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Posted: 17 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: sheena_12

@hina,ankita n yogitha:thank u all soo much
n plzz yogitha ek baar continue karona mein dekhna chati hun k how 2 ryt a FF plzzzzzzzzzzzz fr me atleast

main aur continue impossible

sorry di

phir kabhi continue karoongi

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: d101

rahul singing in da background:

baar baar haan ...bolo yaar haan...

apni jeet hoo...unki haar haan.....

koi humse jeet na paaye chale chaloo...(from lagaan😉)

-luv deepika

great part. especially singing thing is excellent

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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

HEY I M CONTINUING
~IN THE KITCHEN~
Ra:humari taraf se banega fried rice and manchurian
ri:rahul u sure
ra: yeah di
mu:angrezon ki angrezi pasand,hum banayenge mmmmmmmm rajma with pasta and rotiyaan
ar:muskaan yeh kya kar rahi ho
mu:calm down bhiya
ra:ab hum chalte hain aap khana pakaiye alright
ar & ri:par
mu:bye all the best
they leave for the guest room
ar:hehehehehehe
ri:hehehehehehe
ri to herself: chinese kaise banega?????????
ar:pasta rajma aur rotiyaan kaise banegi??????????
ri to herself: i wish rahul ne rajma pasta aur rotiyaan boli hoti
ar:i wish muskaan ne chinese bola hota
ar & ri:listen
ar:pehle tum bolo
ri: nahi tum bolo
ar:theek hai mujhe yeh sab banana nahi aata
ri to herself:wow yeh to khud hi phas gaya ab main isko apni kamzori ke baare mein nahi bataungi
ri:alright tum chinese bana lo main tumhari cheezien bana deti hoon is that ok
ar:done par tumhe kya kehna tha
ri:yehi ki rotiyaan kadak mat banana i hate hard chappatis but its ok
they make the stuff and exchange the items and call rahul muskaan
~in the guest room~
mu:babaji kuch romance kara dena dono ke beech
ra:tujhe lagta hai wo romance karenge
and there is a knock at the door
rm are shocked
ra:k..k..k..kaun hai
ri:teri maa
ra:mom
she enters
ri:stupid
ra:thank god di aap hai
ri:chalo food is ready
ra:par aapne nahi kuch nhai
ri:so tum dono ki fight khatam?????????
mu:haan ab ise jhukna hi pada
ra looked at muskaan with a i'll kill u face
ri:ok then the dinner is on the
table chalo
~at the dining table~
ra:wow di aapne itna acha chinese banana kab seekha its yummy
ri:thanks bas seekh liya
mu:bhiya the pasta rajma and rotiyaan are amazing
ra:waise muskaan tu to bada keh rahi thi angrezon ki angrezi khaane or whatever aur apne bhiya se pasta banvaya
mu:to i luv pasta lekin jahan tak mujhe yaad hai bhiya ko to pasta banana aata hi nahi tha
ri:rotiyaan khatam ho gayi hai main roti bana kar aati hoon
and she leaves to be safe
ar:arre rotiyaan mujhe banani thi main banake aata hoon
r-m think that their plan is working and armaan is going behindridz but they didnt know that ar are actually escaping them abt the food stuff
~in the kitchen~
ar:tum paagal ho kya unko shak ho jata ki tumne mere khaana aur maine tumhara khaana banaya hai
ri:ab tum itni zor se chilaoge to shaq nahi yakeen ho jayega....aur waise bhi tumhi ne mujhe kaha tha mujhe yeh sab banana nahi aata
ar:par idea to tumhara tha
ri:arre ek to madad ki aur dekho janab ko
ar:oye ulta chor katwal ko daanterahul se sun liya maine ki tumne chinese kabhi nahi banaya ok....so madad to maine tumhari ki hai
ri:hell with ur madad ab rotiyaan banao nahi to phir shak ho jaayega unhe
ar:lekin mujhe nahi aati
ri:alright main hi bana deti hoon
riddhima sees that the aata powder is finished and she climbs a stool coz the container is kept on a big height and due to the imbalance she falls down on armaan and aata all over both of them
😆
now riddhima is on the top of armaan and on both of them is aata and they are just swimming in each other so so deep eyes
~at the dining table~
ra:yeh aawaz kaisi chalo dekhte hain and they move towards the kitchen
THATS IT MAN SOMEONE ELSE CONTINUE
LUV YA
@NKIT@

