RN fic...confusion...(ud pg26) - Page 10

Originally posted by: koolarch2001

pls update soon... your ff s rockin dear 😊

updating in 15 min dear......😊
thankuuuu sooo muchhh dearrr....😊

take care.....
b bye.....
keep smiling......
sheenu......😊

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!! thankuuuu soooo muchhhh dearrrr.... i was waiting for your comment...... now i can update the fic....😊

Raj bhi naa phone ko loudspeaker pe kar diya!!! ha ha..... wo huda ko daant khaate hue dekhna chahta tha...... par kuch aur hi ho gaya......😛 Aur Huda samjha ke Navin maar gaya aur bhoot ban gaya!!! 😆 ..... huda is idiot..... 😆 Waise that reminds me of the serial...Navin being a bhoot and speaking!!!! 😆 ......... navin was our sweet cute bhoot giving commentry on every scene......😆😆.......

Aur Huda ne sab bata diya ke usne kya kya kiya hai!!!! ...😆he is so duffer.... 😆 Navin got punished because that Huda snitched to MC!!!! 😡 Poor Navin!!!!! ... huda is not that bad... atleast not as navin is......😆 navin ne bhi bahut kuch kiya hai academy mei..........😆

Ab Huda toh gaya!!!Really it was too funny!!!! 😆 .......... 😆😆 .. nahi gaya coz navin needs his help..... lekin wo kahin aur jarur jayega....😆 read the next part......😆

Raj ka kya call aaya headquarters se?? 😕 😕 😕 ... hmm... only u noticed that.... that is something which is gong to happen in near future..Aur usne Navin se privately isi baare mein baat ki naa?? .. may be or may be not....... Is trouble on the way?? 😕 😕 .... arrey trouble will not be there for atleast next few parts... it will come later on... and yes one special person's life will change after that........but for now don't worry......😊

I just loved Raj and Naina's scene where he pushes her against the wall!!!!Haaiiii!!!! 😳 It was my favourite scene in the whole episode!!!! .....😆😆.. he was being naughty....... abhi to bahut kuch karne waala hai wo.......

Raj Naina se karvaye ga kya?? 😛 ... dekh lena... in next part.............😆😆.......

Raj Naina se filhaal toh bet ke naam pe bahut kaam karva raha hai!!! 😆 Raj is so naughty!!! ...... yes he is smart... ek bet mei hi saare kaam karva raha hai.... and he is really very naughty...... Naina ko itna bhi mat satao!!! 😆 .... arrey naina ne bhi bechare ko bahut tang kiya hai.... aur karne bhi wali hai.....😆😆

Aur Huda..... Aalekh se sahi kaha yeh kabhi nahi sudhar sakta!!! .... huda to hai hi duffer stupid ulloo...... Aur Navin ne isse Raj bana diya!!! ... navin ko koi aur nahi mila na... aur naina ne khud hi usse raj bana diya tha..... 😆😆Huda toh apni so called sister ko bhi nahi baksha!!! 😆 ........ huda to hai hi flirt..... har janani i mean ladki se flirt maarna uski purani adat hai......😆😆

Yeh Raj aur Navin har waqt sambhalte rehte hai!!Warna gar Huda ko Naina ke saath akela chhoda jaye toh ek minute mein bhanda phhot jayega!!! 😆 .......... yes they both are smart and intelligent... and huda doesn't get caught becoz of them... and naina will surely catch him in a min......after all she is sis of the gr8 navin....😆😆

Naina ko bhi Raj ke kehne par kya kya kaam nahi karna pad raha hai!!!!Aur yeh keh rahi hai ke yeh sab Raj ke liye kar rahi hai!!!! 😆 .......😆😆... haan raj ke kehne pe raj ke liye hi kaam kar rahi hai par soch rahi hai ki huda ke liye kar rahi hai sab.....

