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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky_5

hey very sorry for late comment.......this part was superb.......emotions were very well described.......hate seeing AR seperated & depressed.......plzzzzzzzz bring them together sooooooon.......thanksssssss a lot for the pm & keep up the good work.........😊

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Heyya guys a big problem first
this part is realllly long so i devided it up by 3 bits
so this one's the first bit and the next 2 bits are below this post
so keep reading till u get up to the precap

anyway u need to know this
green writting stands for boys thoughts
pink writing stands for girls thoughts

So enjoy reading


PART 7

Anger and fury isn't going to get u anywhere

The more u fight the more you think your head gets light

Hate and love is one thing you shouldn't mess with

Cause one day your past will be lit

Today is a hard ride

Will they take the right side?

A new enterer

Will the person be the world of centre?

By Swanzzy aka me

*Saturday*

'I hate Saturday' he said getting out of his bed

'Get up bro, and No! U love Saturday' the other said trying to wake his best friend up

'Yeah come on ammy, what's wrong u sound sooo upset' rith said trying to make a conversation

Ammy: so what do u want me to do, dance around the house singing 'UP'' the boys the stood there dumbstruck to what ammy said

'What??????????' rith and zac said trying to remember what 'Up' was

Ammy looked at them like he was about to kill them right away

Ammy: that new song by 'The Saturday'

'Who?????????????????' the boys said now looking even more confused

Ammy: seriously guys, do u own a music channel?

Rith and zac looked at each other as they saw armaan getting out of his bed

Rith: ammy is everything ok?

Zac: yeah ammy, have u got a fever?

Zac touched his forehead and then his neck

Rith: i think i should go and get the thermometer

Armaan looked at his annoying friend

Ammy: GUYSSSSSSSSSS, I'M FINE, NOTHING WRONG WITH ME RITH, U DON'T HAVE TO GO AND GET A THERMOMETER. ZAC I HAVEN'T GOT A FEVER THERE IS NO NEED TO GO AND TOUCH MY BODY, I'M COMPLETELY FINE.

Armaan stood there, with his hand on his hips and fuming in anger

*Ammy's thoughts* God what happened to my friends, and why no hell is something wrong with me. Can they tell what happened, i really hope not than me hiding this whole 'ridhima' thing would get out really quickly

Zac: ammy have a sit

Armaan looked at him, as he was about to punch him right in his face

Armaan: I.............. DON'T........... NEED................ TO................ SITTTTTTT

Rith just looked at him

*Rith thoughts* ok something is surely wrong, this cannot be armaan i mean common. Armaan is sweet loving, funny and very naughty but never in my life have i ever seen him so angry. What's wrong with him, Oh god there's a lot of things going on in armaan's life and u know Na how he is. Very stubborn and now this new thing getting in his way i really hope that he can cope it threw. I need to talk to him, he won't tell anything to me if zac's around. But how???????? Maybe it's his parents! Or god knows maybe something else?

But before thinking of anything else, rith's thoughts were intercepted but a phone call

Rith picked his phone up: HELLO?

Armaan thought it was his phone as well so he picked his phone up: HELLO?

And zac who was busy trying to get armaan got of bed got his phone out as well: HELLO?

Zac: oh hi? How are u?

Rith and armaan looked at each other, giggling to themselves and put their phone's down.

Zac: oh yeah, yeap sure. Why not? Hmmm what about meeting right now? Hmm ok then i'll see u in 15 minutes but the Benz Cafe (zac put his phone into his pocket)

Zac: sorry guys, i can't spend Saturday with you, my cousin just called he wants to meet up so we can have some 'cousin time together' is that ok?

Ammy: of course zac, u need to get along with your family as well

Zac: oh thanks ammy i know u will understand me the best. Ohey rith is it ok with u?

Rith: (thoughts) Oh thank god

Rith: hmm yeap sure, why are u asking me, i'm not your wife! (LOL)

Zac came in front of rith and stood there with a serious face

Zac got onto one knee in front of him and knelt there looking into rith's eyes

Armaan got up now and went close to rith

Ammy: (to rith) mmmmm rith is there something i need to know between u too? (Armaan giggling inside his funniest sight ever)

Rith looked at armaan as he was about to murder him right away if he had got a knife in front of him

Rith: (to armaan) do u want me to kill? (Sarcastically)

Armaan just backed out from it and stood back

Zac took hold of rith's hand

Zac: rith??????? Would u MARRY ME??????????

Rith looked damn shocked and armaan was pissing himself laughing like a mad monkey at the back

Rith: WHAT???????? ZAC I'M GOING TO KILL U

Zac stood up and darted for the door

Ammy: (to zac) i think u should run my brother

Zac: and i think you're totally right

Zac ran from ammy's room and went into his car and drove off

Rith was about to run for him but armaan stopped him

Ammy: (laughing) i can't.... *laugh* u 2 *laugh* are the most *laugh* hilarious *laugh* creatures on earth *laugh*

Rith: HA! HA yeah. Yeah laugh, laugh

Ammy: come on rith, who wouldn't laugh at that, seriously

Rith: whatever. Now plzzzzzzzzz just go and brush your stinking teeth

Armaan laughed even more loudly

Ammy: fine! Fine, if it makes u happy

Ammy went into his bathroom with was in his room

Rith: (shouted behind him) it sure will

Armaan came out of the shower

His head dripping with water (*HAWT*)

Wearing a towel around his waist (*my god wish i was there*)

And shirtless (*that's a sight every girl wanna see*)

Walking into him own room he started up into the ceiling

He didn't even notice that rith was still there sitting in him room

*Ammy thoughts* why can't she just admit that she loves me too? I mean ok fine it's only been 4 days since we knew each other but can't feel fall in love in 4 days? They say Na love is blind? But why can't she see my love for her? Why does she think that i'm just playing with her feelings? I really love her; i don't wanna lose another person i love in my life! I really can't! But now i'll have to win her the hard way! I hope i can! But now i want her to realise that when she loses me than i'm gone and that's for good!!!!

