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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: nehasfan

awesum part.....

👏
cont soon......



Thank you so much! I will ASAP!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5:
The party.

Behind the mask, I'll recognize,
that one black pair of eyes.
I'll lend an ear when the wind blows,
And it will tell me what is not known.
Making your loss, my gain,
I did IT once, and I'll do IT again.

Kripa glanced outside her window. There was a huge crowd on either sides of the beautiful red carpet. She always felt something when she looked at all of the people goin crazy over people who werent what they seemed to be, even her. She still was shy from the inside but rarely showed it. Now she looked at the photo of her family while sitting in her luxurious Mercedes, and thanked god that they were so supportive. Soon she heard the sound of the engine go silent, and then she knew that her car had stopped . She murmured, "Showtime!" as the body guard came out from the door beside the drivers seat and opened her door.

Kripa put one delicate foot on the floor, revealing her stylish black shoesand her pretty silver anklet. She then took , her bodyguard's hand and stepped out unvieling, the beauty ,wrapped in a beautiful black gown, that the world was waiting for. She smiled as she walked on the carpet, with everyone screaming her name and many compliments. She saw a little girl of about 8, holding a pen and an autograph, but she had tears in her eyes. It was obvious that someone had pushed her away from it and she knew that the girl was here for Kripa when she saw the girl's eyes twinkle as Kripa looked at her. She went towards her and politely pointing to her, she asked the other fans to bring her closer. And as she neared, Kripa smiled at her. Kripa took the pen and the autograph book, signed it.

"What's your name?" Kripa asked. "Daina" She answered in a sweet voice. Kripa smiled at her again.Then kissed the Daina's eyes . Daina was so happy that she forgot to smile back, and to everyone's surprise, Kripa didnt move untill Daina smiled back. And then giving her one last smile and walked forward. She showed her invitation and turned around gracefully, towards her fans. She smiled, she used to be one of them and knowing how ignorance from your favourite start meant, she waved and blew a kiss before disappearing from their sight.

She could hear the people go wild as she blew a kiss, and she silently laughed, shaking her head. As soon as she entered the hall filled with celebrities and famous people from all over the world, Kevin came and greeted her. Knowing, her cultural habits, he shook her hand, rather than giving a hug, like he would to anyone else. He soon got busy in receiving the guests after he excused himself. Kripa was busy, talking to almost everyone. She then went to the bar and ordered an orange juice.

After sometime, the music started and Kripa looked at the people dancing, again wondering about her future. But suddenly, all the chatter and the laughs stopped. It was as if she was all alone in a grave yard. Wondering what was all this about, she turned around and saw Kevin greeting Angad and Mishty. She saw many people constantly staring at Angad and Kripa. Kripa just smirked, shook her head and sat in her previous position again. She knew Angad would be here. After all,m being the owner of the hit magazine, she knew that Kevin was Mishty's brother's best friend. She hadn't published that because she respected people's privacy, unless it came to Angad.

Before, you knew it, the party girl, Mishti gave live to the party and almost everyone was on the dance floor. Kripa, knew that Mishti was relieved and glad that their were no press peopl here so she could party hard. Maybe she didnt know that Kripa was here. But Kripa didnt care , she wouldn't publish anything about Mishti, unless it was about Angad, because that would just plainly be boring.

She was surprised when she heard a familiar voice asking for a drink. She turned around in her seat and saw Angad looking down at her. She could tell he was trying to hide her anger, when he smiled widely yet forcefully at her. Kripa chuckled and kept her drink on the counter.
Kripa: No ones watching you, you can cut that smile, Khanna.
Angad looks at her disgustingly and rolls his eyes after giving her another mean look.
Angad(while sitting down): You are right, there is no point.
Kripa nods.
Angad: Look! How about a deal?
Kripa: I'm listening.
Angad: I dont know what you want, but it's my guess and I m always right.
Kripa smirked on the inside. She knew what he was thinking. He thought that she wanted him, to be physically involved with her. Still smirking, she wasn't surprised, knowing that he was so over-confident.
Kripa looked at him.
Angad: How about I come over tommorrow night?
Kripa: You are just too full of yourself. And as a hint ; no! I have no such desire, as you think of me to have.
Kripa got up, picking her drink and turned around gracefully. While making her way towards the ladies washroom, she got many lustfull stares for almost all males present. She took sips of the orange juice, and then as a waiter came, she kept the glass and a huge tip on the empty tray he was holding, smiled and entered into the ladies washroom.

She looked at herself in the huge mirror. Her hair was open, she had a light pink lip gloss applied, and the silver chain with a stylish daimond locket she was wearing, all made her look beautiful and simple. But more than anything else, she was comfortable in these clothes. She opened the tap and collecting water in her hands, splashed it on her face. He she looked in the mirror and sighed. She dried her face with the help of a tissue , opened her purse and taking out the lip gloss applied it to her lips. She kept the lips gloss in her purse again, and checked her her cell phone too. After repling to Prithvi's message, she went to use the toilet.

