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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here is its fourth part.....


PART 4

Dev was still laughing.

shruti- that was really not funny.

shruti said angirly,so dev tried to stop his laughter,

dev- ok baba.m sorry.

shruti- waisey iss tarah ke fazool mazaak tum jaisa idiot hi kar sakta hai.

dev- haan haan i know.mujh jaisa talent kisi aur mein kahan hai.

shruti- yeah right.talent of idiocity.

dev- acha baba now forgive me.aur kitna danto gi ab.

n then whole night they spend talking on different topics...n morning lights started spreading everywhere around.

dev- chalo.subah ho gayi.phir se apna safar shuroo karen.

they got some edibles n water in dev s shoulder bag.so they ate a little n again started walking in the forest in search of the right way to exit the forest.

dev- water bottle mein paani bhi khatam ho gaya hai.kahin se paani dhoondhna parey ga.pata nahi raasta toh kab tak miley ga.

he looked at the map in his hand,

dev- waisey mujhey apney teachers se itni carelessness ki bilkul umeed nahi thi.hamein ghalat map pakraa kar jungle mein bejh diya.

he crushed the map in his fist n throw it aside.

shruti- arey.map kyun phaink diya?shaid kahin kaam aa hi jaata.

dev- issi map ki wajah se hum ghalat raastey par aayey hein.iss map ka koi faida nahi hai kyunki yeh sahi nahi hai.

instead of being at the edge of forest,they were reached in middle of the thick,dark forest.moreover they did not find water anywhere.

shruti- dev.mein bohat thakk gayi hon.mein aur nahi chal sakti.

as it was getting mid noon n the sun was right over their heads,shruti was much tired now.

dev- chalo.thori derr yahin ruktey hein.

there was a very big oak stem lying horizontally on the ground.they both sat on the stem there.

shruti- dev.hum ne apni grass strips toh collect ki hi nahi.

dev- tum itni intellegent kyun ho shruti...silly girl wahan teachers ko ab grass strips se kahin zyada hamarey faces dekhney mein interest ho ga.kal shaam se hum wahan wapis nahi pohanchey,sab wahan kitney preshan hon ge u know that.

dev said irritatingly.

shruti- haan haan.pata hai mujhe.

shruti said,making a bad face.

after a while,dev said,

dev- mera khyaal hai paani talaash karney k liye kuch karna chahiyey.mujhe toh abhi se pyaas lag rahi hai.tum yahin betho,mein yahan aas paas paani dhondney ki koshish karta hon.

shruti- okk.

dev took empty water bottle in hand n walked away in search of water.he started walking towards a side.n went a little far away.he was walking n looking here n there in his own thoughts.when suddenly he heard some shouting.n he realized that was shruti shouting his name aloud,

shruti- dev....

it just clicked his mind in a moment that shruti is in some problem.n he just ran back with all his force.while running fastest,he heard her shouting again n tried to increase his running speed.n as he reached there,he saw there were two boys standing.one of them was holding shruti by her arm.both were looking like typical tapooris of this type backward areas.dev did not think anything more n he just ran towards them.first he gave his strong punches to the boy standing front.n then he pulled the other one which was holding shruti s arm.n he just satarted beating him.n suddenly the first one got up n take out a big size knife n pointing it to dev,he said

first boy- bas hero.bohat hero bann chuke,ab bas.

dev s hands stopped.shruti was standing behind shocked n horrified.dev looked at her.n suddenly some unknown force emerged in his veins n he jumped on the first boy n pushed him back but he did not fall down.instead he whirled n the knife in his hand passed cutting dev s right arm just below the shoulder.

shruti- dev...

shruti became scared seeing the blood flooding from dev s arm.but dev did not cared much,he first had to get rid of these two professional goons.so he again moved to that boy n somehow he managed to get his grip on the knife n he hold the cutting side of the knife in his fist tightly,trying to snatch it from the boy s hand.now dev s hand was also bleeding.

dev- shruti.tum jao yahan se.go to that side.

he mentioned to one side,telling her to go.he had to save shruti.nothing else he thought,not even of himself.

dev- just go.

but shruti did not move.she was just looking at the blood drops falling from dev s hands to ground.

dev- i ll be there in some time.just go now.

but shruti just stood still.n suddenly dev succeded to snatch the knife from that boy s hand.until then the second boy was also back n he hit dev.so the knife fell down on the ground at some distance.but now dev did not give them a chance to take it back.he just started giving punches to both of them.they both were injured now.n as dev was pulling one of them from his coller,he spotted shruti who was standing behind.she suddenly fell down on the ground being unconcious.dev left the boy at once n ran towards shruti.the two boys were really injured now.so they both ran away from there now.dev went to shruti n calling her name,he tried to make her consious.

dev- shruti...shruti aanken kholo...hey kya ho gaya tumhein.shruti.

