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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sony_123

NOTE : i want to continue but i dont know what to continue. there is nothing much left to continue, now only marriage part is left over. i want to write some parts before marriage, i.e between the time when armaan proposed ridz to the time of their marriage. i want to write some parts like engagement, AR going on date, AR,RM going to party etc. if you like my idea, plz reply so that i can continue with my flash back scenes



Not a bad idea...even as flash back it will gud...

so do cont it soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice part
hey dear u can continue with flashback scenes
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: star_fan



Not a bad idea...even as flash back it will gud...

so do cont it soon...

yh i agree sounds good n as for th updte amazin gluved it lool arman proper into ridz dat was funny great updte
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for your replies. so here goes my first flashback scene. this scene is after 1 week armaan proposed ridz. i dont know where to insert this in current situation, so you try and imagine armaan or ridz remembering their flashback scenes.
Note : This part is mostly about AR. If you like this style of writing flash back scenes plz reply so that i can write more parts with RM also. if u dont want me to write FB scenes plz state so that i will not write from next time.
it had been a week since armaan proposed ridz. in these week he called ridz almost a 100 times and sent a thousand messages and more than 1000 roses saying ILU. Their engagement date has been fixed after 3 days so armaan is comming to ridz place. His parents and muskaan reached manali 2 days back, but armaan had some work so he is comming after 2 days.
Armaan calls up ridz..
Ri : armaan, this is the 10th time you have called up since you started. anyway you are going to reach mamali in just one more hour. so why are you calling soo many times.
A : ONE HOUR MORE!!!! If i will not talk with you for 1 complete hour, how will i have energy to drive.
Ri : If you will be talking with me how can you concentrate on driving. Be carefull, what if something happens.
A : dont worry. nothing can happen to me till you are there with me. do you know why?
Ri : (innocently) why?
A : because i love u and you are my JAAN. Jab tak mere JAAN mere saath hai tab tak mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta.
Ri : i love you too armaa.
A : Oye hoye!!!
RI : thik hai. ab mai phone rakhthi hoon. mujhe bahut kaam hai.
A : itna bhi kya jaldi hai. kuch samay baath karo na,
Ri : nahi. mai phone rakhthi hoon.
she cuts the phone and joins padma, keerthi and muskaan sitting in the hall.they were all talking about the engagement arrangements.
K : ye Armaan abhi tak aya kyu nahi. abhi tak aajana chahiye thai.
Ri : (thinks) how can he come. more than half of the time he was talking to me only.
K : ridhima, tum usse phone karke pooch lo ki vo kaha hai. aur usse kaho ki thoda jaldi aane ki kosish kare.
Ri : (thinks) aunty, agar mai use phone karungi to vo jaldi nahi aur bhi late hojayega.
K : ridhima, phone karo.
Ri : ji aunty.
Ridz goes and calls armaan.
A : kya hua? tum mujhe phone kia?? mere jaan mujhe miss kar rahi hai kya??
Ri :(blushes hearing jaan) vo baath nahi hai. aunty told me to call u and tell u to come fast.
A : if you want me to come fast then you should be talking to me till i reach there.
Ri : armaaaaaaaaaan!!!
A : ha ridhima. bolo bolo manzoor hai?
Ri : armaan, you are too much. you were talking with me almost the whole of your journey. dont you have any signal problems, so that i can stop talking??
A : you dont have that chance madem. i have Airtel. taki hamare pyaar ki beech me koi dooriya na aaye. hehehe😃😃
Ri : ok, enough now. cut the phone and come fast.
A: before that you have to give me something.
R : What?? In phone???
A : Yes madem.
Ri : what??
A : kiss!!
Ri : WHAT???
A : KISS!!!!!
Ri : nahi nahi.
A : ok, so you dont want to give a kiss on phone!!
ri : ha
A : so, you want to kiss me prsonally!!
Ri : ha.
A : hehehe😃😃😃
Ri : kya?? nahi!!😲
A : ok, then. i am comming for the kiss. 😉
Finally armaaan reaches manali(ridz place).
The 2 days pass very fast with the engagement arrangements, AR and RM takling and romancing Chupke-Chupke whenever they get a chance, etc etc. tomoro is the engagement and Armaan wants to go out with ridhima today. Rahul also wishes to go out with Muskaan. so Armaan and Rahul plan how to go out. After a lot of discussion and scoldings from their parents, finally Rahul and Armaan manage to convince their parents to allow them to go out with Ridhima and muskaan (with a condition that they should return home before 10). Rahul did not have any propbem with muskaan as she was very happy to go with him. Armaan had some problem to convince Ridz, but finally all 4 of them were ready to go out.
