Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 - Page 27

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Nice!!!! ==Thanks..

Naina is feeling guilty for coming between the two brothers and wants to bring them together!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ==It was her normal reaction..

Raj is scared as well as irritated by Naina's constant lecture on getting his brother back!!! ==Raj was tired too..he became tired of this dual character life..😡

Naina has met a dead end!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛No leads on Rajveer now!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Why does she have to play detective like this??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 ==Well..auratein hoti hain aisi..jab tak baat puri naa jaan le..unko chain nahi aata..ho sakta hai..Naina tab koi daily soap dekh rahi thi..on regular basis..aur uske andar bhi James Bond ki atma aa gayi..😆

Naina was really shocked to see that Ranveer and Rajveer look so alike!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 ==Haan..yeh normal tha..koi bhi shocked hota..jo pahle se Rajveer aur Ranveer ko nahi jaanta..

Naina ne Ranveer ki photo dekhli haar chadai huyi and she was shocked!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!! ==Ohh..Yes..

Usse lag raha hai ke Rajveer mar chuka hai!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭And she is blaming herself for all this!!!! ==Daily soap ka asar..yehi keh sakti hoon..😛

Raj was almost going to say the truth but Naina spoke first warna toh sach nikal hi jata!!!!

==Naina ki lecture dene ki aadat nehi Raj ko bacha lia..😆

Naina ne Raj ke pyaar ko gaali di toh usse toh bura lagna hi tha!!!! ==Haan..Raj kyon bardasht karta?😡

Raj pe toh junoon sawar ho gaya hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Thats bad!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 ==Very bad..

He is not even taking protection inspite of what the doctor had said!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 ==Naughty boy..

Paris le gaya magar kahi ghumaya nahi!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Bas har waqt bedroom mein!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 ==Haan..ghumna sirf bahana hai..asal me kuchh aur hi kaam hai..😉

Naina is feeling guilty toh she also does not refuse!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 ==Yes..Naina..MERI NAINA MAHAAN

Raj has really become very insensitive!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Usse samajna chahiye ke Naina bhi insaan hai!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 ==Jab aisi zaroorat aan padhti hai..tab Biwi sirf Biwi hoti hai..😡

Woh thak jaati hai magar usse toh har waqt Naina ko pyaar karna hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 ==Haan..actually..Naina ko shuru se aadat nahi padi..round the clock duty ki..isi lia thak jaati thi..Raj ki hi ghalati thi..pahle bahut sharmata jo tha..😆

Office ke log bhi samaj gaye ke Raj gaya kaam se!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 ==Haan..log aisi baatein bahut jald samajh jaate hain..😉

Naina phir se pregnant ho gayi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊I hope ab usse jaldi hi sach pata chal jaaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 ==Haan..aur us par kaher barse..aur tujhe bahut maza aaye..waaaah!Naina k bare me soch..zaalim..😡😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
Naina ki pregnancy k baare me jab malum pada,tab Raj ko hosh aaya..k actually usne kyaa kia hai..waise bhi kaafi tensed tha apne bartav ko le kar.. josh me aakar usne ek had paar ki hai..yeh ehsaas usko pareshaan kar rahi thi..fir bhi woh is umeed me tha k Naina par iska asar naa ho..par asar ho chuka tha..Medical reports isi baat ko saabit kar rahe the..Raj ko khud par sharam aa rahi thi..k usne us kumzor pal me Naina ka faida uthaya hai.Kabhi kabhi..Naina ki marzi k khilaaf jaa kar woh Naina k kareeb bhi jaa chuka hai.. dheere dheere Raj ne khud ko samhaala..aur zindagi thodi si aasaan hui..Raj ne fir se apne kaam me dhyaan dia..Naina bhi roz cresh jaane lagi..Naina khush thi..aur bhi khush ho gayi jab usko pata chala apni pregnancy k baare me..
Raj Naina ko Doctor k paas le gaya..Doctor ne Naina ka full check up kia..aur Doctor ne bhi green signal dia..
Naina--Koi pareshaani hai?
Doctor--Nahi..bilkul nahi..maine mana kia tha..kuchh waqt k lia..par ab sab theek hai..you can have the child..
Naina--Thank you..
Doctor--Mr. Malhotra toh pareshaan the..par Mr. Malhotra..Mrs. Malhotra ab puri tarha se theek hain..darrne ki koi baat nahi..miscarriage hua tha..but she has recovered..don't worry..
Raj--Are you sure?
Doctor--Yes..I am 200% sure..bas..normal pregnancy hai..usual precautions leni hai..davai time se lia jaaye..regular check up ho..bas..sab theek thaak.. fikar ki koi baat nahi..
Raj--Actually..main kaafi darr gaya tha..peechhli baar..
Doctor--Yes..I know..but this time..you just don't worry Mr. Malhotra.. everything will be fine..aur haan..abhi main kuchh medicines de rahi hoon.. aur haan..Mrs.Malhotra..cresh k bachchon k saath zyada mauj masti theek nahi..be careful..
Naina--I will..