putting her head in his lap,he remained saying.but she did not move.dev became so worried that even tears filled his eyes.he did not know what to do.

dev- shruti...

after a while he found that he has to do something.first thought he got of searching water.but he just could not leave her alone now.he just lifted her in his arms n started walking.his arm n hands still bleeding but he was not concentranting on his own pain.only thing he cared about was shruti.so he just roamed here n there in the forest lifting the unconsious shruti in his bleeding arm n hands.n then fortunately,he found a wooden cottage there in the forest.he ran towards it n from outside the door,he shouted.

dev- hello...koi hai?...hello...

after a while an aged woman opened the wooden door.

dev- aunty...aunty please help us.dekhiyey naa issey kya ho gaya hai.ahanak se behosh ho gayi.

woman was shocked seeing both of them in such bad condition.

woman- haan haan beta.aao ander aao.

woman hurriedly opened full door.dev entered the small cottage taking shruti.

woman- issey yahan lita do.

she pointed towards a wood made bed placed there.dev moved forward n laid shruti down there.

dev- aap kuch kijeye naa.issey hosh mein laayey.

he was still saying,avoiding his own wounds n pain.

woman- haan beta.lekin tumhein bhi kitni chot lagi hai.tum araam se betho mein kuch karti hoon.tum wahan betho.

dev sat there on other one wooden bed.woman first brought him water.she also made shruti drink some water somehow.n then she made her drink some liquid medicine prepared by forest s herbs.

woman- mein ne ussey dawai de di hai.lao tmharey zakhmon par bhi dawai laga don.

she put some medicine on dev s arm n hands wounds n bendaged them.then she offered dev some hot milk.

woman- iss se dard kam ho jayey ga.

dev took that.after a while,woman said,

woman- beta.tum thori derr araam kar lo naa ab.so jao.

but dev was looking at shruti who was lying there with her eyes closed.how could he sleep when shruti is not fine.

dev- aunty.shruti ab tak hosh mein kyun nahi aayi.yeh dawai asar toh karey gi naa.

woman- haan beta.woh hosh mein aa jayey gi.tum fikar mat karo.

dev- lekin...kitni derr ho gayi.woh...woh kyun nahi uth rahi hai.

dev was at the heights of helplessness.shruti is lying unconcious before him n he could not do anything.he was feeling like his world is going to end in front of his eyes n he is not able to do anything.

woman- uth jayey gi beta.aur phir jis ke paas tum jaisa pyaar karney wala aur khyaal rakhney wala ho ussey kuch nahi ho sakta.jab se tum aayey ho apney zakhmon ki fikar kiyey bina sirf ussi ki fikar kar rahey ho.ussey kuch nahi ho ga.yeh jungle ki jarhi bootiyon wali dawaian ahista ahista asar dikhati hein.waisey tum logon ke saath aisa kya ho gaya,itney zakhmi kaisey ho gayey tum?

dev told her the whole incident.

woman- bas beta.aisey weraan elaqon mein aisey bohat ghundey ghoomtey phirtey hein.inn ka toh kaam hi sab logon ko preshaan karna hai.

while they were talking,shruti opened her eyes slowly.the woman noticed so she said,

woman- lo.ussey hosh aa gaya.

hearing this,dev ran towards her n he sat down on the floor besides her bed n putting his hand on her forehead,he said happily,

dev- thank God tumhein hosh aa gaya.mujhey kitna preshaan kar diya tha tum ne.agar tumhein kuch ho jata toh.meri jaan hi nikaal di tum ne toh.

dev was saying n shruti was looking at him.



okkk guys thats it for now.please do comment.
Edited by cool_adeena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Hey Adeena its so sweet yaar.Ha isbar thoda movie style laga lekin achchi hain. Keep it up. 😊
Edited by ocean_girl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: ocean_girl

Hey Adeena its so sweet yaar.Ha isbar thoda movie style laga lekin achchi hain. Keep it up. 😊

Thanksss😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
hyeeeee adeena
nice part....full of Drama--Action--Emotions 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona.b

hyeeeee adeena
nice part....full of Drama--Action--Emotions 😉
👏

Thanksss😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

okk guys.here s next one....

