Aks......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....02/20 - Page 35

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Posted: 16 years ago
kashish really emotional n nice part superb.............. plzzzzz cont soon.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part....so kashish is free now and sujal has come to take her but i dunno how u gonna make the next part but cont soon...........i want them together....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fab update... very emotional.. i was almost crying thru the update.. luved the way Kashish described her luv for Sujal n Sujal Kashish convo in the end was mind blowing... Hey dear u r fantastic. really enjoyed the way u hve pinned down every single emotion... thanx a lot for the wonderful update... PLzz continue asap...
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part............................samjh mein nai aaraha kia likho............................buhat he emotinal part tha...........................kashish tu sujal ky liye sab se lar sakh thi hai.....................................con't soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
very well written part kashish.........
bt it was so sad.........pls kashish do something..........its very hard to see kashish like this
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Posted: 16 years ago

Last Part

ab dekhte hi ki is subaah ki shuruaat kaise hoti hai.......waise to aaj bhi sab kuch pehle ki jaisa hi hai..........Mehek aur Heer subaah me taiyaar hoke neeche aati hai jaha pe Prerna unka intzaar kar rahi hoti hai.........

Prerna: aaj itni jaldi........

Mehek: mama kal raat to muje neend hi nahi aayi.........woh Dii ko aise........

Heer: haa ....Prem aur main bhi puri raat bas Dii ke bare me hi sochte rehte the..........

Prerna: maine bhi Anurag se baat ki hai is bare me.........hum log shanti se Kashish ko samjayenge..............

Mehek: Mama woh......woh aaj mama aur papa hum dono ko pagphere ki rasam ke liye lene aa rahe hai............

Prerna: janti hoon....woh kal hi Nandini se is bare me baat ho gayi hai aur kuch dino ke liye Kashish bhi Nandini ke pass ja rahi hai...........

Mehek: shayad Dii ke liye yahi sahi rahega ki woh Sujaljiju ki yaadoin se kuch din ke liye durr rahe........

Heer: aap dii ko duniya me kahi bhi leke jayenge lekin woh Jiju ki yaadoin se kabhi nahi ubhar payengi.........

Prerna: Kashish se main baat karungi aur woh meri baat nahi tal sakti...............

jab Harsh, Nandini aur Sampada aate hai........

Prerna: are aap sab log itni jaldi..........

Harsh: woh baat yeh hai ki kal se Nandini Kashish se milna chahti hai.........puri raat kashish ke liye pareshan hoti rahi..........

Nandini: kya karoon Maa hoon na is liye apni bachi ko is tarah nahi dekh sakti........

Prerna: tumhare dard ko main samaj sakti hoon...........mere bete ki waje se aaj Kashish bhi........

Nandini: nahi Prernajee........Sujal se muje koi sikayat nahi kyunki Kashish se pehle maine use apna beta mana hai.........is liye aisa sochna bhi mat............lekin woh dikhai nahi deti........

Prerna: subaah se apne kamre me se bahar nahi aayi..........lagta hai hum sab se bahot naraz hai...........

Nandini: meri beti kabhi mujse naraz nahi ho sakti..............Heer jake Kashish se kaho ko main aayi hoon..dekhna kaise daudti huyi aati hai........

Heer: jee mama..........

Heer Kashish ke kamre me jati hai................jaha pe woh dekhti hai Kashish Sujal ki writing table pe so rahi hoti hai ...........Heer ke chehre pe ek muskaaan aa jati hai........

Heer; dii bhi na kahi pe bhi so jati hai..............

Heer Kashish ke pass aati hai.........

Heer: dii..........uthiye neeche mama aayi hai..........

Kashish koi jawab nahi deti..............Heer jake Kashish ko hilati hai lekin Kashish ke haath se pen neeche gir jati hai aur koi jawab nahi milta.................Heer pass me padi sleeping pills ki khali bottle ko dekhti hai aur zor se chikhti hai.............

Heer: Mama............Papa............Prem.......Dii.....jaldi aaiye...........Premmmmm..................Mamaaaaa..........

ghar me se sabhi log bhag ke aate hai............sabhi log dekh ke hairaan hote hai........sab ko apne aap pe yakeen nahi hota............Rudra dheere dheere jake Kashish ke pass jata hai..........

Rudra: Bhabhi.......Kashishbhabhi........

lekin koi jawab nahi aata........woh Kashish ke pass beth ke rone lagta hai jab Kashish ke haath ke neeche ke khat ko woh dekhta hai...............woh us Khat ko leke sabki aur dekhta hai aur phir Kashish ki aur..........