Clinic se ghar waapas aaye dono...
Naina--Veer..khana baahar se order karo na..please..
Raj--Haan..karta hoon.
Naina fresh hokar baahar nikli..Raj gaya bathroom k andar..
Bathroom me baith kar Raj rone laga..achanak se usko kyaa ho gaya tha?Usne aisa toh nahi socha tha..usdin Naina is tarha sawal kar rahi thi..Raj khud ko samhaal nahi paaya..yeh kuchh maheene..Naina par shaayad bahut bhaari pada hai..is din k lia toh Raj ne Naina se shaadi nahi ki thi..Raj ne Naina ko chaaha tha apni khushi k lia..par Naina se shaadi ki,Naina ki khushi k lia..par jo Raj ne kia ..Raj toh khudgarz ban gaya tha..Naina k saamne jo sach aaya..us wajah se Naina ka is tarha react karna hi normal tha..aur Raj bhi taiyyar tha is waqt k lia..fir Raj ne is tarha kaise react kia?Andar hi andar Raj toot raha hai..uska pyaar itna khudgarz toh nahi tha..fir yeh sab kyon hua?
Naina baahar se bula rahi thi... "VEEEEERRRRRRRRRRR..baahar aao.. khana aa gaya hai.."
Raj--Haan..aaya..


Dinner k baad..Raj let gaya..
Naina bhi uske paas me let gayi..fir Naina ne Raj k seene par haath rakha..Raj ne Naina ki taraf dekha..
Raj--So jaao..raaton ko jaagna theek nahi..
Naina--Baat toh karo..
Raj--Kyaa baat karoon?Mujhe kuchh achha nahi lag raha hai..
Naina--Kyon?
Raj--Us din k baad..jis din..tum us kamre me gayi..uske baad..mera bartaav.. tumko bura nahi laga?
Naina--You are my husband..
Raj--But..some where I forced myself upon you..that is not right..
Naina--Nahi..aisa kuchh nahi hai..agar aisa hota..toh..
Raj--Baat ko mat badlo..maine ki hai ghalati..
Naina--Okey..but..it's fine..ghalati hui..toh..?
Raj--What about this pregnancy?
Naina--Doctor ne toh kaha hi hai..


Raj--Main Doctor ki baat nahi kar raha hoon..I mean..
Naina--Tum..naa..