Toh Naina sirf Raj ke liye coffee aur khana banati thi!!!! 😳 ........ saare kaam sirf uske liye hi karti thi.....aur ab bhi uske liye hi kar rahi hai....... he was her best friend after all.........😊

Lekin usse baar baar pani bhi mangwana!!! 😛 😛 Very bad Raj!!! 😡 ....... arrey he is just laying with her after all naina also has played him a lot in past...... but very bad raj baar baar paani piyoge to tum khud hi fasoge........😆

Ab Naina kya karegi!!!! 😛 .. dekh lena........ Usne kya milaya hai pani mein?? ... something which is very horrible ..... but not for raj...Ab itna pareshan karega toh Naina bhi chup thode hi bethegi!!! 😛 ... haan wo to hai.... par dekhte hai raj pe uska kya asar padega........😆😆

take care.....
b bye.....
keep smiling......
sheenu......😊

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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

superb yaar. .... thankuuuuuu sooooooo muchhh dearrrrrr..........
Naina ka dimaag aakhir chal hi gaya. ...haan chala to par dekho uska kuch fayda bhi hai ya nahi.........😆😆
Raj bhi na us ko pareshaan hi kiye jaa raha hai to bechari kare bhi to kya? ........ raj is naughty.... 😆par wo bhi bechari nahi hai.... just wait and watch she will more horrible things then him.........😆
Ye Huda mujhe to lag raha hai 4 din bhi nahi kar paayega aise acting. ... wo to ek min bhi nahi kar sakta...... navin, raj aur alekh hi usse bachate rehte hai............. 😆😆
Navin bhi kuch jyada hi over react kar raha hai bet k liye.Khud hi to banaya tha ye sab . ........ navin kuch nahi kahega... usse pata hai sab uska kiya hua hai.......😆..wo to bas formality ke liye sab dikha raha hai..... warna he knows raj very well and he knows thar raj will never do anything bad with naina..........
Good funny update. thankuuuu soooo muchhh dearrr
Update soon........updating in 10 min..........😊

take care.....
b bye.....
keep smiling......
sheenu......😊

Originally posted by: rituka7

update soon.....

just wait for 10 min dear.... i need to do some editing.....

take care.....
b bye.....
keep smiling......
sheenu......😊

Sorry friends I am again late……. But it's just that I am very busy now-a-days… friends I want to share a very good news with all of you…… my friends and I are going to watch Aamir on Monday……… yippee😊… I am really very happy……..😊 First only I and one friend of mine were going but after the reviews given to Aamir all my friends agreed to watch Aamir….. 😊 I am sure Aamir will rock….. 😊I can't wait till Monday…… 😊

Now enjoy the update……….

PART 5

Naina: kuch soch naina…. Warna ye aise hi tujhse kaam karvata rahega bet ke naam pe…………. IDEA…………….and she mixed something in water………….

Outside:

Navin: kya gadbad hai raj????.....

Raj, huda both: kya hua?????

Navin: godd…… I am talking to you (pointing at the real one)…… the real raj….huda you have to act like raj in front of naina and not always…..

Huda: he he….. bhool gaya tha………

Navin: batao kya hua hai?? badi der se dekh raha hun.. you are drinking water as if your life depends on it….. kya hua??... kahin……..

Raj: array navin tum apne kaam pe dhyan do…. mei jo kar raha hun uspe nahin…..

Alekh: mai batata hun…… ye naina ko tang karne ke liye ye sab kar raha hai… dekha nahi tune hamesha usse hi bolta hai pani lane ke liye….. par mujhe ye samajh nahi aata ki wo iski baat kyu maan rahi hai………

Navin: kahin tum uske bet haarne ki wajah se ye sab to nahi karva rahe………lekin fir wo itni der se kyu tumhari baat maan rahi hai…. jabki usse to sirf ek baar jo tum bolo wo karna tha………. Chakkar kya hai…..

Raj: tum meri taraf dhyan dena chodo…. ab naina meri baat kyu maan rahi hai ye mai ttumhe nahi bata sakta…………Kya maine tumse poocha ki tum itni der se ritu se chipak ke kyu baithe ho……..

Navin: wo.. wo…. Actually……………..

But before he can speak he saw naina standing at the door……..

Navin: array sis aao na tum bhi baith ke movie dekho…….

Naina: jarur bhaiya….. lekin movie to mai tab dekhun na jab koi mujhe dekhne de…… ye lo tumhara paani huda…… (with a little smile)……..

Raj (thinking): ye itna smile kyu kar rahi hai…… beta raj kuch gadbad hai is paani mei…………. Kya karu???.........