As soon as she opened the locked door of the toilet stall, that she had used, she heard the bathroom door opened and slam back, followed by a the sound of heels clicking. She opened the door and saw Mishti coming. She quickly got back inside and hid in the stall.

Mishti: (to herself) Damn it! Who does he think he is! I'll dance with who so ever I want, heck with his reputation.
Kripa at that very moment knew it was Angad she was talking about.
Mishti's cell rang, and Kripa opened the door a bit saw her pick it up.
Mishti: Hello? Yeah. Oh, he's fine alright, but our relationship is not. He wont let me dance with anyone and wont even dance with me himself. He wont let me drink and he's bossing me around like I'm his wife!! You wait and watch baby, how I break up with him. The whole media will be present and I'll be the talk, for weeks.
Kripa didnt want to hear anymore. She was happy that she got this useful piece of information. As soon as Mishti went inside on of the stalls, Kripa came out and quickly rushed out of the ladies bathroom. She was grateful that the wind had reached her ears and given her the weapon for another attack.

She went to the counter ordered a glasss of water. By then Kevin joined her again.They chatted for a while until, he had to go again. She eyued the dance floor, looking for a partner. She felt like dancing. She was so happy about the new information that she got. And what better way to take it out than dancing! Besides a new song was just about to start.

She noticed someone's stare on her. Looking past the dance floor, she saw Angad standing on the other side of the dance floor, right in front of her. She titled her face and smiled. Her gaze wandered of to the dance floor again. She knew Angad was checking her out. Dispite the fact that she had totally annoyed him and that she was in an extreme attempt to flush his career down the toilet, he had found her sexy and beautiful. The way she made everything to the point and clear, showed her intelligence. She was independent, bold and funny, as everyone knew that she alone reached such a high rank without anyone's help. nd what man didn't want an independent, funny, intelligent, bold and especailly, a very beautiful woman.

Before she knew it, Angad was beside her and had his hand held out. Busy in her thoughts, she hadn't noticed him come upto her. She looked down at his hand and snapping out of it, placed her hand in his. She somehow felt perfect when she felt his hand wrap around her's. Where as Angad, was so absorbed in her beauty that he didnt think twice before asking her for a dance. They stepped on the dance floor, the music started. Angad skillfully placed his one hand on her waist and the other was still wrapped around her hand. Kripa, too, quickly placed her hand on his shoulder and swayed with the music. They challenged each other with their eyes, as they danced flawlessly, oine trying to be lead the other. The music started getting faster as it reached the end. Still, staring into each other's challenging eyes, they moved faster and even more energetically. It was near the end. Angad and Kripa went backward and forward together. They modified their handlock into a stylish one. And then they parted their bodies, letting only the hands being connected. In another moment their bodies were touching again, only to be parted again as Kripa twirled around gracefully yet in great speed making her gown, spin in the air showing parts of her legs below the knees. After she was done, Kripa crashed against Angad's strong chest,letting his manly colonge make her dizzy. As soon as she was against Angad, he wrapped an arm around her waist where as his other hand had Kripa's hand enclosed in it. He quickly moved around and leaned towards the ground, still holding Kripa as she was only a few inches above the ground.
He pulled her back up.
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Please do comment. Dont mind the mistakes and I am sorry, if the dance moves weren't clear. I hope you like it.
Thank a lot,
Mona.

Edited by lalala10 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
hey nice ans sweet part 👏.
hope they fall for each other soon 😳😳.
i am the 1st one to comment 😆😆
Edited by ak lover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ak lover

hey nice ans sweet part 👏.

hope they fall for each other soon 😳😳.
i am the 1st one to comment 😆😆



Thank you so much! Yeah, they will!
Lol! I commented first on your promo. 😆😆
Mona.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
awesum part....
kripa-diana scene was cute...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
interesting part....
& Angad seems like a real bad boy... so full of himself...
wonder what is Mishty going to do????
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: nehasfan

awesum part....
kripa-diana scene was cute...



Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

interesting part....

& Angad seems like a real bad boy... so full of himself...
wonder what is Mishty going to do????
continue soon



Thank you. Yeah well, he is. Mishti, will do what she has to do. I will continue ASAP!
Thanks,
Mona.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
omg
ijust started readingthis ff and plz cont
soon is all i can say
plz could u pm me

~minta
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: xxxxminixxxx

omg
ijust started readingthis ff and plz cont
soon is all i can say
plz could u pm me

~minta



Thanks alot. I will defitinely continue ASAP! Of course I will.
Mona.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
Part 6:
Communicating.


He pulled her back up.

Even though knowing that she was standing on her own, he didn't let go, or more precisely at that moment, he couldn't let go.

The music stopped, so did their bodies, despite the enchanting atmosphere, the music had created around them. Their heart beats were still moving together rythmically, after the incendiary dance that set their cold hearts on fire. Still staring, the two had no idea that they had managed to grab everyonme's attention and now were the cause of the loud applause.

