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wooow grt promo pls continue soooon

Thanks sooooooooooo much sweeetie
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Hey swanzy..finally u updated!! srry I'm commentin late...bt @least m commentin!! 😛 I really missed ure FF n itz gud 2 b readin it gain I'm glad u started reading it again

I dunno y Ridz is behavin soo weird wid Ammy..she lykkz him bt shez scared he myt leave her later!! cnt she c d love for her in his eyes..crazy gal..i wud go mad if i wz in Ridz placce..obviously ova him!! hmmmm well u'll find out later why she's behaving soo weird
Ashly n Rith's story is kinna cute..d way dey wer textin btwn Art klass...!! Cute!! n dey bod get jealous really easily..Lol..Ashly actually got jealous of Rith-Ridz hu r lykk bro-sis....dey r more lively ..dey danced wid each oda..tat wz cute..unlykk d oda couples.. Thanks glad u enjoyed it😉
Baby V n Zac..dey hv a more of love-hate relationship... Baby V is too funny..n deir romance destinations..!! Lol...in d church..way tooo mch!! bt it wz cute...n Baby V got soo angry..or say jealous cuz Zac wz dancin wid sum oda gal n nt her!! everyone gets jeolous😆
Overawl awl of em share a nyc frndship or love bond...dey hv loadz of fun.n itz fun readin it also... ure precaps alwyz leave us confused!! Thanks 😆 my precap are always unqui 😊
I hope Sharini dusnt brk AR relationship..n i hope dey r 2geta nw.ure ryt...der r a lot of qz buggin mee nw..bt den neva mind i cnt spill awl of em nw ryt... hmmmmmmm
Plzzz cont soon...if u g8 tym 4m skool..
Thnx 4 d PM
Aishwarya