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Mere Apne,

Aaj jab tak aap sab yeh khat nahi pad lete tab tak koi ek bhi aanshu nahi bahayega kyunki aaj mere liye sabse bada khushi ka din hai......aap sab log ke mann me yeh sawaal uth raha hoga ki maine yeh kadam kyun uthaya lekin aap log yeh mat sochiye ki yeh maine is liye uthaya kyunki jo kal raat ko hua......main to yeh kadam bahaot pehle hi utha lena chahti thi lekin phir Sujal ne muje ehsaas dilaya ki muje apni aur Sujal ki jimedariyon ko pura karna hai..........aaj maine kuch jimedariyaan apni to kuch Sujal ki puri kar di hai..............meri sabse pehli jimedari ek beti ki .........Mama Papa aap log pareshan mat hoiye maine aapse vaada kiya hai ki Heer aur Mehek apni zindagi me bahot khush rahegi aur maine apna yeh vaada bhi pura kar diya..........Mehek..Heer......tum dono meri behen se jyada meri beti ki tarah ho.......choti si choti khawaish ko maine pura karna chaha aur aaj tum dono ko tum dono ke pyaar se hamesha ke liye milwake ja rahi hoon..........Papa...Sujal ke jane ke baad aap tut gaye the aur yeh maine dekha hai kyunki business dub raha tha lekin ab aapko aur business ko sambhalne ke liye aapke do kandhe hai jo hamesha aapka saath denge.............Mama aap se mafi chahti hoon ki bina izzat pehli bar main ja rahi hoon lekin mere badle me aapko do meri hi parchai deke ja rahi hoon.....aur aap hi hamesha kehti thi na ki mere Sujal ka saath kabhi mat chodna to ab kaise main chod sakti hoon.....Nihaal meri aur Sujal ki gudiya ko uske naam ki tarah hamesha khush rakhna aur kabhi bhi aanshu nahi aane dena kyunki Sujal ka dil dukhega ........aur Khushi main nahi to yeh mat sochna ki main kuch kahungi nahi muje jaldi se badi mami banna hai..........aur Tai yeh kya aap aaj ke din ro rahi hai.......aap to hamesha hasti huyi achchi lagti hai.........aur yeh mat bhulna ki mere jane ke baad aap hi ko is ghar me sabhi ke khane pine ka khayal rakhna hai...........aur Rudra.......tujse kya kahoon........teri to sikayat karungi Sujal se........koi bhi baat meri nahi manta........lekin tera main sukhriya karungi ki teri hi waje se meri shaadi Sujal se huyi ......aur Prem tu.....tu kyun ro raha hai......pata hai tere Bhai kabhi yeh nahi dekh payenge woh tujme apne aap ko dekhte the..........aur tujse main kya kahoon tu to her pal mere saath khada hai........teri hi waje se main pehli bar Sujal se mili..........tum sab ki waje se hum ek dusre ko jane aur phir pyaar ho gaya..........aur is khubsurat zindagi me mere sapno ka rajkumar dene ke liye aap sabka bahot bahot sukhriya............Maya bua........kabhi bhi mere Sujal ko baki ke bacho se alag mat sochiyega kyunki woh to aap me bhi apni maa ko dekhte the............woh jis tarah kabhi Mama ka kehna naa nahi keh sake waise hi aapko kyunki woh aapko mama ki tarah pujte the...........is liye ho sake to mere Sujal se kabhi khafa mat hona...........aur Sampada chachi main aapse kuch nahi kahungi ........sirf itna kahungi ki Papa ne jo faisla liya tha woh aapki achchai ko soch ke liya tha kyunki agar aap ko sach pata chalta to aap us sach ke saath nahi jee sakte is liye ab aapko hi mere Mama papa ka khayal rakhna hai................ab to aap sabko ehsaas ho gaya hoga ki maine apni sari jimedariyaan nibha di hai.......sare vaade pure kar diye maine...........lekin abhi bhi ek vaada maine pura nahi kiya jo ek patni ne apne pati se kiya tha.........maine shaadi ke waqt kasam khayi thi ki zindagi ki is taraf aur zindagi ke us taraf ki zindagi me hamesha Sujal ka haath thame rakhungi..........ab woh to muje chod ke pehle chale gaye lekin woh aaj bhi mera intzaar kar rahe hai aur main ab kitna intzaar karati .........ab muje apna vaada nibhana hai kyunki Sujal muje lene aa rahe hai........lekin hum chale gaye iska yeh matlab ki aap sab hume bhul jaye..........main janti hoon ki aap sab to kya aap sabke bache bhi hume nahi bhul payenge..........ab meri sirf ek aakhri khawish hai jise Mehek tumhe pura karna hai.........kyunki tum hi chahti thi ki tum muje hamesha Dulhan ki tarah sajao.......to aaj main chahti hoon ki tum muje Dulhan ki tarah sajake bida karo......kyunki main aaj apne Sujal ke pass pehli bar itne waqt ke bad ja rahi hoon aur abhi tak Sujal ne muje is jode me to dekha hi nahi..........main janti hoon sab muje galat samjenge lekin mere liye aap itna to kar sakte hai.........maine apna shaadi ka joda apne dresser pe rakha hai aur uske saath wahi lal choodiyaan jo pehli bar Sujal mere liye leke aaye the.......aur jate waqt mere haath me mera magalsutra muje chahiye...aur ek vaada kijiye aap sab ki kabhi bhi koi bhi jahag aap hum dono ki tasvir ko alag nahi karenge..........Kashish ki tasvir hamesha Sujal ke saath hi rahegi kyunki Sujal aur Kashish ko koi alag nahi karta........kyunki woh to marke zinda honewalo me se hai...............ab muje izzat dijiye apne Sujal ke pass jane ki..........lekin anjane me mujse aur Sujal se kabhi bhi koi bhi bhul ho gayi ho to hume apna samaj ke maff kar dena.........aur jab bhi aap hume yaad kare to ek muskaan ke saath yaad kijiyega kyunki hum yahi aap sabke dil me ehsaas banke rehne wale hai................