Raj--Naina..you can tell me..is it unwanted for you?
Naina--Aisa tumko kyon lagta hai?
Raj--I mean..jo ..
Naina--Ranveer..jo hua..usko bhool jaao..please..I am happy..
Raj--Really?
Naina--Haan..main toh humesha se chaahti thi..aur mujhe woh mil gaya..
Raj--Naina..main..mujhe savdhaan hona tha..
Naina--Peechhli baar ki tarha fir se baatein kar rahe ho..woh haadsa bhool gaye ?
Raj--Nahi..main..sirf...itna bol raha tha..
Raj aur kuchh bol nahi paaya..Naina ne uska muh bandh kar dia..apne honthon se..
Raj k dil me jo jheejhag si thi..Naina ne usko door kar dia.
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Raj Naina ko cresh se le kar hi ghar waapas aata tha..pehli baar ki tarha Raj careless nahi banna chaahta..Naina Raj ko neglect nahi karti..Raj ka bhi khayaal rakhti hai..dono ne kasam khaa rakhi hai..k ghalatian nahi karenge fir se..Raj ne Parvez ko bataya..Naina ki pregnancy k baare me..Parvez bahut khush hua.
Sab kuchh theek hi chal raha hai..Naina ka paanchva maheena chal raha hai.. Raj k dimaag me kuchh aur hi chal raha hai.Naina ko Dehradun bhejna chaahta hai..uski Maa k paas..aise waqt me unka hona zaroori hai..aur aaj kal..Raj k dil me darr aur bhi baith gaya hai..k kahi kisine usko Raj k naam se Naina k saamne bulaya..tab ho jaayega satyanaash..Naina k cresh jaane k khilaaf tha..par yehi achha hai..kahi agar Naina Office aana shuru karti..toh bhanda kab ka phoot jaata..
Pahle pahle Naina ka itna khud me khoyi khoyi si rehna Raj ko bahut disturb karta tha..usko lagta tha..k Naina ko thoda bahut interest lena chahie..Raj ki zindagi me..par..ab usko lagta hai..jo hota hai achhe k lia hota hai..Naina ko sirf Veer se matlab hai..apne ghar se matlab hai..Malhotra Industries yaa Malhotras k business community me usko koi dilchasbi hi nahi..yeh ek taraf se achha hai..hairani ki baar yeh hai..Naina Raj k kisi bhi business friend ko nahi jaanti..usne kabhi sawal nahi kia..k Raj Office me kyaa karta hai..Raj jab business tour par jaata tha..Naina ne kabhi Office me phone kar k Raj ki jasoosi nahi ki..aur haan..Naina ne kabhi complaint nahi ki kisi baat ki.. bas.. Veer..yeh ghar..aur Naina ka cresh..aur aanewala bachcha...Naina ki soch is daaire k baahar kabhi jaati hi nahi..


Jaise jaise..Naina k baare me darr fir se dil me ghar karta gaya..waise waise.. Raj bhoolta gaya..k usne kabhi Naina par zor azmaya tha..Raj zyada se zyada waqt Naina k saath rehta hai..aisa bahut kum hone laga..k Naina jab ghar par aai..Raj ghar par nahi tha..safety k lia..Raj khud Naina ko ghar le aata tha.. ghar aate hi..Naina ka khana..uski davai aur waqt par Naina ka sona..yehi Raj ki priority thi..
Sundays jab aate the..Raj Naina ko lekar baahar ghoomne jaata tha..taa k.. ghar ki saaf safau naukar kar sake..Naina usme dakhal naa de..


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Naina ka khayaal rakhte rakhte..Raj attached sa ho gaya..apne bachche se.. pahle sirf Naina ka khayaal tha..ab Naina aur bachcha..dono ka khayaal hai.. Raj ko khushi milne lagi..Raj k lia..yeh alag ehsaas tha..Baap banna..Raj ne is tarha pahle kabhi nahi socha..isse pahle..Ab Raj zimmedari se nahi ghabrata.. ab usko yakeen ho gaya tha..k Pati k saath saath woh ek achha Baap bhi ban sakta hai.
Doctor ne Naina ki delivery date bhi de di thi..Mid of November..Naina bahut excited thi..par is baar Raj ki excitement bhi dekhne laayak bani..Child care k baare me jitna padh sakta tha..jitna malum kar sakta tha..Raj ne sab pata kia..
Jis din Naina ki ultrasonography karai gayi..us din Raj tha wahi par..it was a great feeling for him..Baby k movements dekh raha tha Raj..
Naina--Veer..iska sar hil raha hai..
Raj--Haan..actually hum ko approve kia jaa raha hai..
Naina--Matlab...?
Raj--I mean ..hum iske Parents banne laayak hai bhi yaa nahi..
Clinic se baahar nikal kar Naina ne jo kaha..Raj ko gussa aa gaya..
Naina--Thode paise de sakte the usko..
Raj--Kyon?
Naina--Pata toh chalta..ladka hai k ladki..
Raj chidh gaya..
Raj--Naina..aisi baatein mat karna..
Naina--Nahi..Veer..yeh log batate hain..socho..agar pata chal jaaye..k ladka hai yaa ladki..toh hum uske hisaab se shopping kar sakte hain..room usi hisaab se saja sakte hain..
Raj--Soch lia..
Naina--Kyaa?
Raj--Tumhare kaan k neeche zor se bajane k baare me..
Naina--Kyon?
Raj--Shut up Naina..jitni marzi shopping karo..
Naina--Baaki ka saaman toh gaya..waste hoga..
Raj--Tum kya..ek hi par rookne k mood me ho?
Naina--Nahi..
Raj--So chill..
Naina--Kitno ki planning hai?
Raj--At least do..ya fir..problem nahi aai toh teen..ya chaar..
Naina--Mar gaye..
Raj--Kyon?Tum hi toh chaahti thi..Cricket team.....
Naina--Abhi jo haalat hai..yeh ek ho jaaye..toh main Ganga naha loon..
Raj--Okey..ab chalo..ghar chalo..