Thnaks soooooooooo mcuh sweeetie
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wen u writin d nxt part?????waiting eagerly 4 it
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dedicated to nidha di i really hope u don't leave di and to sami di hope u have a great holiday luv ya both alotttt
Part 8. A
Hot and spicy
That what the call her
A totally new creature
That god has sent her
All guys go nuts
All the girls getting hurt
Will she change everyone?
And win her right someone?
By Swanzzy
Ammy walked in.............. his eyes fixed on ridhima. He was checking her out
He walked closer and closer
Ridhima lowered her eyes........... Her cheeks burning red
Armaan lifted her chin up... so their gaze was extremely powerful. And then armaan's face came closer to hers........... Ridhima tilted her face over both going the same direction and then.........................................
As they both got more and more close. Armaan caught her hair, his fingers scrunching them, was pulling her face closer to hers.
Ridhima caught his collar, she pulled him even closer. Armaan backed her on this stack of pole which was right behind her..... Ridhima's breathing fastened
*Riddz's thoughts* Oh armaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I missed u so much, i really hate myself so much for letting u go away from me, and how can I not love you? The way your intense gaze see's right through me, it makes me feel naked in front of you, like your just stripping me off right in front of you and i can't do anything cause i want you myself to be filled with your scent, your love , and your desire. Please let me in your dreams armaan. I can't stay without you; it's getting more and harder day by day. I wish u could read my thoughts................... armaan we are sooo close to kiss now, please let's just do this, i want you forever.
Ridhima's thoughts went wild as armaan was so close to kiss her, but would that ever happen
Armaan got even more closer, his fingers started coming out of ridhima's hair, his other hand which was on his waist just wasn't there anymore. His face that was right into her wasn't there now
And then...... armaan jerked himself back
Ridhima looked at him really, really confused
*Riddz's thoughts* Oh!!!! What happened?????????? Why did he move back??
Armaan just stood there in front her. Both shocked!!!!!!
Riddz decided to start a conversation otherwise they wouldn't get anywhere
Riddz: armaan??????????????????
Armaan: its ammy!!!! (He said very annoyed)
Ridhima looked at him
Riddz: fine ammy. Why??????????? Why did u move back?? (Very confused)
Armaan laughed
Ammy: ohhh so u wanted me to kiss you, so then later on you could come and abuse me
Riddz: armaan what are u saying???????
Ammy: remember riddz, on last Wednesday when you came to my house, we kissed, it was the most memorable thing for me, and I couldn't believe that actually happened. I was over the moon, on 9th cloud..............but u???????? What did you do, i said all those things to me, that u didn't love me at all and i was just playing with your feelings, RIGHT!!! I don't wanna be a part of whatever your playing riddz, i know u don't love me, so stop trying to get me closer to you cause if u do it i'll lose control of myself and then god knows what might happen
Ridhima stared at armaan, this was one of the most confronted things she would have ever heard
*Riddz's thoughts* No, no! No! No, no! No! No, no! No! Whyyyyyyyyyyyy??? Why don't i get him when i really want him??????? His turning out to be my everything in my life. I want him every bit of him, mentally, socially, physically and sexually. Urggggggggg i hate my life now, me and my big gob!! Why did i ever say all that stuff to him? Oh no i lost him. Ohhh
Ridhima just stood there, gazing at armaan, no one dared to say anything
*Armaan's thoughts*I'm sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm really sorry basket, you're my life, but to make u realise this i have to take it the hard turn. I'm really sorry love, i love u i really do i just wish u could realise it the hard way, because the hurt and pain you caused me i want u to learn it that way otherwise you'll take me for granted. I LOVE U RIDHIMA, but i guess now you'll have to learn it the hard way
Riddz: *crying* Armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
Ammy: All over riddz, it's all over
Ridhima had enough of him, how could he saw everything was over, he had no right to say that at all
Ridhima turned around, she took hold of armaan's collar and turned the positions around, so armaan was backed against the wall with ridhima holding his collar. No one could see them; all their friends were dancing along to the songs.
Riddz: don't u dare say that to me, u! U......................... urggggggggg, u have hurt me sooo much armaan
Ammy: ha! Ha, ohhhhhhhhhhh I've hurt u! Oh really, how about the hurt you've caused me on Friday? What was that Ok for u to do? Riddz you've hurt me alot
Ridhima looked at him
*Riddz thoughts* I've hurt him??????? How could i??????? I wish i didn't. I've lost him
Ridhima looked back up into armaan's eyes, his eyes, were just staring back into hers. Armaan's eyes were welling up
Riddz's hand went skinning from armaan's belly to his shoulders.
Armaan's breath increased as ridhima's lips went across his chest and stopped at where his heart was, she left her mark, right where it belongs in his heart. She stayed there with her lips lingering on his heart
*ammy's thoughts* riddz pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee stop, if u go further then it wouldn't help me, i would just pull u by your waist and kiss u. I want u like a moon needs the sun to shine
Ridhima's hands went around armaan's neck. Armaan's hands went around ridhima's waist and pulled her closer, her body pressing right against his. Ridhima hugged armaan more closer and armaan hugged ridhima back
Ammy: don't think that you're forgiven yet
Riddz: (laughs) hmmm i'll be the judge of that
Armaan pulled ridhima ever closer, nuzzling her neck and ridhima's hands and fingers clenching armaan's shirt
Slowly the pulled apart
*ammy's thoughts* ridhima sorry but i can't let u win sooo quickly
Ridhima looked at armaan she knew exactly what he was thinking
*riddz thoughts* don't worry armaan even if we don't get back together tonight i have my whole life just and just for u
Riddz: Hmmmm armaan why weren't u in college
Armaan laughed a bit and then walked away from riddz and started walking up the stairs onto the terrace of the club kiss
Riddz followed him up
Ok! Ok tooooo much of AR
I know half of u r confused to see AR together
But unfortunately your wrong, they aren't together yet
Ok, let's have a look at Hmmmm how about ZV
Zac was running after Vanessa as she got very angry at him because it was flirting with a lot of girls