PART 5
Shruti saw a lot of care n concern on dev s face for her.

shruti- dev....

she said slowly,trying to be in full consiousness n to know where she was right now.

dev- tum theek ho naa.how r u feeling now?

shruti- yeah.m fine.

shruti said trying to get up.

dev- araam se.

dev helped her to sat up on bed.just then the old woman brought her water.n then she brought some fruits.

woman- tum log kuch kha lo.mein khana bhi tayaar karti hoon.

she said n went to prepare some food for them.dev sat there on the bed with shruti.when shruti noticed his bandaged arm.

shruti- tumhara zakhm kaisa hai ab?

dev- much better.apney inn becharey zakhmon ko toh mein ne importance hi nahi di.tum ne hi darra kar rakh diya tha mujhe toh.

dev again came to his old tone n said lightly while eating the apple piece.

shruti- dev.tum sach mein merey liye itna preshaan ho gayey thay?

shruti asked looking at his face.

dev- no sweet heart.mujhe preshaan honey ki kya zaroorat thi aur woh bhi tumharey liye.

shruti- what...?

dev- toh aur kya kahoon ab mein.pooch toh aisey rahi ho jaisey tumhein pata hi nahi.ofcourse mein preshaan tha.

shruti- aur yeh baat pehley bhi toh keh saktey thay naa.pata nahi tum seedhi baat ka seedha jawab kyun nahi de sakte.

dev- seedhey jawab don ga toh tumhein tang kaise karoon ga.

dev winked at her smiling n got up to have water.shruti just remained looking at him...he was very sweet...n naughty....n caring....n everything else.he was a person anyone would love to have in life...

dev- hello.kahan kho gayi?

he came back n said so shruti came out of her thoughts.

dev- chalo uth kar fresh ho jao.aunty ne khana bana liya hai.

shruti- yeah.

she said n got up.dev took her out where aside the door,hamper was present.while going out,shruti turned n said to him.

shruti- tum betho.i ll manage.

dev- naa...cant leave u alone now.

shruti looked at him at this.n as always next moment his seriousness again vanished n he came forward laughing.

dev- arey yaar tum se woh hamper nahi chalayaa jayey ga.pata chaley tum phir se behosh ho gayi toh.

saying this he moved forward.while shruti remained standing there,starring at him.

dev- kya hua?

shruti- tum hamesha aisey kyun kartey ho?

dev- kya?

dev said as if he did not understand.

shruti- ek pal ke liye itney serious ho jatey ho aur agley hi pal saari seriousness aur emotions bhool kar hasney lagtey ho.samajh mein nahi aata tumhara asal roop konsa hai.

dev- aisa hi hoon mein toh aur mujhe samajhna itna asaan nahi hai...ab jaldi karo naa,mujhe bohat bhook lag rahi hai.

shruti shook her head n came forward.n then after freshing up n splashing the water on each other,they went inside the house laughing n talking happily.the woman was waiting for them with prepared food.they started eating.

woman- khana theek toh hai naa beta?

shruti- sirf theek nahi bohat acha hai aunty.

dev- haan aur waisey bhi itni bhook lag rahi thi naa,isiliye aur bhi acha lag raha hai..

after having lunch,they were having tea,when shruti said,

shruti- aunty hum log aap ka shukria kaisey ada karen.agar aap nahi hoti toh pata nahi kya hota.

woman- arey beta shukria ada karna hai toh apne....

she stopped n asked,

woman- tum dono....?

dev- dost hein.

dev understood her question n answered it.

woman- dost....?

woman smiled as if she did not beleive that they were ONLY FRIENDS.

dev- kyun.kya hua?

woman- kuch nahi beta.

n then she said to shruti.

woman- tum apne dost ka shukria ada karo.yeh tumhein sahi waqt per yahan le aaya.warna kuch ghalat ho sakta tha.

dev- aisey kaisey kuch ho jata.merey hotey hue issey kuch nahi ho sakta.

dev was saying to the woman n shruti once again was being lost in his magical caring words.suddenly she shook her head...what was happening to her.she was going lost in dev s smiling eyes again n again.it was really strange.she tried to come back in her senses.n listened to what he was saying now.

dev- aap hamein raastey ke baarey mein bata den k jungle se bahar kahan se nikal saktey hein.mera khyaal hai hamein ab chalna chahiyey.

woman- arey beta.aaj tum log yahin ruk jao naa.merey pati shaam tak wapis aayen ge.aur raat ko toh jungle mein jana zyada khatarnaak hota hai.woh kal subah khud tum logon ko chor aayen ge bahar sadak tak.

dev- nahi aunty hum aur nahi ruk saktey.wahan sab log hamarey liye bohat preshaan hon ge.hamein jaldi wapis pohanchna hai.aap hamein raasta bata den hum khud chaley jaayen ge.

shruti- haan mujhe bhi lagta hai hamein abhi chalna chahiyey.

woman- theek hai beta jaisey tum logon ki marzi.

the old woman guided them about the way to exit the forest and also gave them some food n water.n when they were about to leave,the old woman siad,

woman- meri apni koi aulaad nahi hai.tum dond merey bachon ki tarah ho,isiliyey mein chahoon gi k tum dono hamesha khush raho.shayad phir kabhi tum logon se milna na ho isiliyey keh rahi hoon k tum dono apney rishtey per ghor karna.sochna k tum dono kahin apney rishtey ko ghalat toh nahi samajh rahey ho.

