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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey komal yaar wow yaar ur jst fabulous yaar
ur all 3 1st to read kar liya bt lst 2 scens wre amazng yaar jst lvd it sooooooooooooo mch wow bt i lvd lst wala it ws sooooooooooooooooo cute yaar their seperation wch thy show their lv emotions it ws dammmmmmmmmmmmm cute yaar lvd it
wow 4scene is cmng up wow eagrly waitng fr ur 4 scene...........
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@yachna..thx a ton...yeah cumin up soon
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scene#4

Armaan meets shanshank regarding AR love

"Di....so gaye kya?".....she asked her that question at two in the night....after thinking for a hundred times...whether she shld or shldnt...
but she finnaly gathered up all her courage n asked her....n as she had thought....her di woke up...as she usually does by the slightest disturbance
to her sleep...
"Haan ridz...so gayi thi...par tumne jaga diya"said she in the most sleepy tone ever...
"Oh sorry di...ap...so jao"she wanted to talk but then she just couldnt start it on her own...n so she had to tell these words...but her face n mind did not agree with these
words....n her lovly di...though in the most deep sleep...noticed that...with her little open eyes...n knew that her sister needs her....
"kya hua ridzy...koi problem hai"she asked in the most pleasin tune...but couldnt avoid the sleepy tone...in her voice
ridz realisin that her sister needs sleep after a hectic day...said"nahi di..ap so jao"
Anjie got up now...n went to her bed...n sat across her...n touched her shoulder...n asked again"bolo ridzy porblem kya hai?"
Ridz understood itz time to take evrything out now"di....im scared"
Anjie"scared of what?...kya baat hai ridz saaf saaf bolo na"
Ridz:di...\woh armaan
Anjie:armaan??...ure scared of armaan?
Ridz:nahi di...[gathers up all her courage...takes a deep breath]di...armaan and i...me and armaan....we a love each other di...
Anjali gets a big shock....well this was something she would not expect at all...Ridzy n armaan....but they dont look like that...
they are always fightin...they never speak a word of love to each other...then hw is this possible...is my lil sis tryin to fool me"she thot...but then hw can that be....
ridz looks quite serious...im sure she isnt kidding...then does she love him...is this another prank of his??...
Ridz interrupts her thots...n goes.."di..are u there?...mujhe pata hai apko pehle h bata dena dena chahiye tha...lekin di..."
seeing that there was no reaction frm the other side...ridz again goes"di...." n shakes her quite a bit..anjali comes bak frm her thoughts
Ridz:dii...ap gussa toh nahi ho na?
Anjie:ridzz....kya yeh sach hai?
Ridz:haan di ofcourse...yeh bilkul sach hai
Anjie:are u sure...armaan tumse pyaar karta hai?
Ridz:haan di woh mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai....usne toh mujhse humesha pyaar kiya...woh main hi thi..jo uske pyaar par yakeen nahi kar payi di[ n there drops a ll tear frm her eye]
Anjie sees that her lil sis...is becomin so big so mature...n now shes in love...she hugs her sis...
Anjie:im very happy for u ridzy...armaan is a great guy...woh tumhe bahut khush rakhega
Ridz:par di mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai
Anjie:darr..kis baat ka?
Ridz:di...papa ko sach kuch pata chal gaya
Anjie:whatttt.....kaise??
Ridz:woh....woh papa ne....mujhe aur armaan ko staircase mein saath mein dekha...
Anjie:toh....unhe kaise pata chala ke ...u love each other?
Ridz:di...armaan ne mera hath pakda hua tha....aur jab papa ne humein dekha tab usne kaha"i love u"[and she blushes thinkin of dat wonderful moment...completely forgetting abt wat had happened after dat]
Anjie:omg ridz...
Anjie notices that ridz is blushin now n lost...she shakes her
Anjie:ridzy...papa...papa ne phir kya kaha...
Ridz:woh wahan se chale gaye
Anjie:oh no ridz....yeh toh bahut tension waali baat ho gayi
Ridz:haan di...aur phir unhone padma mom ko bulaya aur unse kuch baat ki....aur phir unhone...armaan ko kal ghar pe bulaya hai
Anjie:what...kal...ghar pe
Ridz:haan di...mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai...agar papa ne mana kar diya toh...
Anjie:don worry ridz...armaan hai na...woh dad ko mana lega...im sure....chalo now u dont worry too much n go to sleep...u need rest
Ridz:par di papa?
Anje:ridzy maine kaha na....dont worry...chalo ab zidd mat karo....chup chaap so jao...
anje puts her blanket on her...n makes her go to sleepp..n then she herself goes n sleeps...
Ridz joins her hands in prayer:plz bhagwan jee...papa maan jaye...main armaan se bahut pyaar karti hoon...please mujhe usse
alag mat karna ...ab sab dekh lena pls...
n she goes to sleep with great difficulty..