*Vanessa's thought's* urggggggggggggggg guys in this world are such jerks and that uhhhhhhhhhhh zac is sooo annoying. Why am i even thinking? Those idiots fool.............uh
Zac: Vanessa................. Please try to listen to me
Vanessa stopped, but it wasn't that she wanted to stop but it was something he said
Zac came running in front of her
Zac: thank god u stopped Vanessa
Vanessa closed her eyes again she never felt so much hurt caused
Zac: i'm sorry, its girls what's the big deal
Baby V: yeah you're right, no big deal
Vanessa pushed past him and when to the bar
*Vanessa's thought's * yeah, whatever, boys in this world don't care about any of our feelings, and why on earth am i even thinking about all this
Vanessa went to the bar tender
Bar tender looked at her
BT: hey babes do u wants anything
Baby V: Hmmmm i'll have a ...................... vodka plz
BT: sure love
Vanessa took the vodka and went from there, drinking and drinking
And then she was completely drunk
She came back to the to the BT
Baby V: hmmmmmmmmmm Bar............tender i.......... urggggggggg wan nother vodkas
The BT looked her and he knew she was totally drunk
BT: (laughs) yeah sure my love, have another
Baby V: *laughs* T................h....................a...............n...........k........you
BT: it's ok angelz
Vanessa was running around the club with a bottle of vodka in her hand
Zac looked all around trying to find her and finally he saw her drunk, swinging all around the place
*zac's thoughts* OHMIGOD your kidding me, how on earth has the girl drunk sooo much.
While zac was going to go and get her, he bumped into rith and ashly
Rith: hey where on earth are u running up to?
Ashly: yeah zac what's up?
Zac: just turn around
Ashly and rith turned their heads around and juts gawked at the Vanessa, who was just standing there drinking and drinking small shots of tequilas near the bar
Ashly: OMG what happened to her
Zac: tell me about it????????
Rith: hmmm come one guys.............
Zac: where on damn hell is ammy and riddz
Rith: *coughs* Hmmmm i have no idea
*rith thoughts* Hmmmm ammy and riddz?????????
Zac: ok u guys just keep dancing, i'll go and get my kitty kat otherwise she'll turn into a tiger (laughing)
Ashly and rith went back to dancing, but ashly was still worried about Vanessa. Being together as sisters she couldn't let anything happen to Baby V
*Ashly's thoughts* ohhhhhhhhhhh Baby V hope she's fine, why did she drink soo much god this girl Na
Seeing ashly in her thoughts, rith decided to wake her up
Rith: hey............... ashly u there??????
Ashly: (coming out of her thoughts) yeah i'm fine sorry
Rith: hmmm it's ok
Leaving the subject there, they went back to dancing
As zac was running to get Vanessa, he bumped into a girl and she fell into his arms
Zac: oh i'm sorry
Girl: not as all sweetheart (she said flirtingly)
Zac felt a bit uncomfortable
Vanessa saw all this, she started fuming even more
Baby V: another tequila plz
BT: hmmm here u go angel
Baby V: thank you
Vanessa drank it, and now she was running too high
Zac looked at her and now he was even more worried as before
Zac: oh god, she's now proper drunken
Vanessa looked at him and was boiling in anger
*Vanessa's thoughts* how could u flipping flirt right in front of me. I hate him so much but why do I feel something else. I'll show him how to flirt and this time in Baby V style
Vanessa went to the DJ, very drunk
Baby V: hmmmmmmmm ex......chume, may......... well I u and us. Oops sorry i mean can I sing a song
The DJ looked at her and knew that she was properly drunk, being generous he wanted to find out who she came with and give her back to them but Vanessa wouldn't tell him anything she kept on saying singgy songgy
DJ: ok! Ok fine
The whole Kiss club went on silent, the songs stopped and then it went on again
Ashly and rith were just looking around confused
Ashly: hmmmmmmmm rith what just happened
Rith: I was gonna ask you the same question
Ashly: where's Zac???
Rith: how on earth am I supposed to know?
Ashly: I'll go and find him, wait here a second ok?
Rith: ok
Ashly went on to look for Zac
While Zac was on the look for Vanessa but he bumped into rith
Rith: god what the f**k u doing
Zac: finding Kitty Kat????? What else would I be doing?
Rith: urgggggggggggg god, Ashley's gone to fine u
Zac: well I haven't seen her yet
Rith: okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Zac: why is everyone going missing today???????? Have u seen ammy and riddz
Rith: hmmmmmmmm well no not yet
*rith's thoughts* and I'm sure they're planning on not to be found
Zac: Gods now where have u gone??
Rith: sorry just thinking
Zac: less thinky more looky
Rith: ok now u sound like a 4 year old child
Zac: whatever now please finds them?
Rith: fine
Back where Ashly was she was running around trying to find Zac but she bumped into baby v with the DJ
Ashly: OMG what happened to you???????
DJ: she wants to sing a song
Ashly: no way not in this condiction woman
DJ: that's what I said
Baby V: but I Wanna singgy songgy
Ashly took Vanessa in a hug
Ashly: baby V plzzzzz get back to sense
Baby V: I hate him I really hate him
Ashly pulled apart and looked into her eyes very confusingly, Vanessa's eyes filled with hurt and sorrow and nothing more
Ashly: what happed baby V???
Baby V: Zac!!!!! His flirting with all the girls
Ashly looked at her teasingly
Baby V: hmmmmmmmm what??????? Why is Ashly sis looking at me like that DJ BRO?
The DJ was laughing his hecks off
DJ: ooooooooooooooo so it's about a guy, why didn't I think about it at first
Ashly: because boys have highly less brain
DJ: heyyyyyyyyyyy
Ashly: u asked for it, and Baby V why do u care about ZAC???????
Baby V: he.............. And then he looks.............. And I HATE HIM
Ashly was giggling by the time she finished off the sentence.
Vanessa drunk was veryyyyyyyy funny to her. She looked sooo innocent and that too0 because it was all for a guy that she hated the most in college
Ashly put her arms around Vanessa
Ashly: how about I'll help u????
*Ashly's thoughts* I want rith as well but he only takes me as a friend i wish he could see me in a more GF way
Baby V: seriously would u help????
Ashly: for sure
DJ: what song girls?????
Ashly and baby V laughed
A & V: hmmmmmmmmmmmmm Raindrops from SASH FT STUNT
DJ: surreee
All the songs stopped all the lights went dim
Everyone was looking confused
Rith: OK what's going on???
Zac: OMG look over there
Rith's and zac's eyes shifted towards the girl sitting
The song started.
Vanessa was sitting on the edge of the stage
*Zac's thoughts* Oh god are u kidding me????? She looks wow!!!!!!
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Part 8 B
*Zac's thoughts* Oh god are u kidding me????? She looks wow!!!!!!

