RN fic...confusion...(ud pg26) - Page 2

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap i think naina will think huda as raj it would be fun.

thankuuu soo muchh dearrrr......
hmm....lets see what happen....

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Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

it sounds very interesting and happening....so please continue 😉

thankuuu sooo muchh dearrrr....
will continue today itself.. in 10 min....

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Originally posted by: RSZR

IT WAS REALLY GOOD SO PLS UPDATE SOON 👏 ... I AM EAGERLY WAITING.... 😃

thankuuu sooo muchh dearrr... will continue in 10 min.....

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Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

wooooow...ekdum mast yaar...title is awesum...and yes make Naina, a RJ...as she is very cheerful...thanks dear for starting this exciting RN ff...u r superb but please update soon...

thankuuuu sooo muchhh dearrrr....
i got different views for naina's profession... lets see....
aww...😳... thanks for the beautiful comment... i hope i will live upto ur expectations......

will update today itself in 10 min....

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Originally posted by: litika

veryyy cool...update soon 😛

thankuuu sooo muchhh dearr... will update in 10 min....

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Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

woooooohoooo!! your back where did you disappear of too .. yaar sooo sorryy,..... actually i had exams so...i stopped coming online... and was really missing IF.. but now i am back...anyways a new fic i love the title confusion it's so cool and the first part was awsome!!! thankuuu sooo muchhh dearr...😊as well loved the alekh and huda part, mahabaaaaaaaaarat mahabaraaaaaaaat 😆 .... thankuu thankuu... iss baar dono ki maha bharat hi hogi...so naina thinks that huda is raj, hiw wrong could dhe get huda jaise flirt ko koi raj kaise samaj sakta hain...... she is naina... her other name is confusion and galatfehmi... in serial also she was always confused... whether capt. killed her brother if yes then why... do she love him and all.... she is actually confusion....😆 and now i have a feeling that everyone is going to play along to this and for the whole holiday naina is going to think that huda is raj and raj is huda 😆 that would be fun to watch...... hmm... lets see what happen.... may be ur prediction is correct....😉

anyhoooooo glad your back i was missing you other fic..... and once again amazing update sheenu 👏 👏 ...... aww... thankuuu soo muchh dearr for the beautiful comment........

take care 😃
yasmin

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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Make Naina NDTV reporter!!Isse we can keep her connected to Raj and Navin as in remember Lakshya!!!

But yaar anyways reporter!!!Naina as RJ we have had before!!!

no comment on the part???.........
ok i got diff.. suggetions... lets see what will i make her....
waise i also think of making her a reporter....
thanks for commenting...

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Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

plzzzzzzz cont soon......

continuing..... in 2 min.....
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enjoy the part..... well i think naina should be a reporter.... lets see what will i make her....

PART 2

Suddenly the door of the compartment burst open and a sound came……

Voice: BHAII…….. RAJJJJJJJJJJJ and she jumps on huda and hugs him………..

And says RAJ I MISSED U A LOT……..

Huda: whattt???? Who are you????

Naina: oh come on raj… tumne mujhe nahi pehchana….……

Huda: but I am not….. (interrupted by Navin)….

Navin: of course pehcaan liya…… array raj tu bhul gaya tujhe kal hi to hamari family pic dikhayi thi….

Huda: navinnnn… kya bol……

Navin: chal ab jyada drame mat kar… apni bachpann ki dost se itne saal baad mil raha hai…(winking)……

Huda: lekin navin… inhe shayad koi galatfehmi……

Navin: array raj (winking)…. Kya ho gaya tujhe??? Naina kitne saal baad tujhe mil rahi hai aur tu hai ki tune usse hi tak nahi ki……

Naina: haan bhai dekho na… raj kitna badal gaya hai…. raj kya ho gaya tumhe. Lagta hai tum mujhe bhul hi gaye ho……

From her back:

Voice: kaun kisse bhul gaya???\

Naina, huda and navin look towards compartment door…… and no points for guessing….. Raj was standing there with a bag……

Raj: array Navin.. kya hua tum sab mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho???... aur tum (pointing towards Naina..)… NAINAAAA……

Navin: ofcourse huda… she is my sis jiski pic maine tumhe kal dikhayi thi…..

Raj: HUDAAA…

Navin: array huda kya hua tujhe… meet my little sis Naina……

Raj:lekinnn…………..

At the door two persons were talking…

Alekh (muttering): saala apni hi behen ko chuna laga raha hai……

Abhimanyu (whispering to him): kahin tumhe bhi to wahi nahi lag raha jo hame lag raha hai……..

Alekh (whispering back): ye navin shana apni behen ko confuse karke ulloo bana raha hai….

Abhimanyu: lekin kyu???

Alekh (whispering): kya pata??/ lekin for the time being lets play along… ye navin saale ka dimag iss baar kis aur daud raha hai khud hi baad mei bata dega….