Next morning...ridz is up soon...gets ready quickly...n goes to the breakfast table...Padma comes to their house...n she joins them
for breakfast...Riodz is too nervous...what if shashank tells something to her...omgg...what wil she reply...she just remains silent n keeps prayin that everything goes well
Nothing much happens on the breakfast table...anjoe tries to find out shashank's mood by asking him a few general questions...n she realises that he was not as happy today...
which made ridz all the more tensed...she quickly finishes her breakfast...n runs to...her room...
She just sits in he rooom...waitin for the clock to turn 10 n armaan to come...it was 9:30....she just sat there..thinkin nervous tensed....she had all kinds of thoughts in her mind...what if papa dint agree..
what if he gets me married to someone else...no no papa isnt so harsh..im sure he'll agree...after all he loves me n armaan is a greta guy...n a great doctor...n papa knws him too
im sure papa wil agree...think positive ridhima..everything will go good...uff yaar yeh armaan ab tak aaya kyun nahi....agar late hogaya toh ...papa par impression acha nahi hoga...cmon armaan...aao na
n there goes the door bell....at the right time...it was 10....Ridhima's heart skips a beat...she comes to the door of her room...n she could hear voices...of her nani n padma ..welcoming armaan...
She was too scared now...her heartbeats were running very fast...her life would decided in the next few moments...she was nervous tensed n everythin a girl feels when she is in such a state...Anjie comes to call ridz...
n then ridz goes out..with her...holding her head...which was literally shivering...she reached the sofa area....n there he was sitting next to her dad's sofa...looking quite normal...but only ridz could see that tension under his normal look...
he was tensed...not much as ridz was..but yea he was...after all...he was caught yesterday...n shashank hadnt spoken anythin abt it yet after that n now here he had to confess evrything n get his love...
well interrupting his thoughts shashank finally spoke up...
Shashank[ in his most stern voice]:toh dr armaan...ap meri beti se pyaar karte hai?
Armaan:jee sir
Shashank:aur apko kya lagta hai..woh bhi apse?
Armaan:haan sir..ridhima bhi mujhse pyar karti hai
Shashank:chalo maan lete hai...tumhe kya lagta hai main apni beti ka haath tumhare haath mein de doonga?
Armaan:sir mujhe nahi pata ki aap kya chahte hai...lekin sir apki bet mujhse bahut pyaar karti hai aur main bhi usse utna hi pyaar karta hoon...aur main vada karta hoon ki main usse humesha humesha khush rakhoonga...
Shashank:yeh ap tne yakeen se kaise keh sakte hai ki ap meri beti ko khush rakhenge?
Armaan:sir yeh main itne yakeen se isliye keh sakta hoon kyunki...apki beti ki har muskurahat mein meri khushi hai...aur apni khushi ke liye insaan sab kuch kar sakta hai...aur meri khushi toh ridhima ki khushi mein hai...
Shashank:yeh sab toh baate hai dr armaan...main kaise maan sakta hoon ki yeh sach hai?
Armaan:sir...mera pyaar ridhima ke liye utna hi saccha hai..jitna ki apka...main ridhima ki har khwashish ko poora karoonga sir...usse duniya ki har khushi doonga..usse kabhi kisi chez ki kami na hoga.....aur yeh baat main sirf keh nahi raha hoon sir...is baat ka mujhe poora yakeen hai ki main karke dikhaonga...kyunki main apki beti ridhima se bahut bahut bahut pyaar karta hoon ...
Everyone goes all silent after this...for a few mins..even ridz is stunned...omg..."he loves me soo much....i am so lucky....pleae bhwagan ji...plz plz plz papa maan jayein"
After a long silence...shashank spks up...
Shashank]he was angry to the highest pt of bearing]:dr armaan apne yeh socha bhi kaise...ki main apni beti ka haath apke haath mein.......dene se inkaar karoonga...[ n there changes his tune...his big frown turns into a wide smile....a smile that comes on the fathers face first wen he sees his daughter for the first time....n seond wen he gets the perfect man for her]