Naina: kya hua huda…. Tum kis soch mei pad gaye….. ye lo tumhara paani… tumne mangaya tha na……

Raj: hn… haan… actually is baar paani maine raj ke liye mangaya tha…I have drunk 5 glasses in last 1 hr so I am not thirsty… but raj is……hey raj here is your water…….. drink it (handling the glass to huda)………..

Naina (getting tensed): p… par wo… ye to tumhare liye…….

Raj: arrey raj is thirsty I am not…… so let him drink….

Naina: lekin…… ye tumne mujhe pehle kyu nahi bola………….

Huda: arrey kudiye kya hua??,….. waise bhi ye huda sahi keh raha hai…… I am very thirsty…..

Alekh: kyu nahi hoga… saare popcorn akela jo kha gaya hai……… pyaas to lagegi hi……

Huda: oye chup kar kaidi…….. chal mujhe paani peene de…….

Naina: nahinn…. But before she can stop him, fake raj I mean Huda drank whole water……………………

Naina (thinking): god… ab kya hoga…. Help him……..

Raj (thinking): kyu naina mujhe ye paani pilana chahti thi na….. lekin I am very smart…… bachpan se tumhare saath raha hun…. Ab tum mujhe ulloo nahi bana sakti….. if I am nt wrong u mixed something in the water… kahin wo dawai to nahi jo tumne navin no..…oh god……. (smiling)……huda tu to ab gaya….. *kahan*………. *pata lag jayega thodi der mei…. Let the medicine work*……………….. hey bhagwan help captain amardeep huda…………..

After some time

Huda: arrey mei abhi aata hun….

Alekh: kahan ja raha hai tu???

Huda: arrey mei jara fresh hoke aata hun… tum log movie ke aage ka part mujhe bata dena……..

Naina (thinking): oh no… lagta hai medicine ne asar karna shuru kar diya… naina ye tune kya kar diya…. Raj to tujhe kuch nahi keh raha tha aur tune usse wo dawai khila di aur ye huda dekho kaise haste hue movie dekh raha hai (glaring him)….. lekin isme meri koi galti nahi mei to paani huda ke liye lai thi… raj ne khud usse piya hai..

Raj (smiling and thinking) : kyu naina pad gayi na tumhari chaal ulti…. Ab ye huda waapas to aane nahi waala…. Kyuki jahan tak mujhe lagta hai tumne isse loose-motions hone ki medicine di hai…… bechara huda…. (smiling)…. Bekaar mei fas gaya……..

Huda came back in 5 min… after another 5 min…..

Huda: mai jara abhi aata hun…

Navin: kya hua t……….

But before he can complete his question he saw that huda has already left the room running……….

After around 20 minutes….

Navin: ye huda I mean huda raj ko akhir hua kya hai… he is coming and going in every 5 min and where is he going????.......and why are you smiling ???? ….

Raj (smiling): nahi kuch nahi bas aise hi…. Haan ye raj ko kya ho gaya???

Alekh: arrey itne popcorn khaye hai usne…. Isliye aisa ho raha hai…….

Raj starts laughing…

Navin: ab tumhe kya ho gaya…..

Raj: nahi kuch nahi.. bas movie ke scene pe hasi aa gayi……

After 10 minutes….

Navin: yaar is baar raj abhi tak nahi aaya… kya ho gaya usse…..

From back

Huda: arrey ….. hhuf..huf… mei…….huf…huf… yaha…..huf huf……..hun……huf huf……..dosto……….

Navin: arrey raj tum kahan reh……..

But before he can complete his sentence huda was gone again…..

Navin: arrey isse fir kya hua????

After some time….

Huda (from door): koi ……. Huf huf…… doctor……. Huf huf……. Ko…… huf huf …………. Bulao……

And saying this he again ran backwards…..

Navin: arrey rajjjjjjjj…….. kya hua tumhe?????

Naina: bhai mei doctor ko bula ke aati hun……raj ko loose-motion hua hai… I mean mujhe aisa lagta hai ki usse wo hua hai.…..

And she was gone……………

Navin: ab isse kya hua??? Aur raj tum kyu itna smile kar rahe ho…….

Raj: nahi kuch nahi…….. (smirks)….. jara tum yahi ruko mai abhi aata hun……

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Downstairs……

Naina turns after putting down the phone and our hero was already there….