Armaan got changed into his clothes (*ohhh that's bad*)

Rith: ammmmy?????????? Ammmmy????????? ARMAAN MALLIK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ammy: WHAT?????????

Armaan said very irritated

Ammy: what's wrong rith, can't i have a peace of mind? Love Christ! And what's the 'armaan malik'????? Armaan malik doesn't live in this world!!! GOT IT?

Rith: armaan what the hell is wrong with you, i mean you're never like this. What happened tell me!!!!

Armaan sat on his bed right beside rith

Ammy: Bhai!!!!!!

Rith caressed armaan's hair

Rith: (thoughts) ok now something is seriously wrong, the last time he said 'bhai' was when he was sad about his parents and when he told me about what happened then.

But now something is totally wrong

Rith: ok armaan what's wrong?

Armaan eyes was on the urge of watering but he holds it inside

*Armaan thoughts* no. No! I can't cry????? Ammy never cries' and that too for a girl. I can't let anyone see the emotional side of me. I can't tell rith, i know we are like brother but i still can't tell him about me and ridhima. Especially what happened on Thursday and Friday.

Rith: armaan spill

Ammy: hmmm there's nothing wrong rith

Rith: u call me your older brother and still u hind so much from me

Ammy: i'm not hiding anything bro, it's just that............ i had a bad dream last night

*ammy's thought* i can't tell u bro, if i tell u than u won't let me do it my way of winning her back i'm sorry bro, that i'm lying to u

Rith: u sure ammy????

Ammy: of course rith, i would never lie to u

Ok now i'm totally lying but what can i do this is the only way i can think of any way to hide the truth.

Rith: hmm ok ammy i'll believe u for now, but if anything's wrong please tell me ammy ok?

Ammy: yeap sure

*ammy's thoughts* oh thank god he listened; i would have been dead if he questioned me any longer. Rith i know you'll be super angry when u find out that i lied to u. But for now i'll just keep this secret a secret. Unless miss angry decides to tell her friends which i doubt will ever happen. But i'm gonna love this game.

Ammy: thanks bro

*Rith's thought* i know ammy that you lying and it's so clear when you're twitching your hands in your pocket. But i will find out the truth and i'll be listening when he wants to come and talk to me himself but now i won't push him any further.

Rith: hmm ok than, do u wanna go out somewhere today, cause i'm already bored

Ammy: hmmm how about??????? Hmmm we can go town and mess about!!!!

Rith laughed signing that armaan's small comment

Rith: hmmm messing about in town sounds perfecto............. (Putting in the Spanish rrrrrr in)

Ammy: we aren't doing Spanish this year!!!!!! We're going French. So spend more time no French

Rith: You mean read French books and learn French grammar (Rith looked at armaan in proper horror)

Armaan smiled and said: No i mean French 'GIRLS'

Rith: ohhhhhhhh now that's gonna be fun

They both ran downstairs

Rith: hmmm armaan aunty and uncle (Indicating where his parents were)

Armaan looked at rith with sorrow in his eyes

Ammy: probably; Paris, New York, Dubai, Rome, London and places somewhere else

Armaan said with sarcasm

Rith: armaaaan

Ammy: u wanted to know where they were and i'm giving you the probabilities of where they might be

Rith: ok plzzzzzzzzz don't bring maths into it

They both laughed at left Armaan's house

*Sunday*

'Dear god, i thank u for everything u gave to me in my life, i'm very happy that u gave me everything i wanted. Baby Jesus please make my mother understand where i want my happiness to be in, not in a vet but a beautiful singer. I want to make my dream come true. Will i have to sacrifice my dream to fulfil my mother's, plzzzzz not baby jesus i want to make my dream come true the dream that my dad had of me becoming the world most amazing singer and not a vet like my mom wants me to become, you're the only one that can help me through this hard time please be there for me through all hardship and sadness. Make me a better person in life' Vanessa closed her eyes as her thoughts were filled with all the things that were going on in her life

Sitting down in the bench inside the church

She saw the priest talking about people feelings hurt and he read a part in the bible

'Young men, in the same way be submissive to those who are older. All of you, clothe yourselves with humility towards one another because,

'God opposes the proud

But gives grace to the humble'

Humble yourselves, therefore, under the gods mighty hand, that he may lift you up in due time. Cast all your anxiety on him because he cares for you'

Vanessa closed her eyes and tried to understand every bit of the of the gospel

She tried to make the things that was written in the bible in her own words

*Vanessa's thoughts * baby Jesus is saying, always respect the older and behave with one another with goodness and never evil. Be humble to yourself and god will take care of u no matter what happens. That baby Jesus will lift the worries of us when we are in bad times.

'Don't try to think too hard kitty kat' a voice popped up from beside her in a low whisper

*Vanessa's thoughts* KITTY KAT????????There's only one person who calls me that and His here lolz this guy will never leave me in peace

Vanessa's eyes flung open and turned to look at the smirking guy beside her

The mass was still going on; the priest was doing the bread and wine ceremony, turning the bread into body of Jesus and the wine into the blood of Jesus.