Actually..Raj ko aisa lag raha tha..k ab uski zindagi poori ho rahi hai...Naina uski Biwi hai..woh alag kisam ka rishta hai..par khoon ka rishta nahi tha koi.. Raj chaar saal ka tha..jab uski Maa chali gayi..usko chhod kar..fir Ranveer chala gaya..aur fir Dad bhi chale gaye..Kahi naa kahi Raj bahut akela ho gaya tha..Jis tarha Naina sapne dekh rahi thi apne aanewale bachche ko le kar..Raj bhi sapne dekhne laga..jo rishta usne zindagi ki raah par chalte chalte kahi kho dia tha..aaj is bachche ki shakal me waapas aa raha hai uske paas..Raj vaakei me khush tha..ab ki baar shaayad Naina se zyada jaldi thi..Raj ko.

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

nice ud anu😊

raj and naina in tis part are so sweet and happy

raj ko apni galati ka ehsaas hua

woh bechara ro raha tha

and naina is so understanding usne raj ko yakeen dilaya 😊

very nice part anu👏👏

Edited by digimon_pokemon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
updt was very cute n awesome........
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was so sweet and cute
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wonderful update Anu. 😊
Raj kitna dukhi hua tha jab us ko pata chala ki vo baap ban ne waala hai dukh is baat ka nahi tha baat ye buri lag rahi thi ki itne din Naina pe kaise haavi raha vo.
Naina to baache ka naam hi sun kar khush ho jaati hai.😆 Ab Raj ek accha pati ban raha hai aur ab us ko apne aane waale baache ka intezaar hai g8.😃
update soon.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Anu sorry mujhe pata nahi tha ki ye fic update hua hai. Vaise bhi mai aaj aayi hoon kaafi dino baad yahan.

Nice part 👏👏👏, Raj ne jo kiya us ka result saamne aa gaya aur Naina ek baar fir maa banne waali hai 😳😳😳. I am pretty shure ki Raj nahi chahta raha hoga aisa isiliye ab pachta raha hai 😔😔😔 par ye accha hai ki darne waali koi baat nahi hai 😛😛😛. Maa aur baacha dono theek hain 😃😃😃 par Raj ko thoda sabr rakhna chahiye tha.😒😒😒

Naina khush hai ki dubara maa banne jaa rahi hai 😊😊😊 par us ko kya pata ki us ko bahut jald pata chalne waala hai ki ye Rajveer hai us ka Veer nahi 😡😡😡? Tab pata nahi kaise react karegi mai to soch kar pareshaan hoon 😭😭😭 par sach ko kabhi na kabhi to bahar aana hi hai na.

Aaj kal ek accha papa aur accha hubby ban ne ki practise kar raha hai 😉😉😉 taaki vo first time jaise fail na ho aur Naina ka bhi jyada se jyada khayal rakh raha hai 😆😆😆. Mujhe umeed hai ki aage jaldi hi sab theek hoga 😃😃 par Naina k liye asaan nahi hoga.😕😕😕

update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fabulous update dear.....it's very emotional part.........
update soon i want to how Naina come to know about the truth.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
superb ud .... but bicharre raj ko kya pata abhi jhtka lagna baki hai
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Posted: 16 years ago
that was a very sweet ud.....luved d way raj was taking care of naina....i really liked it when he was making up 4 his previuos mistake and so was naina by giving attention to raj which she didnt the last time she was expecting.....but i m really worried of wat will happen when she'll cum to know the truth about raj.....plzzzzzzzzzz ud soooon....dis time i raelly want to see d present story as i m really misssing it

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