~~PYAR KI EK KAHANI~~|PG.29-UPDATE {08/17/08}

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Jiiya

@~~BaBy~AnGel~~

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Posted: 17 years ago

#221

woow sonia, i sooooo loved it, plzzzzzz cont soon,tooo eager to know what's going to happen☺️

lovedddddddd it tooooo much👏

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Shaz

@_shizzzyy_

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#222

Sonia tht was AMAZING!! loved da part..plzz continue soon!😊

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J.S.M

@cherrgirl2711

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Posted: 17 years ago

#223

DAt was WORTH all the wait !!!!!!!! WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sonia

@sonikudi1

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#224

Thanks for the comments😳

Update:

Manya and Akash entered his house, hand in hand. No one was home so they had nobody to face. Manya was shivering in the cold, her dupatta tightly wrapped against her body. She sat down in front of a fireplace, her teeth shattering. Her maang showed her red sindoor. Akash sat down and they both looked at each other. Akash lifted his hands and slowly bent close to her. Manya looked up at him.

M: Akash? Yeh humne kiya kya?

A: Pyar kiya hai, Manya.

M: Kya tum jaante ho, yeh sindoor bar ker hum dhono-

A: Saath janamu ke rishte mein band gaye hain? Tho, haan, Manya, main yeh jaanta hoon. Aur main yeh vaada kerta hoon, ki main hamesha tumhara saath dhoon ga.

Manya smiled. From outside, heavy rain pounded on the windows. They looked out and saw lightening strike. Manya shivered. Akash looked at her. Manya felt his gaze and looked up at him.

Akash bent close to her, his breathing growing heavier. He stared into her eyes with a naughty smile and a loving glint in his eye. Manya swallowed in, her breath getting caught in her throat. She stared at him nervously and edged back as their bodies touched.

M: Akash-

She stood up quickly and turned away shyly. Akash smiled knowingly and stood up, walking after her. The music of PKEK played as he suddenly bent down and gathered his arms around her legs, pulling her in his arms. Manya watched confusedly as he sat her down on a swing and walked away. A few minutes he returned, a plate in hand. Manya laughed as he sat down, revealing food in his plate. He picked up a bite and put it Manya's mouth.

A: Tumhe bookh lagi hogi na?

M: Hmm. Aur tumhe?

She picked up another bite and placed it in his mouth. Akash smiled.

As they finished eating, Manya glanced around.

M: Mujhe ghar jaana hai.

A: Ab yeh tumhara ghar hi tho hai...

Manya stared at him as she remembered the sindoor over her head. Akash raised his eyes.

M: Akash, main yahan tho-

A: Tum meri patni ho, Manya.

M: Akash, mere parents nahin jaante ki...ki yeh sab hua hai. Aur nahi tumhare parents jaante hain...

A: Bahaar baarish bahut zyada hai, Manya. Mausam kharaab hai. Aur mere parents aaj raat nahin lautein ge, I'm sure of that. And even if they do, tum meri patni ho ab. Mujhe haq hai, Manya. Tumhare ma baap samaj jayein ge ki mausam kharaab tha aur iss liye tum nahin ayee!

Manya swallowed. Akash nodded his head.

A: Trust me, Manya.

He picked her up in his arms again and headed upstairs. Manya stared at him, her heart racing, as he entered his bedroom. Manya glanced around nervously.

M: Akash?

A: Sshh...

The music of PKEK played again as he laid her down on his bed. Manya felt all her energy fade away as he bent down. But to her surprise, he whispered,

A: Good night.

He stood up and walked away, smiling. Manya stared after him as he sat on the couch.

M: Akash...?

A: Good night, sweetheart.

Manya laughed and closed her eyes, slowly falling asleep. Akash stayed up and stared at her with a sweet smile. He stood up and put a blanket over her, kissing her forehead softly. He sat down on the ground near the edge of the bed, putting his head over it. His eyes slowly drooped as they both fell asleep...

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Shaz

@_shizzzyy_

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#225

aww tht was so cute!😳 plz continue asap =]

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ttimpy

@ttimpy

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#226

oh wow.........they wont get carried away.......or do u plan sumthing.................it was a sweet part..........so when will they let their parents know.........