Zac: hiiiii

Vanessa: shhhhhhh quiet, it's church

Zac: so?????

Vanessa signed: seriously guys are NO.1 jerk

Zac: OUCH

Vanessa: what? It's true! i mean in church baby Jesus doesn't like people talking. He likes people to listen to the priest and to take in the lesson which is said in the gospel

Zac: hmmm small question, since when did u started to name people

Vanessa: huh?

Zac: i mean its 'jesus Christ' not 'baby Jesus'

Vanessa: oh shut up, now be quiet i wanna listen OK? And i like calling Jesus 'baby Jesus' so get over it

Zac: fine! Fine stressy

Vanessa ignored the last statement and went to listen to the mass again

It was the time in the mass where all the people are supposed to go and received the body and blood of Jesus (bread and wine)

As it was time for Vanessa's row to go, Vanessa and zac were too close to each other their bodies were pressing onto each other

After taking their communion they were coming back to their seats. When Vanessa's foot got stuck on the feet on the bench and she was about to fall down, when she realised there was a hand creeping on her waist, the fingers were touching her skin his hand was inside her not on her clothes but inside it.

Vanessa and zac just stood there gazing into each other's eyes

The romance was gripping. Just by the intensity of his eyes it was like he was stripping her in front of everyone but she had to control it or they both would lose their face masks

*Vanessa's thoughts* Oh baby Jesus i'm sorry i'm gazing into this guy's eyes in the middle of your holy place, please forgive me. I'm not making a mistake, well i might be but i can't help it, his hands are just skimming into my skin. His fingers just caressing my waist with care. I wish he wouldn't look at me like that, i mean who would be able to look back and not blush. The way his looking at me, it's like his trying to get a look at every inch of my body and i just wish...........................

*Zac's thoughts* No, this is way too beautiful to end. Oh i wish i could just scream to the sky. But i just love her eyes their so warm and friendly. I like this Kitty kat it's much better than Vanessa. Kitty kat i know she loves the name as much as i do.

Coughs from behind interrupted them

Man: excuse me, but could u guys go and sit down

Vanessa was blushing in embarrassment

Vanessa: ummmm sorry

Zac: oops yeah sure we'll go in

After mass got over zac and Vanessa were about to leave

Vanessa: so did u come here alone?

Zac: yeas kitty kat

Vanessa: wow that's a start; the school's hottie goes to church!

Zac: yeap, so kitty kat thinks i'm a hottie than

Zac looked at Vanessa who was totally zipped. No answer came from her mouth, was it because she didn't have an answer or wasn't because what he said was true?

Vanessa: ummmm i.............. Actually

Vanessa's face was turning into a red cherry tomato

Zac started giggling seeing a sweet innocent girl think so hard about it

Zac: i was just joking kitty kat

Vanessa took a sign of relief because he was right at what he said and she had no way to answer that question

Zac: so kitty kat, wanna have breakfast with me

Vanessa looked at her watch, it was 9 am and mass just got over right now

*Vanessa's thoughts * Hmmmm i am hungry, well a lot hungry. Can't believe i missed breakfast and that too because mom was gonna start her VET thing again. I am hungry so yeah maybe.....................

Zac: hey kitty kat, do u wanna come or not? (He said grinning)

Vanessa: hmmm sure why not

Zac: good then let's go

Zac takes Vanessa's to his bike

Vanessa sits on the back and the zoom off to the best breakfast shop in LA 'Benz Cafe'

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*Monday*

"Ohhhhhhhh, Mama i don't wanna get up" she said trying to go back into her covers

"Beta, please sweety, it's your gonna be really late for school" her mom

"Mama i couldn't be bother" riddz said moaning

Finally without making more fuss ridhima woke up from her bed

After a lot of nagging and making, padma left the room.

She cried, for the first time ever in her entire life; she cried and that too for a guy? For ammy. Her armaan malik?

Padma: beta come quickly downstairs Ok?

Riddz: jee mama

Getting out of her bed as she saw her mom leave the room, she went to have a shower. But before whenever she used to feel bad and upset a bath would always do the trick and make her feel better but now it didn't feel this way, there was no cure for 'LOVE' it was a substance that came once and ruled through your body and makes you feel all tingly inside. Was love the feeling armaan was doing to her? Or was it just pure 'LUST'?

Coming out of her lovely shower which wasn't so lovely anymore because nothing affected her.

Standing in front of the mirror, her thought went wild again.................

*Riddz thoughts* i can't do it! Leaving without him is useless; it's like breathing with NO AIR. His every touch made me crazy; the first time we met was the best time of my entire life. Running down the stairs as fast as i could because i was getting late to my science class and then, there it was that we both met for the first ever time, his touch when he tried to get my hair from his buttons on his shirt, how i fell into his arms when he pulled me closer to him. My knees were surely getting week, i have no idea how i could be so close up to him. Well now i can't anymore, and i'm keeping it like this; i can't get close to him, what if he ends up breaking my heart? What if it's all for lust and not for love? Will i ever get to be back again into my own life than getting mixed up with the others? U don't know how insecure it feels............... think to yourself an ordinary girl going out with a Greek god like armaan malik, for people it's a dream come true. But have u ever thought of the other possibilities, the possibilities that are going through my mind again and again. The possibilities that the guy that may love: be lying to u? Doing everything just for lust? Never believing in love? Went out with more than 20 girls in his life? How would i feel now, going through all this things.....? Even i have my own life but is connecting my life with someone else be a good thing now????? And that too my armaan malik?????????? No!!!!!!!!! I don't wanna be hurt, and be upset...... i'm gonna forget that damn armaan and that too for my sake

Thinking to herself she left her house, without eating anything, would that be a good thing to do????????? With her condition worsening day by day!