Gazing deep in her brown eyes, he recalled the image of the eyes full of sarcasim and mischieve, and compared them to what he now saw in her eyes. The thickness in her eyes had melted, taking away every single trace of the aggressiveness she had shown, and left behind, something so beautfiul in them, that he wanted to give away all he had, for that something he saw in her eyes..

Kripa, all the while, was staring at the man before her. Despite the effects he had on he, she wasn't thinking how handsome he was or how he made her heart skip a beat. She was instead thinking about what was so magical in his eyes, when he asked her to dance, that she agreed and allowed him to touch her. So moved by the fact that she was enjoying dancing with him, she looked past his shoulders, and saw Mishti red with anger. That is when she realized that Angad still had his arm around her waist and that Kripa still had her hand in his. She moved back a little and Angad removed his hands from her. He looked around for a moment at the audience applauding, and when he turned to Kripa again, he was shocked to see the same aggressiveness and taunts in her eyes, just as before the dance.

She, too, clapped and when almost everyone except Mishti had gone back to minding their own business. She smirked at Angad. "Thank you so much for the entertainment, Khanna." Kripa voiced. Before another word could be spoken, Kevin came and put his two arms on each ; Angad and Kripa's shoulder. Kripa smiled. Angad looked at him surprised.
Kevin: That was amazing!
Kripa: Thank you.
Angad just nodded.

Mishti came and took Angad by the arm after smiling at Kripa and Kevin. Kripa's anxious stare followed them.Kevin, yet again, excused himself and ran off, trying to please all the guests. Kripa could see, in the far end of the hall, that Mishti was screaming at Angad and looking at him intensley, where as Angad seemed as if he was pretending to listen. But, somehow, Kripa could tell that he was lost deep in thought. Finally when Mishti got a little to far by pushing him, he looked up in annoyance. He too started screaming and then both went in oppostie directions after a loud discussion. "Very loud!" She thought.

Kripa sighed. She knew she was being really evil, today when she heard Mishti's cell phone conversation and now, she was watching them fight, but Kripa couldn't take it. She knew that she had felt something inside her burn when she saw Mishti and Angad enter with their arms around each other but she ingored it and thought it was sympathy for him and that was probably making her feel guilty. But deep inside Kripa was not guilty at all. She knew that there was no emotional attachment in Angad and Mishti's relationship, and she was kind enough not to mention that in her last edition. Her target was to bring Angad Khanna's true face in front of everyone. She had no intention to destroy his career, or to cause any type of conflicts in his personal life. But when the truth would come out and either of these things would happen, she wouldn't be guilty, then too. It was his fault he was faking after all!

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When Kripa entered her enormous house, she saw her father waiting for her in large living room. It was 11 pm, and Prem was always asleep by 10pm. She hurried as she found the view of her father in deep silence quite disturbing. And to add to the fright, Prithvi and Roshan werent there too.

Prem soon found his beautiful daughter walking upto him. He patted the white couch he was siting on and Kripa came and sat beside him. He saw his daughter's eyes questioning him, he gave her a reassuaring smile and put his arm around her. That calmed Kripa down.
Prem: Kripa, I wanted to talk.
Kripa: Dad, why formality? You dont need to tell me, that you want to talk. Just start straight away.
Prem: Yes. Umm.. Kripa, honey. I love you very much.
Kripa smiled : I love you too dad!
Prem: Look, I dont know what you have in mind, but I want you to stop.
Kripa: Stop what?
Prem: This whole revenge thing.
Kripa: Dad you-
Prem interruppted her.
Prem: Please I dont want you doing this. Kripa, you and the boys (Prithvi and Roshan) mean the world to me. Please, Kripa stop it. I just can't watch you hurt again. Please. It's not only him, what if some one else hurts you too.
When Kripa opened her mouth to protest, he gave her a look and she motioned him to continue.
Prem: Look, you are a beautiful woman, Kripa and I just want to see you married and happily settled before I die. Even if you dont marry, I just want you to be safe. This whole glamour world, may seem beautiful from the outside, but in reality, it is much worse than the world of the ordinary people. I just want you to be happy, and just forget the whole revenge thing.
Kriap looked at her Prem.
Kripa: Dad! I know how much you love me! And trust me, everything I do is full-proof. But just to let you know, I wont allow Angad to hurt anyone the way he hurt me. As soon as I show what he really is to the world, I'll stop. I promise. But I can't back out now!
Prem sighed. And looked at her with a frown.
Prem: Promise?
Kripa smiled.
Kripa: Yes.
Prem smiled back at her.
Prem: Ok! Now, you go change and eat something hygenic.
Kripa: You go sleep, then I, surely, will!
With that both make way towards their respective room.
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Please do comment! I know the part is short, and I m sorry. Please dont mind the mistakes or anything else if found offense. Thanks alot everyone for reading and commenting.
Mona.
Edited by lalala10 - 16 years ago

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