Abhimanyu: lekin aisa kaise???

Alekh (whispering): dekh Navin naina se bahut pyar karta hai to kuch gadbad agar wo kar raha hai to Naina ko jyada nuksaan nahi pahunchayega…. Saath hi jab hum last time idhar aaya tha to bhul gaya tu naina ne kaise iski band bajayi thi…. Lagta hai ye uske hi badla le raha hai… Naina ne kabhi raj aur Huda ko nahin dekha hai .. to ye shana Navin usse ulloo bana raha hai… kya khichdi pak rahi hai iske dimag ye khud hi bata dega…. Varna mai to hun hi Naina ko bachane ke liye is pagal bhai se…. meri bhi to behen hai wo……..

Abhumanyu (whispering): thik hai alekh baba… I mean bhaiya…. Dekhte hai ye Navin kya kya karta hai… par ye Raj aur huda unhe kaun samjhayega….

Alekh (whispering): dekhta ja.. ye Navin bahut shana hai…. unhe bhi pata lega… aur unhe yahan unka muuh kholne ka mauka bhi nahi dega…. Ye apna plan successful banane ke liye kuch bhi karega……

Navin (winking): array huda kya hua tujhe??? Lagta hai tujhe bhi Raj (pointing towards huda) ki tarah kuch ho gaya hai….

Raj: Navinnn….. ye kya…….

Navin: array huda…tu baki sab ko nahi laya… abhimanyu aur aalekh bhi to tere compartment mei the.. wo kahan hai???

Hum yahan hai……..

Abhimanyu: jarra piche mud kar to dekhiye…. Narad muni… I mean Navin ji….

Alekh: hi naina… kaisi hai tu???

Naina: mai thik hun alekh bhaiya…. Lekin dekhiye na raj (pointing towards huda) ko kya ho gaya hai… pehle mujhe pehchana nahi.. aur ab bhi kaisi behki behki baatein kar raha hai…

Alekh (looking towards navin): array kuch nahi hua usse… lamba safar tha to so gaya hoga.. aur abhi utha hoga.. isliye neend mei hoga… ab huda (pointing towards raj) bhi to pure raaste sote hue hi aaya hai.. isliye wo bhi behki behki baatein kar raha hai….

naina: theek hai bhaiya… ab chalo sab jaldi se niche utro… ritu bhabhi sabka wait kar rahi hai….

navin: ritu bhi aayi hai….

naina: haan mere pyare pyare bhaiya…. Apki hone waali wife station pe sabka wait kar rahi hai chaliye…

navin: tu ja… usko akela kyu chodd ke aayi… hum sab apna samaan utaar kea ate hai……

naina: thik hai bhaiya.. jaldi aana….aur raj tum bhi tab tak thik tarah se hosh mei aake aana…..

huda: lekin mai…

raj: ye tum isse raj……

navin (interrupting both): haan haan sis… in dono ko mai thik karke laata hun… tum jaao…..

naina leaves and then….. imagine the scene of the compartment……..

raj: ye sab kya hai navin….

Huda: tum ye kya bakwaas kar rahe the…

Raj: behke hue hum hai ya tum…

Huda: aur pure raaste sote hue kaun aaya hai kaidi….

Raj: ab kuch bolo bhi…… tum naina se ye juth kyu bol rahe the….

Huda: tumne mujhe raj kyu bulaya… aur isse huda kyu…

Raj: kya khichdi pak rahi hai tumhare dimag mei….

Raj: kuch bologe ya yuhi buth banke khade rahoge……….

Navin: relax guys relax…. Mujhe kuch bolne ka mauka to do….

Raj: kyu tune diya hame bolne ka mauka naina ke samne…. Kuch bolne hi nahi de rahe the tum… mujhe abhi ke abhi explanation chaiye…

Navin: relax guys…. Mujhe pata hai tum dono bahut confuse ho aur gusse mei bhi…… alekh, abhi tum dono ko samajh aa gaya na….

Alekh: hum iss jatt ki tarah tube light nahi hai… hum sab kuch samajh gaye

Huda: oye kaidi.. tube light kisse bola be tu…

Navin: to kya galat bola usne… tum dono (pointing towards raj and huda) hi to tube light ho… mai itni der se aankh maar maar ke thak gaya… par tum dono ko mera ishara samajh nahi aaya….

Raj: accha to tum hame aankh maar rahe the… mujhe laga tumhari aankh mei kuch chala gaya ya kuch kharabi aa gayi hai….

Navin: shut up… accha mai samjhata hun yahan kya ho raha tha……

Raj: haan haan.. ab jaldi bolne ka kasht karo… warna tumhe aur bahut jagah kasht ho jayega…..