Riddz decided to call her friends and tell them that she won't be coming with them. But they would just ask a lot of questions about why she was acting very weird lately so it would be better to take a good walk to college

Riddz was hearing music a really nice song called, superhuman by Chris brown and Kelly. Thinking about the word superhuman it made her remember science and thinking about science she had that subject today first thing

*Riddz thoughts* Oh god why is today turning out to be a dreadful day? I just wish i don't get messed up with him today! Please god i don't wanna 'SEE' his face in school today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally reaching school she went to meet up with her friends but she only found vanessa standing there

Riddz: hey baby V

Riddz said hugging Vanessa

Baby V: hey riddz

Riddz looked round and round 'where was she?'

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm where's ash

Vanessa giggled to herself

Riddz: what???????? Why are u laughing???????????

Vanessa swigged her head round indicating where ashly was

Riddz started giggling, that was a good start after hours of crying last night she finally started laughing

They saw, ashly with rith

Both of them just standing in the middle of their ground, laughing and talking about god knows what.

But the both looked extremely happy. Ashly's smile reached the top of her eyes, ash was just standing giggling about stuff maybe she didn't even know but she was happy, happy for herself and the guy beside her

Riddz: (Giggling) do u think they.............? (Riddz left the last few words speak for it)

Vanessa nodded her head, approving on the last few unspoken words that riddz left

Baby V: well it looks like it, rith's a nice guy, very sweet kind and a hottie but i just hope ashly thinks about the things she's gonna do further in her life or she might regret them later on

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm your right, she has to take the right step or she might fall

Baby V: ok forget about ash, what happened to u? Why coming by yourself to school?

*Riddz thoughts* see this is what i was afraid of, people questioning me, i just wish people could just mind their own business. Unless they are your best friends who have every right to know what's been bothering u, i can't tell anyone, well not yet. Let's just keep my life as a HUSHHH! HUSHHH secret

Riddz: ummmm i was feeling like i wanted some fresh air so i thought maybe walking to school would be a good idea. 'Ok that better be a good save or there's no way out of this today, too many lies I've told, please just believe me baby V i promise i'll try not to lie again'

Baby V: hmmm ok then

Riddz: hmmm thanks shall we go in now, or we're gonna get late 'yeahhhh thank u god, she bought it, i was running out of lies after lying to mama and papa this morning said that i was meeting up with some new friends to ride up to school, this was the last lie that was left to tell to baby V'

Baby V: don't u think we should wait for ash?

Riddz: wellll!!!!!!! With the fun she's having i don't think she wants us waiting for her

Baby V: (laughing) i think your right

Riddz: aren't i always 'aren't i always right????????????? Did i make a mistake???Can't go back not'

Baby V: u always are, not let's go

Walking through the corridors going to their classes

Baby V: so what have u got first

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm s..........c..............i............e..............n........c........e (Riddz said in a soft whisper)

Baby V: ohhh that's good

Riddz: what do u have baby V

Baby V: gym (She replied blushingly hoping her blush would be caught, but unfortunately it was by riddz, but now wasn't the time she wanted to ask her cause she had more to prepare for the disaster in science

Riddz: (smiling) hmmm ok then i'll see u at break

Baby V: ciao

Riddz: bonsior

Baby V: ok stop with the languages

Giving a last hug they both went to their classes

OK! Ok

I bet some of u guys would be wondering what lovely dovely stuff's happening to ash and rith. Do u wanna know.....? Well let's go and find out.... well unfortunately we can't because they were only talking for 5 minutes and then rith and ashly had to run to their class so nothing lovely happened

But let's looks at what's happening to them during their first lesson 'art'

Mr Stack their art teacher was running around the place getting chairs in the right order

Girl: why are the chairs and tables moved around?

Ash: i have no idea Celina

Celina: hmmm where on earth is my table?

Rith: unfortunately cutie we don't know, unless are..............Annoying art teacher tells it himself

Finally after breathing heavily Mr Stack got back into his teaching form

Mr Stack: ok boys and girls, sorry for keeping u waiting.........

Then a boy put his hand up 'Jason'

Mr Stack: yes Jason

Jason: why are the chairs not where they were before?

Rith: (in Jason's ear) well done my boy!!! But now he was about to tell it himself and there was no point in asking now

Jason: ooooooooo

Mr Stack: well Jason, I've decided to have a new sitting plan

All: nooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo (Everyone was moaning so no one could here whisper comments)

Rith: (in ashly's ear) but this was the first time in my life that i actually liked my seat.

Rith said it in the most passionate voice that made ashly melt how she just wished she could be with him day and night

Mr Stack: ok so here are your new seats

Mr Stack gave out the new seat; rith was sitting next to Julia a very sweet girl, very shy, she never gets into trouble and always does her HW on time

And ashly got the place to seat next to Mark; Mark one of the cutest looking boys around, a sweet shy and kind but a very hard and awesome looking guy as well. Girls always fall for his cute smile it's totally irresistible makes any girl go ga. Ga over him.

Ash: hey mark

Mark looked at her kind of surprised and grinning

Mark: hi, ashly right?