Edited by magicgirlankita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
nice going. but i have some doubts. plz clear them whoever is writing.
in the first part rahul says "di ko wo abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti wo abhi ek successful doc ban na chahti hain". but then when armaan and ridhima introduce to each other theri conversation goes some thing like this
"R:well m done wid my studies n searchin fr a gud job but i dont think i wud be doin ny job
A:may i knw y?
R:coz my mom n dad wanna get me married
A:oh....n wat bout u?
R:well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me "
what is all these? you made armaan a business man. can anyone tell me if atleast ridz is doctor??????
see dont mistake me whoever has written the part. i dont mean to hurt them. but i just wanted to tel thet it is contradicting the first part.
anyone plz clear my doubts before updating next parts. plz.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sony_123

nice going. but i have some doubts. plz clear them whoever is writing.
in the first part rahul says "di ko wo abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti wo abhi ek successful doc ban na chahti hain". but then when armaan and ridhima introduce to each other theri conversation goes some thing like this
"R:well m done wid my studies n searchin fr a gud job but i dont think i wud be doin ny job
A:may i knw y?
R:coz my mom n dad wanna get me married
A:oh....n wat bout u?
R:well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me "
what is all these? you made armaan a business man. can anyone tell me if atleast ridz is doctor??????
see dont mistake me whoever has written the part. i dont mean to hurt them. but i just wanted to tel thet it is contradicting the first part.
anyone plz clear my doubts before updating next parts. plz.........

HEY HEY HEY NO WORRIES DARLING THE MAGICGIRL IS HERE SO ABT UR FIRST DOUBT

  • YUP RIDZ IS A DOC BUT ARMAAN IS A BUSINESSMAN
  • AND RIDZ DOES NOT WANNA MARRY COZ SHE THINKS AFTER MARRIAGE SHE LL NOT BE ABLE TO CONCENTRATE ON HER CAREER

I HOPE NOW UR DOUBTS ARE CLEARED AND STILL IF ANY DOUB PLZZZZZZZ ASK US

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: magicgirlankita

HEY HEY HEY NO WORRIES DARLING THE MAGICGIRL IS HERE SO ABT UR FIRST DOUBT

    YUP RIDZ IS A DOC BUT ARMAAN IS A BUSINESSMAN
  • AND RIDZ DOES NOT WANNA MARRY COZ SHE THINKS AFTER MARRIAGE SHE LL NOT BE ABLE TO CONCENTRATE ON HER CAREER

I HOPE NOW UR DOUBTS ARE CLEARED AND STILL IF ANY DOUB PLZZZZZZZ ASK US

if this is the reason, ridz could have told armaan the same reason. why did she tel him that "well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me".

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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
amazing...xcellent 👏 👏
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: sony_123

if this is the reason, ridz could have told armaan the same reason. why did she tel him that "well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me".

well to that i would say that many different writers are writing the ff so choti-choti galtiyaan ho jaati hain

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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sony_123

if this is the reason, ridz could have told armaan the same reason. why did she tel him that "well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me".

ohk sweetz it was all my mistake nt ankita's actually i dint remember ankita writin about ridz being a doctor actaully sm1 wot n one part tht armaan is already their @ patiyala because he had sum wrk ryt there so i thought tht he might not be a doctor in this FF so letz ridz also nt be a doctor but a gurl of business management

newayz i'll edit it but tell me wat shud i ryt bout ridz occupation n as well armaan's

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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sheena_12

ohk sweetz it was all my mistake nt ankita's actually i dint remember ankita writin about ridz being a doctor actaully sm1 wot n one part tht armaan is already their @ patiyala because he had sum wrk ryt there so i thought tht he might not be a doctor in this FF so letz ridz also nt be a doctor but a gurl of business management

newayz i'll edit it but tell me wat shud i ryt bout ridz occupation n as well armaan's

oh not at all sheena di its alright well make ridz a doc and armaan a businessman

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