aapki Kashish

sab log aise hi bas us khat ko aur Kashish ko dekhte rehte hai.................

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ab raat ke andhere me sirf kisi ke paayal ki aawaz aa rahi hoti hai.......jab hum dekhte hai to Kashish dulhan ki tarah saz ke aa rahi hoti hai...........woh chalte chalte ek zeel ke pass aati hai jaha pe koi betha hua hota hai ..........kashish jake uske kandhe pe apna haath rakhti hai..................woh piche mudke dekhta hai aur uski khushi ka koi thikana nahi rehta..............

Sujal: Kashish tum...........tum yaha........muje to abhi bhi yakeen nahi hota...............

Kashish: aapke kadmo ki aahat ko sunte main chali aayi..........

Sujal just smiles and lost in her beauty..........

Kashish: aap muje aise kyun dekh rahe hai..............

Sujal: apni dulhan ko jee bhar ke dekh raha hoon.......jitne bhi tumhe dulhan ke roop me dekhne ke khawab dekhe the woh sab joothe the kyunki aaj to khud chaand tumhare aage juk gaya hai......bahot hi khubsurat lag rahi ho.........lekin bahot intzaar karaya hai is din ka.............

Kashish: janti hoon lekin dekha ab aur nahi karna pada..........

Sujal: kaise tumhe waha main akele chod sakta tha....nahi dekh sakta main tumhe kisi aur ke saath......kya karoon bahot swarthi hoon tumhe leke......kabhi apna pyaar batna nahi sikha na...aur main to yeh bhi janta hoon ki tum mere bigar khush kaise reh sakti ho.......aur phir maine kaha tha na ki tumhare liye ek aisa insaan hai jise tumhare aanshu se sabse jyada dard hota hai.........

Kashish: aur maine bhi aapse kaha tha na ki ek aisi insaan hai jo aapke liye apni jaan bhi de sakti hai...........Sujal muje maut ka darr nahi laga kyunki maut ke darr ke aage muje woh darr mar raha tha ki Kashish ke naam ke saath kisi aur ka........aur aaj to aapse milne ki khushi me muje maut bhi haseen lagi......koi taklif nahi huyi bas aaj maut ka sukhriya karti hoon jisne muje aapse milaya hai..........

Sujal: bahot achche se janta hoon kyunki koi pagal hi hoga jo muj jaise se itna pyaar kar sakta hai..........

Kashish: koi khusnaseeb hoga jise aapko pyaar karne ka moka mila hai............

Sujal: khusnaseeb to main hoon Kashish ki tum phir se meri zindagi me aa gayi........

Kashish: aur ab ki baar kabhi nahi jaungi aapko chod ke...........lekin is bar aapke liye kuch leke aayi hoon........

Sujal: kya..........

Kashish apna haath Sujal ke samne kholti hai jisme uska mangalsutra hota hai............Sujal kashish ki aur mukurata hai aur uske haath se mangalsutra leke use pehna deta hai.........Kashish Sujal ki aur dekhti hai aur phir tut ke rone lagti hai...............

Sujal: kyun Kashish.........aaj kyun ro rahi ho.......aaj to khushi ka din hai...........