Ash: yeap, 'ok this is going to be one hard semester. I already miss rith and the class hasn't even started yet. I really hate Mr Stack urggggggggg why did he change our places, i liked sitting next to rith........... Ohhhhhhhh life is sooo unfair. But Mark seems nice, sweet kind a goody boy but still hot looking, maybe this was for the best and maybe.................. hmmmmmmmmmm jealousy'

Let's look at how's rith taking this new seating thing

Rith: soooooooooo, its Julia then?

Julia: yes, that's me

Rith: ok Julia 'ok this girl, is tooooo into her books, i mean look at her fine she's pretty and all but she will not get a date in her life if she just sits and read 24/7. Ashly is right at the front and i'm right at the back , this is the worse sitting plan ever made, uhhhhhhhhhhh i hate that mark now, i mean look at mark yeah yes i know his good looking handsome and has a cute smile but that doesn't mean he can go starting looking and eying ashly. God and that girl ashly, she's flirting even more with him. Life's so annoying. Hmmmmmmmmmm maybe.......... texting'

Taking his cell out he started texting

'Hope i don't get caught' he signed

"Hmmmm so what were u doing this weekend? *rith*" 'Ok that's the worse start ever but right now i have no other choice'

Ashly's leg started vibrating

Mark: ashly is everything Ok

Ash: yeas mark 'What the hell? Where on earth is this vibrating coming from? Oh s**t it's my cell. Urggggggggg who texts between classes man'

Ashly looked at her cell and read the text and looked at rith who was busy writing and smiling

"Rith, why on earth are u texting me during class? And i was having fun with Vanessa this weekend" 'I am going to kill him after class, but this is sweet"

Rith got the text and smiled

"Well firstly i'm getting bored and secondly what Funnnn? Lolz" 'awwwwwwww she looks very cute when she's angry'

Ashly got her text and giggling

"Urggggggggg sick minded. Anyway this is my last text i wanna pass my art class u know not like some people!!!!!!! Bye" 'i am going to murder him but why am i so happy'

Rith replied back

"Ok fine last text then, even i wanna pass this class u know not because i wanna become an artist but because i hate this teacher Gosh" 'awwwwwwww last text, she is going to kill me for sure, she's giving me the evils now'

Ashly got her last text and smiled putting it back into her pocket

Who wants to know what happened i science

Well let's find that out now

*Riddz thoughts while walking to science class* ohhh i don't wanna do science today. What if he holds be again like Friday, that touches his grasp, it's so tough so melting. I wish he didn't have that power to hold me like that, his kiss. Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i why am i thinking about him, ridhima u have to get him away from far, far away from u

Ridhima walked inside and took her seat

She went through her book

Where was he???????

Than a noise came as if there was a chair moving beside her

'Oh no his here, ohhh why????'

She didn't have the courage to look up and see what he was doing but after a few second she did, she looked up and was shocked. It wasn't him, armaan wasn't here it was someone else a guy from her class no one else. Now riddz started getting really tensed!!!!

'Where is he????????????? Class is almost starting where on earth is he?????? Ohhh god. No! No i didn't mean what i did say 'Please god i don't wanna 'SEE' his face in school today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' When i said this today morning i didn't mean it like really, i want to see him. It makes me very restless without seeing him. Awwwwwwww where is he????? Maybe skipping class or ill or didn't come to school because i sad all that stuff to him on Friday. But i do want to see him, his..................his becoming my life now!!!!!!!!!!!!'

The class started their topic was about cancer and how it's caused and how to prevent it. Riddz's mind was somewhere else she couldn't concentrate on her lesson, when the teacher was calling out the register she just wished that armaan would come and answer his name but it didn't happen armaan wasn't in and now during the whole class when her teacher was asking her questions she would just drifted away from the place. Today was her worse day ever....................... Without armaan there's No ridhima..... And that she figured out today. Without the person there is no meaning for life....

The whole Monday was going well

Ridhima got really restless she just wanted to go and ask rith or zac of where armaan was but she didn't have the guts.

At lunch

Rith and ashly were talking about how they both hated Mr Stack and ashly was still trying to kill him for texting during class

While zac and Vanessa were talking about what happened during P.E. how that boy spilt his pants while doing trampoline and laughing really badly

Where's ridhima she just sat there with her lunch thinking about armaan, no one even mentioned where he was yet.

Riddz finally decided she would ask or

Riddz: Hmmmm guys?????????

Rith looked at her while everyone was still talking. Ashly started talking to zac and Vanessa about what happened in P.E

Rith: yeas riddz what's wrong?????

Riddz: ummmm, well............ i was wondering where arma........... I mean ammy was????

Rith looked at her, he knew something was surely going on 'Hmmmm was she going to say armaan, cause well ammy only told me about this no one else........ And looking at riddz's eyes something tells me, that there's something wrong between armaan and her but what??????? Was it this that armaan was upset on Saturday??????'

Rith: oh yeah!!!!!!! Ammy wasn't feeling too well this morning when i called him........ i think his got a fever but he'll be in school tomorrow

Riddz smiled; 'thank god someone knew something about him, all this suspense was killing me. Hope he gets well soon and returns to school................. But that would be bad for me! How would i confront him tomorrow then????????? Do i???????? 'Love him' no, his wrong he can't win me................ well not yet (riddz smiled even more)'

Ashly: hmmm come on guys our next class is going to starting 5 minutes

Riddz: yeah i'll see ya guys later

Rith: hmmm so what have u guys got next?