Hold my hand let's chase the sun ' Vanessa put her hand out
We both know something's begun - she pointed towards Zac
Nothin' feels that real without you - and then to her heart and up into the sky
Wanna learn so much about you ' she stood up and went o get a pen and paper and started writing something

Shining star I've seen your face ' A new voice started coming

*Rith thoughts* I swear I heard this voice somewhere its OH WOW she's Flipping hot

Everything falls into place ' Ashly came out from behind a pillar and towards Vanessa
nothing else seems to matter ' both of them shaking they're finders into a NO

Feels so lonely, - both jumped out of down from the stage
won't you show me, - both of them going around Zac and rith
Where I need to be, - Vanessa is like seducing Zac
You bring me to life. ' Ashly took both of rith's hand and put them around her wait and she kissed his chest. The whole club went wild

Feels like the raindrops on my skin, - All the girls went around the boys seducing all of them off
You reach me somewhere deep within, - rith took Ashly around a pillar as Ashly was just kissing his neck
You make my body come alive,- Vanessa put her arms around Zac and hugged him like there was no tomorrow

Baby V: YOU'RE MINE AND ONLY MINE GOT IT

you bring me to life. ' Zac hugged her back in full passion as both, his hands crunching her deep within

See it burning in my eyes, - vanessa pulled off and looked into zac's eyes
Don't want words, - Zac was gonna say something but vanessa put her finger on his lips
Don't want no lies, - Ashly looked at rith's neck, it was filled with her kissed lining through
They say more than what is spoken, - rith looked at her as ashly was gonna pull out, he pulled her back again
Promises always get broken. ' Vanessa and ashly both pulled away and ran to the middle of the floor and started dancing

Feels so lonely, - all boys came around towelling Vanessa and ashly
Won't you show me, - every boy took his own girl
Where I need to be, - rith pulled ashly and dipped her down gazing into her body
You bring me to life. ' All the boys picked the girls up and twirled them around

Feels like the raindrops on my skin, - the girls twilling around to the middle
you reach me somewhere deep within, - the boys dancing their way to them
you make my body come alive, - all girls shaking their hips
you bring me to life. ' The boys picked them high form the hips into the sky

I whisper things you never knew, - the boys slowly brought them back down and vanessa whisper to zac was that she wanted him for herself
I can't believe that tonight I'm here with you, - ashly poked her finger in rith's heart
You make my body come alive, - zac ran his hands down Vanessa's back.
You bring me to life ' rith pulled ashly by her hips, his hands crawling down her arms. Shivers went through ashly's veins

Sorry but i'll have to give u a bit away from the song, ok let's get back to have a look at AR i mean come on people you all are missing their romance, so let me take u back

As armaan walking up the stairs he saw ridhima following back up

They both reached at the terrace of the club, the wind blowing high the amazing sound of music pumping below them

Ammy: so what u doing here anyway??