Raj (smirking): toh miss naina…. Plan flop…….

Naina (turning away): kaun sa plan???

Raj (smirking): kaun sa…… well mujhe wo paani pilane ka jisme tumne kuch milaya tha…..aur jisse peene se raj ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi….

Naina: maine usme kuch nahi milaya tha… you get that….

Raj: accha to fir usse peene ke baad raj ki tabiyat kaise kharab ho gayi….

Naina:w… wo…. Actually………

Raj: haan haan mei sun raha hun… bolo…….

Naina: darasal…….

Raj: haan haan… dekho mere kaan bilkul thik hai…. bolo mei sun raha hun…

Naina: fine…. Thik hai maine milaya tha paani mei medicine……..

Raj (smirking): and may I know why????

Naina: WHY???????? Tum itni der se mujhe pareshaan kar rahe the isliye……lekin mujhe kya pata the wo paani raj pi lega…..duffer kahin ka….

Raj: thik hai ab galti ki to uski sazza to milegi hi tumhe……

Naina: whatt???? Sazza…… no way…… I already have done all work of yours and now I am not going to do any more work……

Raj: accha fir jo bet tum mujhse haari thi…. Uske liye mai tumse…..

Naina: arrey bhaad mei gayi tumhari bet….. now I am not going to do anything else… you get that…. kya karwaoge tum mujhse…… itni der se to dhamki de ke saara kaam karwa rahe ho……..

Raj holds her hand and pulls her to him…….

Raj: fine tumhari bet ki sazza aur abhi jo tumne kiya uski sazza ye hai ki… (comes very close to her)…. Ki………. (looks in her eyes and forces her to look in his eyes)…………… ki……..

Naina (looks in his deep black eyes): ki……..

Raj: ki……

Naina: hmmm…………

Raj: ki kal tum engagement party mei dance karogi aur gaana gaaogi…….. and leaves her and starts laughing……..

Naina: what???? mai aur dance no way………

Raj: kyu tumhe dance karna nahi aata…………

Naina: dekho mr……jab naina dance karti hai na to sab usse dekhte reh jaate hai………

Raj: to fir tum kal dance karte hue itna darr kyu rahi ho…….

naina: fine…. And you get lost from here before I kill you……..

and then she leaves…………..

naina (in her mind): what had happened with me there??? His eyes…. Why was I looking in those deep black eyes…. His eyes look familiar….. like…. No naina… don't think like that…… you can't do that…. think about raj and not about that huda……. He is so stupid……..

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Engagement was held in a big five star hotel of delhi….. everyone from the upper middle class was present there… after all two business partners are going to become relatives……….

Mr. ah: arrey navin beta kyu itna bechain ho rahe ho…. Shekhawat's bas aate hi honge….. maine abhi unhe call kiya tha… they are on their way…… naina beta….

Naina: yes dad……

Naina was dressed in a beautiful light brown colored sharara with heavy work on it and whose top has a stylish cut and was short showing her belly….. (Like the one which Karina wore in bole choodiyan song from kabhi kushi kabhi ghum)

Mr. ah: arrey dekho tum mishra's ki beti se milli…. Saniya bhi NDTV channel mei news reporter hai… and khanna's…….

And this went on and on…. I don't think anyone is interested in details of these formal talks……

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Mr. and mrs. Shekhawat and ritu were in one car along with some relatives… and huda, alekh and raj were in another….

Raj: alekh… kya karna hai??? navin ne kuch bataya kya????

Alekh: kis bare mei……..

Raj: arrey mere parents bhi to hai…. naina ko aaj sab sach pata chal jaayega……

Alekh: navin ko jante hue tu aisa keh sakta hai kya????

Raj and huda both shouts without even thinking: NAHIIIIIII…………

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Outside hall navin greets mr. and mrs. Shekhawat……

And when raj and others were about to go in party hall….

Navin: ruko…….. tum log kahan ja rahe ho……..

Huda: abbey andar aur kahan……….