Ashly: maths

Vanessa: maths as well

Zac: hmmm I've got technology

Rith: ha! Ha

Zac: well today i'm unlucky because ammy used to be with me in technology but unfortunately today is my bad day

Riddz: hmmm u have got ammy in your class. 'awwwwwwww i hate it when i blush but every time i say his name my cheeks won't help but change its colour from normal to red tomato'

Rith started laughing 'Hmmmm so Miss Riddz starts blushing????? Wow armaan got some charms man, but riddz what's up with her mmmmm alot of things that need to be revealed soon. Ammy better tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'

Baby V: rith why are u laughing?

Rith: Hmmmm just remembered something

Rith: ohhh riddz are u in my class for geography

Riddz: i did take geography but i don't know if you're in my class or not

Rith: hmmmmmmmmmm have u got Mrs. Lidia

Riddz: yeasssss

Rith: so that means u are in my class

Riddz: wow i didn't even know that

Ashly: hmmmmmmmmmm ok then i'll see u guys later 'Hope rith doesn't get too close to riddz, i trust riddz completely, i only don't trust myself for not keeping my yap shut'

Vanessa: yeah i'll see u guy's later, ummmm bye zac

Zac: (Smiling) bye kitty kat

Ashly nudged Vanessa

Ash: (in Vanessa's ear) ooooooooooooo kitty kat. Cute

Blushing too much Vanessa took hold of ashly's hand and ran to their maths class

Rith: *cough* zaccccccccc *cough*

Zac: hmmmmmmmmmm talk to u later byeeeeeeeeee

Riddz started laughing: awwwwwwww poor guy

Rith: Hmmmm so riddz can i walk to class with u

Riddz: yeap why not?

While walking to their geography class

Riddz: Hmmmm so rith, is ammy ok? I mean is it something really bad

Rith smiled 'there's surely something, something'

Rith: yeap i think he'll be fine.............. shall i give him a call than u can ask him yourself (he was going to get his phone)

Riddz: NOOOOOOOOOOOO nooooooooooooooooooo pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee don't call him, rith pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee don't even tell him that i asked pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee

Rith: riddz is there something i need to know???????? U and ammy have both been acting weird lately. And ammy on Saturday was sooo sad........... What happened is something wrong between u too????????

Riddz: No. No nothing's wrong, just don't tell him pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee 'armaan was sad on Saturday?????????? of course he was u idiot after u saying all this wouldn't he very upset and heartbroken. If i could have cried they whole night why wouldn't armaan be upset but telling rith??????? He wouldn't tell rith I know him that well' pleaseees don't tell him, ammy's just............................. i don't know please don't. Please bhaiya (riddz looked too innocent)

Rith: bhaiya?????????? U an Indian too??????? Riddz????

Riddz: too??????????? Yeah i am an Indian, riddz aka ridhima gupta

Rith: ridhima?? Cute name. By too i mean, i'm from India as well, Hrithik roshan

Riddz: ohhhhhhhhhhh ok, hmmm sooo ajj se bhaiya bula sakti hooooooon 'Ok I'm really bad at hindi never talking it in my life ever again'

Rith: awwwwwwww choooo cute my i means meri bhena!!!! Did i say it right?

Riddz: don't worry i don't know Hindi very well either

Rith: come on class time (he looked at his bhena) i won't tell ammy

Riddz hugged rith: Awwwwwwwwwww thank u

At the end of the day

At rith house

Rith called armaan

Rith: hey ammy

Ammy: hey man, how was school

Rith: it was great, me and riddz........................ 'Ohhh shit that slipped'

Ammy: riddz??????????? What did u and riddz???????

Rith: nothing......... just........... oh by the way me and zac were talking today and we decided that us 3 are all going to that new pub which just opened this week

Ammy: new pub??????????? 'Don't think i forgot about riddz, rith. I'm gonna get it out of u, everything that concerns riddz it concerns me'

Rith: yeap it's called 'KISS' 'thank god he forgot it'

Ammy: Hmmmm ok so when are we going than

Rith: hmmmmmmmmmm Wednesday after school???

Ammy: ok then.............. I'll see u in school tomorrow ok?

Rith: ok then bye

Ammy: ohhhhhhhhhhh and don't think i forgot rith, cause ammy doesn't forget anything (and he cut the call)

Rith: ohhhhhhhhhhh god riddz i'm sorry but it slipped meri bhena

*Tuesday*

Ok short summary of what happened today because if i give a detail description then i bet i'll take forever to get to the pub part but i'll give a small description

Today was a bad day because armaan didn't come; he had an extra bad fever that's what rith told ever but was that the truth????

Riddz was very sad........ Her life wasn't going that well without armaan around she felt really down.

No one actually knew where armaan was, rith looked like he didn't know anything so no one thought about what rith was saying they just believed him

Rith and ashly had a very good day, ashly got really jealous when she saw riddz and rith together. But when ridhima told ashly about how they both were brothers and sisters not in a real way but in a way to show around, that's when ashly finally felt that maybe she didn't lose rith after all

Zac and Vanessa didn't do much, they both just had been by themselves. After the end of the day, Vanessa riddz and ashly are sitting in the car.

Baby V: sooo how was today's day??????..................

Riddz: Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh veryyyyyyyyy Ok

Ashly: nooooooo my day was prefect!!!!

Ashly: ohhhhhhhhhhh and by the way who wants to go to the new club in town???

Baby V: what new club????????

Ashly: 'KISS' it's the new club into town

Baby V: hmmmmmmmmmm i surely come. It's going to great fun, u coming Na riddz?