Navin: array raj…. Thik hai suno… tumhe pata hai naina hame kitna ullo banati hai bachpan se… kitne badi drame baaj hai wo….to..

Raj: kahin isliye to tum naina ko ulloo banane ka nahi soch rahe the…. Aur isliye to tune usse saara juth nahi bola… kyuki naina ne mujhe aur huda ko kabhi dekha nahi hai… isliye kahin tum usse mere aur huda mei confuse to nahi kar rahe….

Alekh: saala…. Abhi tak to isse kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha…ab puri ki puri chakravyuh yojna isse ek baar mei samajh aa gayi……..

Navin: ji saale saab… sahi samjhe hai ab aap…. Bilkul yahi hua hai….

Huda: koi mujhe bhi samjhayega kya ho raha hai….

Alekh (muttering): pura tube light hai… raj ko to fir bhi samajh aa gaya par ye…

Raj (ignoring huda): par navin ye galat hai… naina ke emotions se aise nahi khel sakte hum…. Mai usse sab sach bata dunga…

Navin: NAHINNN… ruko raaj…..dekho hum uske emotions ke saath nahi khel rahe hai… bas kuch dino ki baat hai… 4-5 days mei usse sab sach bata denge….waise bhi ye idea mere dimag mei pehle nahi tha… wo to jab naina ne huda ko tum samajh ke hug kiya… to mujhe dhyan aaya ki naina ko hamara compartment no. pehle se pata tha.. to jab usne huda ko mere saath dekha to usse raj samajh liya… maine socha ki hamesha hame ulloo banate aayi hai… kuch din ham bhi bana lete hai… plz raj plz huda…. Kuch din bas…. Meri barso ki tammana puri ho jayegi…

Huda: hmm… ab iss jatt ko sab samajh aaya… dekh navin mujhe to koi problem nahi… par kahin tumhari behen mere charm se ghayal na ho jaye…..

Raj: shut up huda.. naina ke saath aisa kuch nahi hoga… mai usse acche se janta hun…

Huda: accha bada bharosa hai apne bachpan ke pyar par… chal dekhte hai…. ab vo mujhe waise bhi raj samajhti hai dekhte hai kitni din mujhse dur rahegi….

Raj: dekh lena huda… chahe vo mujhe huda samjhe par mai usse janta hun vo kabhi tumhare chakkar mai nahi aayegi…

Navin: chal raja b dikha dete hai ki tera bachpann ka pyar kitna strong hai… koi naam ka change usse rok nahi paayega….

Raj: thik hai….

Alekh (smiling and thinking): kitna bada duffer hai ye raj… ye bhi nahi socha ki in sab baato mei usne ye accept kar liya ki vo naina se bachpan se pyar karta hai… ab mai dekhta hun ki kaise ye jatt meri behen ke saath khilwad karta hai…agar mai naina ko acche se samajh paya hun to vo bhi raj se pyar karti hai.. aur koi naam waam usse apne pyar se dur nahi rakh payega……bas kahin ye log iss game ko jyada aage na khich le… kyuki naina apne emotions se itna bada khilwad bardaast nahi kar payegi……

Raj: array navin mai tumhe kuch batana to bhul gaya…..

Navin: haan bolo….

Raj: ritu to mujhe pehchanti hai… aur mere parents bhi…… agar mai aise platform pe gaya to ritu….

Navin: ohh… ye to maine socha nahin… aisa karte hai… mai jata hun ritu ke saath saara samaan leker aur raaste mei usse sab samjha dunga… aur tum sab aao naina ke saath uski gaadi mei… pehle mai jaata hun……. Alekh tum dekhna kahin ye log koi gadbad na karre….

Alekh: thik hai………..

So first navin gets down

Naina: bhai aap baki sab kahan hai……….. aur raj.... is he ok now……

navin: kya baat hai sis… badi chinta hai uski..

Naina: shut up bhai…

Navin: ok ok… listen I wanna say something…..

Naina: haan bolo bhai…..

Navin: sun wo actually I was not able to meet ritu in past 8 months.. and now because of engagement I won't be able to meet her in next two days… and if all come along with us….

Naina: ok ok bhai… I understood… you want to go with her alone and that's why you are dumping me with your four friends……

Navin: array waah… you are much more intelligent then I thought…..

Naina: no need for buttering bhai… you go with ritu.. I will bring your friends…

Navin: wo naina… drop raj, huda and alekh at raj's place and bring abhimanyu along with you at home…….ritu will drop me at home……..

Naina: but why alekh bhaiya… I mean why can't he stay with us???

Navin: kyuki wo dono duffers pe nazar rakhega… nahi wo actually raj will need help for engagement and all… and huda is very lazy…… and you know alekh… he will make raj's work easier……

Naina: ok bhai….. now go… ritu is standing near her car……

And confusion for naina is still there……

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END OF PART 2…….

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