Riddz: why, why can't i be here???

Ammy: just asking, don't get so stressed k

Riddz: i'm not stressed Ok?

Ammy: whatever u says

Riddz: what happened to u?

Riddz was pointing to his head bandaged

Ammy: oh a small accident!

Riddz: What??????????? Are u ok??? Did it hurt a lot??? Why couldn't u call and tell us?? I was worried damn sick about u?? Do u have any idea what I've been going through???

Riddz looked right into his eyes, saying all this things that she clearly meant it. He did hurt her but not coming to college for 3 days it was the world worst experience

Armaan pulled her closer by her waist

Ammy: were u worried??????

Riddz nodded

Ammy: why riddz why?????

Riddz: because we have......................... a project to finish so i had to be alert about it

Ammy: hmmmmmmmmmm ok, i'll but that for now riddz, but won't hind it forever u know

Riddz: armaan.......... sorry i mean ammy, u know i want u back and just for myself but this time u won't come back why????

Ammy: *laughs* why?????????? You're asking me why????? Cause u hurt me riddz, and i don't want to be with that person who can't understand their own feelings. I don't want u riddz and i don't need u either

Riddz looked down, if she would look up again her tears would have come trebling down, she can't let him see that he hurt her, she had to be strong and fight this battle without crying

Riddz: fine. I don't love you and guess what i never will

*riddz's thoughts* fine armaan, two can play this game. I don't want u and i won't need u either.

*ammy's thoughts* yes yes yes, well done basket, i want u just where i need u and in a few more days you'll be right in my plan and then you'll realise how it feels to be hurt. I love u jaan and i always will but plz just bear with me. Right now i just wanna kiss u riddz and i will. This kiss won't be remembered by any of us but i'll treasure it for life

Armaan pulled her closer

Ammy: look into my eyes

Riddz looked up, wiping away the hurt and torment he caused her few minutes ago

Ammy: promise me that whatever i do now you'll forget tomorrow and there's nothing between us

Riddz looked at him very confused

*riddz's thoughts* what is he on about???? What's he gonna do????? Now i'm getting a bit scared but i know armaan he won't do anything that would hurt my respect for sure. Nothing between us, don't know about that but right now i could promise u anything.

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm ok ammy, i promise

Armaan: close your eyes riddz

As ridhima closed her eyes she could now feel the song raindrops building up to the most romantic part of the whole song but would that happen to her the romance the passion and the amazing power of love

As the music continued

You bring me to life ' armaan brought her closer, his hands skinned down her arms

Feels so lonely, - he tilted her head right the opposite her's
Won't you show me, - riddz caught her breath, her arms went around armaan's again
Where I need to be, - one of armaan's hand was around ridhima's wait and the other well, it was gonna do something amazing
You bring me to life. ' The right hand of armaan's which was doing nothing went to the fire box, and he opened it and pressed the button

Feels like the raindrops on my skin, - downstairs water started pumping out of the room.
You reach me somewhere deep within, - rith and ashly were dancing along with their hands on each other's body
You make my body come alive, - armaan pressed his entire body weight on riddz's and their lips met
You bring me to life. ' Armaan's lips rotating alot ridhima's. Both of them kissing each other like there's no tomorrow

I whisper things you never knew, - armaan's hands scheming through ridhima's thigh, his hands stroking her beneath her dress. Every bit that he was touching her, it made riddz go even more crazy over him
I can't believe that tonight I'm here with you, -
rith and ashly dancing around each other
You make my body come alive, - everyone in the club was going crazy with the water from the fire was still sweeping across the whole club
You bring me to life ' vanessa and zac were running around each other picking each other up and sweeping across the dance floor

As the night continued the music brought more love between the 3 couple's

Armaan and ridhima slowly parted their lips turning crimson

The love between them was still there and it always will be

Breathing heavily

Riddz: armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan

Ammy: shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh u promised riddz? U promised!!!!!

