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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys
heres the last part!

last part

How is this all happening??? What's going on?? Muskaan, shocked out of her life breaks off the kiss that made her stomach flip and her heart flutter…

M: what did you just say?

R: I said I love you

M: but….kaise? kab?, yeh saab sapne hai…yeh saab jhoot hai!

R: nahi muski, yeh jhoot nahi hai.

Saying this he held onto her hand in both his own…not tightly, but not like he wanted to let go anytime soon….

R: when we were 5 years old I fell in love with you

When you hugged me for the first time, that day in this park, I fell in love with you

When you accidentally tripped me up, and said the sweetest sorry I had ever heard, I fell in love with you

When, on the first day of school, you held my hand because you were scared, I fell in love with you

When were forced to dance together during P.E, I fell in love with you

When I see we fought, I fell in love with you

When I would see you smile I fell in love with you

When you used to call me up in the middle of the night, just to talk or sit there in silence, I fell in love with you

And when I saw you face with tears filling your eyes, after I had announced my engagement to ridhima, I had a feeling that maybe, just maybe you were in love with me too.

with a tentative smile, rahul looked into muskaans eyes which were filling with tears

Arrey Muskaan, aab kyu ro rahe hai? (y r u crying)

M: I'm crying because I'm happy you idiot
I … I love you too Rahul!

Rahul kissed away Muskaan tears, and brought her into a passionate kiss that took her breath away and gave it back.

R: ab no more crying ok? Smile Muskaan, always smile.

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You are cordially invited to the wedding of
Rahul Garewal
+
Muskaan Chadda

31st December 2008
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
hey...
a very good attempt..
please write some more long ones..
alll the best..
seeya..
Edited by juvz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: juvz

hey...
a very good attempt..
please write some more long ones..
alll the best..
seeya..

thank u sooooooo much

peace😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi zen,

oyee yeh to bahot fast tha.... hope it wasnt imprompt one.. It was nice .. but felt u really rushed it out soon... hope to read some more in future... and loved that u wrote the story with M & R in mind... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Woot! That was really short, but very sweettt! It's really nice to read about RM too, for DMG isn't focusing on them as much! Great story, do continue writing FF's! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi zen,

oyee yeh to bahot fast tha.... hope it wasnt imprompt one.. It was nice .. but felt u really rushed it out soon... hope to read some more in future... and loved that u wrote the story with M & R in mind... 😃

thank u soooo much for reading my ff 😊

ya, im gonna post my second ff on here soon, maybe today

gonna be on rm aswell, so pls read that one if u like rm😊

okiez

peace

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dark Love

Woot! That was really short, but very sweettt! It's really nice to read about RM too, for DMG isn't focusing on them as much! Great story, do continue writing FF's! 👏 👏 👏

thank uuuuuuuuuu

im glad u liked it😃

yup will def write more ff on rm, wait and watch

okiez

peace

sommi

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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
hey

dat was sweeeeeeeeeetttttttttt

grt writing

mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tht was a really short FF 😲 well anyway it was really cute n sweet 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very sweet FF…It was v very short buh tooo good…..Loved the fact that u kept R & M in mind…It was rilli very good….Do write more FF's n if u do plzzzzz PM me…plzzzzzz coz I'd love to read more of u'r FF's…

Love ya hon…..tccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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