or should we not??

P:Well ..he is misbehaving.

Prem:You get him out here while I go get more ice!

P: k!

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K I know this part is small but we are trying our best!! I got alot of guests to take care of lol!!!Hope u guys like it.. we made it small cause we couldnt really think of a big introduction..sorry!! We will try to update ASAP!!

Edited by lalala10 - 17 years ago