Armaan who was shaken by all this...got a sudden surprise...He was totally shocked....lookin at shashank's temper armaan thot...ridz was gone but even his job..he thot...would go...but shashank was ready..armaan couldnt believe his ears...but lookin at shashank's smile...he confirmed dat what he heard was right...
Ridhima...whose heartbeats almost stopped workin lookin at shashank's anger...was equally stunned...omg dad agreed...she was sooooooooo sooo happy...that was the best day of her life...there was no problem at all...anjie hugges her as soon as she heard the news...Nani n padma who were quite all the while...hugged each other n went to get sweets for the entire family...
Shashank got up n hugged Armaan...n armaan touched hia feet n thanked him for his consent...Paddy got sweets n fed armaan n ridz...Armaan gave a quick look to ridhima...she had the biggest smile on her face...he was soo happy...that he loved her...n now her family loved him...That day their love reached a new height...a height of realtionship...which made their bond stronger...
Shashank got a call...n left with a lil apologising message...takin Paddy with him...Anjie n Nani..permitted ridz n armaan to go to sanjeevani together...
As soon as ridz n Armaan leave the house...Ridhima quickly hugges Armaan...Armaan was a lil startled...but he hugges her back...
Ridz:armaan papa maan gaye....mujhe toh abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha
Armaan:hmmm....[enjoyin the hug totally]
Ridz realises wat she just did....n seprates...frm the hug....n goes all red...looks dwn to avoid the embarrasment..
Armnaa:ab toh is sab ki aadat daal lo riodhima...kyunki ab toh hum officialy ek couple hai...toh main toh tumhe sabke saamne...
Ridz looks up:sabke samne kya?
Armaan:sabke saamne yun gale lagaonga..
n he hugs her bak...ridz smiles...but seprates soon...Armaan looks at her lovngly n gets all emotional...
Armaan:ridhima...aj tumhare papa ne mujhe tumhe saup[give] kar...mujhpe bahut bada ehsaan kiya hai...unhone mujhpe vishwas kiya hai..aur main tumhare sar ki kasam kha kar klehta hoon ki main unka vishwaas kabhi tootne nahi doonga...main tumhe kabhi dukhi nahi honge donge...tumhare kadmon mein har khushi lakar rakhoonga......
Ridz has tears in her eyes...he wipes her tears n kisses on her forehead...
Ridz: i love u armaan..
Armaan:u love u too




hope u guys like it....plz do comment guys...😳

Edited by komalsirwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg...i dont have words to say...it was awesome...everything was just perfect...the way armaan was trying to convince shashank was just awesome...very very well written again...you truly deserve a great round of applause 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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komu dearie.......awesum......luvli.......i luvd it....mindblowing...terrific.....band bajgayi hogi AR when shash saw dem.....really words are less to describe ur scenes... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@bhavu_ashu...aww dat was indeed...very very sweet of u..thx a ton 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@prages...thx a zillon rags...tune dil khush kar diya..comment deke...loved ure comment..thanku soo much 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww choo chweeet!

Kimmi,tune tu kamaal kardi yaar
I felt as if I was there
Very well written and thanks for the PM sweety
Keep giving us more!
Love these cute little scenes that just make u feel so good!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: komalsirwani

@bhavu_ashu...aww dat was indeed...very very sweet of u..thx a ton 😳

you are welcome dear...u truly deserve it.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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arrey infront of ur part...it was not even a penny!!

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