Riddz: and i'll keep that promise

Armaan and ridhima just stood there staring at each other; there was nothing to be said. How could they even say anything???

As ridhima was looking into armaan's eyes, armaan's eyes fell onto the tiny droplets that were still there on ridhima's neck. Armaan moved ridhima wet her hair to the back as beautifully as he could he bend over and sucked the droplets and then kissing her neck. Ridhima kept on gasping saying her name again and again but armaan wouldn't stop he loved her too much to give up now. As armaan worked his magic all over ridhima he kept on kissing her next then moving to the centre of her neck and then kissing and biting her earlobe.

Riddz: ouchhhhhhhhhhh

Armaan looked up in sorrow

Ammy: i'm sorry, i'm really sorry riddz, and did it hurt too much???

Armaan looked veryyyy worried. Ridhima looked into his eyes; she tilted her head and just stared at him

*riddz's thoughts* why do i love him sooo much?????????? Why did i ever fall for him????

Ridhima slowly took armaan's face in her hands, she kissed her forehand and then moving to his cheeks

Riddz: i'll keep my promise armaan

As ridhima said that she ran out of the terrace and ran downstairs

*Armaan's thoughts* Oh basket i love u like hell, and that kiss was my best memory ever. I love u and i always will. But i really hope you'll recognise it the hard way cause u cannot take the easy ride when it come to ammy- oops i mean Armaan Malik.

Downstairs the whole club was on fire lolz i mean like dancing

Riddz walked downstairs trying to find ashly and Vanessa

Riddz saw both of them with rith and zac but this time it was the most shocking thing ever Vanessa and ashly were both drunk

Riddz: WHAT HAPPENED????????????????????

Rith: hmmmmmmmmmm actually Vanessa got drunk first and then while dancing ashly drank a whole bottle of vodkha

Riddz: WHAT????????????????? RITH, ZAC??????????? WHERE THE HELL WAS U????????????? WHY WEREN'T U STOPPING THEM?????????????

Zac: sorry but i'm not the one who wasn't her AT ALLLL

Riddz: i'm sorry but i had somewhere else to be

Rith: hmmmmmmmmmm where were u riddz?????????

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm i was up in at the terrace

Zac: ok and where on earth's armaan????????

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm well we don't need to worry about that but what happened to these 2

Ashly: hmmmmmmmmmm riddi i ................. fell he he .................... we both.............. drunk and then he he hehe he i fell and then song.........................................

Riddz: what the hell is she on about?????????

Rith: don't ask me

Vanessa: i wanna gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hommy home, i tired we all tired. I want ice cream

Zac: awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww she looks soooooooooo cute

Riddz: SHUT UP ZAC, not the point. We gotta get them home

Rith: well we can but where's armaan?????????? Riddz where is he???????

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i-

Zac: look there he is

Armaan was walking down the stairs and he noticed the girls with zac and rith

Ammy: what happened????????????

Rith: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nothing much just that these 2 are now totally drunk. Where the hell were u??????????

Armaan looked at ridhima from the corner of his eyes

Ammy: hmmmmmmmmmm i was on the terrace

*riddz's thoughts* Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no armaan why did u say that?????

Rith and zac both looked at each other confused

Rith: but riddz u just told us that u came from the terrace

Zac: yeah u did, were u 2 together????????

Ammy: no! No i just came down right now i didn't see riddz at all

Rith looked at riddz who was playing with her fingers nervously

Ashly: i want to singgggy songyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Baby V: I WANT ICE CREAM

Zac: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh k don't scream kitty kat

Baby V: ohhhhhhhh k zacccccccccccccccccccky

Rith: ooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Riddz: SHUT UP, we need to get them home

Ammy: ok get into my car

Riddz: but what about ashly's car

Ammy: hmmmmmmmmmm i'll tell someone else to bring it Ok

Riddz: Ok

Ammy: zac carry Vanessa and rith carry ashly

R & Z: WHAT?????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Ammy: yeahhhhhhhhhh carry them to the car!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rith: why us what u gonna do???????????????????????