shruti was about to say something when the woman interrupted her.
woman- meri baat per ghor zaroor karna beta.kabhi kabhi hum khud apney hi dil ki baat nahi samajh paatey hein.abb tum log jao,shaam honey se pehley jungle se nikalna hai naa.
now dev n shruti could not say anything.they just said goodbye to the old woman n started their journey again.
after walking a while silently,shruti spoke up,
shruti- dev.yeh aunty kya keh rahi thi.mujhe toh kuch samajh nahi aaya.
dev had understood very well that what the old woman was saying but he just shook his head and said,
dev- mujhe kya pata.yeh barrey bhooron ki batein toh waisey hi merey sarr ke 2 feet ooper se guzar jati hein.
he said n laughed.
shruti- yeah right.mujhe tum se yehi umeed thi.
shruti said irritatingly.dev did not say anything now.again they walked a little far in silence.then dev said worriedly,
dev- i hope k unn logon ne hamarey ghar per inform na kiya ho k hum log jungle mein kho gayey hein warna mamma bohat preshaan ho jayen gi.
shruti- haan.woh toh hai.merey ghar waley bhi bohat preshaan ho jayen ge.but i guess unho ne hamarey gharon per inform kar diya ho ga.aisi situation mein sab yehi sochtey hein k family ko inform kar dena chahiyey,unn se kuch nahi chupana chahiyey.
they went on walking during the common talks.the distance to the road was not much longer n moreover now they knew the right way so they reached to the road in appropriate time.it was just getting dark by the time when they reached the road.but the road was clean n empty at all...no transport.they stood there at the edge of the road.
dev- ab yahan se koi bhi transport mil jayey bas.
and as the evening was reforming into dark night,they spotted a truck coming towards them on the road.dev moved forward n waved his hand,mentioning the driver to stop the truck.n fortunately the driver stopped the truck near them n came outside from the truck.he was a sardar.
papa ji- ooyey tussi kon ho?iss waqt raat ko idhar kya kar rahey ho?
dev- aap please hamein shehar tak chor saktey hein.hum students hein,college tour per yahan aayey thay aur jungle mein raasta bhatak gayey.
papa ji- ooyey hoyey raasta bhool gayey.koi gal nahi badshaho.aaj toh saara truck khali para hai,mazey se betho.zaroor chor den ge ji aap ko shehar tak.betho,peechey betho.
dev- shukria papa ji.
papa ji- oh naa ooyey.shukria vukria na karo.saada farz hai doosron ki madad karna.chalo betho shahbaash.
shruti who was standing silent till then,moved to the open backside of the truck along with dev.dev first put his shoulder bag in the truck n then he jumped up n got in the truck.then bending down he gave his hand to shruti so that she can easily got in the truck.as shruti hold his hand,her eyes met dev s sparkling naughty eyes n she just lost herself in his eyes.she was feeling like some magical force in those eyes is attracting her again n again.she was froze there when dev pulled her hand n as she was not in her senses,she could not manage herself n getting on to the truck she striked with his chest.dev looked at her beautiful face.they were so close that they were able to feel the warmth of each other s breath while looking into each other s eyes n shruti s hand was still in dev s hand.they were standing lost in each other when papa ji s craving voice got both of them back in reality.
papa ji- ooyey badshaaho beth gayey tussi,gaddi chalaon kya?
he was shouting from the driving seat.dev first moved his eyes off shruti n then let go of her hand.shruti lowered her eyes n slowly moved from there n sat down there with backside of driving seat area.dev also sat there with her n then said in loud voice to papa ji,
dev- haan.chaliyey papa ji.
so papa ji started the engine n then the truck was moving on leaving the road behind.the moon was shining fully in the sky,seemed like it was 14th of moon.the dreamy cool moonlight was spread all around them.they both were sitting silent trying to understand what had happened to them a little time before.dev looked at shruti.she was lost in some deep thinking.he kept on looking at her n then suddenly shruti looked towards him n he shifted his eyes at once n started starring on his own shoes.shruti also moved her eyes to the road which was going left behind n behind....they both were sitting silent as if now words have finished for them.
okk guys thats done for now.do tell how is it.
Edited by cool_adeena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
its really nice part
heheh Dev-Shruti mein Kuch-Kuch ho raha hai😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona.b

its really nice part

heheh Dev-Shruti mein Kuch-Kuch ho raha hai😉

😉...koi na jaaney kyun chen khota hai...kya karoon hai kuch kuch hota hai😃...i just love both of them yaar😳
n thanksss for liking😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Hi Adeena, this part is really nice. I really liked it very much. eagerly waiting for the next part.⭐️👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ocean_girl

Hi Adeena, this part is really nice. I really liked it very much. eagerly waiting for the next part.⭐️👏

Thank u sooo much😛
ll try to update soon😊

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