Kashish: main to bahot khush hoon............aapse teen mahine ek din barah ghante pachis minute ke bad jo mil rahi hoon,,,,,,,,,,,,,,aap mujse vaada kariye ki ab aap muje chod ke kabhi nahi jayenge.............

Sujal: main tumse vaada karta hoon ki kabhi bhi apni Kashish ko chod ke kahi nahi jaunga..........lekin tumhe bhi mujse ek vaada karna hoga ki in aankhoin me tum kabhi aanshu nahi aane dongi kyunki main inme apna pyaar aur aanewale kal ke sapne sajana chahta hoon..............

he bends down and kiss her tears and took her in his arms............the moment has stopped for them bcoz its been long time that they havent had this moment............they were feeling each other after long..............

Kashish: Sujal ek bar keh dijiyena........

Sujal:kya......

Kashish: wahi jo main sunna chahti hoon........

Sujal: I... love ....You ....Kashish....................

Kashish: pata hai yeh teen shabd sunne ke liye main taras gayi thi..........

Sujal; aur main bhi........

Kashish: I love you Sujal.............bahot bahot pyaar karti hoon.......

Sujal: main bhi to tumme jita hoon Kashish..............

Kashish: aur yeh Kashish to bahot pehle se aapme sama gayi hai.............

Sujal: to ab mil gayi hai to is bar apni baahoin se main nahi jane dunga..........

Kashish: abhi bhi.......

Sujal: abhi bhi se kya matlab........main to pehle se hi aisa hoon...........

Kashish: janti hoon ........lekin phir bhi aaphi ko dil de beththi hoon..........

Sujal: kyunki main hoon hi aisa.............

Kashish: kyunki aap bahot achche hai.........mere bhagwan ki tarah.........

Sujal: aaj bhi itna vishwas hai..........

Kashish: mere liye to pyaar aur vishwas ka dusra naam hi Sujal hai.............

Sujal: aur mere liye zindagi ka naam Kashish hai.................I love you Kashish.........

Kashish: I love you too Sujal...........

He just hugges her so tight and than after sometimes he sits down on the rock and made her sits beside her and he held her from the shoulder while she puts her head on his shoulder holding his hand ........they both looked at the moon and than looked at each other.................

Kehte hai ko jo pyaar sachcha hota hai woh zindagi ki is aur ya to zindagi ki us aur mil hi jata hai...........kyunki bichadke milna to bahot pehle hi inki kismat me tai ho gaya hota hai..........kisi ko zindagi dena use pyaar sikhana kismat ke haath me hai lekin us pyaar ko nibhana aur apne pyaar ka milan sab insaan ka dil tai karta hai................kisi ko pyaar karna aasan hai lekin usi pyaar ke junoon me apni jaan ko deke apne pyaar se milna bhi apne aap me ek pagalpan hai lekin woh pagalpan woh junoon wahi samaj sakta hai.........pehle hume ek dusre se pyaar hota hai phir ishq.....phir mohabbat......aur phir mohabbat junoon aur junoon pagalpan ban jata hai.........pagalpan ka woh nasha hamesha ke liye logo ki aankhoin me reh jata hai jis waqt aaj hum sab ki aankhoin me Sujal aur kashish ki prem kahani basi huyi hai............jo kabhi bhi bhuli nahi ja sakti.........

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Friends! i want to thank you all for your love and support thorough out this ff. Without you, i wont be able to write this far. So, i am truly thankful for that. I appriciate everyone's comments. Your comments make me to write something better than last time. So thanks a lot.....
I want to Know
how you feel about the story?
which is ur most favorite romantic scene?
which is the scene that i made u cry?
which is the scene that i made u laugh?
what is the best thing u like about Sujal and Kashish?
what meaning of love did u learn from this ff?
ple write something that u want me to say something as we travelled so far togather
love
kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
it is was very emotional bt u ended it it was really nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg kashish wat an end some where down the line mujhe yeh pasand nahi aya sorry 4 that lekin u have always potrayed kashish as a strong person she dying by commiting sucide was to shocking anyways gr8 part and a gr8 story
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Posted: 16 years ago
how you feel about the story?
It was different from the rest! Keep up the great work!
which is ur most favorite romantic scene?
All the scenes where they showed their love to each other, whether it was their honeymoon, or shopping, or in front of their families. Best one was right before they were supposed to get married again.
which is the scene that i made u cry?
Cry, it would be when Sujal was dead
which is the scene that i made u laugh?
When all the guys were sneaking and watching the girls!
what is the best thing u like about Sujal and Kashish?
Their everlasting love story, even after death, they could not be apart!
what meaning of love did u learn from this ff?
Love has no boundries, it can happen when you atleast expect it. Experience it to the fullest!

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