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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely Lovely Lovely Lovely Update!!!!!!!!!!! Please Please Please Continue Soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankd for pm, awesome updates!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow ab kanya kia kahe gi
lovely update
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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absolutely excellent update yaar..
great part full of tense!
aahr i want the next part ! soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was amazing upadate
it was so cute
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 15
Recap-The judes put Tarun and Rajeev behund bars for 14 to 7 years depending on good behaviour. Ranbir was at the hearing to give Kanya moeal support along with Anand. Esha calls Kanya up revealing the ultimatum she gave to her Dad and the hunger strike she and her Dadi were on.
Kanya spent a sleepless night thinking about Ranbir and the proposal she was suppose to make not knowing at all how to go about it after all this was Ranbir. She couldn't move in with Ranbir it wouldn't be right as his family were crazy so were hers but then again she couldn't make Ranbir move in with her parents. There was a whole social thing that had to be resolved. She loved Esha so much and Ranbir living in his house opened her eyes to see the gem that Ranbir was. There was Ranbirs feelings to consider as he'd only just come out of a loveless marriage she knew he didn't love her but maybe she could make him change with time. What could she do. She couldn't let Esha down.
Next day Kanya went to work as normal but with a heavy heart. She was stressed with worry for Pooja and Ranbir. Normally she was never this bothered as work was her life but she really cared for these people. Esha called Kanya in secret and told Kanya she was still on her fast. Kanya couldn't believe the lengths Esha was going through to get Kanya and Ranbir together but then Esha was a smart girl. Ranbir was late for once in his life. He was trying to get Esha to eat something but the stubborn girl wasn't having any of it. She was her fathers daughter alright. What was he suppose to tell Kanya that my daughter is determined that we get together even though U R my boss? Kanya saw Ranbir enter the building and immediately called him in.
R-(thinking i am so dead)
K-Ranbir please take a seat. I have something important to discuss with U.
He sits down abd thibks this is definately looking like i'm about to get a warning of some sorts.
K-Don't look worried i won't bite Ur head off for coming late. I've been thinking long and hard all night and feel that i have no choice but to spill it out.Please don't take this as an insult or a joke.
R-This sounds serious.
K-It is. Please don't interrupt me when i am speaking. Its hard enough getting the courage and without U coming to blows with me.
R-Whatever it is we can deal with it. I too have something to ask U but U go first. (He takes a sip of water)
K-Mujhse shaadi Karoge?
Ranbir spits the water out of his moth and starts coughing.
K-R U ok?
R-Yes i'm fine. U want to marry me?
K-Yes. I know U R a great guy who isn't after my money and a very proud man. I love your daughter a lot and i guess need a companion. U can feel free to think about this proposition. The decision is yours. I do have a few things to say though. I can't live inyour house and i understand that U can't live in mine so i was thinking maybe we can buy a place of our own together.
R-U really R serious.
K-I don't joke about marriage. I think U know me well enough to know that by now. Please say something. anything. I feel awkward as it is. Just ask me what U wanted?
R-I was going to ask for your hand in marriage. Esha has been playing up and making absurd demands. So the answer is Yes.
Kanya hugs Ranbir. Ranbir taken aback does the same. His job was made easy. Ranbir left the room. Kanya picked the phone up and called Esha she was home for her lunchbreak. Kanya told Esha the good news with Ranbir overhearing them speak.
K-U R happy now?
E-Ecstatic!
K-Now please break your hunger strike. If anything happens 2 U? I don't want U ill Esha. Please eat something. Promise me.
E-I will.
K-Mummyji ko bhi kaho kuch kaye. Will call U later.
E-Bye.
Ranbir knew he was doing the right thing. Kanya loved his daughter which was great. Thats exactly what Esha wanted but he would be in a loveless marriage. He did care for Kanya and he knew she wasn't anything like Ekta as Kanya was a self made woman and independant. He needed someone like that for Esha. Some strong role model as Kanya wasn't like before. Her hard shell was no longer visible and showed her vulnerable side to Esha and from the way she was with Pooja he knew she was a passionate woman.
K-U didn't over hear that conversation did U Ranbir?
R-I did and want to thank U.
K-Trust me Ranbir your daughter has brought life in my hectic dull life. She's a good girl Ranbir.
R-So U feel pressurized into this?
K-Anything but. With U i feel safe and a lot more that i can't say right now. I trust U with my life. One thing i can reveal is I love your daughter as if she were mine. I might be young and appear heartless but i'm not a shrewd woman Ranbir. Ur daughter just made me speed up doing what i always wanted to do. Love is not on my agenda and i know its not in yours but Esha needs stability. I guess U feel pushed into this.
R-Weirdly i don't. In my heart it seems like its what i'm suppose to do but i am worried about what people would say for linking myself with a rich woman like U.
K-People can get lost. What matters is us. I know Dad loves U and my Mom. Harry who knows what he likes and dislikes as he's too stoned and moving out of my house will be good for me.
R-Better get back to work. Chat later.
K-Definately.
After work Kanya goes to see Pooja and just spends the whole hour talking about Ranbir and her feelings for him. Trying to rationalize everything.
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome Update!
Yes,they are going to get married!
Please Continue Soon!