they wear
rahul -
muskaan wears -
armaan -
Ridhima wears -
AR,RM go to a candle light dinner. (AR,RM go and sit in different places so that they would not disturb or get disturbed by eachother.)
RM
R : tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho.
M : thanks. tum bhi.
M : mai bahut kush hoon ki finally hamari shadi ho rahi hai.
R : kal sirf engagement hai. shayed tumhari dimag kamzor hai.😆😆
M : OYE!!😡. mujhe pata hai. mera kehne ka matlab ye tha ki mai bahut kush hoon ki ridhima shadi keliya razi hogaye aur hamara mission OPERATION MARRIAGE sucess hogaye. samjha ??😡
R : mai bhi bahut kush hoon. nujhe yakeen hai ki mera behan, armaan ke saath kush rahegi.
M : wo bahut khush rahegi kyonki armaan bhaya use bahut pyar kartha hai. sabse zayada.
R : mujhse zyada??😕
M : shayad tumsebhi zayada!!
R : 😡😡
M : thik hai, tum jitna pyar karthe ho utna hi.😆😆
R : 😃😊. mai chata hoon ki armaan ridhima se mujhse zyada pyar kare, taki vo hamesha kush rehsakthi hai.
M : 😊
RM enjoy their candlelight dinner and spend some cute. romantic😳 moments.
AR
A : i am soo lucky to have you in my life. i love you very much and i cant imagine my life without you.
Ri : i am very lucky to have a loving and caring person like you in my life. i am very happy to have you in my life.. but..😭(she stops suddenly while talking)
armaan is tensed to see ridhima crying.😕
A : what happened ridhima?? why are you crying?? i was observing you from 2 days, you lood a bit upset and tensed sometimes. What is the reason. you have to tell me now.
R : (wiping here tears) nothing armaan.
A : 😡 dont you love me?? if you love me you have to tell me what is the reason that is bothering you.
R : I love you very much armaa. I... I.. I am afraid to lose you.
A : believe me. I will always be on your side whatever happens. we will always be together. dont you trust me?? who will come in between us??
R : i trust you, but......... i am afraid my profession may come in between our relationship.
Armaan holds ridhima's hans and squeses it asking ridz to tell all her fears and he quietly listens to what ridhima speaks
R : you know that i am a doctor. i love my profession and i wish to continue it even after marrriage. before i met you i never wanted to get married. I was afraid that i couldnt work as a doctor after marriage. i thought that i would be doing injustice to my proffession if i marry. so i made my mind that i should never marry. but when you came into my fife, my life is entirely changed. i loved you and when you proposed me, i felt like all my dreams about marrage got life. i couldnt refuse your proposal at that moment, but i had a fear in my mind that you might have problem with my proffession.😭😭
armaan holds ridz's hand and speaks
A : i love you for what you are. i respest you and your decissions. you can definitely continue working as a docor and you will have full support from my side. i will always stand by your side and support you in all your problems. i love you more than my life and no one can come in between us.😭😭.
R : I Love you armaan. i love you very much.😭
Armaan pulls ridhima into an embrace.
A : I love you too ridhima.😭
they stay haggging eachother for sometime and to lighten the atmosphere armaan says
A : (wishpers in ridz ear) mujhe bhooka maarne ka irada hai kya?
R : 😊. armaan!!
AR complete their candle light dinner sharing cute moments and armaan telling jokes to make ridz laugh
i know this part might be boring, but this was the main concept of this ff in the starting. so i thought of writing a part on this concept. i hope you liked it. if you like it plz reply.
Edited by sony_123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey hi sony
ur parts were awesum
and thankss for continuing
very lovely parts
and thanks for the pm
continuee soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
@sonal:yo part was really a gud one... @sony:well yo idea is really a gr8 one...i wud surely lyk u 2 go wid the FB scene...u r goin gr8!
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Posted: 17 years ago
ur part is superb
ur idea of fb is good
plz continue with this
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Posted: 17 years ago
its very nice....really very sweet...
thx 4 da pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
heyy thnkxx for the pmm!!
luvin the flashbakkk thingii!!
keep updatin
luvs revna
xx
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part!! i love the FB idea! 👏 someone please continue soon! 😳
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