Riddz: ummmm i don't know?????? I might!!!

Ashly: why not?????? Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee riddddzie

Riddz: ummmm dunno, ok fine i might as well 'I might as well, but it might be the only way i can get rid of armaan out of my brain and my heart if i try'

Ashly: yeahhhhhhhhhh that's good then, Hmmmm ok so tomorrow after school??? At 8 pm????????

Riddz: sound good to me

Baby V: Same here. And now ashly would u do me a favour and DROP US HOME!!!!!!

Ashly: (laughing) fine Miss KITTY KAT

Baby V: guyssssssssssss

Riddz: oooooooooooooooooooooo someone's falling for zaccccccccc

Baby V: Nooooooooooooo i'm not

Riddz: who said it was u? (Giggling even more)

Ashly (hi 5ing riddz) good one riddz

Baby V: ohhh whatever, but i'm not like the other one drooling over rith

Ashly's head shot up and started staring and blushing

Riddz: EYES ON THE ROAD

Ashly embarrassed looked back onto the road

When the girls got home they asked their parents about going but they didn't tell them that they were going to a night club because they knew that their parents wouldn't agree so they lied and told them that they were staying over at their friends house and they might return home because it was their friends birthday

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*Wednesday*

Ok, do u wanna know what happened in college or shall i just skip to the night club

Fine i might as well tell u what happened in college

Well, armaan wasn't in school today unfortunately

When riddz went to ask rith about why he wasn't in school rith told her that he didn't know and he tried to call him but he wouldn't pick up him phone

*Riddz thoughts* that's weird why isn't he in school???? Maybe the thing i said affected him really badly or maybe it was something else or someone else????? I don't know but i need to find out. I hope he comes to college tomorrow. I won't talk to him..... i need to maintain this distance it would be better for me, falling for armaan malik would be a grave mistake............................ wouldn't it????????????????'

The whole day in school went great, everyone got on with their own work, Vanessa teasing ashly about rith and ashly teasing Vanessa about zac.

Riddz was feeling too restless she just felt like going and knocking on armaan's house and ask he why he wasn't in school but she couldn't she had to keep her mind away from her heart.

At the end of the day all the girls went home and got ready for going to the club, but unfortunately their parents were home so if they dress up sooo amazingly they would surely ask for questions

So the girls to decide to meet up at the nearest restaurant and that was an Italian restaurant called 'La Bella' which means 'beautiful'

8 pm

After getting ready from the Bella they all left to the night club 'KISS'

Riddz: how do i look?

Ashly: tooooo hot, what about me?

Baby V: amazing just need a slight of makeup on the cheeks, how do i look?

Riddz: prefect, let's get going

Coming out of ashly's car they all stepped out

Looking tooooo fit

Here's are the pictures of what they are wearing

ashly
Vanessa
riddz

Guy: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hottie alert

Guy 2: wrong!!!! HOTIESSSSSSS alert man

Guy: hey cuties

Guy 3: what's up babes?

Guy 4: ooooooooo can i have your number angelz

Ignoring the foolish statement the all just walked into the pub 'KISS'. They knew that they were the hottest looking girls there and this would be the biggest advantage to get guys in one night.

Let's take a look where the boys are

I know, i know people would be missing armaan but what can i do, it has to be this way

Anyway please hope that armaan does come to the club

Rith and zac both got down from their Mercedes car. The time was 8.30

Zac: rith where's ammy?

Rith: well he said that he was going to come but when i called him today after school he wouldn't pick up the phone

Zac: maybe he got too sick???

Rith: Hmmmm he might be?? But i don't really know

Zac: do u think his hiding something from us?

Rith: ammy??? No i'm sure he isn't 'but maybe something to do with riddz is'

Zac: come on let's get in

The boys walked in hearing music from everywhere around them

Girls dancing, wearing very less material on them

Zac: woahhhhhhhhhhhhh i'm gonna like this

Zac said as he got a girl in his arms and danced away with her. All girls started crowding zac. Dancing kissing him on the cheeks

Rith: god I've lost him tonight

Girl 1: (to rith) hey cuties wanna dance?

Girl 2: yeah come on handsome

Rith laughed to himself, he always had an effect on ladies, it's his main specialities. Flirting with girls would be his main thing for tonight

Rith: sure, beautiful

Rith walked with the girls onto the dance floor

(Ride it) we're all alone...
(Ride it) just lose control...
(Ride it, ride it) come touch my soul...
(Ride it, ride it) let me feel you...

(Ride it) turn the lights down low...
(Ride it) from head to toe...
(Ride it, ride it) touch my soul...
(Ride it, ride it) let me feel you...

Rith danced around to every girl but suddenly he bumped into someone behind him and she was about to fall down but rith firmly put his arms on her waist and pulled her back

'OMG thank u sooo much........ God dancing is going to make me sooo dizzy and my god i was going to drop my drink..........' she finally looked up

Rith: AHSLY!!!!!! 'Woah she looks tooooo good'

Ashly: OMG rith wow your here too

Rith: yeap........... U here by yourself?

Ashly: Nope.......... riddz and baby V are here too, are u here by yourself?