Also,make it longer if you can.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooo ya rahima i want it longer i want more of ur brill writing!
brill part as always continue soooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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brill update... pls continue soon
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Part 16
Recap- Kanya and Ranbir agree to get married. Esha finally sarts to eat as the Wedding day drew near. Kanya goes to visit Pooja.
The next few days for Kanya R hectic as she devides er tim between work, hospital, spending time with her own family as well as Ranbirs just so that everyone could live harmoniously together unfortunately it was easier saide than done. Ranbirs nephews and nieces stuck around to see Kanya. Archie tried her best but hospital shifts were everywhere as they were short on staff. Malika and Big D were present but Ranbirs brothers were run rugged due to their wives demands. Ayaan bechara was engaged to Shanaya a rich industrialists daughter who threatened she'd die if she didn't get Ayaan and to save her he said yes.
Ranbir had supported Kanya and had taken up the senior Managers post to help Kanya sort out business as she'd fallen behind on work trying to jugging 5 things at once. On top they had to do house hunting which wasn't an easy task as they had to look for something that Ranbir was able to afford. Kanya's Dad Anand was glad that Kanya was getting her act together. They took Esha in many of their house hunting trips. Esha wasn't much help as she didn't bother where they lives so long as they were all together.
They had finally come past this one place that was perfect. It was away from prying eyes with Kanya being so rich she always had the paparazi following her wherever she went. It wasn't what Kanya was used to. It was fairly small and cute. Very homely just right for 5 people in their family though it had 3 bedrooms. Big D and MAlika would move in with them. Esha and themselves. It was a long drive to work but at least it was affordable for Ranbir. The place needed renovating and Kanya decided that she would do the whole thing herself and Ranbir would be in charge of the business. She decided she would appoint a co- manager so that whenever Kanya was too busy Ranbir could easily take over. He was good at running things anyway.
K-Perfect!
E-Any place is perfect if er R all together there.
R-U girls get very senti about these things its just a place.
E-U did not just say that. Just a place. Its our place. Our new home.
R-We haven't even moved in yet.
E-I have a good feeling about this place.
K-Then its settled. I will make sure this place looks like a home. I will make sure we get this done up. Esha can help after all it is the holidays almost.
R-U girls have totally pushed me out.
K-U can handle the business side of things and please teach my brother the meaning of work.
R-I can't it looks bad.
K-Ranbir if i can change my way of life to suit U. U can change your post to something higher. Its not like U don't already run the place in my absense Dad has been praising U highly and if he says U need to be promoted then its a long time coming. If U want we can even branch out in a few months and give some responsibility to some senior staff and train up your brother Sid and my brother.
E-She's right Dad.
R-Fine its a metter of a few weeks right!
K-Depends when we get the house sorted by and i'll get some time to spare with Pooja.
R-I see U R trying to shaft all the hard work to me while U 2 relax.
K-We promise the painting job we can share it out. I would have hired my own renovators but i want to feel like i've put some input other than money.
R-Ok U win. Shall we go?
They take the keys to the house and leave. Kanya goes to the hospital to tell Pooja all about her new house. Kanya had spoken to one of the nurses that told her that although Pooja was comatose she could hear everything and maybe something she says or does can bring her back.
K-Pooja i wish tu dekh sakhti main kitni kush hoon. I've bought the best family place ever and i'm finally cutting down on work to concentrate on my house so that once were married Ranbir and I can move in permanently. In the meantime i will pester U everyday until U wake up. So don't even think about giving up. Maybe my nagging U everyday for hours on end will make U come to life. I need U there with me for when i get married. Things R moving slowly in the direction i want them. Ranbir is nearly mine. I'm sure with time he will learn to love me. Sirf teri kami hain. So U get well for me.
Kanya sits a few hours waffling on and on about Esha and many more things occasionally shedding a few tears. She knew if Pooja wasn't in a coma she would have been going on about how Kanya is turning into a typical Saas bahu type heroine who's outer shell had been cracked to reveal her soft interior layer. She missed her friends faltu jokes.
A few more days have the same outcome with Kanya doing the same routine only this time Ranbir is doing all the hard graft while Kanya goes to the DIY shop to pick up supplies with her brother Harpal to help her with the chores but he turned out to be really bad at DIY so ended up buying one of everything in the store apart from paint. She knew what colour she wanted which was ivory for downstairs and for upstairs she had pink paint and for her room she had white/blue colour and for the other room it was green.
Ranbir comes home and is just a little annoyed with the whole house being cluttered with everything. He decided to take Kanya himself and return things that weren't needed. He had to admit Kanya didn't do things in half.
R-If U didn't know what to get U could have called me?
K-U would have laughed at me. Its all Harry's fault.
R-Well at least now U know for next time.
K-I think next time i'll get U to do this. I wanted a challenge and definately got one.
E-I have to admit it was really funny watched Hary uncle with Kanya. Both clueless.
K-U sat there and didn't help.
E-Sorry baba but then i wouldn't have got to see the worked up Kanya and Dad wouldn't have made this trip with us.
R-I better take U to the Godbole house its getting late.
K-I didn't even realize the time. Esha tomorrow U me and hopefully all the Nanda boys whoever R available to help us out.
R-I feel so left out now.
K-Don't worry U have lots to do like paint with us.
R-The fun job
Edited by matwamango - 17 years ago

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