Ammy: u got us in this mess now u guys help me and riddz out of it

Riddz: ha! Ha! Ha get going bhaiya

Ammy: bhaiya????????????? Since when did u guys become sibling

Riddz: since yesterday, now let's get going

Rith picked ashly up as ashly and Vanessa were now fast asleep, zac picked vanessa up and none of them moved they both stood there staring the girls the fallen for

Ammy: hmmmmmmmmmm riddz what going on??????????

Riddz: as least some people have realised to they love, un like other couple!!!!!!!!!!

Ammy: riddz???????????????

Riddz: what???????????

Ammy: u promised

Riddz: i don't care armaan, i don't want u and i know u don't want em either

Armaan pulled ridhima by her arm

Ammy: yes you're absolutely right, but there's a small problem

Riddz: what????????????

Ammy: this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Armaan pressed his lips back onto ridhima's lips, they kept on kissing neither rith or zac realised cause they were facing the other face and too busy looking at Vanessa and ashly

Armaan hands were locked into ridhima's hair and ridhima hair locked onto armaan's neck

Riddz: why armaan?????????????? Why ??????????

Ridhima said breathing heavily

Ammy: because this would be last time we would ever be together and that would be it. By the way our projects complete so there's no need for u to come to my house or me coming to your or us meeting up.

Riddz: you finished it and that too without me??????????????????? (Shocked)

Ammy: yeap, i was at home so i might as well have worked on it and now u don't have to see my face every day and i don't need to see yours

Riddz: do u hate me that much??????????

Ammy: i don't hate u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just hate the things you said and did to me!!!!!!! So that would be it. My final kiss good bye

Riddz: never again????????

Ammy: never again

Ammy: *coughs* hmmmmmmmmmm guyssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Zac: Hmmmm yeah sorry we ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Ammy: don't wanna know, let's get going

They all walked to armaan's car in silent, ridhima was fighting with her tears she wouldn't let him see it at all

Rith, ashly, zac and Vanessa were sitting behind and armaan was driving and ridhima in the passenger seat

Ammy: hmmmmmmmmmm ok first house is, Vanessa's so zac get ready

Zac: get ready for what????????

Ammy: to carry her back into the house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rith: ha! Ha

Zac: how am i supposed to do that????

Ammy: you'll think of something

Zac: ohhhhhhhhhhh god

Riddz: can u drive a bit faster (annoyingly)

Ammy: why do u have to boss people around???????? (Annoyed)

Riddz: cause you're a buffoon

Ammy: WHAT?????????????? Like you're not a ..............a

Riddz: a.... a what??????????????? Exactly

Rith: GUYS STOP FIGHTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Riddz: well it was all u guys' fault??????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ammy: what no way!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was the girls' fault they should have been more careful

Riddz: yeah right!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't zac and rith stop them

Ammy: why were Vanessa and ashly drinking then?????????? Huh

Riddz: urgggggggggggggggggg your soooooooo annoying

Ammy: forget it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zac u ready, we're here

Zac: no i'm not ready, what am i supposed to do

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i have an idea, take her from the back yard no one ever is around there and then the doors always open from the back

Zac: how do know???????

Riddz: a veryyyy long story, now plz drop her off, her mom would be sleeping so go quick

Zac slowly opened the door and took vanessa in his arms

He walked to the back gate and walked in. The he opened it door and walked in

Zac saw the stair case and walked up stairs.

Zac: Okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk now which is her room???????????????????????

Zac first opened one door and there was snoring sound coming from there so he closed it right away

Zac: ok that one is OUTTTTTTTTT

Zac opened another door he walked in with Vanessa in his arms

He looked around, it looked like a small girl's room, and he dropped her on her bed. He looked around and then back at Vanessa. He bends over and kissed her on her head and walked off back to the car

Zac ran back into the car

Ammy: well done u did it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Zac: Ok shut up

Ammy: ok rith get ready and zac i'm dropping u off ok

Zac: kk

Armaan first went off and dropped zac and then to ashly's house

Ammy: ok go rith

Rith: nooooooooooooo what if i get caught then?????????

Riddz: urggggggggggggggg no one's at home

A & R: WHAT?????????????????

Riddz: i mean her mom and dad are gone out, there's a key in her purse open the door and go.