Navin: haan taki tum log andar jake mera saara bhanda fod do… aur aaj meri engagement ke din naina mujhe party hall mei sab ke samne mare……

Alekh: hona bhi yahi chahiye tere jaise bhai ke saath……….. tu karta hai kya apni behen ka khyal jo vo tera kare……

Navin: accha matlab mei naina ka khyal nahi karta…… kyu ritu tumhe bhi yahi lagta hai ki aaj hamari engagement ke din hi mera murder ho jaye aur tum shaadi se pehle hi widow ban jao……..

Alekh: bol nautanki… kya karna hai apun logo ko…. Saala emotional blackmail karta hai…………..

Navin (grinning): jyada kuch nahi… bas huda kal tumhari tabiyat khrab thi na.. aur tumhe loose-motions hue the……

Huda: haan to fir… aaj to ye jatt bhala changa hai… aur ladkiyon ke hosh udane ke liye bhangda karne to bhi taiyar hai…….

Navin: nahi aaj bhi tum thik nahi ho……..

Huda: oye kya bol raha hai be…… ye jatt bilkul fit-fatt hai… aur aaj to mei jamke dance bhi karunga……

Navin: nahi aaj bhi tumhari tabiyat bahut kharab hai aur tum bed rest ke alava kuch nahi karoge… ladkiyon se flirt bhi nahi…. Maine tumhare liye ek room bhi book kiya hai hotel mei……

Huda: lekin…………….

Alekh: saala……

Raj: ruko alekh mai bolta hun…… saala nautanki abhi bhi nahi samjha….. ulloo kahin ka……… 100 gadhe mare honge tab ye paida hua hoga…….

Huda: oye raj ye kya bakwaas hai tu bhi is kaidi ke dialogue maarne lag gaya…..

Alekh: nautanki…. Abhi to samjh ja…. Navin ke kehne ka matlab hai ki tumhe aaj bimar hone ki acting karni hai……. aur isliye tum poori engagement mei ek room mei rahoge jo isne book kiya hai…..

Huda: iska matlab mai poori engagement mei ladkiyon se durr ek sadde se room mei bimar hone ki acting karunga…….. yani no bhangda…..no ladkiyan…….no accha khana…… hey bhagwan bacchao…… itna julm na karo iss bacche pe……

And in response of his request raj giggled… navin smirked and alekh had just

One word to say….. nautanki……….

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END OF PART

Hmm… it was a very long part…. Again I am late…. Sorry..… from next time I will try to be on time…. Will try to update next part quickly but that will take time… coz before that I have to update RN story……..

So take care……
b bye…..

Keep smiling……

Sheenu……..😊

SUPERB UPDATE 👏 and huda tho bada ulloo hai.. 😆 😆 😆
AND YESTERDAY I HAD SEEN AAMIR...ITS A GOOD MOVIE 👍🏼 😎 ...I'm sure you will enjoy it 😉 😉

super-duper...no doubt about that....Huda ki kya band baji....hahahahaha....bechara undono nautanki ke beech mein kahan phass gaya.... 😆 raj to hadd se jyada smart hai....pray kar rahi hun ki naina usse accha-khassa badla le....aur navin...mujhe uspar bhaut gussa aa raha hai...are koi aapni behen ke saath aisa karta hai....main to aapne bhai murder hi kardungi ..hihihi...naina bhi aisa kare.... 😆 😆 😆 anyway update was as usual rocking and hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilarious....extremely a excellent part....thankuu sooooooooooo much for this oooooooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuutstanding part....aur mere city mein abhi tak Amir release nahin hui hai.....pata nahin kab hogi.... 😕

I don't have any word to say i want only to say is
"Too Good"
😆
while reading i just can't control my laughter Raj is such huff what i say he is so noughty & Naina oh poor girl 😆 Hooda is such big big fool 😕
ab to aur mazza aane wala hai so update soon dont be so late like you always does so mind it don't be late plz yaar apne Fans ki kuch to fikar karo 😳 😳 😳

update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

keep smilling 😃 keep writting 👏

I don't have any word to say i want only to say is
"Too Good"
😆
while reading i just can't control my laughter Raj is such huff what i say he is so noughty & Naina oh poor girl 😆 Hooda is such big big fool 😕
ab to aur mazza aane wala hai so update soon dont be so late like you always does so mind it don't be late plz yaar apne Fans ki kuch to fikar karo 😳 😳 😳

update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

keep smilling 😃 keep writting 👏

awesome too good very nice waitingggggg for next asap.