Rith: Na. I'm here with zac and well ammy said he would come but i don't know where he is

Ashly: ohhhhhhhh ok then........ Come on then... meet riddz and baby V

Rith: yeah sure

Rith and ashly walked over to where Vanessa and riddz were standing

Rith: hey riddz and baby V

Both: hey

Riddz: wow u here as well Lolz.......... u by yourself 'Please say no'

Rith: no i'm here with zac

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm and

Rith: i don't know where ammy is!!! He said he was coming on Monday but i don't know where he is 'i know u were gonna ask about him'

Riddz: Hmmm ok

Riddz walked around looking if ammy was there

Baby V: btw where is zac:

Rith: (laughing) probably dancing with one of girls

Baby V: (Feeling bad) oh 'why am i feeling bad??'

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm baby V............

Baby V: i'm fine

Zac finally came out of the group of dancing

Zac: Oh wow hey girls

Girls: hey

Baby V: ohhh so u finally got some time out of the dancing (angrily)

Vanessa walked away from them

Zac: what???????

Riddz: ummmm u might wanna go and talk to her

Zac: you're right........... I'll be right back

Ashly: wanna dance rith?

Rith: yeap sure.......... u coming riddz? 'hope she's alright'

Riddz: No u guys go ahead i'll join u later

Ashly: Ok then see ya

As ashly and rith got down on to the floor the both started dancing

Riddz looked around.......... 'Where is he???????? This is getting too weird i mean how come??? First 3 days he missed in school and now not in the club as well???? What's wrong with him?????'

Ridhima looked around.......................... Then she felt a gush of wind hit her, blowing into her hair.... smelling just like him

'His here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can feel it...................... his here???'

Ridhima looked around............. Her gaze following every little part of the club

Thennnnnnnnnnn right there.............................................

Right at the door he stood....................

Looking OMG..................... Wow

Ridhima's face lit up

He was here. Every girl in the club just stared at him.......... as he walked in

He was wearing the same clothes as he wore on the New Years Eve episode on the terrace. But there was something else..... His head had a bandage on...... did he get hurt?

Armaan's clothes

same thing as on the new years eve episode

*Riddz thoughts* 'his here???????? Ohhh i missed him sooo much........ why can't i stay away from him?????? What happened to him head???????? Did he hurt himself but whatever it was that bandage looks hot on him............... it goes with what he wore........ He looks...........'

Ammy walked in.............. his eyes fixed on ridhima. He was checking her out

He walked closer and closer

Ridhima lowered her eyes........... her cheeks burning red

Armaan lifted her chin up... so their gaze was extremely powerful. And then armaan's face came closer to hers........... Ridhima tilted her face over both going the same direction and then.........................................

HA! HA

That's it guys

I loveeeeeeeeeeee this cliff hanger

Hope u don't murder me

Do u want a precap?????

Hmmm well if u want one than here's a small precap but if u want a promo could u plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz let me know

Precap

'Ohhhhhhhhhh no'

'Did they both drink sooo much'

'how are we going to get them home'

'forget about that guys, if their parents find out........ we are going to be dead'

They carried the 2 bodies lolz i mean people

Into the car

'Drive a bit faster'

'do u have to boss people around'

'urgggg'

'u two shut up'

'well it was all u guy's fault'

....................................................................................

Friday

'She's here'

'Omg'

Ok guys

Hope u all liked it

Plzzzzzzzzzzzz comment

Unfortunately there's alot of FYI's now, got bored of PS's so FYI's

FYI- hope u all liked this part. Please say u did, if u want and promo please move to read (FYI 3), if not then move to (FY1 4)

FYI 2- Ok, the next part would probably be, the entering of sharini, hope u guys would be waiting for that. Ok after reading this move to (FYI 5)

FYI 3- ok u wanna a promo, then i'll try to post it soon but please tell me if u want one. The promo would be about the new person entering, please read

(FYI 2)

FY1 4- If u don't want a promo, then you'll have to wait until i finally decide to start writing again. Now move to (FYI 5)

FYI 5- OH MY GOD, u have no idea how long this part was, i spend ages on this, ask anessa lolz. It was about 18 pages of times new roman font and then i had to change it to my way for writing font which was 34 pages. Oh my it was too much, now move to my last FYI (FYI 6)

FYI 6- thank u so much for reading this part sweeties, i really hope that u didn't get bored of reading this part. Please comment. I got really bored of suing PS's so i decided to used something new

opps and i can't send PM's now i have to go to school
so i'll send PM's after coming from school

Luv ya

swanz

Edited by swansea - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg awesome part! lovedd it! omg cliff hanger! nooooooo! will be waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sweety..amazing part..luvd it..bt hate dis cliff hanger of urs..seriously ending part at dis point..how cud u..nw u ll hv 2 update it soon..plzzz do it..
luv ya..
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey zswancy omgggg yaar i am lvng it yaar toooooo long yaar wowwwwwwwwww jst lvd it ech nd evry line yaar specially thoughts beautifully nd i wnt 2 kill u yar again nooooooooooooooo cliffhangr god tum writrs ko bahut maza ata haina hume tadpane mein vryyyy bad bt wo suspense hi kya jo khul na jaye wowwwwwwwwww yaar bt brilliant yaar main to puri ghus hi gayi thi prt mein hmmm nw rith ko doub ho gaya vryyy gud awwwwwwwww yaar jstcnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont sooooooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
great part you left it on a cliffhanger
plz give a promo
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Posted: 16 years ago

gr8 update swanzzzzzzzzzzz

amazing sweetyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

keep it up loved it

fanx for pm

chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

hheeyy its awesum...a promo wud b fine bt plzzzzzzzz cont soon....u rite i wanna murder u..........y did u hv 2 end it at dis point.....my god swancy u relly knoe hw 2 catch d audience's attention...plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont asap and do pm me wen u update...........

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