Ammy: wow you're an expert

Riddz: thank u NOT

Rith: fine

Rith went into the house and did the same as zac, he dropped her off on her bed kissed her cheek and came back

Rith: ok now drop me off

Ammy: fine

Armaan dropped rith off and then he was heading for ridhima's house

They both were alone in the car now

Neither armaan nor ridhima said anything

Armaan decided to put some songs on

Every day, I try to play, another game
But my heart can't take it.
I try to find, another boy,
But all the while, I can't face it.
Why do I miss you so much?
I wanna stop this hurt inside
Oh baby please, give us one more try

ridhima closed her eyes, yes she wanted him back. She wanted to give it another try

Ammy: hmmmmmmmmmm riddz your house is here

Ridhima eyes jerked open

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm thanks

Ammy: it's ok

Ridhima got out of the car and went home

Armaan sat there in his car

*armaan's thoughts* hmmmmmmmmmm mmmmm i love your taste riddz, it's sooo sweet just like strawberry, i just wish i could get u back but i need to take the hard way i'm sorry darling but i know will be back together soon

Armaan came out of his thoughts as he heard someone bang on his car window

He saw ridhima standing there in the cold shivering

Armaan slowly pulled the glass down and opened his side of the car door

Ammy: riddz what's wrong?????

Riddz: armaan u remember that u said to me that u wanted to treasure i last memory and u kissed me when u were coming out, i want to have a memory as well, tomorrow none of us will remember this, i promised u this and i'll always keep it

Ammy: hmmmmmmmmmm yes what do u want

Riddz: this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ridhima snaked her hands around armaan's neck, armaan's hands went around her waist and then the kiss began again......................... they kept on kissing. And then a raindrop fell from the sky and the kept on kissing in the rain. Slowly they parted to get some air

Ammy: bye riddz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Riddz: bye armaan

Ammy: hmmmmmmmmmm i like armaan on u sounds better

Riddz: i know

Ammy: bye

Armaan sat back in his car and drove off

A new day i new life

And sharini returns on Friday

Thursday went veryyyy well

Armaan and ridhima didn't talk to each other at all and they couldn't what would they have said

The whole day went well; zac and rith were busy teasing ashly and Vanessa which was totally funny

Friday

She walked out of the car

"Oh My god" said one guy

"She's still flipping hot man"

"Wow wow, this college is getting better and better everyday"

She walked in, more like glamoured in the college

She looked mega hot

She was wearing a Micro black mini skirt, with a baseless pink top; she looked out of the world

Any guy in this world would be on the edge of falling in love with her

But love wasn't in her dictionary it was only lust

She squitted along the place looking like a total slut but in a weird way a total angel

She looked around, 2 girls standing behind her holding her bag, her lunch, her drink and all her accessories

"WOW it's still sooo beaitful"

The college's principle came

"Welcome back Miss Sharini carboni"

"It's GLAD TO BE BACK" she said giving everyone a twirl

*Ammy thoughts* GLAD U HAVE U BACK SHARINI, this is gonna be one amazing time

Picture of sharini, get ready to be shocked

Sorry guys no precap

But a few FY1's

FYI 1: Firstly i hope everyone's Ok with sharini, i know there are loads on sukreeti fans and i respect them, so i'm not bashing her cause i love her too. So people don't judge sharini yet cause i don't know what gonna happen next

FYI 2: Guys i don't know when i might continue next, i'm veryyyyyyy busy

FYI 3: With U readers i might not be able to continue that Ff for a while but i need to finish it

PLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment guys

Luv ya

swanzzy

Edited by swansea - 16 years ago
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hey swanz, great part hun, n the new name finally coming along, sounded like armaan will use her to instigate ridz further!
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waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ so sweet😊😉 so armaan is angry nice😉 attitude😆 and others r also gud😊 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for dedicating me😊 as i dont leave for u all😛


"toot jatay hain sabhi rishtay, magar dil ka dil say rishta apni jaga, tujh se na milnay ka yaqeen hai magar, tujh se milnay ke dua apni jaga."




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amazing yaar swancy loved it thanx for pm
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hey swanz....after a veryyyyyyyy long time dear......loved ur update...how do u mange to write so well......gimme some ideas😆....thanx 4 ur pm
luv u
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amzin prt! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!

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